内容正文:
途径三 学以致用
细节描写1 Father,whohadwhitehair,lookedveryold
withsomewrinklesonhisforehead.Healsohadwrinkles
nexttohiseyeswhenhesmiled,yethissmilewasstilas
heartwarmingasbefore,thesmileofafatherwhojust
wantedagoodlifeforhisfamily.
细节描写2 Hestaredatmeagain,meetingmyeyeswith
thestrangestexpressiononhisface—itwashostileand
angry.Ilookedawayquickly,shocked,andmyfacewent
redagain.
细节描写3 Imtotalynotanextrovertperson.IdontreG
alyliketotalkalottostrangers,yetthepeoplewho
knowmewiltelyouthatImverytalkative.Imnota
sociableperson,butIwishIare.Lastbutnotleast,Im
veryoptimistic.Ialwaysseethingsverysimple,butI
donttakethingsforgranted.
细节描写4 Isatfrozeninmyseat,staringblanklyathim.
Hewassomean.Itwasntfair.Ibegangatheringupmy
thingsslowly,tryingtoblockthesorrowthatfiledme,
forfearthatmyeyeswouldtearup.
细节描写5 Then,suddenly,atthebackofthechurch,
therewasatotalsilenceandeveryoneturnedtoseewhat
washappening.Andsoon,walkingbeforethemal were
theverytwoboystheyweretheretoprayfor.
细节描写6 1.Lucysaid,“Itsveryniceofyoutoinvite
me.”
2.“Imverygladyoucouldcome,Mr.Liu.Pleasetakea
seatattheheadofthetable.Itsaninformaldinnerand
pleasedontstandonceremony.”MrsSmithcontinued
“Mr.Liu,wouldyouliketohavesomechicken?”
3.“Whatkindoflifedoyouprefer,citylifeorcountry
life?”Jimasked.
细节描写 7 Thechurchwasfiledwithsingingvoices.
Tomevensangloudly.Heknewthatthiswouldbeaday
hewouldalwaysremember.
途径四 学以致用
1.sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappily
withthem
2.thesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore
3.Areyourealywilingtoleadatoughlifewithme?
Yes! Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive.
4.Everycoinhastwosides
5.felashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdolars
6.NeverhadIhadsuchathrilingyetdangerousvacation
before.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestmadeadeepimG
pressiononmymind
第四节 读后续写话题详析
话题一 学以致用
[参考范文]
Threemonthslater,thecommunity announced a
paintingcontest.MydaughterputthepostertomydrawG
ingboardandsaid,“Mom! LetspaintourgardendinoG
saurs!”For manydays,wepaintedtogetheronabig
woodenboard.SometeenagerslaughedatourbigTGRex
withaflowercrown,butkindshopkeepersgaveusfruits.
Onthelastnight,whenI wasdrawingstarsonthe
dinosaursclaws,myoldbusinessteacherwalkedby.“InG
terestingbutisthisuseful?”heasked.BeforeIcouldsay
anything,my daughtersaid, “Dreams dont need reG
sumes!”
Attheawardceremony,asilverGhairedjudgeapG
proached me.“Yourpaintingdidntfitanyofourold
rules,”shesaidwithasmile.“Sowemadeanewprize:
MostCourageousReimagining.”Later,ascamerasflashed
andweheldourGoldenCup,Isawateenagegirlinthe
crowddrawingquickly.Inhernotebook,astronautswere
paintingwalsonMars.Ileaneddownandsaid,“Dontlet
anyonetel youthatsimpossible.”Shesmiledanddrew
rainbowrocketsaroundthem.
话题二 学以致用
[参考范文]
Approachingthedoorway,Lucywasverynervous
andtookadeepbreath.Standinginfrontofthedoor,she
wasafraidwhetherhermotherwouldforgiveherforher
rudeness.Butwhenshethoughtofhermothersfamiliar
faceandthenoodleselerskindadvice,shedecidedto
knockonthedoorbravely.Hermotheropenedthedoor
butLucy wassoashamedthatshedidntknow what
tosay.
Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Lucy
couldnthelpcryingandsaid“Sorry,mom,IknowIhave
madeabigmistake.Ishouldnthavequarreledwithyou.I
shouldnthaverunawayfrom home.Couldyouforgive
me?”Lucysmotherwasmoved,saying“Goodgirl,never
mind,Ialsoshouldmakeanapologytoyouforscoldingat
youangrily.Iamveryworriedaboutyou.”Tearsroled
downfrombothoftheirfacesandtheyhuggedeachother
tightly.
话题三 学以致用
[参考范文]
Lillard,however,hadanunexpectedsolution.Her
grandparents,wholivednearherinTennessee,happened
tohaveahomein Michigan,too,andthey would be
comingupinDecember.Tuckercouldcatcharidewith
them and Lilards grandfather would drop him offat
McCalsnewplace.Thus,McCal wasabletobereunited
withhim.“Whataretheodds?”Lilardasked,laughing.
Excitedandoverjoyed.McCalofcourseacceptedLilards
suggestionwithgratitude.
Lillardsgrandfathercompletedthe600GplusGmile
journeywithTucker.GettingtogetherwithTucker,McG
Calsaidherjoywasbeyonddescription.“Hereturnedto
merightbeforeChristmas,andIwashavingarealyhard
timethen,”shesaid.“Itwasawonderfulthing.”Notonly
didMcCalgetTuckerback,LilardalsosentalongahandG
madeChristmasgiftforMcCal,withsomemoneyinside,
which moved McCal totears.Thereisnodoubtthat
TuckerscrossGcountryadventurewasthestarttoalasting
friendshipbetweenMcCalandLilard.
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第四节 读后续写话题详析
话题一 比赛收获类
[典题示例](2023新课标Ⅰ卷)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.
WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingconG
test.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglish
wasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadalG
lowedmeto present mypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicby actingoutaplay,whereI
playedaltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.
So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail? Hisreply:
“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyourewilingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotat
this.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.
IchosePaulRevereshorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBoston
whorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtonto warnpeoplethatBritishsoldiers
werecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorsesmouth.Notabriliantidea,but
funny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelseschoice.
Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired? Havedoubts?Did
hewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But
,
likeRevereshorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Ichecked myspeling.Iaskedmyoldersister
tocorrect mygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfGdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.I
even
readafewofthem.
WhenI handedin theessayto myteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,
“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinalyfinishedit
,
thethoughtof winning hadgiven waytotheenjoyment of writing.IfIdidnt win
,I
wouldntcare.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答.
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.
Iwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresentation.
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[五步续写]
第一步 把握原文大意 明主旨和两线
主旨
大意
文章主要讲述了作为英语为非母语的主人公,原本非常讨厌写作,但是在老师的鼓励下
参加了英语作文比赛并获奖
原文
两线
情节线:老师要求作者参加作文比赛→作者拒绝→老师鼓励和支持→选定写作话题→
自我怀疑→反复修改中发现写作的乐趣
情感线:unconfident→creative→diligent→determined→enjoyable
写作
意图
只要我们勇于创新,并付诸持之以恒的努力就可以克服困难并从中获得乐趣和成长
第二步 根据首句信息 定续写方向
两段首句
定一框
由第一段首句关键信息“therecamethenews.”和第二段首句关键信息“I
wenttomyteachersoffice”可知,第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖,在颁
奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的感激
二框二首
正能量
由首句关键信息“IwenttomyteachersofficeaftertheawardpresentaG
tion.”可知,第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作,自此作者坚持写作取得
了成功;由正能量结尾可知,作者将这一切归功于自己的老师
第三步 原、续两线同 加合理细节
◎高度融洽 续写部分情节线体现的是作者高兴,感谢老师,坚持写作并取得成功.比赛消息传
来———作者获奖———高兴———颁奖典礼感谢老师———颁奖后来到老师办公室———老师告诉作者
坚持写作———作者表达了对写作的喜爱———作者写作取得了成功———感激老师
情感线的走向应该是作者对老师的感激之情激动和感激(grateful).
