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null读后续写与概要写作专练
一、建后核写
阅读下列材料,根探其内容和所给段落开头续写两程,使之构成一篇完整的短文,
No matter how small you are,you can also give help or support to others.I didn't understand
these wurds until I saw my grandfather weep that day.
I grew up in Southern Californis,and my family aften went to Disnryland,Knott's Berry Farm,
and Sea Warld.The highlight of thowe park visite for me was always the evening aetivities whrn there
would be fireworks.
As I grew older and more observant,I notieed that my grandfather would go misaing just before
the firworksudtaandrepr hartlyfinhed.I akd mymtrab hi
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and was told that Grandpo didn't like to hear the noise of the explosions.They reminded him of the.
war and his fellows who died in the war.So every time there was fireworks.he would go inside the
bathrooms until they were done.I felt surprised because my grandfather was such a atrong man.
One summer night,somewhere near my tenth birthday.my ismily and I exited a ride just in time
to hear over the loudspeakers,"In anly two minutes.the lights will be tumed aff around the Rivers of
America,and Deaneyland will preaeat their fireworks in the skies aver the park.At this moment
Crandpswjin front of me,and whn he beard the announem he started jogging abend
without a word to anyone.Without really thinking.I took after him.against the orders of my
mother,who repeatedly called after me to stay with the rest of the family.Grandpa,unaware that I
wa hehind him,tried dexperately to walk through the mnspex of puple who were stopped in the
street waiting for the show to begin.
As he tried to reach the restrooms.the first shell broke in the skies above us.Grandpa paused
and looked up,just leoking as if he had been hit by a shot.And them he kept moving forwand.Ax
shell after shell burat owerhead,he strcgled forward nnd almost fell over hefore he coild sit onto n
bench nearby.
注意,续写胡数总为150虚右
Instantly,!wunt farward and wax by his side
When the fireworks show ended,he straightened saddenly and wiped the tears
Jatin and his yuunger sister,Nehs.lived with their parents in a.poor nighhurhood,Their
mother was very sick and their fnther was atruggling to find a job.and they had only n little money
with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months,the landlord was breathing
down1he由nek(盯看他们),
One day,Jatin took Neha's shoes to a shoe repuirman to fix them,but be lost them an the way
home.It waen't until he got home that he reslizd he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his
parents would be angry and disappointed o he begged his sister to keep it seret.Neha agreed and
the two decided to share Jatin's running shoes.Neha's sehool hours were in the morning,so she
would wear them first.After wchool.she would rush bsck and give them to Jatin.He could then run
to his school,whith began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as be could.Jatin often arrived
late and was warned by the school.
A lnng distanoe race was going to be held for the boys in the city.When Jutin learned thet the
third prie wasew pair of shoes,he decided to take part.He ran homeexcitd and promised his
sister that be would win ber the new shoes.
The daythe rrived.Jatin had a strong start but halway through the re he hegan to g
tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Neha and his
promise to her.Dreaming of the new sboes he would win for his sister gave him strength,and be
stayed right behind the two iastest runners,determined to finish third,Soddenly.as the finish line
drew near.nother runner collided(with Jatin from behind and Jain fell on the grousd.
注意,培写调数应为10点右,
Jatin looked up and he caw the other bnys rushing ahend.
Frilled with pleasure.latin walked home in no time.
(三》
My grandparents'house is in Rosewood and they have a small bouse with a lovely garden.
"Geandpa has gone to visit his brother and Grundma is staying alcee at hotte,"I auid to my friends
Melissa and Rocky,bath of whoen were more than willing to go to zive her s surprist.After we got
ready.Dad drove us there.
When we arrived,my grandms was so surprised and happy.She gave me a big bag."Woe't you
introdae me to your friend?said Grandma.
My friends were introduced and Grandme gave ther each a warm hug.Dod stayed foe a while and left
for hs own work.Then we enjoyed tlkeg und playing in the gaeden.Luinch wio served.Gitindm prepurod a
tasty meal of vegetable soup.chicken sandwiches and strawberry ice crenm for us.After lunch.we
sat in the garden in a semicircle focing Grandma.and listened to ber telling interesting stories.
We were interrupted by a wudden and urgent knock an the door.I jumped up to open the door.It
was Jane.Grandma's neighbor
"Mrs.White,my daughter Eva went to walk our dog Bruno,and hean't retumed home yet.She
always enmes hack in ten minutes or sa.I'm very worried that something has happentd to her.She
usually walks on the main street outside nur home but I can't see ber angwhere.I called out her
name,but there was no answer.I have hurt my foot and can hardly walk.so I want to ask you for
hp,”aid Janet,
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"Aunty Janet,please don't woery.My friends and I will go and look for Eva.I'm sure we will
find her sooe,”1aid
Grandma stayed with Janet and louked after ber.We left the garden immediately to search for
Evn and Bruno.We ealled Eve's name and looked eyerywbere but couldn't find her.I thought we
wauld have togo haek in vain.
