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第2课时 写作提能课
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CONTENTS
学教材佳句,写亮句子
积主题语素,写美语段
课时作业(二)
学教材佳句,写亮句子
(说明:句中的蓝体词汇为单元复现词汇)
句式1 there is no need to do sth. 没有必要做某事
|解|读|规|则|
常见的“There's no ...”句型:
①There is no doubt that ... 毫无疑问……
②There is no denying that ... 不可否认……
③There is no sense/point in doing ... 做……是没有意义/道理的
④There is no harm in doing sth. 做某事没有坏处
|习|练|规|则| (用there's no ...句型改写)
①It is a good chance for us to learn from each other and know more about each other.That is beyond doubt.
→____________________ it is a good chance for us to learn from each other and know more about each other.
②It was my teacher's encouragement and help that resulted in my steady progress.That can't be denied.
→_______________________ it was my teacher's encouragement and help that resulted in my steady progress.
There is no doubt that
There is no denying that
|应|用|写|美|
③(主旨升华句)在生活中,我们会遇到很多失败,只要我们尽力而为,就没有必要为此感到遗憾。
In our life, we may meet with many failures, as long as we try our best, __________________________________.
④(建议信)毫无疑问,如果你乐于帮助别人,善意就会作为回报来到你身边。
_____________________ if you are willing to help others, kindness will come to you in return.
there's no need to feel regret for them
There is no doubt that
句式2 情态动词+have done
|解|读|规|则|
(1)must have done表示对过去情况的推测,意为“想必/准是/一定做了某事”,事情发生的可能性很大,常用于肯定句。
(2)can/could have done表示对过去情况的推测,常用于否定句和疑问句;can't/couldn't have done意为“一定没有做过某事”。can/could have done还可以用于肯定句,表示过去本来可以做某事,而事实上未做。
(3)may/might have done表示对过去情况的推测,意为“也许/或许已经做了某事”,事情发生的可能性较小,常用于肯定句和否定句。
(4)should/ought to have done用于肯定句时,表示“本该做某事,而实际上未做”;用于否定句时,则表示“本不该做的事反而做了”。
(5)needn't have done表示“本来不必做某事,结果做了”。
|习|练|规|则| (用“情态动词+have done”改写)
①I don't know if Philip was hurt seriously in the car accident.
→______________________________________________________________________
②I lost the ticket.I couldn't catch the train.
→_____________________________________________
Philip may/might have been hurt seriously in the car accident, but I am not sure.
I could have caught the train, but I lost the ticket.
|应|用|写|美|
③(场景描写)我一下飞机就发现我的钱包不见了。它一定被落在飞机上了。
The moment I stepped off the plane I found my purse gone. ________________________________.
④(心理描写)她本没必要为演讲担心,因为她充分的准备和自信的表达给所有观众留下了深刻的印象。
She ___________________________________________ because her thorough preparation and confident delivery impressed everyone in the audience.
It must have been left on the flight
needn't have worried about the presentation
⑤(话题写作之人际关系)我本该避免那场冲突的。如果我当时更有耐心一点,就会向他道歉了。
I _____________________ the conflict. If I had been more patient then, I would have apologised to him.
should have avoided
积主题语素,写美语段
建构主题语义场
子语境(一) 友情出现危机
1.freeze in amazement 惊呆了
2.press her face down into the pillow 脸埋进枕头里
3.be filled/bursting with anger 怒不可遏
4.be speechless with indignation 气得说不出话来
5.be deeply shocked at her behaviour 对她的行为深感震惊
6.be in low spirits 情绪低落
7.come into conflict with others 与他人发生冲突
8.I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further.
我告诉她我决定不再继续这段友谊。
子语境(二) 友情弥补
1.remain silent 保持沉默
2.burst into tears 放声大哭
3.clasp her hands 紧握她的双手
4.with butterflies in my stomach 心里忐忑不安
5.reveal a tear-stained face 露出一张泪流满面的脸
6.make a sincere apology 真诚道歉
7.Excitement overflowed from his heart and he began to grin.
兴奋之情溢于言表,他开始咧嘴笑了起来。
8.Blushed, she broke the silence, “I am sorry.I didn't mean to hurt you.”
她脸红了,打破了沉默,“抱歉,我不是故意伤害你的。”
子语境(三) 友情升华
1.cherish our friendship 珍视我们的友谊
2.maintain a close relationship 保持密切关系
3.treat her as my best friend
把她视为我最好的朋友
4.encourage each other and exchange ideas
互相鼓励并交换意见
5.understand clearly the value of friendship
清楚明白友谊的价值
6.It dawned on Mia that true friendship lies in mutual understanding, respect and support.
