UNIT 5 写作表达升格-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第二册五维课堂同步Word教案（北师大版2019）

主题写作——看图写作 如今，随着智能手机和电子设备的普及，“低头族”现象兴起，人们沉溺于手机等电子设备而忽略了和他人的沟通交流。请根据下图写一篇英语短文，内容要点如下： 1．描述图画内容； 2．对图中的现象加以分析； 3．针对这个现象提出建议。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ●思路点拨 主题 看图写作 体裁 议论文 人称 以第一、三 人称为主 时态 以一般现 在时为主 布局 第一部分：描述图画内容； 第二部分：针对图画内容加以分析； 第三部分：针对该现象提出自己的看法或建议。 ●遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1．　vivid　 adj.生动的，逼真的 2．　obvious　 adj.显然的，明显的 3．　imply　 vt.表明；意味着…… 4．　restrict　 vt.约束，限制 5．　precious　 adj.宝贵的 6．　be of great significance　 非常重要 Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1．完成句子 (1)在餐桌上，年轻人沉溺于电子设备，不顾长辈们明显的尴尬和失望。 At the table，the young 　bury themselves in　 their electronic devices，regardless of the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment. (2)这幅图表明电子设备对我们的生活有负面影响。 The picture implies that electronic devices 　have a negative effect on　 our lives. (3)年轻的痴迷者往往学习成绩差，这让长辈们更加担忧。 Young addicts 　have a tendency to　 show poor academic performance，which adds to elders' worry. (4)限制我们使用电子设备的时间，珍惜与家人的宝贵的面对面交流是很重要的。 It is 　of great significance　 to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face­to­face communication with our family members. (5)这有助于和谐的家庭氛围。 It 　contributes to　 a harmonious family atmosphere. 2．句式升级 (6)用分词短语作状语改写句(3)。 　Young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to elders' worry.　 (7)把句(4)和句(5)合并成含有非限制性定语从句的复合句。 　It is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face­to­face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious family atmosphere.　 ●连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] As can be seen from the vivid picture, a big family gets together to have a splendid dinner. But at the table, the young bury themselves in their electronic devices, regardless of the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment. The picture implies that electronic devices have a negative effect on our lives. Overuse of electronic devices widens the distance between teenagers and their elders. Worse still, young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to elders' worry. As far as I'm concerned, it is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face­to­face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious family atmosphere. 请根据下面的图片写一篇短文，内容包括： 1．描述漫画内容及其寓意； 2．发表你的观点。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．开头语已给出，不计入总词数； 3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] 　As_can_be_seen_in_the_picture,_the_young_tree_is_supported_by_a_stick_while_growing.　 However, once there is no support, the tree breaks off. In fact, it reflects a common phenomenon－many parents take care of their children too much. In our daily life, some parents often take unnecessary action, which will contribute to an undesirable result in the long run. Children need not only support and care but also challenges of difficulties and experiences of hardships. Too much care is not beneficial to their growth and development. Putting yourself in their shoes, as children grow up, parents should give them more space to deal with their own things independently. [附]话题常用表达句式 1．开头 Given is an interesting/meaningful picture/cartoon. Given is an interesting but thought­provoking picture. From the picture we can see that... As is vividly shown in the picture... 2．主体 There are mainly two reasons. On the one hand... On the other hand... There are three reasons for this phenomenon.To begin with...What's more...Last but not least... 3．结尾 In consequence/In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize/All in all... 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$