注意:域写妈数应为150左右
We were about to head home when we heard low and weak sounds nearby.
We pulled up Bruno and the Eva.
(四)
Katie wes e%eptionally small.Although is曲he国h装rade,she was.as short as a third grud.国
spite of her tiny body.Katie was big at heart.She had s sharp mind.too.Sometimes she gnt her
share of teasing.but Katie knew how to handle it.All the kids who knew Katie liked her a lot.
Katie loved helping others in the elass,so whenever someane wes atuck on the coeputer he
always cald her fer help nd adrice.Katie loved jokes and she alway had ajok that woalder
scone pwhenever he was down.She was truly the most kind and generous friend anyoee could
fok for.
But the other day she wss in big trouble.She was woch n sweet kid,and a third grade teacher
always dreamed of having a clnssroom filled with students like Katie.She was never ever a discipline
peoblem I just couldn't imngine why she had made her parents so angry.
It seemed that Katie had been running up)sizahle charges in the lunchroom.Her peremts
explained that Katie brought a great homemade lunch each day.and there was no reasce for her to
bay school lunch.They assumed asit-down with Katie woald solve the problem,but failed,So they
asked me to help them get to the bottomm of this situstion
So the next day.I asked Katie to my office."Why are yoo changing (lunches.Katie?
What happens to your homemde lunch?"I asked."I lose it,"sho reapandod.I lmned bsek in my
chair and said,1dkan'年helieve you,Kate,”5 he didn'年wrk“Is m ling your hnch
Katie?"I took a new track."No.I just lose it."she said.Well,there was nothing else I could do
注意,续写胡数应为150友卷。
The problemwasslunolved the next week unfil I noticeda boy in the schoal ct.
Katie askedl me noe to tell her pureets.
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Aftereooe was Mrs.Gireen's favorite time of day.After.a hard day at work,her eyes were tired
and her feet hurt.She uauslly enjoyed the nice lung aleep when she was on the bas,Mrs,(ireen had
made friends with the bus drivr,Mr.Smish He alwaya oie her up before her op She usuelly
felt fresh again when she got off thu hus,But todsy was differunt.Mr.Smith wasn't driving.A
amall man sat in the driver's ment."Where's Mr.Smith?"asked Mrn.Green.dropping ber money
into the box."I don't know.Sick.I guess.I jmst work here.lady.Mrs.Green heped that Mr.
Smith was all right.She didn't like this new driver.She decided not to aleep on the way hame today.
She didn't want to ask this driver to wake her.
Mrs.Green looked out of the window.It was a warm afternoon.Thogh she tried hard to stay
awake,the gentle rocking of the bus made ber fall asleep soon.
Then Mrs Green felt soeene shaking her."Wake up.lady.We've come to the end of the line."
Mrs.Green slowly opened her eyes.The bas driver looked down at her,"1 said,this is the edof
the line,lady.It's time to get off."
Mrs.Greem looked out of the window."Wherem 1?"ahe asked"1 was supposed to get off at
Brighten Avemur."
"You are at the lest stop.lady.Come on,get olf the bus."
Mra,Grerm had trouhle waking up When the bes driver took her arm and helped ber xlep alf
the hu leltof panic."Wait mimmte."she screamnd."This ixn't Brighten Aver
Where am I?How can I get home?"
"Cool off,Iady.You are m the end of the line.You bave to get off bere."But why can't I ride
hack with you?”he begged.“I have the fare!”
"Sorry-lady."he said as he closed the door."It's agninst the rules.You have miseed the stop.
and I can't take you back again."
注意:续写何数盘为150左右,
Mrs.Green wutcbed the bus disappear down the rood.
Suddenly the afternoon sun seemed aurpeisingly bright.
《六》
"Ihate them!I really hate thm!"shouted Tom angrily.
Tara and Mike luoked at their friend.They couldn't believe it.He was really furinus!
“Andy is OK now,”said Tara,trying to caim Tom down,
The three friends were in the park after school.They were talking about their friend Andy.Andy
was the youngest in the class and today two bollies pushed him ngainst a locker and hurt
him.Andy fell and cut bis head.Now he has five stitcbes in his forebead.
Their school was a nke.peaceful place until Brian and Mark arrived a few months ago.Brian
and Mark were bullies and their favorte trouble spot was the locker room.That morning their victim
was Andy,miybe because he was smaller and yourger than everyone else in the class.
The teachers kaew that there were sme bullying incidentstBut mast ids didn't want
to report the ineidents.So bullying at their school waan't an "official"peoblem.
