Unit 8 Let's Communicate ! 交流与沟通 （单元写作精练）英语人教版2024八年级上册

Unit 8 Let's Communicate ! 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元以“交流与沟通”为话题，主要探讨如何运用沟通技巧解决生活、学习或者人际交往中出现的一些困惑或者烦恼，并提出相关建议。此类话题涉及的写作以书信、日记等体裁为主，人称多为第一人称，时态涉及一般现在时和一般过去时。 相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 difficulty , challenge , misunderstanding, conflict, argument , misunderstanding, communication, explain ,disagreement, apologize ,understand, solve, patience, trust 短语 feel stressed /confused / upset , argue with..., have trouble (doing)... , disagree with... , listen to, in person, worry about, by yourself, benefit...from... calm down, put oneself in one’s shoes, send emails, open one’s heart, keep calm clear up the misunderstanding, reach an agreement, have a face-to-face talk, make a phone call 句型 ①I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.     听说你和你的父母出现了问题，我很难过。 ②It's normal to feel worried before exams. 考前感到焦虑是很正常的。 ③We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life.     我们日常生活中总是有很多的问题和焦虑。 ④I decided to talk to... about it. 我决定和...谈谈这件事。 ⑤We sat down and had an honest conversation. 我们坐下来进行了一次坦诚的对话。 ⑥I explained how I felt and why... 我解释了我的感受以及为什么...。 ⑦We tried to understand each other's point of view. 我们努力理解彼此的观点。 ⑧As a result, we... 结果，我们...。 ⑨To communicate better, you should... 为了更好地沟通，你应该......。 ⑩We found a solution that worked for both of us. 我们找到了一个对我们双方都有效的解决方案。 ⑪You should call your best friend and talk with him or her. 你应该打给你的朋友和他们聊一聊。 ⑫You should let your parents know your feelings. 你应该让你的父母知道你的感受。 ⑬Our relationship became stronger after that talk. 那次谈话之后我们的关系变得更牢固了。 ⑭I learned that communication is key to... 我认识到沟通是...的关键。 ⑮Hope everything goes well with you. 希望万事顺利。 名言 ①A problem shared is a problem halved. 分享问题等于解决一半问题。 ②Communication is the bridge between two hearts. 沟通是两颗心之间的桥梁。 ③Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。/集思广益。 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing 1. Find your problems. Possible problems Check（√）your problems I can't get good grades. I am too shy to ask my teachers questions. I am fat. I fall ill easily. I don't have many friends so I feel lonely. I always fight with my friends. I think my parents don't understand me. 你的问题涉及哪个方面：Study? Health? Relationship- Friends? Relationship- Parents? 2.Write down some solutions according to your problems. 3. 搭建写作框架 Beginning 摆问题:简单介绍遇到的问题是什么，当时的感受（引出问题）。 Dear _______, I’m sorry to hear that you ...... We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life. Here is my advice/are my suggestions. Body 详细描述沟通过程: ① 问题的具体表现（What happened?）； ② 交流的过程（How did you communicate? 说过什么、做过什么）； ③ 问题如何解决（What was the result?） Last year, I.... We argued about.... Later, I.... The first step is to … You had better … You should ...... It’s best to do .... It’s a good idea to do... 可以使用连接词使文章流畅：First, ... Then, ... Next, ... After that, ... Finally, ... / However, ... Therefore, ... As a result, .../ For example, ... 。 Ending 谈想法: 沟通的结果是什么？ 关系有什么变化？ 你的感受如何？ 从中学到了什么（强调沟通的价值）？ I believe that if you....,you will...I hope that my advice can help you a lot. All in all, it's easy to get along well with your parents as long as you try your best. 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型，注意正确使用时态，同时善用连词，使文章逻辑清晰, 思路流畅。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换初稿，标注亮点表达，检查是否有语法错误，提出补充建议。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，重点标注好词好句、结构、细节描述，讨论沟通过程是否足够具体、详细，引导学生增加过渡词（如at first, finally）让文章更连贯。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 （24-25八年级下·江西赣州·期中）你的朋友Tina成长阶段遇到了困惑，写信向你求助。假如你是李华，请根据她来信中的问题选取其中三点提出建议，并用英语给她回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m not happy these days. Because I can’t get good grades and have too much pressure. I always feel lonely, so I spend more time playing computer games. My mother thinks it’s not safe to make friends on the Internet. Relations between my mother and I become difficult. What should I do? I hope you can give me some advice and help me solve these problems. Yours, Tina 要求： 1.