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主题写作(4) 演讲文稿
“三步”写作流程
[典题示例]
(2024·全国甲卷改编)英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. ________________ ____________________________________________________________
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一、写全要点——保基本分
(一)显性要点题干找
1.提出演讲主题:
①Today I'd like to focus on some major developments.
2.介绍中国的交通发展状况:
②The major developments include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.
③Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentallyfriendly means of transport for short trips.
④China's high-speed railway network has joined various cities effectively.
⑤Now, advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives.
(二)隐性要点关联好
1.中国的交通发展的影响:
⑥As we all know,changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.
⑦China's high-speed railway network greatly saves travel time and promotes economic development.
⑧Advanced new energy vehicles help reduce air pollution.
⑨These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science.
2.个人的看法:
⑩We need to study hard and play a role in the further development of transportation.
二、打造亮点——增能力分
(一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格④⑤⑩句中的加蓝词汇)
1.joined→____________
2.Now→____________
3.play a role in→____________________
connected
Currently
make a contribution to
(二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子)
1.用定语从句合并①②句
Today I'd like to focus on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.
2.用现在分词作状语合并④⑦句
China's high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development.
3.用现在分词作状语合并⑤⑧句
Currently, advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives, helping reduce air pollution.
三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美
(誊写成文,注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport,Chinese transport has an enormous development.Today I'd like to focus on some major developments, which include shared bicycles, high-speed trains and new energy vehicles.
As we all know, changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives. Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentallyfriendly means of transport for short trips. Besides, China's high-speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development. Currently, advanced new energy vehicles have entered our lives, helping reduce air pollution.
These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science.Therefore, we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation.
Thank you for your listening.
[高分评点]
(一)学谋篇布局
本文呈现了发言稿的常规写作模式:
(二)学靓丽表达
1.文中使用了“Besides, Currently, Therefore”等过渡词,使文章衔接自然,文意顺畅。
2.文中还使用了定语从句、现在分词作状语等句型结构,使文章表达更高级、更简洁。
3.“we need to do ...”“Thank you for your listening”等都是典型的演讲稿常用表达,增加了作文的针对性和准确性。
高分素材储备
一、内化写作范式,确保形体规范
Good morning/afternoon, dear friends,
I feel very privileged to have an opportunity here to make a speech on ______________(演讲主题).
First of all, _________________ (主题内容叙述一). Secondly, (主题内容叙述二). While we __________________ (提出相关现象、要求或条件等), we should _______________ (提出措施、计划等).
If everyone ______________________ (条件), I am convinced that _________________ (结果).
Thank you!
二、写好开头、结尾,力求吸人眼球
(一)开头部分:明确主题
1.I'm greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I'm going to talk about ...
2.Today, I'd like to share my ideas on ...
3.I am glad to give you a warm welcome on behalf of our school.
(二)结尾部分:总结感受
1.In conclusion, I'd like to quote what ... once said.
2.I am sure you will ... and ...
3.I sincerely hope my speech might be helpful to you.Thank you for your listening!
三、多积鲜活佳句,做到意蕴丰富
1.I feel honored to be here to talk to you on regular physical exercise.我很荣幸能在这里和你们谈谈关于有规律的锻炼。
2.Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I shall be speaking about environmental protection.
今天我很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我将谈谈环境保护。
3.It is known to all that good living habits are important to our physical and mental health.
众所周知,良好的生活习惯对我们的身心健康很重要。
4.I suggest we should fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it part of our daily routine.
我建议我们应该在繁忙的日程安排中安排锻炼,让它成为我们日常生活的一部分。
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