Daring the incident Andy eut hes hend.As soon as the hullies saw the blood,they disappeared,
Andy called for help and a teacher eame and took him straight to the hoopital.Bet Andy ddn't tell
the teacher about the hulliex When the head teacher isked him,he simply xaid,"I fell and eut my
head
"Brian and Mark maust pay!"repested Tomn.He wes walking around in circles and hitting the
palm of his left hund with his right fist."Can't you wee?You are behaving hike the bullies."Tara snid
sadly.Mike looked nt Tom,too.and he knew Tomn very well.Tom hated violence."Bullying is not
cool."said Mike.waving his arms like he was dancing."We have to tell someone sbout this,"snid
Tam,“Andy was hurt-
But right now.Tom had other things on his mind.He not only hated the bulbes bat alsa hated
vinlence.He was in a dilemmo-be wanted to fight Brian and Mark but he didn't want to fight with the
bollies by violence.
注意,操写胡量应为150左右
"What ean we do?"Tom and his frieeds decided to find a way out.
The three frienda started to put their anti-bully plan into prsetice.
(七)
The Turning Point
I used to becold-hearted individl who lived in otbing but a world of my own.Unexpectedly.
there was a time in my life wben everything changed.A sunshine suddenly arose from my heart.
opening its door to a new world where I was the key in helping those in need of a hand.
Iwas freshman in nigh schcol when I stepped in our local nursing home,comi about
heingotherenwedbeyombd asd me to.Anyway,when I pulled ino the
parking lot,I realized bow different the place was.It was nice and elean with elders everywhere.As I
cheeked in at the fromt deak for my first serviee hours.I reeeaved a stream of areeties froem the
surrounding people,it felt good a hrvathing in love,which falled me with xudden warmth,
Selbyth lady in chromiy idme towatch foe the eler in room 111.
My job was to help with snything she needed.At first I thorught this was the begimning of a
nightmare,but it turned out ta be snmething compdetely different.
After listening to Shelby's instructions.I walked tomard moy destination and knocked softly at the
door,nsking if I could come in.A voice came from inside answering yes I stepped inside and
introduced myself,witb an explanation of why I was there.Meanwhale.I took a look around.The
white walls were almost covered in picture frames.I could tell from the pictures she must have been
a teacber before.While I was looking around.she introduced herself as Marie Brown.going to be 80
in two months.Her face marked by wrinkles of wisdom could reelly tell me her life story.
"So you've been here for a while?"I asked For a minute it was all silent,and then she answered
yes with a very sad voice,adding that she had no femily.Realizing I had asked the wrong questice.I
fetbad,for the firstme,foe huringme'feing especially this lonely lder's.
注意,烩写调量总为150龙老。
Seeing my embartusseent Marie smiled at me arid aigned to me to sit by her.
Tourhed hy her siories,I dutermined to give Marie care,company and wen aurprises.
4八》
Many years ago.my father.who was 80 at that time.arrived for his regular two-week visit at
my bome in Karachi.He lived with my elder brother i Lahore most of the time and for ten years had
stuck to his habit of going for an-hour-long morning walk to keep fit.In Labore,he would walk
around a park that is quite close to my brotber's house.Naturally.he was keen to continue his
morning walk whale with us in Karachi
Our preferred park is s 2 km walk from my house and it has a 1 km walking traek.I eould no
drive him there every day as I have to leave for the office at the sume time he wanted to set out,Sinee
there are hardly any footpaths in Karachi,my father aid he was delighted to walk an the road as be
was certain there wouln't be murh trsffic in the morning.
Though I kept him informed that our house was near the park and was made od red bricks in caxe
he got lomt.Iwas stil confdentso I suggested it would be safer if he cbanged his walk time to
the euning Thot wy1oould take timthe park after work Howver.myatra deternd pero
that he could not change his routine for just a few days and insisted that he would be leaving the house
every day at am and returning by 8 mm He started doing this and stuck fimly to his schedule.So one day
when he had not returned by 8:30 am,my wife.Qaise.phoned me in a panic.Worried.I
immedtely drove bome.taking the same route that my father would have teken for his walk.
Not spotting him anywhere,I went to the police station to report my father's disappearance.The
station house officer advisedme to wait until midnight before filling the report.Since itwas only 10
am,I drave back to the park,in the hope of discovering some traee,but in vain.Totally at a loss for
what to do peat,I returned boee and waited impmtiently,walking back and forth in the house.
住意,烤写树数旦为150友右,
At 10:35 am the doorbell rang gnd my Iather stood autside the door amiling,accampanied by a
After knowing what had happened.I showed my appreciatinn of the young man's kindness.
(九)
Every yenr on my birthday,from the time I turned 12,a whhe gardenia wes delivered to my house in
Bethesda,Maryland.No card or note eame with it.Calls to the florist were always in vais-it was a
esh purthase.After while I stopped trying to discaver the sender's identity and was just delighted
in the benuty and fragrance of that mcienl,perfeet white flower placed in soft pink tissue paper.
