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主题写作(5)　请求帮助 “三步”写作流程 [典题示例] (2021·全国甲卷改编)假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括： 1．阐明写信事由； 2.征求建议； 3.表示感谢。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一、写全要点——保基本分 (一)显性要点题干找 1．写信事由： ①I'm writing to learn from you about which traditional Chinese culture is more appealing to foreign friends. 2．介绍计划： ②Our school plans to hold a class meeting. ③Its theme is to introduce traditional Chinese culture. ④We will post the meeting on the English website. 3．征求建议： ⑤I do hope you can give us some advice. 4．表示期待和感谢： ⑥Looking forward to your reply as soon as possible with thanks. (二)隐性要点关联好 主题班会的意义和重要性： ⑦In order to carry forward traditional Chinese culture and attract more foreign friends, we decide to make the meeting meaningful and impressive. 二、打造亮点——增能力分 (一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格②⑥⑦句中的加蓝词汇) 1．plans→____________　　 2.thanks→____________ 3．decide→_______________ is planning gratitude are determined (二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子) 1．用定语从句合并②③句 Our school is planning to hold a class meeting, whose theme is to introduce traditional Chinese culture. 2．将句④改为被动语态 The meeting will be posted on the English website. 三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美 (誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范) Dear Chris， I'm writing to learn from you about which traditional Chinese culture is more appealing to foreign friends. Our school is planning to hold a class meeting, whose theme is to introduce traditional Chinese culture.The meeting will be posted on the English website. In order to carry forward traditional Chinese culture and attract more foreign friends, we're determined to make the meeting meaningful and impressive.Therefore, I do hope you can give us some advice. Looking forward to your reply as soon as possible with gratitude. Yours， Li Hua [高分评点] (一)学谋篇布局 本文呈现了求助信的常规写作模式： (二)学靓丽表达 1．作文中使用了appealing to, carry forward (发扬), impressive, with gratitude等高级词汇，提升了文章档次。 2．高级句式如whose引导的定语从句和强调手法(强调谓语)的运用丰富了表达的多样性。 3．现在进行时(I'm writing ...; is planning)、将来时(will be posted)及被动语态的运用体现了写作手法的灵活性与准确性。 高分素材储备 一、内化写作范式，确保形体规范 Dear ， I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to (求助内容)． (请求事由1)．In the meanwhile, (请求事由2)．Besides, (请求事由3). Therefore, I do hope you can give us some advice. I'm grateful that (表达期待和感激)． Yours， Li Hua 二、写好开头、结尾，力求吸人眼球 (一)开头部分：表明求助的目的 1．I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor. 2．Hearing you ..., I am writing to ask you for help. 3．I have some trouble with sth./in doing ...So I'm writing to turn to you for advice. (二)结尾部分：再次求助并致谢 1．I would appreciate it/be grateful if you could ... 2．I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. 3．Looking forward to your reply. 4．Your early reply will be appreciated. 三、多积鲜活佳句，做到意蕴丰富 1．I wonder how to become smart online learners and get the most value out of the Internet. 我想知道怎样成为聪明的在线学习者，并从网络中获得最大的价值。 2．My biggest problem is how to do well in listening tasks. Native English speakers talk so fast that I can hardly catch any words, not to mention the main idea.Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.我最大的问题是如何做好听力任务。英语为母语的人说话太快，我几乎听不清单词，更不用说主旨了。面对如此多的困难，我不得不向你求助。 3．We hope that with your guidance, we can bring our short play to life and truly captivate our audience.我们希望在您的指导下，我们能把我们的短剧变得生动起来，真正吸引观众。 4．I would appreciate it if you could offer some guidance on how to make this culture wall more attractive and effective. 如果您能就如何使这面文化墙更有吸引力和更有效提供一些指导，我将不胜感激。 $$