内容正文:
英语写作一本通
5年真题实战
工.应用文写作
No.1.短文投稿
Writing1(2023·全国甲卷改编)
你们学校正在举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动,请你以一位中国历史人物为题
写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物事迹:
2.意义或启示。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Writing2(2022·全国乙卷改编)
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学校英文报正在开展以L,earning English Beyond
the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果
写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
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1.学习活动状况描述:
2.简单评论;
读英语书籍
听英语歌尚
看英语电彭测览英语学习网站
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays,with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers,
第一部分五年高考
Writing3(2022·全国甲卷改编)
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。内容
包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.短文的首句已为你写好。
When it comes to ocean,its pollution is becoming more and more serious.
No.2.邀请信(邮件)
Writing1(2022·北京卷改编)
假定你是李华,请给外国学生Jim写一封邀请信,邀请其为自己的同学线上分享英语写作经
验的交流会。
1.交流会内容及邀请他的原因;
2.时间及其他注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2(2022·天津卷改编)
你是高中口语社成员李津,李华为了招募新成员,让你录制一个视频,撰写视频的文字稿,要
点如下:
1.邀请大家加入社团;
2.介绍一下社团活动(如英语演讲比赛,观看英语电影等):
3.谈谈你加入社团以后的收获。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:Spoken English Club;English Speech Contest
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Writing3(2022·浙江卷,6月》
假定你是李华,你校图书馆开设了一个小组学习室,请给留学生Michael写一封邮件,邀请
一同前往体验,内容如下:
1.位置和开放时间;2.室内设施与功能。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Writing4(2019·新课标Ⅲ卷改编)
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Alen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
No.3.推荐信
Writing(2019·天津卷改编)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以
“Let's Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类
型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
1.推荐书籍的类型及特点;
2.推荐的理由。
参考词汇:
科幻小说science fiction novel;侦探小说detective novel;魔幻小说fantasy novel;
传记文学biography;科普读物popular science
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注意:1.词数80左右:
2.所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
3.内容充实、行文连贯:
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
March 22,2019
By Li Jin
No.4.普通信(邮件)
Writing1(2022·浙江卷1月)
假定你是李华,在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chis,现在他已回国,请
你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.回忆活动经历:
2.分享个人收获:
3.希望保持联系。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Writing2(2021·新高考I卷)
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.读报的经历;
2.喜爱的栏目;
3.期望和祝福。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Youth and Me
英语写作一本通
Writing3(2020·天津卷改编)
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chis
很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
(2)对活动的感受;
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:(1)词数不少于80:
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼the coming-of-age ceremony
Dear Chris,
I'm so glad to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing4(2020·浙江卷)
假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容
包括:
1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第一部分五年高考
Writing5(2019·新课标Ⅱ卷改编)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chis球队近期将参加比赛,内
容包括:
1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
No.5.通知
Writing(新课标Ⅱ卷改编)》
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing
Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点:3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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No.6.建议信
Writing1(2025·北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国
好友Jm打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.提出的建议;
2.建议的理由。
提示词:倡议proposal
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2(2024·北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投
稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。
请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)建议投稿内容;
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一部分五年高考
Writing3(2023·新课标I&.Ⅱ卷)
假定你是李华,外教Rya准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样
分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
”中十+++十十+十于”中+-十
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing4(新课标I卷改编)
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Trry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请
你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物:3.餐桌礼仪。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
No.7.告知信
Writing(2021·天津卷改编)
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy
通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语
回复,内容包括:
1.表示感谢并问候;
2.计划与家人一起做的事情;
3.你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
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注意:1.词数不少于80:
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
Yours,
Li Jin
No.8.发言稿(演讲稿)
Writing1(2021·全国乙卷改编)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
Learning online has become an important way to study recently.
Writing2(2024·全国甲卷)
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写
篇发言稿。
shared bicycle
high-speed train
new energy vehicle
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport,Chinese transport has seen an
enormous development.