Mia霎时明白,真正的友谊在于相互理解、尊重和支持。
主题语段微写作
一、运用单元所学补全语段(蓝体字为单元词汇的复现)
It is my privilege to stand here to give you a speech on how to ①_____ ______________________________________________(适应高中生活和与他人相处).When stepping into the high school, we are likely to meet various difficulties, but ②__________________________________(没有必要为此而焦虑).In our class, everyone ③_____________(被鼓励) to voice your opinions and ideas.However, it's important to ④_________________ ___________(避免打扰他人) or interrupting their work.
adjust
to the senior school life and get along well with others
there is no need to be anxious about it
is encouraged
avoid disturbing
others
⑤___________________(因此), I make an appeal that you should avoid conflicting with your classmates and teachers.Besides, once you've ⑥_____________________________ (与他人发生冲突), you should be brave enough to ⑦________________________ (真诚道歉) first.
As a consequence
come into conflict with others
make a sincere apology
二、主题语段的细节描写
1.友情弥补(表达逻辑:解释→认错→弥补)
Finally, I ①_______________________________ (下定决心和玛丽谈谈). When I got home, I took 12 deep breaths before I called Mary. ②___________________________ (心里忐忑不安), I waited for her to pick up the receiver. After I got through, I apologised to her for what I had done and wished to have a talk with her. ③_________________ (让我松了一口气的是), she said OK after a short silence.
made up my mind to talk to Mary
With butterflies in my stomach
Much to my relief
2.友情升华
We ①_______________________________________ (互相鼓励并交换意见). I found it not so hard to speak up for myself. On the day of the show, my wonderful performance received thunderous applause from the audience. It was the talent show that ②____________ ___________(增强了我的信心) and made me understand ③_____ __________________________________(真正的友谊在于相互理解).
encouraged each other and exchanged ideas
boosted my
confidence
true
friendship lies in mutual understanding
课时作业(二)
Ⅰ.阅读七选五
(2025·成都模拟)Friendship is a practice of unconditional love, an opportunity to grow together towards fulfillment (成就), and a journey to unfold the most precious capacities of a human being. 1 Here are 4 key points to develop and sustain a true friendship.
2 Many times we blame the other person for what we feel, without realizing that we are presenting the bad power to him/her.This is not, however, something we must be afraid of or we should avoid.
When we create a bond of affection with another human being, we are automatically vulnerable to the actions that are produced by this person.Being aware of that, we would be better off if we take responsibility and accept the emotions that come up in our inner world instead of blaming the other for what we are feeling.
Provide support and encouragement.Friendships aren't all fun and games — they do require you to put in some work.Say they've just quarreled with their parents or failed an exam.It's your job to be there for them and provide them with whatever they need, starting with support and comfort. 3 Whatever the case, make it apparent that you're rooting for them.
Seek the good of the other person.When we love another person, we seek the good of the other because we gladden their own happiness.Therefore, our seeking for the other person's good is totally disinterested.We serve the other without expecting anything in return. 4
Accept the differences. 5 Friendship welcomes differences and integrates them into a level of union that accepts and goes beyond them.Friendship involves recognizing that the value of the relationship is beyond our personal traits and belief system.
A.Be honest with each other.
B.Acts of love are made for its own sake.
C.Take responsibility of your own emotions.
D.Additionally, it's your duty to give them encouragement as needed.
E.Human beings are relational beings, as everything we find in the nature.
F.Therefore, developing friendship with other people is essential in our lives.
G.Friendship doesn't mean having the same interests, opinions and mindset as the other person.
语篇解读:本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了培养和维持真正友谊的方法。
1.选F 上文提到了发展友谊的好处,下文提到了发展和维持真正的友谊有四个关键点。故F项“因此,与他人发展友谊在我们的生活中是必不可少的”承上启下,符合语境。
2.选C 该空为段落主题句,应总结该段内容。根据本段内容可知,本段主要讲的是如果我们承担责任,接受来自我们内心世界的情绪,而不是因为我们的感受而责怪别人,我们会过得更好。故C项“对自己的情绪负责”可概括本段内容,符合语境。
3.选D 根据该段主题句“Provide support and encouragement.”以及下文可知,本段讲的是给予支持和安慰。故D项“此外,你有责任在他们需要的时候给予鼓励”承接上文,符合语境。
4.选B 上文说明爱是无私的。故B项“爱的行为是为了爱本身”承接上文,符合语境。
5.选G 根据该段主题句“Accept the differences.”以及下文可知,本段讲的是要接受差异。故G项“友谊并不意味着和另一个人有相同的兴趣、观点和心态”承上启下,符合语境。
Ⅱ.完形填空
(2025·石家庄质检)Last year in October, my family and I took our first camping trip.My whole family 6 , which was the most important part of the trip for me.My siblings (兄弟姐妹) are adults with different 7 , which makes it difficult for us to 8 an activity like this.