短文应围绕以上信件中的相关问题展开，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等信息； 3.词数80左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：对书信中的问题给出建议，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“日常生活中的问题很正常”来引出重点介绍的内容，即针对Tina的问题提出建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习压力、孤独感、网络游戏和与母亲的关系”几个方面，针对Tina的问题提出具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Tina的情况能尽快好转”的愿望。 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. First, you should spend more time on your study instead of playing computer games. If you have some problems, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Secondly, why not sit down and communicate with your mother? You can ask her not to push you so hard and you can make an effort to study. Last but not least, you should use the Internet wisely even if it is useful. You have to make friends online carefully. You can’t leave more personal information on the Internet. I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 题型通关 练 1．假如你是李华，近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言，谈到自己在学习和生活方面遇到的问题，如学习压力大、课外班多、与朋友发生争吵等。请你结合下面的图示，给她写一封邮件，帮助她克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。 要求： 1. 必须包含图示中的所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息； 3. 不少于80词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Nancy, I’m sorry to hear about your problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 2．作为八年级学生，在学习生活中可能会遇到各种问题，你是如何解决的？你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“How to Solve My Problem”为题的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，叙述你遇到的某个问题以及你解决该问题的经历和感受，或针对该问题谈谈你的建议。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.文中不能使用真实姓名、校名。 How to Solve My Problem __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．作为八年级学生，我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到烦恼，为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的问题，班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely”为主题的英语班会。假如你是主持人李华，请你根据下面的班会记录的思维导图，做总结性发言并提出你的建议或看法，并谈一谈自己的看法。 注意： 1.短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。 3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Face Problems Bravely Problems and worries are normal in life. ___________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．友情是一种财富，有了朋友的陪伴、理解和帮助，我们的生活变得更加美好。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Betty转到了新学校，她担心没有朋友，也不知道如何跟同学相处，这让她感到担心和不安。请你给她发一封邮件，帮她渡过难关。 写作要点： 1.对Betty将要遇见的情况表示理解； 2.针对Betty的担忧给出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括写作要点中的所有信息； 2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯； 3.文中不能透露个人信息； 4.词数80词左右。 Dear Betty, I am sorry to hear that you have problems in the new school. __________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．在学习和生活中，每个人都会有苦恼的事。生地会考在即，八年级的学生压力骤增。假设你叫Lucy，你的好朋友Mary遇到了一些烦恼的事。请根据下面的提示，给她写一封80词左右的邮件，并提出自己的建议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：生物biology、地理geography Dear Mary, I’m sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will feel happy again. Yours, Lucy 6．假如你是Mike，你的同班同学Peter因为准备考试，压力过大而生病卧床。请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他缓解压力，战胜疾病，恢复健康。 提示： 表达关心，询问病情； 给他一些缓解压力的建议，如听音乐、做运动、和朋友聊天等； 提醒他要遵循医嘱，按时吃药，好好休息； 鼓励他保持积极乐观的心态，相信他一定能很快康复，重返校园。 要求：词数80词左右； 可适当发挥，注意书信格式。 Dear Peter, I’m really sorry to hear that you are ill in bed because of the great pressure of preparing for the exams. _______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Mike 7．如果你有很多钱，你会拿这些钱来干什么？请你根据以下要求，以“If I Have a Lot of Money”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1.写出如果你有许多钱，你最想做的三件事并说明原因； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 3.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范，80词左右。 If I Have a Lot of Money _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 8 Let's Communicate ! 