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No.9.致歉信
Writing(新课标Ⅲ卷改编)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bb约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容
包括:
1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
No.10.感谢信
Writing(2o19·浙江卷)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alx即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮
件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Aex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
13参考答案
第一部分 五年高考
Ⅰ.应用文写作
No.1.短文投稿
Writing1
IwouldliketointroduceaprominentfigureinChinese
history,Confucius.HewasborninthestateofLuwhich
islocatedinpresentGdayQufu,ShandongProvince.ConfuG
ciuswasagreatphilosopher,educator,andpoliticianwho
leftaprofoundimpactonChinesecultureandsociety.
Confuciusbelievedintheimportanceofmoralvalues
suchasrespect,loyalty,andkindness.Heemphasizedthe
importanceofeducationandselfGimprovement,whichhe
believedwouldleadtoaharmonioussociety.Histeachings
andphilosophywerecompiledintoabookcaledtheAnaG
lects,whichisstilstudiedbymanyChinesetoday.
Despitefacingoppositionandexileduringhislifetime,
ConfuciusteachingshavecontinuedtoinfluenceChinese
societyforover2,000years.HeisstiloneofthemostimG
portantfiguresinChinesehistorytoday.
Writing2
LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom
Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphoG
nesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsare
choosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvarious
ways.
Itcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudents
whochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEngG
lishmoviesisrespectively65% and50%.However,those
choosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearnG
ingwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.
AsfarasImconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.For
students,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEngG
lishbooks.BecauseoftheirlackofselfGdiscipline,theyre
moreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.
ItsurgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirselfG
discipline,anditsalsourgentforparentsandteachersto
strengthentheguidance.
Writing3
Whenitcomestoocean,itspolutionisbecoming
moreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,falingonJune
8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.
Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoes
oceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalG
anceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.First
ofal,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdaily
actions.Forexample,garbagecantbethrownintoocean.
Whatsmore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocalonmore
peopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,
thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.
Alinal,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvesto
protectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.
No.2.邀请信(邮件)
Writing1
写作指导
主题语境:人与社会———人际沟通(良好的人际关系).邀
请朋友在线分享英语写作经验.
(1)审人称和时态.邀请信中的主要人称是第一人称,一
般会用到两种时态:一般现在时和一般将来时.那么这篇
作文中称就是我(I)和我们(we);时态可用 do,wil + do.
(2)关键词的翻译.主要是围绕作文要点来确定相应的英
语表达的.
(3)列要点提纲.一般是三段式.第一段(写信目的):邀
请信的第一段要涉及到两方面的内容:第一句可做简要的
的自我介绍(名字加身份).第二段(具体事宜):这部分就
是邀请信的重心所在,一般写一个过渡句来衔接上下文.
第三段(表达期待的心情):最后一段要做到首尾呼应,再
次表明期望对方能够接受邀请的心情.
(4)润色作文.
参考范文
DearJim,
Im writingtoinviteyoutoaninternetGbasedtalk
abouthowtoimproveEnglishwriting.Thetalkisthought
importantforusChinesestudents,ofwhommostarepoor
inwritingacompositioninEnglish.Therefore,wehope
you,anativespeaker,wouldliketogiveussomeadviceon
whatwecandowel withourEnglishcompositions.
Theonlinetalkisscheduledtotakeplacebetween
5:00pmand6:30pmthisSaturday,andifyouwil,Iwil
sendyouthelinktoTencentMeeting,anvideoappcompaG
rabletoZoom.
Iwouldappreciateitsomuchifwecouldhaveyouin
thetalk.
Yours,
LiHua
Writing2
写作指导
主题语境:人与社会———人际沟通(良好的人际关系)
(1)审题材:成员招募;(2)审时态:一般现在时为主,进行
时等为辅助;(3)审人称:第一、第二人称为主;(4)审要点:
构思文章是否符合题目要求,主旨突出,内容要点齐全,写
作对象明确,语言的选用得当,符合要求等.
参考范文
Hi! MynameisLiJin,amemberfromSpokenEngG
lishClub.NowIwouldliketorepresentourClubtorecruit
newmembers.
