UNIT 1 写作表达升格—介绍科学的优秀品质-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册五维课堂同步Word教案（人教版2019）

介绍科学家的优秀品质 [素养提升] 一、文体特点 选择一个具体的人物，通过刻画人物的外在形象、讲述人物行为，突出人物的某种性格、精神、品质，暗表作者的价值取向，是常见的记叙文写作。 本单元的写作以“what makes a great scientist”为话题，涉及著名科学家的故事，包括成为一名科学家所具有的优秀品质，要求考生能够通过所介绍科学家的生平事迹及其重要成就来挖掘科学家所具有的优秀品质。 二、写作特点 1．选取典型事例、重要成就来表现科学家的优秀品质。介绍科学家时，应有相应的事例作为支撑。正所谓“人因事显”，离开具体的事例，人物的性格、品质和精神面貌都无从表现出来。因此，选材一定要认真、仔细，安排材料时还应分清主次，详略得当。 2．借助合理的写作手法突出科学家的优秀品质。我们可以运用侧面描写、对比、衬托等手法来突出人物的形象。 3．写作时要根据需要采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙等不同的叙述方式，以突出重点信息。 4．写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。 5．恰当使用总结性语言，对人物的优秀品质进行点睛式的概括。 三、结构特点 四、知识储备 常用表达句式 1．A successful scientist must be a genius and very intelligent. 2．To become a good scientist，you must be creative and hardworking. 3．The most important is that you must love science and full of curiosity. 4．A real scientist must be good at observation and develop the ability of independent thinking. 5．It's important to be prepared for any challenging failures in your work. 6．A good scientist always wants to find out answers and ask many questions. 7．He can become an outstanding scientist due to his strong interest in many things. 8．He became successful because he dreamed of what others were afraid to dream about. 9．On the way to becoming a great scientist，he never lost heart when faced with tough difficulties. 10．Because he was determined，he was able to make great achievements even though he was ill， 11．What the most important quality a scientist has is perseverance，as many of the experiments will fail. 12．He is one of the most important/outstanding persons... 13．He is honoured/regarded/considered as... 14．He makes great contributions to.../sets an example to... [典题指导] ►[写作任务] 假设你是李华，你校英语刊物开办专栏Great Scientists，请你根据下表信息给该专栏写一篇英语短文来介绍为中国的能源、地震预测等做出巨大贡献的“中国地质学之父”李四光先生。 时间 事件 1889.10.26 出生于湖北黄冈 1913.10 就读于英国伯明翰大学 20世纪20年代 任教于北京大学 1971.4.29 因病逝世 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：地质学geology 伯明翰大学University of Birmingham ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ►[审题谋篇] 这篇书面表达要求考生根据所给信息给Great Scientists专栏写一篇英语短文来介绍李四光先生。 第1步：审题。根据提示可知这是一篇人物介绍类记叙文，介绍“中国地质学之父”李四光先生。全文以一般过去时为主，第三人称为主。 第2步：组织要点。李四光先生的生平事迹、教育情况、主要贡献及其优秀品质等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句。注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。 ►[佳作展示] Born on October 26,1889 in Huanggang，Hubei Province，Li Siguang is called the Father of Geology in China.In October,1913 he received advanced education in the University of Birmingham，where he mastered English　 [1]．In the 1920s，he taught in Beijing University.As a great scientist，he made lots of research on China's energy，earthquakes，etc.He loved his motherland and whatever difficulties he ran into　 [2]，he never gave up.Unfortunately，he died of illness on April 29,1971. Li Siguang's scientific spirit of seeking truth，careful attitude and innovative thinking impresses us a lot today.He will always be remembered for his great contributions to the construction of China. ►[名师点评] 本篇范文结构完整，条理清晰。范文中时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板。文中运用了高级的语法结构，提升了文章的层次，显示了作者很强的驾驭语言的能力。 [1]where引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词the University of Birmingham。 [2]whatever引导的让步状语从句， whatever可以用no matter what 替换。 [学以致用] 假定你是中学生李华，现在请你以农业科学家袁隆平及这位科学家对人类所做的贡献为例，谈谈你对科学家以及科学精神的认识。 注意：词数80左右。 [参考范文] In 1973，Yuan Longping became the first agricultural pioneer in the world to grow rice that has a high output.Thanks to his research，farmers are producing harvests twice as much as before. As an agricultural scientist，Yuan Longping also has the spirits that most scientists should have.Though he has achieved his goal，he still devotes himself to research on rice so as to feed more people in the world.He has dreams one after another and always loves and cares for people.Yuan Longping has made such great contributions to mankind that he is respected and admired by people all over the world. All in all，we must learn these spirits from this great scientist in order to serve our country better when we grow up. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$