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 本单元以“交流与沟通”为话题，主要探讨如何运用沟通技巧解决生活、学习或者人际交往中出现的一些困惑或者烦恼，并提出相关建议。此类话题涉及的写作以书信、日记等体裁为主，人称多为第一人称，时态涉及一般现在时和一般过去时。 相关话题写作素材有： 词汇 difficulty , challenge , misunderstanding, conflict, argument , misunderstanding, communication, explain ,disagreement, apologize ,understand, solve, patience, trust 短语 feel stressed /confused / upset , argue with..., have trouble (doing)... , disagree with... , listen to, in person, worry about, by yourself, benefit...from... calm down, put oneself in one’s shoes, send emails, open one’s heart, keep calm clear up the misunderstanding, reach an agreement, have a face-to-face talk, make a phone call 句型 ①I am sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents.     听说你和你的父母出现了问题，我很难过。 ②It's normal to feel worried before exams. 考前感到焦虑是很正常的。 ③We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life.     我们日常生活中总是有很多的问题和焦虑。 ④I decided to talk to... about it. 我决定和...谈谈这件事。 ⑤We sat down and had an honest conversation. 我们坐下来进行了一次坦诚的对话。 ⑥I explained how I felt and why... 我解释了我的感受以及为什么...。 ⑦We tried to understand each other's point of view. 我们努力理解彼此的观点。 ⑧As a result, we... 结果，我们...。 ⑨To communicate better, you should... 为了更好地沟通，你应该......。 ⑩We found a solution that worked for both of us. 我们找到了一个对我们双方都有效的解决方案。 ⑪You should call your best friend and talk with him or her. 你应该打给你的朋友和他们聊一聊。 ⑫You should let your parents know your feelings. 你应该让你的父母知道你的感受。 ⑬Our relationship became stronger after that talk. 那次谈话之后我们的关系变得更牢固了。 ⑭I learned that communication is key to... 我认识到沟通是...的关键。 ⑮Hope everything goes well with you. 希望万事顺利。 名言 ①A problem shared is a problem halved. 分享问题等于解决一半问题。 ②Communication is the bridge between two hearts. 沟通是两颗心之间的桥梁。 ③Two heads are better than one. 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。/集思广益。 写作步骤 懂 一、Before-writing 1. Find your problems. Possible problems Check（√）your problems I can't get good grades. I am too shy to ask my teachers questions. I am fat. I fall ill easily. I don't have many friends so I feel lonely. I always fight with my friends. I think my parents don't understand me. 你的问题涉及哪个方面：Study? Health? Relationship- Friends? Relationship- Parents? 2.Write down some solutions according to your problems. 3. 搭建写作框架 Beginning 摆问题:简单介绍遇到的问题是什么，当时的感受（引出问题）。 Dear _______, I’m sorry to hear that you ...... We often have a lot of problems and worries in our daily life. Here is my advice/are my suggestions. Body 详细描述沟通过程: ① 问题的具体表现（What happened?）； ② 交流的过程（How did you communicate? 说过什么、做过什么）； ③ 问题如何解决（What was the result?） Last year, I.... We argued about.... Later, I.... The first step is to … You had better … You should ...... It’s best to do .... It’s a good idea to do... 可以使用连接词使文章流畅：First, ... Then, ... Next, ... After that, ... Finally, ... / However, ... Therefore, ... As a result, .../ For example, ... 。 Ending 谈想法: 沟通的结果是什么？ 关系有什么变化？ 你的感受如何？ 从中学到了什么（强调沟通的价值）？ I believe that if you....,you will...I hope that my advice can help you a lot. All in all, it's easy to get along well with your parents as long as you try your best. 二、While-writing(初稿写作） 学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿，尽量使用新学的词汇和句型，注意正确使用时态，同时善用连词，使文章逻辑清晰, 思路流畅。 三、Post - writing（完成终稿） 同伴互评：交换初稿，标注亮点表达，检查是否有语法错误，提出补充建议。 教师点评：选取典型作文展示，重点标注好词好句、结构、细节描述，讨论沟通过程是否足够具体、详细，引导学生增加过渡词（如at first, finally）让文章更连贯。 最后同学对自己的作文进行修改，包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等，然后完成终稿。 写作真题 赏 （24-25八年级下·江西赣州·期中）你的朋友Tina成长阶段遇到了困惑，写信向你求助。假如你是李华，请根据她来信中的问题选取其中三点提出建议，并用英语给她回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m not happy these days. Because I can’t get good grades and have too much pressure. I always feel lonely, so I spend more time playing computer games. My mother thinks it’s not safe to make friends on the Internet. Relations between my mother and I become difficult. What should I do? I hope you can give me some advice and help me solve these problems. Yours, Tina 要求： 1.