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主题写作(8)　申请自荐 “三步”写作流程 [典题示例] (2023·天津高考改编)你在英国一所学校做交换生，学校要办一个名为Chinese Workshop的促进中英文化交流的活动。你需要写一封申请信，内容要点如下： 1．推荐中国传统活动(中国美食、手工艺品和书法)； 2．描述这项活动的意义，并申请参加此活动； 3．阐述参加内容及原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一、写全要点——保基本分 (一)显性要点题干找 1．活动描述： ①I learned that a culture exchange event, named Chinese Workshop, will be held by our school. 2．自我介绍： ②I'm an exchange student studying here. 3．申请参加此活动： ③I would like to participate in and do something for this event. 4．给出活动建议： ④I suggest the event should include Chinese cuisines, handicrafts and calligraphy. ⑤It would be very great if we teach students how to make traditional Chinese items. (二)隐性要点关联好 1．说明提出该活动建议的原因及意义： ⑥They have become icons of Chinese culture and could help British students know Chinese culture. 2．介绍自己参加的活动内容及原因： ⑦Chinese paper­-cutting is what I'm good at. ⑧I am excited to share my skills with you. 3．表达愿望：⑨I would appreciate it if I could get your permission to be part of this event. 二、打造亮点——增能力分 (一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格③⑥⑧句中的加蓝词汇) 1．do something for→___________ 2．know→_________________________ 3．excited→_________ (二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子) 1．用分词作状语及介词短语作状语合并①②③句 Learning that a culture exchange event, named Chinese Workshop, will be held by our school, as an exchange student studying here, I would like to participate in and contribute to this event. contribute to have a good understanding of thrilled 2．用“代词＋of＋which”合并④⑥句 I suggest the event should include Chinese cuisines, handicrafts and calligraphy, all of which have become icons of Chinese culture and could help British students have a good understanding of Chinese culture. 3．用for example及定语从句连接⑤⑦句 It would be very great if we teach students how to make traditional Chinese items, for example, Chinese paper­-cutting, which is what I'm good at. 三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美 (誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范) Dear Sir/Madam， Learning that a culture exchange event, named Chinese Workshop, will be held by our school, as an exchange student studying here, I would like to participate in and contribute to this event. I suggest the event should include Chinese cuisines, handicrafts and calligraphy, all of which have become icons of Chinese culture and could help British students have a good understanding of Chinese culture. Besides, it would be very great if we teach students how to make traditional Chinese items, for example, Chinese paper­-cutting, which is what I'm good at. And I am thrilled to share my skills with you. I would appreciate it if I could get your permission to be part of this event. Yours sincerely， Li Hua [高分评点] (一)学谋篇布局 本文是“总—分—总”的结构，先引入想要申请的活动，然后提出申请。接着阐明自己的优势、能为活动作出的贡献。最后照应开头，重提申请，表达谢意并期待对方的答复。整篇文章有理有据，重点突出，具有很强的说服力。 (二)学靓丽表达 1．本文运用了较多高级表达，如多种非谓语形式、主从复合句交替出现、定语从句“all of which have ...”及“which is ...”，让描述更精准，更具说服力。 2．高级词块participate in, contribute to, have a good understanding of, get your permission等的使用提升了作文的丰满度。 高分素材储备 一、内化写作范式，确保形体规范 Dear Sir/Madam， I'm (自我介绍). I'm writing to apply for (申请事项)． I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because (说明申请原因)．I (优势一). Besides, I am (优势二)．If I can be chosen, I (表明承诺)． I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua 二、写好开头、结尾，力求吸人眼球 (一)开头部分：介绍自己并提出申请 1．I'm writing to apply for .../recommend ... 2．I am more than delighted to ... and I'm writing to apply for ... 3．I read the announcement of ... that you have posted on ...and I am interested in it. (二)结尾部分：请求给予机会并期待回复 1．I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity. 2．I do hope my enthusiasm and qualification will win me a favorable consideration. 3．If given the opportunity, I'll be more than delighted to work for ...and be surely devoted to the job. 三、多积鲜活佳句，做到意蕴丰富 1．If given the chance, I'll show foreign friends around our city, getting them to know more about the real life and culture in China. 如果被给予机会，我会带外国朋友参观我们的城市，让他们更多地了解中国的真实生活和文化。 2．What is more important is that my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others. 更重要的是，我良好的交际能力能让我与他人维持良好的关系。 3．In addition, such a learning experience is not only a great chance for me to improve myself, but also a precious opportunity to spread Chinese culture to British friends. 此外，这样的学习经历不仅是我提高自己的绝佳机会，也是向英国朋友传播中国文化的宝贵机会。 4．On the whole, I am qualified to be a volunteer. I hope to help out people in need and reward our society as soon as possible. 总之，我有资格成为一名志愿者。我希望能尽快帮助有需要的人，回报我们的社会。 $$