语法写作 第二板块 主题写作(6) 表达谢意（课件）-【新高考方案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习（人教 主题复习版）

主题写作(6)　 表达谢意 “三步”写作流程 [典题示例] 假定你是李华。最近，你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交流学习。学习期间，你和房东Mr Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的提示，给Mr Wilson写一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1．表示感谢；　2.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助； 3．邀请他来中国游览。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一、写全要点——保基本分 (一)显性要点题干找 1．学习结束回国： ①I've been back home now. 2．感谢对方的照顾： ②I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness. 3．回顾帮助： ③While I was in Britain, you gave me a lot of help. ④Your help made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and fit in with the life there. 4．邀请对方来中国： ⑤I want to invite you to come to China to experience Chinese culture. (二)隐性要点关联好 详述对方给予的照顾和帮助： ⑥You cooked the delicious meals for me every morning. I still miss them. ⑦I really liked your patience while you were talking with me. 二、打造亮点——增能力分 (一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格④⑦句中的加蓝词汇) 1．fit in with→__________　　　 2.liked→___________ (二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子) 1．用分词作状语合并③④句 While I was in Britain, you gave me a lot of help, making it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there. adapt to appreciated 2．用it作形式主语，非谓语动词作真正的主语改写句⑤ It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China to experience Chinese culture. 3．用分词作定语合并句⑥ I still miss the delicious meals cooked by you every morning. 三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美 (誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范) Dear Mr Wilson， How is everything going? I've been back home now. I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness. While I was in Britain, you gave me a lot of help, making it easier for me to have a better understanding of British culture and adapt to the life there.I still miss the delicious meals cooked by you every morning. Besides, I really appreciated your patience while you were talking with me. It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China to experience Chinese culture. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua [高分评点] (一)学谋篇布局 本文呈现了感谢信的常规写作模式： (二)学靓丽表达 1．本文使用了高级词块 “express my sincere gratitude”“appreciated your patience”表达了作者的感激之情。 2．状语从句、过去分词短语作定语的使用丰富了句式结构。“making it easier for me to ...”及“It would be a great honor for me to ...”中，it分别充当形式宾语和形式主语，凸显了作者灵活的写作技巧。 高分素材储备 一、内化写作范式，确保形体规范 Dear ， I am writing to convey my gratitude for (感谢的原因)． Guided by you, I had a chance to (对方给予的帮助一). Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that (帮助的效果). What's more, during the week, (对方给予的帮助二及效果)． Thanks again for your unselfish help. I'm expecting (发出回报式邀请)． Yours， Li Hua 二、写好开头、结尾，力求吸人眼球 (一)开头部分：表达感谢之情并说明原因 1．I am writing to thank you for ... 2．I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for ... 3．I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your ... 4．On behalf of ..., I'd like to extend my sincere gratitude for ... (二)结尾部分：再次阐述谢意并提出回报 1．Thanks again for your generous help. 2．My true gratitude is beyond words/description. 3．Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. 4．Thanks for your considerate and enthusiastic treatment.I sincerely invite you to come to China to enjoy our traditional cuisine. 三、多积鲜活佳句，做到意蕴丰富 1．Guided by you, I had the chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. 在您的带领下，我有机会参观了英国的一些名胜古迹，体验了如此独特的文化和美丽的风景。 2．Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation, but you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate. 你不仅纠正了我发音中的错误，还推荐了精彩的英语演讲视频供我模仿。 3．Without your help, I could never have made such rapid progress. And I really appreciate your instructions. 没有你的帮助，我不可能取得这么快的进步。我真的很感谢你的指导。 4．We greatly appreciate your willingness to share your experience and knowledge with us. 我们非常感谢您愿意与我们分享您的经验和知识。 $$