短文应围绕以上信件中的相关问题展开，条理清楚，行文连贯； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等信息； 3.词数80左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：对书信中的问题给出建议，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“日常生活中的问题很正常”来引出重点介绍的内容，即针对Tina的问题提出建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习压力、孤独感、网络游戏和与母亲的关系”几个方面，针对Tina的问题提出具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Tina的情况能尽快好转”的愿望。 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【例文】 Dear Tina, It’s normal to have problems in our daily life. I’m glad to give you my advice. First, you should spend more time on your study instead of playing computer games. If you have some problems, you can ask your teachers or classmates for help. Secondly, why not sit down and communicate with your mother? You can ask her not to push you so hard and you can make an effort to study. Last but not least, you should use the Internet wisely even if it is useful. You have to make friends online carefully. You can’t leave more personal information on the Internet. I hope things will be better for you soon. Yours, Li Hua 题型通关 练 1．假如你是李华，近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言，谈到自己在学习和生活方面遇到的问题，如学习压力大、课外班多、与朋友发生争吵等。请你结合下面的图示，给她写一封邮件，帮助她克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。 要求： 1. 必须包含图示中的所有要点，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息； 3. 不少于80词 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Nancy, I’m sorry to hear about your problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Nancy, I’m sorry to hear about your problems. Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. I hope you can live a happy life. It’s all right to tell others when you are anxious. It’s good to communicate with your friends, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily. Listening to music or watching movies is another way to help you get relaxed. Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems. Please do remember: you’re not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. Yours truly, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生写作时应注意围绕提示要求写，不要遗漏图片中的建议，需结合图片内容针对Nancy学习和生活问题提建议；根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，回应Nancy的问题，表达共情； 第二步，结合图示，阐述“Learn to relax (如看电影、听音乐)”，“Communicate with parents and friends”及补充要点 (如合理规划课外班、主动和朋友和解等)，并说明理由； 第三步，给予鼓励，表达相信她能克服困难、快乐生活。 [亮点词汇] ① feel worried 感到担忧 ② communicate with 和……交流 ③ get relaxed 放松 ④ smile at 对……微笑 ⑤ keep silent about 对……保持沉默 [高分句型] ① It’s good to communicate with your friends, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. (含有时间状语从句的复合句) ② Listening to music or watching movies is another way that can help you get relaxed. (含有定语从句的复合句) ③ No matter how many difficulties you have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. (含有让步状语从句和宾语从句的复合句) 2．作为八年级学生，在学习生活中可能会遇到各种问题，你是如何解决的？你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“How to Solve My Problem”为题的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，叙述你遇到的某个问题以及你解决该问题的经历和感受，或针对该问题谈谈你的建议。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.文中不能使用真实姓名、校名。 How to Solve My Problem __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version How to Solve My Problem As an eighth-grader, I once faced a big problem with my English pronunciation. It was difficult for me to pronounce words correctly, which made me shy to speak English in class.   To solve it, I listened to English tapes every day and repeated the words carefully. I also imitated the speakers’ intonation. Besides, I joined an English corner.   After continuous efforts, my pronunciation improved a lot. I’m no longer afraid to speak English. I feel really proud of myself. Solving this problem taught me that as long as we keep trying, we can overcome difficulties. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“How to Solve My Problem”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己遇到的具体的问题； 第二步，具体介绍自己是如何解决问题的； 第三步，书写结语，总结解决问题后的感受以及从这次经历中得到的启示。 [亮点词汇] ①be difficult for sb. to do sth.