Asyoucansee,variousactivitiesarebeingheldinour
Club,suchasEnglishSpeechContest,andPoetryRepetiG
tion,etc.IhavegainedalotfromthisfantasticClub,not
onlybecauseitbuildsupcourageandconfidenceinmeby
practisingbutalsobecausecommunicatingwithotherseasiG
lyinEnglishhelpsmemakemorefriends.
IfyouareinterestedinoralEnglish,youcanjoinusto
exploreanewworld,andbecomeanewstarinourClub.
Weareexpectingyourjoining.
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Writing3
写作指导
主题语境:人与社会—人际沟通(良好的人际关系).邀请
朋友参与活动体验
①首段:开门见山说明写作目的.
②主体:a.具体交代邀请原因;b.邀请内容:活动性质、时
间、地点、日期;c.有关要求和希望.
③尾段:a.再次盛情邀请;b.希望尽快答复.
参考范文
DearMichael,
OurschooljustopenedawelGequippedgroupGstudy
roominthelibrary,soIwanttoinviteyoutostudywith
methisSaturdaymorning.
Theroomisdesignedforsixpeopleandopenfrom8
a.m.to20p.m..Theroomfacingsouthissobrightthat
wecannotonlyenjoyourselvesintheseaofknowledgebut
bathinsunshine.Meanwhile,ithastwowelGperforming
computersandabigscreen,withwhichwecanshareour
thoughtswitheachother.Whatsmore,freeprinterisalG
waysreadywheneveryouneedtoprintessays.
Ihopeyoucanjoinme!Lookingforwardtoyourearly
replysoIcanmakeareservation.
Yours,
LiHua
Writing4
DearAlen,
Howareyoudoingrecently? A musicfestivalwilbe
heldinourcampuswhichwil benotonlymeaningfulbut
alsoexciting.So,asvicechairmanofthestudentunion,on
behalfofmyschoolmates,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoin
usinthiswonderfulactivity.
Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,
itwilbefromtwooclocktofiveoclockontheafternoon
ofJuly1.Besidessittingonthegrassandtastingdelicious
softdrinks,wewilenjoyagreatnumberofexcelent,imG
pressiveandentertainingperformances,whichcancultivate
ourinterests,broadenourhorizonsandenrichourafterG
schoollife.Whatis more,wewouldappreciateitifyou
couldgiveyourownperformance.
Hopefulyyoucouldmakeittothisbriliantevent.I
havetheconfidencethatyouwilhaveagreattime.Looking
forwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiHua
No.3.推荐信
Writing
March22,2019
TodayIdliketointroduceabooktoyouwhichIlike
much—TheFiveThousandYearsHistory,whichbelongs
tohistorybooks.
Theauthorselectsimportantandfamousfiguresand
eventsinthehistoryofChina,whichheorganizesandcuts
accordingtohistoricalmaterials,andwritesinmodernlanG
guagetomakethemeasytounderstand.
ThisbookopensahistorygatetomeandIfeelmore
confidentaboutmyowncountry.IamproudthatIama
ChineseandIwilmakemoreefforttobuildamorepowerG
fulcountryandletChinesehistorymorebriliant.
Ithinkeveryoneshouldreaditandgetthiswonderful
experience.Idohopeyoullikeit! Enjoyreading!
ByLiJin
No.4.普通信(邮件)
Writing1
DearChris,
Howiseverythinggoing?Ihopeeverythingisgoing
welbackinIreland.
Lookingback,IfindithasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.①IstilremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChinaGIrelandCulturalFestival
twoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinteresting things about your country together,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.② Werealyenjoyedourselvesthere.Whatisfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.
③
ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,I
ampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyour
hometown.
Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.④Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
Writing2
YouthandMe
Congratulationsonthetenthanniversaryofthelaunch
ofYouth.