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However,I never stopped imagining who the anonymoua giver might be.My mother contributed
to these imaginations.And at that time,she'd ask me if there was soemeane for whom I had done a
special kinding appreciation.A tenger,1 had more fun imagining that it might bebay
1 fell in lave with orn who hnd noticed me even though I didn't knaw him.
When I was 17.boy hroke my huart,The night he ealled for the lant time,I cried myself to
sleep,When I awoke in the reorning,there was a line nf wards cn my mirror in red lipastick.I thought
about that quotation from Emerson for a long time,and until my heart healed and I went to get the
glass cleaned.my mother knew everything was all rigbt again.One month before my high school
graduation.my father died of a heart attack.My feelings ranged from grief to abandonment.fear and
overwbelming anger my dad was missing some of the most important eveots in my life.I became
completely uninterested in my coming gradoation,the play and the prom.But my motber,in the
midst of ber own grief,would oot hear of my skipping any nf those things.
The day before my father died,my mother and 1 had gone shopping for a prom dress.We'd
found a spectacular,and impressive one,with yards and yards of doited swiss in red.white and blue.
注童,埃写胡数总为150龙老,
It made me feel like a film star.bat it was the wrong size.
She alwrays luved her children nll the way.
(十)
The passengers on the bus watched sympatbetically as the attractive young woman with a white
walking stick made her war carefully up the steps.She paid the driver and found the seat he'd told
her was empty.Then she settled in and rested her stick agninst her leg.
It had been yer since Susan became blind.Due to medical misdiagnosis()she was
soddleely thrown into a world od darkoesa and frustration.And all she had to depeed on was her
hashand,Mark.
Mark was an Air Furee offirer,When sho first loat her sight,he watehed her sink into
hopeleasnexs and waa determnined to help her gais the comnfidener.
Finnlly.Susan feli rady to return to her job,bat how would she get there?She was now too
frightened to get aronnd the rity by hetself.So.Mark drome her to work each day.men though they
warked at opposite eds of the rity.
At first,this coenforted Susan.Soon.however.Mark realiaed the necessity for Susan to hecnme
independemt and wanted her to start taking the bus again.Just as expected.Ssan was afrid of this
idea.But Mark prommised Sosan that he would ride the bus with her until she got the hang of it.
For two weeks.Mark,in military uniform.accompanied Susan to and from work cach day.He
taught her how to rely on her other senses,specifically her heanng.to tell where she was and how to
adapt to ber new surroundings.
At last,Suan decided that she wes rendy to try an her own.Monday morning arrived,and
before sheeft,she haged Mark.Her eyes was filled with tars of gratitude for his patienre and
lowve.She said good-bye,and for the first time,they went their separate ways
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Each day went perfeetly.and Susan had never felt better.She made it.Ou Friday morning,
Susan took the bus to work as wunl.As she was paring for the bas fare,the driver said,"Lady.I
sure do eavy you.
注意:城写词数应为150点右。
Curious.she asked the driver."Why do you say that you envy me?"
Tears of happines poared down Susan's cherks.
二,凝要写作
阅读下面知文,服据其内容写一蜡0问左右的内容新要。
Exercising is a free time activity that helps people to feel good in many aspects of the beelth
efinition.
The best known part that exercising improves is the physical part.The physial effect of
exereiseng is that every part and system of our body is in eantinucus movemrnt.There are many parts
in our body that benefit from eerrise.but one of the moet important ports that exerrising helpe is
tbe blood circulatica system.For example.when you exercise,muscles move.and to move.muscles
ted oxygen in the blood,so the heart has to pumap blood at a faater peed to keup the muscles
iThis trins your heart and lgs giving you more strenth for the future.
Another pan of the definiton of healths mental bealth.This is one of the aspeets that makes
people exercise.Exercise distrnets and relaxes you iur a while beeause in your exercise.you are
getting rid of many feelings,such as stress.Many people feel that after exercising,all the problems
and presaures of their lifestyle disappear o at leas are forgotten for a while,While exertising
probiems of our lives can be solved because you are calm and relaxed.it's just much easier to think
elearly.
The social aspeet of health is helped with exercise berouse many of the sports are and ran be
made with someone else.This makes stronger relationships because you meet people that like you
ani sbare the same things.I think that this makes you feel more aecure and learn about human
relationships.
Exereising is an aetivity that tourbex the three epeets ol health.By exereising you eould improve
tbe funetioningofor body,be calm in your mind.and meet new people making a bealthier life.All
inall.exereising enables you to get the satisfaction of doing something that belpa yo to livea
healthy life.This idea cnue many people to think af xeris drug.You should try it.Exrise,
and he bealthy.