◎添加细节 ①情感描写:续写第一段应该写作者在听到这个好消息以及在颁奖现场的激动之
情.②情感细节:刻画作者的自豪兴奋和对老师的感激之情,尾句可描写作者深受鼓舞,继续探
索创作,升华主旨.
第四步 沿原语言特点 完美连贯表达
原文利用简单句、并列句、非谓语动词和主从复合句描写动作(加框内容)、对话和社会环境(加下
画线内容),故续写部分可沿用原文特点.可利用afterthat,later,onreturning等恰当过渡衔接.
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第五部分 读后续写
第五步 临摹衡水字体 打造完美卷面
Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwonthefirst
place.Myheartskippedabeatanddisbeliefwashedoverme.Theawardceremonyhostedinthe
schoolhal,theheadmasterkindlypresentedmewithacertificateofachievement.Myfacelitup
withjoyasacceptedtheaward.Mysmilefiledwithpride.Aroundofapplauserangthroughthe
hal.Meanwhile,Ithoughtofmysocialstudiesteacher.(首尾衔接)
Iwenttomyteachersoficeaftertheawardpresentation.“Congratulationsagain!Iknew
youhaditinyou,”hesaidwarmly,signalingmetotakeaseat.(与首句衔接)“Thankyou.”Ireplied,
withamixtureofgratitudeandexcitement.Ireflectedonmyinitialdoubtsandhesitations.SomeG
timesalittakesissomeonewhobelievesinus,someonewhoseesourpotentialevenwhenwe
dontseeitourselves.Leavinghisoficethatday,IfeltarenewedsenseofpurposeanddetermG
ination.Iknewthatthiswasjustthebeginning.Iwasinspiredtokeepwritingandexploringmy
creativity.
(2025江西九江三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成
一篇完整的短文.
Whenmydaughterturnedseven,sheaskedaboutmyjob.“IteachadultstodrawatacolG
lege,”Iexplained.Hereyeswidened.“But...whydotheyneedtolearn? Didtheyforget
how?”Thequestioncutthroughme.
Childrenusecrayonslikemagicsticks.Thatweek,shedrewa“MarsPalace”whereastroG
nautGprincessesroderainbowrockets.Ioncedreamedtoobig.Attwelve,Itraineddailytobea
tennischampion,racket(球拍)makingshinylinesinsummersun.Atsixteen,Ifilednotebooks
withdrawings—spaceshipsflyingthroughspaceholes,heroessavingcitieswithpaint.ButaG
dulthoodthrewthosedreamsintoneat,dustyboxeslabeled“ChildishThings”.
“Bepractical,”Itoldmyselfwhenchoosingabusinessdegree.“Artdoesntpaybils.”Yet
lateatnight,Isawmyyoungerselfinthemirror—aghostholdingemptydrawingGbooks.
OneOctoberafternoon,everythingchanged.Mydaughterbeggedtoexplorethestore
room.Beneatholdbags,wefoundabox,insidewhichlaymyteenagetreasures:atennisticket
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piece,aribbonfromaschoolartfair,andmostamazingly,adrawingbook.Itspageswereful
ofcrazyideas—treeswithmagicfruits,trainsunderoceanwaves.“Mom!”shegasped,touchG
ingalionwithwingsIdrewwhenIwasherage,“Whystopbelievingthese?”
Thatnight,Isatinfrontofablankcanvas(画布).Themoonlightshoneonmyhands.The
lionseyesinmyolddrawingseemedtoaskme,“Whendidyoustopdreaming?”Suddenly,IreG
alizedIhadstoppedmyselfbyalwaysneedingaclearplanbeforeIletmyselfdream.
Thenextmorning,Iboughtnewpaints.Ididntpaintnormalthingsliketreesorhouses.I
usedbrightpurplesandgolds.Mydaughterdancedaround me,usingherfingersto make
clouds.Wepainteddogsdoingmathanddinosaursgrowingflowers.Forthefirsttimeintwenty
years,Ifeltfreeagain.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答.
Threemonthslater,thecommunityannouncedapaintingcontest.
Attheawardceremony,asilverGhairedjudgeapproachedme.
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第五部分 读后续写