Unit 2 Section Ⅳ Writing(课件PPT)-【优化指导】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（外研版2019）

UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards (单元主题语境：人与自我——个人成长) Section Ⅳ　Writing UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 in embarrassed by Tiring UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 went shopping with my mother Doing After trying on one dress after another as we climbed the mountain UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 have been busy with my study seldom helped and I begin to think about what to do to help UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 I suddenly got an idea put all the books，newspapers and other things in place Why don't I give the rooms UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 were quite surprised wiped the dust off all the furniture swept the floor found it hard to clean the floor UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 Although I was tired，I had never felt so happy I could see joy and gratification in her eyes UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help. Why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 She made full preparation for it and set out to join it. She felt grateful and excited. Her family encouraged her to have a try. UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 It was very successful. UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 Filled with gratitude and excitement UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 which shows how passion，determination，and hard work could help one overcome obstacles and achieve his or her dream UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 proving that even in the face of adversity，one can still rise and achieve greatness，leaving an unforgettable mark on the stage of life UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 UNIT 2　Onwards and upwards 高中英语　选择性必修　第一册　W 返回导航 课时梯级训练(八) 单元综合检测(二) 谢 谢 1.写作词汇再现 ①recall回想起 ②remind使想起 ③depressed沮丧的 ④gradually逐渐地 ⑤regain重新获得 ⑥upon (my) arrival (我)一到达 ⑦lose interest in对……失去兴趣 ⑧turn down拒绝 ⑨make a difference有影响，有关系 ⑩benefit from受益于 ⑪be full of/be filled with充满 ⑫feel ashamed感到羞愧的 ⑬go up to走上前 2.精彩句式再练 单句填空/完成句子 ①I engaged actively __ helping my parents with housework. ②Lori will get ___________(embarrass) if we ask her to sing. ③As my mother likes reading，I made a bookshelf for her __ myself. ④______(tire) and laborious as the work was，I was alive to the value of labor and the joy of working. ⑤_____(do) housework helps me become more independent and responsible. ⑥最近我和妈妈去购物了。 Recently I ____________________________. ⑦试了一件又一件连衣裙后，妈妈还是拿不定主意买哪一件。 _______________________________________，my mother still couldn't decide which one to buy. ⑧我们一边爬山，一边高声歌唱。 We sang loudly __________________________. Ⅰ 描述个人经历 ►写作指导 描述个人经历属于记叙文范畴，主要讲述给自己留下深刻印象的一次有趣、悲伤或有意义的经历。记叙文的写作要注意交代清楚六大要素：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。 描述经历的基本结构通常为： 1.开头——引出话题，讲述个人的什么经历。 2.主体——具体过程，最困难的事情是什么，你又是如何克服的。/最有趣的事情是什么，你为此做了什么。 3.结尾——收获和感想，从这次经历中学到了什么。 ►典例展示 假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。要点如下： 1.做家务的理由； 2.做家务的过程； 3.你的感受。 注意：开头部分已写好。 I am Li Hua，a 17­year­old middle school student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 确定体裁、话题 体裁：记叙文 话题：描述个人经历 确定时态、人称 时态：一般过去时 人称：第一人称为主 布局文章架构 首段：讲述做家务的经历 中段：做家务的过程 尾段：做家务的感受 列出核心要点 1.因忙于学习而未能帮父母做家务 2.打扫房间 3.虽然累，但很快乐 [实践应用] 1.完成句子 ①我一直忙于学习，很少帮助父母做家务。(be busy with，seldom) I ____________________________ and _____________ my parents with the housework. ②我对此感到非常抱歉，开始考虑该怎么做才能帮上忙。(并列句；特殊疑问词＋动词不定式) I feel quite sorry for that _____________________________________. ③上个星期天我父母出去购物时，我突然想到一个主意。(idea) Last Sunday when my parents went out shopping，_________________ ______. ④我为什么不彻底打扫一下房间呢？(Why don't ...) ___________________________ a thorough cleaning? ⑤我把所有的书、报纸和其他东西都有条理地放好了。(put ...in place) I ___________________________________________________. ⑥我把家具上的灰尘都擦掉了。(wipe off) I ____________________________________. ⑦我打扫了地板。我发现打扫地板很辛苦。(sweep；it作形式宾语) I _______________ and I ________________________________. ⑧我父母回来后很惊讶。 My parents came back and ____________________. ⑨我妈妈给了我一个大大的拥抱。我看到妈妈的眼神里流露出开心和欣慰。 My mother gave me a big hug and ____________________________ ___________. ⑩虽然我很累，但我从来没有感到如此快乐。(让步状语从句) _____________________________________________. 2.句式升级 ⑪用非谓语动词作状语升级句② __________________________________________________________ ⑫用“Why not＋do ...”升级句④ ____________________________________________ 3.靓化成篇 结合以上句子写一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。 [参考范文] I am Li Hua，a 17­year­old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea：Why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning？Firstly，I put all the books，newspapers and other things in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept the floor.I found it hard to clean the floor.Just at that moment，my parents came back and were quite surprised.My mother gave me a big hug and I could see joy and gratification in her eyes. Although I was tired，I had never felt so happy. ►实战演练 回顾丰富多彩的假期生活，你尝试了很多不曾做过的事情，比如做家务、独自一人旅行、照看弟弟妹妹等。请以此描述你做过的一件事情，要点如下： 1.事情过程； 2.你的感受。 注意： 1.不得出现真实的姓名和学校名字； 2.不少于80词。 I tried something new ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] I tried something new Last weekend，for the first time，I got involved in a farm­work programme in the suburbs，which brought me great joy and helped me grow. I set out early in the morning last Sunday.Upon arriving at the farm，I quickly threw myself into hands­on work in the fields，picking watermelons and moving them to a warehouse all morning.While working，I realized how challenging it was to work in the fields in the hot sun and what the words “every grain on the plate comes from hard work”really meant.Tiring and laborious as the work was，I was alive to the value of labor and the joy of working. Not only has the laboring work offered me an opportunity to get close to nature，but it also has cultivated my perseverance/persistence.I always keep in mind that the only way to improve yourself is to work hard with perseverance when you try something new. Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the town of Pinecrest，a young girl named Emily had a dream of becoming a professional dancer.She was attracted by the grace and beauty of ballet and contemporary dance，often practicing her moves while watching online performances.Emily's family owned a small restaurant，where they hosted travelers from all around the world.Regrettably，her family could not afford to send her to an expensive dance academy，and the town did not have any professional dancers who could train her. Despite the challenges，Emily stuck to her determination to succeed.She spent hours every day practicing in her poor studio at home，learning from online courses，dance videos，and attending occasional workshops in neighboring towns.She would try to perfect the dance moves she observed in the videos and developed her own unique dance style，drawing inspiration from the beautiful natural surroundings.Emily's passion and dedication caught the attention of the local community，and she was invited to perform at various town events and celebrations. One day，news spread that a well­known dance company would be visiting Pinecrest to hold a talent show.The show aimed to discover ambitious dancers from remote areas，providing them with an opportunity to learn from professionals and share their passion with others.Emily，filled with excitement，decided to participate in the show，viewing it as a chance to learn from the experts and gain recognition for her talent. During the show，Emily performed a dance that fascinated the audience and the judges with her graceful movements and emotive expressions.The artistic director of the dance company，who was also one of the judges，was impressed by Emily's natural talent and dedication to her craft.Recognizing her potential，the artistic director offered Emily a scholarship to train at their dance academy in the city. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Emily was overjoyed upon hearing the artistic director's offer._______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Years later，Emily stood on the stage，taking a bow as the audience applauded.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________ [巧读文] 1.读要素 Who：Emily，her family，the artistic director of the dance company Where：in the town of Pinecrest What：Emily's dream of becoming a professional dancer 2.读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： Emily had a dream of becoming a professional dancer ...often practicing her moves while watching online performances. ↓ Emily's passion and dedication caught the attention of the local community ... ↓ Emily, filled with excitement, decided to participate in the show, viewing it as a chance to learn ... 情感线： determined→passionate & dedicated→excited [妙构思] 1.读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“Emily听到艺术总监的提议后欣喜若狂”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：Emily接受了这次机会，父母和朋友也为她感到骄傲，最后Emily收拾好行李离家去接受了培训，立志要更加努力。 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句“几年后，Emily站在舞台上，在观众鼓掌时鞠躬”可以预测续写第二段主要内容：Emily成功成为一名优秀的舞者，她的故事也鼓舞人们要勇于在逆境中奋斗。 2.巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)How did Emily feel when she accepted the opportunity? _______________________________ (2)What did her family do? _________________________________________ (3)What did Emily do for the show? _________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： (1)How was Emily's performance? ________________________ (2)What does Emily's story tell us? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The story tells us how passion，determination，and hard work could help one overcome obstacles and achieve his or her dream. [雕句式] 根据提示升级下列句子 1.She was filled with gratitude and excitement.She accepted the opportunity without hesitation. →________________________________，she accepted the opportunity without hesitation.(分词作状语) 2.Emily's journey from a small­town dancer to a celebrated performer was a shining example of how passion，determination，and hard work could help one overcome obstacles and achieve his or her dream. →Emily's journey from a small­town dancer to a celebrated performer was a shining example，___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________. (which引导非限制性定语从句) 3.Her story inspired countless people，which proves that even in the face of adversity，one can still rise and achieve greatness，leaving an unforgettable mark on the stage of life. →Her story inspired countless people，________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________.(分词作定语) [成美文] Paragraph 1： Emily was overjoyed upon hearing the artistic director's offer._______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： Years later，Emily stood on the stage，taking a bow as the audience applauded.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Paragraph 1： Emily was overjoyed upon hearing the artistic director's offer.Filled with gratitude and excitement，she accepted the opportunity without hesitation.Emily's family and friends were incredibly proud and encouraged her to embrace this life­changing opportunity to pursue her dreams.As she packed her bags and left for the city，Emily knew that countless hours of practice and hard work awaited her，but she was determined to try her best. Paragraph 2： Years later，Emily stood on the stage，taking a bow as the audience applauded. She had become a successful professional dancer，performing with the famous dance company and attracting audiences worldwide.Her performances were praised for their creativity，emotion，and technique，a fruit of her dedication and hard work.Emily's journey from a small­town dancer to a celebrated performer was a shining example of how passion，determination，and hard work could help one overcome obstacles and achieve his or her dream.Her story inspired countless people，proving that even in the face of adversity，one can still rise and achieve greatness，leaving an unforgettable mark on the stage of life. $$