主题写作(2) 提出建议（课件）-【新高考方案】2026年高考英语一轮总复习（北师大版）

主题写作(2)　提出建议 “三步”写作流程 [典题示例] (2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．说明问题；　2.提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。 Dear Ryan， I'm Li Hua from Class 3. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　Yours sincerely， Li Hua 一、写全要点——保基本分 (一)显性要点题干找 1．写信原因： ①We're excited when we know an oral English class will be arranged for us. ②I want to express my different voice. 2．表达希望： ③I would be very glad if my proposal could meet with your consideration. (二)隐性要点关联好 1．说明问题： ④I learned that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice. ⑤Students with mixed levels of English should be grouped together deliberately rather than randomly. 2．建议及其益处： ⑥I suggest putting three to four students together, with one as the group leader. ⑦This can ensure our oral practice goes smoothly. ⑧We can communicate with each other at a great depth. 二、打造亮点——增能力分 (一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格②③⑤句中的加蓝词汇) 1．want→______________ 2．very glad→___________________ 3．randomly→______________ feel an urge more than delighted at random (二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子) 1．用“the news＋同位语从句”改写句① We're excited at the news that an oral English class will be arranged for us. 2．用分词作状语合并②④句 Learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice, I feel an urge to express my different voice. 3．用委婉的语气改写句⑤ It could be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random. 4．用动词不定式作目的状语及so that引导结果状语从句合并⑥⑦⑧句 To ensure our oral practice goes smoothly, I suggest putting three to four students together, with one as the group leader, so that we can communicate with each other at a great depth. 三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美 (誊写成文，注意逻辑衔接和行文规范) Dear Ryan， I'm Li Hua from Class 3. We're excited at the news that an oral English class will be arranged for us. But learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice, I feel an urge to express my different voice. To begin with, it could be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random. In my opinion, to ensure our oral practice goes smoothly, I suggest putting three to four students together, with one as the group leader, so that we can communicate with each other at a great depth. I would be more than delighted if my proposal could meet with your consideration. Yours sincerely， Li Hua [高分评点] (一)学谋篇布局 本文呈现了建议信的常规写作模式： (二)学靓丽表达 1．文中多处使用了“动词＋名词”短语，如“feel an urge, express my different voice, meet with your consideration”等，结构严谨，表意丰富。此外，还使用了“介词＋名词”短语，如“at random, In my opinion, at a great depth”分别代替副词randomly, personally, (very) deeply，给作文增添了文采。 2．it could be better if ...句式，语气委婉，更切合作文的身份设置(学生给老师提建议)。 3．so that引导的结果状语从句，动词不定式作目的状语以及I suggest doing ...句式都是典型的写作亮点表达。 高分素材储备 一、内化写作范式，确保形体规范 Dear ， I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on__________ (引出建议的主题)．Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it's important to (建议一). In that way, (采取建议一的好处)．You can also__________ (建议二，可选用不同的句式提出建议以丰富表达)．This would allow you to (建议二所带来的好结果)．In addition, _________________(其他的补充或建议)．I'm sure __________________(预测可能的好的结果，给对方以信心和决心)． I hope you (表达愿望). I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 二、写好开头、结尾，力求吸人眼球 (一)开头部分：说明写信的目的 1．Learning from your letter that ...I'm willing to ...Here are some suggestions. 2．I know you have trouble in ... I am writing to give you some suggestions. 3．I have received your letter saying that you ... I suggest that ... (二)结尾部分：希望建议有帮助 1．I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. 2．I will be more than glad if you find my suggestions helpful. 3．I do hope my suggestions may be of great help to you. 三、多积鲜活佳句，做到意蕴丰富 1．Firstly, I think it would be beneficial to have more events that encourage students to actively participate in English conversations.Besides, group discussions, debates and role­-play could boost our confidence. 首先，我认为多开展鼓励学生积极参与英语会话之类的活动是有好处的；其次，小组讨论、辩论和角色扮演也能提高我们的自信心。 2．I consider it a better alternative for all participants to complete and submit their works at a given time and in a specific location, in order to ensure fairness and transparency.我认为，让所有参与者在给定的时间和指定的地点完成并递交他们的作品是一个更好的选择，以确保公平和透明。 3．Personally, I would recommend organizing an environmentally friendly exhibition. This can be held either at our school or within the community. 就个人而言，我建议组织一个环保展览。这个活动可以在我们学校举行，也可以在社区举行。 4．Besides, physical exercise contributes to sound health, with which people can face up to the stress and difficulties in real life more easily and more comfortably. 此外，体育锻炼有助于健康，它能让人们更轻松、更愉快地面对现实生活中的压力和困难。 $$