Unit 1 Period Ⅳ Reading for Writing-【精彩三年】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第一册课程探究与巩固Word教参（人教版2019）

Period Ⅳ　Reading for Writing(见学生用书P55) ——如何写建议信 1．__behaviour__/bɪˈheɪvjə(r)/ n. 行为；举止 2．__generation__/ˌdʒenəˈreɪʃn/ n. 一代(人) 3．__attract__/əˈtrækt/ vt. 吸引；引起……的注意(或兴趣) __be__attracted__to__喜爱 4．__focus__/ˈfəʊkəs/ vi.& vt. 集中(精力、注意力等)；(使)调节焦距　n. 中心；重点；焦点 __focus__on__集中；特别关注 5．__addicted__/əˈdɪktɪd/ adj. 有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的→__addict__/ˈædɪkt/ n. 对……入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人 __addicted__to__对……很入迷 6．__adult__/ˈædʌlt/ n. 成年人　adj. 成年的；成熟的 Step 1　Pre－writing When you meet some problems in your life, who do you usually turn to？Why? __略__ Step 2　While－writing 1．输入为先，阅读梳理文脉 Task 1: 文本整体理解，关注布局谋篇 (　A　)What is the letter's main purpose? A．To give advice. B．To ask for advice. C．To share experience. D．To keep a promise. Task 2: 文本细节理解，学习特色表达 (　C　)(1)What is Worried Friend's trouble? A．He is addicted to playing computer games. B．He is anxious because he has no time to play. C．His friend often spends too much time online. D．His friend cannot concentrate on schoolwork. (　C　)(2)What does Ms Luo advise Worried Friend to do? A．To make new friends. B．To ask parents for help. C．To talk to the friend. D．Don't care too much. (3)从文中找出至少3个表达建议的句子。 ①__I__recommend__that__you__talk__to__your__friend__about__his__behaviour. ②__I__think__you__should__encourage__your__friend__to__try__new__hobbies.__ ③__Why__not__discuss__the__problem__together？__ 2．细读课文，关注表达策略 学技巧 (1)本封建议信正文第一段第二句中使用 anxious与 terrible，表现了Worried Friend的担忧情绪。 (2)从本封建议信正文第一段连用的三个句式： You wrote that．..; I understand quite well that．..; You think that．..可看出，作者在建议信的开头，语气比较委婉，三个宾语从句也勾画出了建议信的主要内容。 学结构 学逻辑 建议信正文第一段开头用“You wrote that．..”引出对方的问题，接着用“I understand quite well that．..”表达出自己对对方的理解，然后用“You think that．..”引出对方让作者解决的问题。建议信正文第二段针对第一段提出的问题给出具体建议。 学语言 1．I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. 我建议你和你的朋友谈一谈他的行为。(教材P18) 　behaviour n．(the way that sb behaves, especially towards other people)行为；举止 (1)good/bad behaviour良好/恶劣行为 (2)behave v. 表现；举止 behave badly/well　表现差/好 behave oneself 举止得体； 有礼貌[活学活用] (1)The boys were suspended from school for __bad__behaviour__． 这几个男孩因行为不端被停学。 (2)单句语法填空 ①He __behaves__(behave) in a decent manner，and we think he's a real gentleman. ②His__behaviour__(behave) towards her was becoming more and more aggressive. ③They behaved__badly__(bad) towards the guests，which made us very disappointed. ④If parents do not teach their children how to behave__themselves__(them)，they will do anything at will. “What's up, honey？” noticing her daughter's strange behaviour and low spirits, her mother asked gently. “宝贝，怎么了？” 注意到女儿奇怪的行为和低落的情绪，她的母亲温柔地问道。 2．It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.对于你们这一代的青少年来说，被电脑游戏和网络世界吸引是很正常的事。(教材P18) 　generation n. (all the people of about the same age within a society or within a particular family) 一代(人) (1)the generation gap代沟 for generations一连好几代；祖祖辈辈 from generation to generation(＝from one generation to another)世世代代，一代代 (2)generate vt.造成；产生；引起 [活学活用1] (1)The younger generation smokes less than their parents did. 年轻一代比他们父母这一代人吸烟要少。 (2)The traditional craft has been passed down __from__generation__to__generation__． 这一传统手艺被一代一代人传下来。 (3)单句语法填空 ①This painting has been in our family for __generations__(generation). ②Her story has inspired__a__ whole generation of fashion school graduates. ③Her latest film __has__generated__(generate) a lot of interest/excitement among the youth in recent months. ④The wind farm may be able __to__generate__(generate) enough electricity for 2，000 homes. The movie, whose name is Leap, is about the struggle of three generations, competing for the honour of our country. 电影《夺冠》是关于三代人奋力为我们的国家赢得荣誉的故事。 　attract vt. 吸引；引起……的注意(或兴趣) (1)attract sb to sth 把某人吸引到…… be attracted to ．..喜爱…… be attracted by被……所吸引 attract one's attention 吸引某人的注意 (2)attractive adj. 有吸引力的；有魅力的；引人入胜的 sth be attractive to sb某物对某人来说是有吸引力的 (3)attraction n. 吸引人之物，有魅力之物；吸引力 tourist attractions 旅游景点 名师指津： attraction 作“景点”讲时，是可数名词。 The province is rich in tourist attractions and has many world－famous places of interest. 这个省的旅游景点众多，它有许多世界著名的名胜古迹。 [活学活用2] (1)The job fair has attracted thousands of graduates, who are eager to land a suitable job. 招聘会吸引了成千上万的毕业生， 他们渴望找到一份合适的工作。 (2)My parents __are__attracted__by__ the school's curriculum, which puts equal emphasis on artistic, practical, and intellectual subjects. 我的父母被学校的课程所吸引，它把艺术、实用和知识学科并重。 (3)单句语法填空 ①What do you think attracts people __to__ big cities? ②Mount Tai is __attractive__ (attract) to tourists for its beautiful scenery and historical sites. ③There are a great number of foreign tourists travelling in China every year, __attracted__ (attract) by the mysterious Chinese culture. ④The Great Wall is one of the greatest tourist __attractions__(attract) in the world. (1)A large number of people were attracted to the exhibition to admire the great works. 很多人被吸引到展览会来欣赏这些伟大的作品。 (2)I still clearly remember the first time I picked up a copy of Youth two years ago, I was immediately attracted by its humorous stories, interesting pictures and rich varieties of columns. 我还清楚地记得两年前第一次拿起一本《青春》时，我立刻被它幽默的故事、有趣的图片和丰富的栏目所吸引。 3．But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. 但是花太多的时间上网是不健康的，使人很难专注于生活中的其他事情。(教材P18) 　focus (1)vi.&vt.(to give attention, effort, etc. to one particular subject, situation or person rather than another)集中(精力、注意力等)；(to adjust sth so that you can see things clearly)(使)调节焦距 focus on集中；特别关注 focus one's attention/mind/energy on．.. 集中注意力/精力于…… (2)n. (the thing or person that people are most interested in)中心；重点；焦点 the focus of attention/concern注意力/关注的焦点 bring．..into focus使……成为焦点 out of focus 没对准焦距；不清晰 名师指津： 表示“集中注意力/精力于……”的表达还有：pay attention to sth, put one's heart into sth, fix one's attention on sth, concentrate one's attention on sth。 [活学活用] (1)Health and environmental problems have increasingly become the focus of attention. 健康和环境问题日益成为人们关注的焦点。 (2)It took an extraordinary effort for him to focus on __preparing__(prepare) his classes or __correcting__(correct) his students' work. 集中精力去备课或批改学生的作业花费了他大量的精力。 (3)Scholars __focus__more__on__the return of traditional Chinese culture at this seminar, which is different from the previous ones. 与之前的研讨会不同，在这次研讨会上，学者们更加关注中国传统文化的回归。 (4)单句语法填空 ①With his attention __focused__ (focus) on his homework, he forgot all about what I had told him. ②As you make reading a regular part of your life, you'll make more connections, stay more __focused__(focus) and understand the text better. ③With so many people __focusing__ (focus) their eyes on him, he felt very nervous. ＝With so many eyes __focused__(focus) on him, he felt very nervous. No matter what you are after，if you just focus on the final result, you may miss the rewarding journey that will eventually get you there. 无论你追求的是什么，如果你只关注最终的结果，你可能会错过最终让你到达那里的有益的旅程。 4．Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. 有些学生甚至沉迷于互联网，无法集中精力于学校和家庭生活。(教材P18) 　addicted adj.有瘾的；上瘾的；入迷的 (1)be/get/become addicted to sth/doing sth 沉溺于某事物/做某事；对做某事上瘾/入迷 (2)addict n．对……入迷的人；吸毒成瘾的人 a work/shopping addict　一个工作/购物狂 (3)addiction n．嗜好 addictive adj.使人上瘾的；使人入迷的 [活学活用] (1)If this is the case, people addicted to shopping should ask a support group to help them break this habit. 如果是这样的话，购物成瘾的人应该请互助小组来帮助他们改掉这个习惯。 (2)These chocolates are __addictive__(addict) —I can't stop eating them. 这些巧克力很容易令人上瘾——我吃得停不下来。 (3)单句/语境语法填空 ①Her son was addicted __to__ smoking, which had a bad effect on his health. ②__Addicted__ (addict) to playing the violin, he didn't notice a thief walk into his house. ③John was __a__ work addict, who worked for 12 hours every day.In order to reduce pressure, he was addicted __to__ drinking.The __addiction__(addict) ruined his life eventually. Nowadays, people are addicted to smartphones so much that they even use them while driving, which is really dangerous. 如今，人们对智能手机如此上瘾，以致他们甚至在开车时也会使用它们，这非常危险。 通技法——学写作规范 建议信是写信人向收信人就某个问题提出自己的想法和主张，以此解决有关问题的一种信件。建议信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、所提建议的理由等。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力，其基本框架为： (1)开头(beginning)：开门见山，说明写信目的或向对方陈述自己的观点 (state the opinion)。 (2)主体(body)：对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议，说明理由及证据(reasons and evidence)。 (3)结尾(ending)：呼应开头，重申观点(restate the opinion)。 积“黄金”词句，写高分文章 一、常用的开头语 1．You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. 你写信说你很担心你的朋友，陈磊。 2．I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有困难，你也可能会经常感到孤独。 3．I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on．.. 很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。 4．In response to your letter telling me you hope to．.., I'd like to share some personal ideas with you. 