对某人来说做某事很难 ②continuous efforts持续不断的努力 ③no longer不再 ④overcome difficulties克服困难 [高分句型] ①It was difficult for me to pronounce words correctly, which made me shy to speak English in class.（which引导的定语从句） ②Solving this problem taught me that as long as we keep trying, we can overcome difficulties.（that引导的宾语从句+as long as引导的条件状语从句） 3．作为八年级学生，我们在学习和生活中难免会遇到烦恼，为了更好地发现并解决同学们存在的问题，班上开展了一次以“Face Problems Bravely”为主题的英语班会。假如你是主持人李华，请你根据下面的班会记录的思维导图，做总结性发言并提出你的建议或看法，并谈一谈自己的看法。 注意： 1.短文须包括提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名。 3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Face Problems Bravely Problems and worries are normal in life. ___________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Face Problems Bravely   Problems and worries are normal in life. Many of us have troubles: some students can’t get on with parents, some students don’t get enough sleep, and others have lots of pressures with heavy schoolwork. Problems are normal, but we must solve them actively. First, we should communicate with parents—share our ideas and listen to theirs. Second, we should finish homework quickly to ensure enough sleep. Third, we should set small goals, like improving one subject little by little, to reduce pressure.   In my eyes, facing problems bravely helps us grow. Let’s take action and turn difficulties into opportunities! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明问题普遍性； 第二步，列举三类典型困扰并提出解决办法； 第三步，总结勇敢面对的意义，呼吁行动。 [亮点词汇] ①get on with与……友好相处 ②communicate with与……交流 ③little by little一点一点地 [高分句型] ①Second, we should finish homework quickly to ensure enough sleep. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②In my eyes, facing problems bravely helps us grow. (动名词作主语) 4．友情是一种财富，有了朋友的陪伴、理解和帮助，我们的生活变得更加美好。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Betty转到了新学校，她担心没有朋友，也不知道如何跟同学相处，这让她感到担心和不安。请你给她发一封邮件，帮她渡过难关。 写作要点： 1.对Betty将要遇见的情况表示理解； 2.针对Betty的担忧给出建议； 3.表达祝愿。 写作要求： 1.内容必须包括写作要点中的所有信息； 2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯； 3.文中不能透露个人信息； 4.词数80词左右。 Dear Betty, I am sorry to hear that you have problems in the new school. __________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Betty, I am sorry to hear that you have problems in the new school. But don’t worry. I can help you. Here is some advice. First, you should be kind to others. People enjoy making friends with people who are nice to them. Second, be ready to help others. If you give a hand when others need help, they will help you when you are in trouble. Third, remember to give everyone a smile every day. If you smile at others, you are sure to get a smile back. Last but not least, why not join in more activities after school? They can provide you with a chance to make friends with your classmates. I hope my advice will help you and you can make new friends soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对Betty将要遇见的情况表示理解； 第二步，针对Betty的担忧给出一些建议； 第三步，最后表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ① be kind to对……友好 ② give a hand帮助 ③ last but not least最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①People enjoy making friends with people who are nice to them.（定语从句） ②If you give a hand when others need help, they will help you when you are in trouble.（条件状语从句） 5．在学习和生活中，每个人都会有苦恼的事。生地会考在即，八年级的学生压力骤增。假设你叫Lucy，你的好朋友Mary遇到了一些烦恼的事。请根据下面的提示，给她写一封80词左右的邮件，并提出自己的建议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：生物biology、地理geography Dear Mary, I’m sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will feel happy again. Yours, Lucy 【答案】例文 Dear Mary, I’m sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. Firstly, you say that you don’t have many friends at school. I think you should join some clubs and make new friends there. Secondly, you find biology and geography are difficult and often get poor grades in exams. You should ask the teacher or your classmates for help and do more exercises. Then you’ll be good at it. Finally, you think it’s not easy to talk with your parents. Why not open your heart to them and tell them how you feel? I’m sure they’ll understand you. I hope you will feel happy again. Yours, Lucy 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，表达以下是一些给你的建议； 第二步，根据提示内容，针对Mary的问题，提出自己的建议； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①make new friends交新朋友 ②get poor grades取得不好的成绩 ③talk with sb和某人交谈 [高分句型] ①I think you should join some clubs and make new friends there. (宾语从句) ②Why not open your heart to them and tell them how you feel? (why not do sth“为什么不做某事”) 6．