UNIT 4 写作表达升格—游记-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册五维课堂同步Word教案（人教版2019）

游记 [素养提升] 一、文体特点 游记就是将自己在游览过程中的所见所闻记录下来，并以此表达自己思想感情的文章，重在介绍名胜古迹、风土人情等。在描写过程中，用简洁的语言说明旅游地点的地理位置、人文历史以及旅游路线等，同时可以抒发感情。一篇好的游记不仅能使人有身临其境之感，还能给人以美的享受和心灵的净化。 二、语言特点 1．简洁。游记的语言切忌繁琐复杂。以简洁、明了为主体语言，给人们明快的感觉。 2．具体。写游记离不开地理位置，人文历史以及旅游线路，在写游记时，语言要具体确切，按日程景点的更换进行描述。 三、结构特点 1．首段：总体介绍一次旅游经历。 2．主体：具体介绍旅游过程，包括交通工具，旅游景点，以及历史意义、地理位置、风土人情使内容充实、丰满。 3．尾段：与读者分享自己的体验和感受。 四、知识储备 第一段：开门见山，叙述旅游概况。 1．During the National Day holiday，I paid a visit to the Great Wall and the Palace Museum in Beijing. 2．With much excitement，my family and I visited one of the most famous tourist spots in Shanxi—the Ancient City of Pingyao. 3．Last weekend，my mother together with me paid a visit to the Summer Palace and the whole visit took nearly one day. 第二段：描述旅行过程以及所见所闻。 1．We gathered at the school gate at 7：30 am and then set off for our destination by bus. 2．It is a famous museum with a history of 60 years. 3．What impressed us most was a well known live­action performance directed by Wang Chaoge. 4．As a World Cultural Heritage Site，it dates back over 2,700 years. 5．Wandering along the main street and tasting delicious local foods，everyone is amazed to discover how attractive the small city is. 6．The moment we arrived there，we were taken to see a famous scenic spot. 第三段：描述旅行感受，对旅行进行总体评价。 1．In my opinion，the number of tourists in some popular places of interest should be restricted. 2．Only in this way can tourists enjoy the beautiful scenery. 3．Tired as we were，our trip to Beijing was truly unforgettable. 4．What an unforgettable trip it was and I really had a wonderful time. [典题指导] ►[写作任务] 假设你是李华，你在五一国际劳动节带着外国同学Mary到青岛的海边游玩。请根据下面表格中的内容提示给你国外的朋友Jane写一封英文邮件，告诉她你们的游览经过。 时间 地点 活动 上午 海边 拍照片、沙滩散步、海中游泳 中午 青岛国际啤酒城 吃烧烤等 下午 崂山 爬崂山、看风景，约五点返回 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不讲入总词数。 参考词汇：青岛国际啤酒城Qingdao International Beer City 烧烤barbecue 崂山Laoshan Mountain Dear Jane， ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua ►[审题谋篇] 1．审题与定位 (1)文体：应用文； (2)时态：正文以一般过去时为主，但描述景色或发表感想时可用一般现在时； (3)人称：第一人称； (4)内容：以记叙游览活动为主，以介绍游览时间、天气状况、人物、交通方式、目的地、出发时间、到达时间、返回时间等为辅，可以适当表达自己的感受。 2．确定主体内容 本文以游览的时间顺序为线索，记叙青岛一日游的主要活动，即上午、中午和下午在不同地方的不同活动。 3．确定篇章结构 全文可分为三段(书信的开头和结尾除外)； 第一段：交代时间、地点、人物及事件； 第二段：记叙游览的经过； 第三段：抒发感情，总结全文。 ►[佳作展示] Dear Jane， My foreign classmate Mary and I visited some places of interest in Qingdao on May Day. Early in the morning，we started off by taxi.We first went to the attractive seaside，where we took photos and walked along the beach　 [1]．We also had great fun swimming in the sea　 [2]．Then，we visited the famous Qingdao International Beer City at noon，from which we learned more about this modern city　 [3]．There we had a barbecue as lunch.After lunch，we went to the Laoshan Mountain by bus.It is a most beautiful place，and on the mountain we enjoyed the wonderful scenery of green trees and white clouds.How time flew！At about 5 o'clock，we went back home happily. Although tired　 [4]，we felt happy that we had an unforgettable day. Yours， 　Li_Hua　 ►[名师点评] 书信正文的第一段简短地介绍了时间、地点、人物、事件；第二段叙述了作者和Mary在青岛一天的游览经历，按照游览的时间顺序进行了记叙，并使用了一些表示时间和先后顺序的词语，使得文章条理清晰；第三段中作者表达了自己的感想。 [1]画线部分为where引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词seaside。 [2]此处为“have fun doing sth.”结构 [3]此处为“介词＋关系词”引导的非限制性定语从句，表明了作者和同学在青岛国际啤酒城更多地了解了现代的青岛。 [4]Although tired为状语从句的省略，其完整形式为Although we were tired。 [学以致用] 假设你是李华，暑假期间你与父母乘飞机去西藏旅游了，美丽的风景和当地居民的热情让你流连忘返。请你给在美国的笔友Betty写一封邮件，叙述你的所见所闻，并发表感想。 内容要点如下： 1．欣赏高原风光(如高地、雪山等)； 2．去当地居民家做客，体验当地风俗，品尝美食； 3．在导游的陪同下参观布达拉宫和西藏博物馆，购买纪念品，并到离拉萨不远的羊八井温泉沐浴。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：布达拉宫the Potala Palace；拉萨Lhasa；温泉hot spring；高地highland Dear Betty， During the summer holiday，I went on a tour of Tibet with my parents by plane. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 　Dear_Betty，　 　During_the_summer_holiday,_I_went_on_a_tour_of_Tibet_with_my_parents_by_plane.　 During my trip I was deeply impressed by the breathtaking scenery—the fantastic highlands, the fresh air, and the snow mountains.In the company of the guide, we paid a visit to the Potala Palace and Tibet Museum to learn about its history and culture, where we bought brilliant souvenirs.After that, we went to relax ourselves by bathing in the hot springs in Yangbajing near Lhasa.Besides, we had an opportunity to come to the Tibetan families to experience the local life and unique customs, and tasted a variety of delicious foods. What fun it was to travel there! I hope you can see it yourself. 　Yours，　 　Li_Hua　 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$