为回复你来信中告诉我你希望……，我想与你分享一些个人想法。 二、主体部分常用表达 1．First(ly), I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour face to face. 首先，我建议你和你的朋友面对面谈谈他的行为。 2．Second(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can expand your social circle and make more friends. 第二，为什么不加入一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做，你可以扩大你的社交圈子，交到更多的朋友。 3．Third(ly), it will be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this, you will calm yourself down. 第三，看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。 4．Last but not least, you should work out some possible solutions together. 最后但同样重要的是，你们应该一起找出一些可能的解决方案。 三、常用的结束语 1．I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend. 我相信他会听你的，因为你是他的好朋友。 2．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些提议/建议对你是实用的/有用的/有帮助的。 3．As time goes on, your classmates will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can follow the advice above. 如果你听从以上建议，随着时间的推移，你同学会更加了解你，并会愿意和你交朋友。 4．I believe, through your efforts, you can overcome these difficulties. 我相信，通过努力，你能克服这些难题。 积“黄金”模板，知基本框架 Dear ________(收信人)， You have asked me for advice on ________(事由)，and I will try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion，you would be wise to take the following advice.First，it is important to ________(第1条建议). ________(第1条建议的理由).Then，it also helps if you ________(第2条建议). ________(第2条建议的理由).Besides，it should be a good idea to ________(第3条建议).I'm sure that ________(第3条建议的理由). I hope you will find these proposals ________(希望和祝愿). Yours sincerely， ________(写信人) [例文鉴赏] 假定你是李华， 你校交换生Kevin准备熬夜观看世界杯足球赛，你认为这样做不合适。请你给Kevin写一封邮件，内容包括：1.解释理由；2. 提出建议。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：世界杯 World Cup [思路点拨] 第一步：明确要求 该写作的体裁属于应用文(建议信)；人称以第一人称和第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。 第二步：布局谋篇 第三步：遣词造句 1．词汇积累 (1)熬夜__stay__up__　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(2)保持健康的睡眠时间表__keep__a__healthy__sleep__schedule__ (3)打乱某人规律的睡眠模式__break/disrupt__one's__regular__sleep__patterns__ (4)导致__result__in/lead__to__ (5)优先考虑__give__preference__to__ (6)在……和……之间取得平衡__strike__a__balance__between．..and．..__ (7)调整某人的时间表__adjust__one's__schedule__ 2．完成句子 (1) 虽然我理解你的兴奋，但我认为这不是一个好的决定。 __While__I__understand__your__excitement__，I don't think it is a good decision. (2)熬夜会打乱你规律的睡眠模式，导致失眠、失忆等这样问题。 __Staying__up__all__night__can__break/disrupt__your__regular__sleep__patterns__ and result in sleeplessness, memory loss, and the like. (3) 沉迷于深夜比赛肯定会影响你的注意力，降低你的精力水平，并最终影响你的学习。 Addiction to late－night matches will certainly __affect__your__powers__of__concentration__，lower your energy levels, and finally __affect__your__studies__． (4)在你对足球的热情和对充足睡眠的需求之间取得平衡是可取的。 It's advisable to __strike__a__balance__between__your__passion__for__football__and__the__need__for__enough__sleep__． (5)试着调整你的时间表，捕捉一些比赛的关键片刻是一个好主意。 It's a good idea to try __adjusting__your__schedule__ to catch the highlights of the game. [范文赏读] Dear Kevin， I hope this email finds you well. I've heard about your plan to stay up all night for the World Cup. While I understand your excitement，I don't think it is a good decision. Firstly, keeping a healthy sleep schedule is of great importance. Staying up all night can break/disrupt your regular sleep patterns and result in sleeplessness, memory loss, and the like.In addition, as an exchange student, it is essential to give preference to your studies. Addiction to late－night matches will certainly affect your powers of concentration，lower your energy levels, and finally affect your studies. Given these concerns, I recommend considering a more balanced way. It's advisable to strike a balance between your passion for football and the need for enough sleep. You can think about recording the matches and watching them at a more suitable time. Or it's a good idea to try adjusting your schedule to catch the highlights of the game. Hope my suggestions can be helpful. Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua [亮点点击] 1．该范文覆盖了所有的写作要点：表明写作目的，并给出了具体可行的建议。 2．在语言运用方面，作者能够根据内容需要灵活运用各种词汇、短语、句式。 (1)高级词汇及短语有：stay up；break sleep patterns；addiction to；the highlights of the game等。 (2)表建议的句型有：I recommend doing ．..; It's advisable to ．..; You can think about doing ．..; it's a good idea to ．..等。 3．文章结构清晰，语言生动流畅，大大提高了文章的表达档次。 温馨说明：课后请完成高效作业9　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$