假如你是Mike，你的同班同学Peter因为准备考试，压力过大而生病卧床。请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他缓解压力，战胜疾病，恢复健康。 提示： 表达关心，询问病情； 给他一些缓解压力的建议，如听音乐、做运动、和朋友聊天等； 提醒他要遵循医嘱，按时吃药，好好休息； 鼓励他保持积极乐观的心态，相信他一定能很快康复，重返校园。 要求：词数80词左右； 可适当发挥，注意书信格式。 Dear Peter, I’m really sorry to hear that you are ill in bed because of the great pressure of preparing for the exams. _______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Mike 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I’m really sorry to hear that you are ill in bed because of the great pressure of preparing for the exams. How are you feeling now? I hope you are getting better. I know you are under a lot of stress, but don’t worry too much. Here are some suggestions to help you relax. First, you can listen to some light music when you feel tired. It can calm you down and relieve stress. Second, doing some simple exercises like stretching or walking around your room is also a good idea. It can make you feel refreshed. And don’t forget to chat with friends. Sharing your feelings with them will make you feel better. Most importantly, please follow the doctor’s advice. Take the medicine on time and have a good rest. Believe that you will get well soon. Keep a positive attitude and I’m looking forward to seeing you back at school. Best regards, Mike 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，表达对Peter病情的关心； 第二步，给出缓解压力的具体建议； 第三步，提醒他遵循医嘱并好好休息； 第四步，鼓励他保持积极心态，相信他一定能很快康复，重返校园。 [亮点词汇] ① under a lot of stress 承受很大压力，压力很大 ② listen to some light music 听一些轻音乐 ③ calm sb. down 使某人冷静下来 ④ forget to do 忘记做某事 ⑤ chat with sb. 和某人聊天 ⑥ share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物 ⑦ look forward to doing 期待做某事 [高分句型] ① I know you are under a lot of stress, but don’t worry too much. (宾语从句) ② Second, doing some simple exercises like stretching or walking around your room is also a good idea. (动名词作主语) ③ Most importantly, please follow the doctor’s advice. Take the medicine on time and have a good rest. (祈使句) 7．如果你有很多钱，你会拿这些钱来干什么？请你根据以下要求，以“If I Have a Lot of Money”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1.写出如果你有许多钱，你最想做的三件事并说明原因； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 3.条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范，80词左右。 If I Have a Lot of Money _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： If I Have a Lof of Money If I have a lot of money, I will do the following meaningful things. Firstly, I will buy a big house for my parents because I want them to live a happy life. Secondly, I will join in the charities for poor children. I hope I can help them so they will have an opportunity to go to school and get a good education. Thirdly, I will give money to old people’s home to make their life better. These are my dreams. I hope I can make the dreams come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：作文要求以“If I Have a Lot of Money”为题，写出三件有很多钱后最想做的事情及其原因，注意用词，要使作文意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明中心话题； 第二步，详细介绍若有很多钱后，自己最想做的三件事情，并说明原因； 第三步，总结全篇，希望能有一天梦想成真。 [亮点词汇] ① join in 参加 ② get a good education 接受良好的教育 ③ come true 实现 [高分句型] ① Firstly, I will buy a big house for my parents because I want them to live a happy life. (because引导原因状语从句) ② I hope I can help them so they will have an opportunity to go to school and get a good education. (省略that的宾语从句) 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$