We had just set up the tent when it suddenly started raining. 9 , we had positioned the tent on a high flat surface where 10 could not come into our tent.Even with the rain, I had never been happier.
While we were all 11 the sound of the rain, my mom cooked a warm meal for the family.Over the dinner, my father told us 12 stories about his childhood, which made us burst into laughter.At night, it was a bit cold.My sisters and I grabbed a 13 and chatted about our daily life.Soon, a hot meal and a good 14 warmed us up.
I realized how 15 it was camping under the sound of the rain.I came to understand why my parents were so 16 about camping.
The next day, we 17 our belongings and headed home.I'm very 18 for this camping trip.Not only did I experience the beauty of the forest, but I also learned that even if the 19 is not the best for camping, we can adapt to Mother Nature as a family to make unforgettable 20 .
语篇解读:本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者和家人的一次露营旅行。这次露营旅行让作者意识到,即使天公不作美,一家人在一起仍可以创造美好的记忆。
6.A.cheered up B.ran away
C.got together D.settled down
解析:根据上文中的“my family and I took our first camping trip”和下文内容可知,全家人团聚在了一起。
√
7.A.lives B.principles
C.abilities D.problems
解析:根据上文中的“My siblings are adults”并结合常识可知,一旦成年,兄弟姐妹就会过着不同的生活。
√
8.A.report B.sponsor
C.plan D.cancel
解析:根据语境可知,鉴于大家的生活不尽相同,计划这样一次露营旅行是很困难的。
√
9.A.Strangely B.Obviously
C.Similarly D.Luckily
解析:根据下文中的“we had positioned the tent on a high flat surface”并结合下雨的情况可知,下雨天把帐篷搭在高处平地上是一件幸运的事情。
√
10.A.wind B.water
C.animals D.hikers
解析:根据上文中的“it suddenly started raining”可知,此处指雨水不会进入帐篷。
√
11.A.expecting B.describing
C.enjoying D.imagining
解析:根据上文中的“Even with the rain, I had never been happier.”可以推测,大家心情极好,享受着帐篷外的雨声。
√
12.A.touching B.awful
C.shocking D.funny
解析:根据下文中的“which made us burst into laughter”可知,爸爸讲的故事让作者他们都笑了起来,故这些故事很好笑。
√
13.A.blanket B.phone
C.basket D.tent
解析:根据上文“At night, it was a bit cold.”可知,作者和姐妹们会盖着毯子保暖。
√
14.A.negotiation B.game
C.conversation D.sleep
解析:分析语境可知,此处指上文中提到的“chatted about our daily life”,即谈话。
√
15.A.tough B.unique
C.expensive D.popular
解析:根据文章内容和常识可知,伴着雨声露营是一次独特的经历。
√
16.A.particular B.disappointed
C.concerned D.enthusiastic
解析:根据上文中妈妈煮饭,爸爸谈论儿时趣事可以看出,爸爸妈妈对露营很有热情。
√
17.A.packed up B.picked out
C.left behind D.set aside
解析:根据下文中的“headed home”和常识可知,露营完回家之前需要收拾自己的东西。
√
18.A.eager B.grateful
C.sorry D.suitable
解析:根据下文中的“Not only did I experience the beauty of the forest,but I also learned”可知,作者对这次露营心存感激。
√
19.A.budget B.season
C.equipment D.weather
解析:根据上文内容可知,“not the best for camping”指的是上文中提到的下雨,即天气。
√
20.A.summaries B.memories
C.lessons D.contributions
解析:根据全文内容可知,这次露营让一家人都非常开心,给作者留下了难忘的回忆。
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Ⅲ.应用文写作
精品课件·名师析题
(2025·雅安模拟)假定你是李华。你所在的英语俱乐部正在开展以“Our Family, Our Love”为主题的演讲比赛,你打算参赛。请写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.你对家庭的理解;
2.如何维持和谐的家庭关系。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文:
Hello, everyone! I'm honored to share with you the speech “Our Family, Our Love”.In my view, families come in all shapes and sizes, but they all share one thing in common: love.A strong family bond can provide a sense of security, support and belonging, which are essential for our well-being.
However, maintaining a harmonious relationship between family members can be challenging, especially in today's fast-paced world.We can try some ways.First, it is important for family members to communicate effectively, show appreciation and respect each other's differences.Besides, spending quality time together, such as sharing meals or engaging in activities, can also strengthen our family bonds.In a word, love can bring our family closer together and live in harmony.
Thanks for listening.
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