YouthhassparkledmyinterestinEnglishandbroadG
enedmyhorizons.Itenablesmetokeeppacewiththelatest
newsathomeandabroad.OfaltheYouthcolumns,Ilike
WesternWorldmost.WritteninsimplebutauthenticEngG
lish,thearticlesintroducemeto WesternsocietyandculG
ture.Amazingly,theyalsoinspiremetoappreciatemyown
culturemore.
Ihopetocontinuebenefitingfromreadingitandmay
Youthstayinyouthforever.
Writing3
DearChris,
Imsogladtohearfromyou.ThecomingGofGagecereG
monywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.DurG
ingthecomingGofGageceremony,theheadmastercongratuG
latedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowth
periodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,wealwatched
thevideoofalumnusfightingagainsttheepidemic.
Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamableto
shouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmore
determined.Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,I
mustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwilbeagooddoctor
tohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyself
tomywork.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiJin
Writing4
DearPeter,
Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavegonebackhomeon
sickleave.Howareyoufeelingnow?
Ihope mygoodnewsforyou wil sweepawaythe
shadowofdisease.Lastmonth,anEnglishfestivalwas
heldinourschool,andourclassperformedasongwhich
youtaughtusatthefestival.Assoonaswefinishedthe
song,altheaudiencegaveuswarmapplause.Ifonlyyou
hadbeenthere.
Weal missyouverymuchandwishyouaquickand
completerecovery.
Yours,
LiHua
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Writing5
DearChris,
ImwritingtoletyouknowthatwewilhaveavoleyG
bal matchnextmonth.Thematchwiltakeplaceinour
schoolgymonthemorningofJuly8th.Wewilplayagainst
ateamfromLingnanHighSchool.Foragoodperformance
inthematch,wemustgetfulypreparedandpracticehard.
Sostartingtomorrow,wealneedtotrainfortwohoursafG
terschooleveryday.Inaddition,weshouldavoidgetting
hurtduringthetrainingandhaveahealthydiettokeepfit.
Youreanexcelentplayer.Withyouontheteam,we
haveeveryhopeofbeatingLingnan.Letstryhardtogether!
Cheers,
LiHua
No.5.通知
Writing
Helo,everyone! Wouldyouliketolearnabouthow
weschooldevelopedinthepastandwil haveabigimG
provementinthefuture? Wel,pleasecometowatchthe
shortfilmcaledGrowingTogether,whichwemade.The
film wil showintheschoolhal ofthewesternsideof
schoolat10:00amthisFriday.Thisfilm whichlastsfor
twohoursmayhavesomeshortcomingsinit,sowerealy
hopeyoutooffersomeideasandsuggestionsafterwatching
itsothatwecanfilinthecontentandhaveanoveraland
exactintroductiontoourschool.IfyouhaveanyideaoradG
vice,welcometocontactusbyemailor mobilephone.
Thankyoualot!
SchoolUnion
No.6.建议信
Writing1
DearJim,
ImgladtohearthatyouwanttotakepartintheUNs
initiativeforglobalteenagers.Heresmyadvice.
Isuggestfocusingonenvironmentalprotection.Aswe
know,theenvironmentisfacingseriousproblems,which
affecteveryoneslife.Ifwecanraiseawarenessaboutit
andencouragemorepeopletotakeaction,itwil makea
bigdifference.AnotherideaistopromoteculturalexG
change.WeliveinaworldwheredifferentculturescoexG
ist.Bysharingourculturesandlearningfromeachother,
wecanbuildamoreharmoniousglobalcommunity.
Ihopethesesuggestionshelp! Letmeknowifyou
needmoreideas.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
Writing2
DearJim,
Itsgreatto hear youre planning to write about
Chinasachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaG
ryofthefoundingofthiscountry.HereareafewsuggesG
tionsforyourarticle.
Tobegin with,talkaboutChinaseconomicgrowth
andtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlights
inthepastfewdecades.Then,projectsliketheBeltand
RoadInitiative makeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseit
showcasesChinasdeterminationtobuildasharedfuture
withtheworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChinas
roleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchastheglobalwarG
ming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.
Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!
Yours,
LiHua
Writing3
DearRyan,
ImLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkitsnotagoodidea
torandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainG
ingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfolows.
Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmaylead
tounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.This
canhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvanced
onemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfor
theotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeel
uncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewho
theydontgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicating
with.
MysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanG
guageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.
Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticing
andimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.
Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
Writing4
DearTerry,
Fromyourlastletter,Ilearnthatyouhavenoidea
abouthowyoushouldbehavewhenyougotoaChinese
family.Now,letmetelaboutit.
WheninvitedtoaChinesefriendshome,youshould
arrivealittleearliersothatyoucanhelpthefamilyprepare
thedinner.Atthesametime,apropergiftshould be
broughtwithyoutoshowrespectforthehost.Besides,you
shouldpayattentiontosometablemanners.TheappropriG
atethingtodowouldbetoeatthewhateverGitGisandsay
howdeliciousitis.Ifyoufeeluncomfortablewiththis,you
canjustsayapolite“thankyou”andleavethefoodthere.
Neverstickyourchopsticksuprightinthericebowl,inG
stead,laythemonyourdish.Otherwise,itisthoughtexG
tremelyimpolite.Thereasonforthisisthatitseemsto
meanasacrificetothedead.
Alinal,“WheninChina,doastheChinesedo”is
yourbestchoice.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
No.7.告知信
Writing
DearNancy,
IamverygladtoreceiveyourEGmail.IamverygrateG
fultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmy
studytourintheUK.Andwishyoualthebest.
NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,my
parentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.Imgoingto
Tiananmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbthe Great
Wal.Inaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoy
theelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecided
toregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopG
mentoftheInternetindustry,thehighGpayingemployment
inITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInG
ternettide.Beforechoosing,consultpeopleengagedinthis
majororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Only
withacleargoal,wewilhavetargetedlearninginthefuG
ture,whichwilbemoreefficient.
Yours,
LiJin
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No.8.发言稿(演讲稿)
Writing1
写作指导
⦾题型解读
本篇书面表达考查应用文中的发言稿,属于给提纲作
文.要求学生以“Besmartonlinelearners”为题,写一篇发
言稿参赛,主题语境为人与自我中的善于学习,设置更加
贴近真实生活的英语交际任务情境,考生非常熟悉并有话
可说,虽给出了写作提纲,但仍具有一定的开放性和灵
活性.
⦾审题分析
⦾思路点拨
在分析写作要求及所给提纲后,以所给标题和文章首
句为依托对所给要点进行扩展,全文以三段式为宜,首句
已经给出,第二段和第三段为写作重点.先介绍线上学习
的优势,之后是线上学习的缺点,自然引出第三段的内容,
也就是提出在线学习建议.写作内容要条理清晰,并恰当
使用高级句式以提升文章档次,但所用语言要符合发言稿
的长短句结合,朗朗上口的特点,同时应在结尾处发出呼
吁以引起共鸣.
参考范文
Besmartonlinelearners
Learningonlinehasbecomeanimportantwaytostudy
recently.However,eachcoinhastwosides.Soislearning
online.Ontheonehand,itissurelyconvenientandflexible
forustolearnonline,becauseitisuptoustodecidewhat
welearnandwhereandwhenwestudy.Whatsmore,we
canlearnthelessonsrepeatedly.Ontheotherhand,learnG
ingonlinehassomeweaknesses,thebiggestofwhichislow
efficiencycausedbyalackofselfGdiscipline.
Sohowcan webesmartonlinelearners? First,its
necessarytohaveaquietandcomfortableroom,whichconG
tributestofocusingattention.Second,goodtimemanageG
mentcanimproveourlearningefficiency.MoreimportantG
ly,weshouldformalearninggrouponlinetomotivateeach
other.
Writing2
DevelopmentofTransportinChina
FromthevehicleofhorsestotodaysconvenienttransG
port,ChinesetransporthasseenanenormousdevelopG
ment.Firstly,sharedbicycleshavebecomeapopularchoice
incities,providinganecoGfriendlyandcostGeffectivewayto
travelshortdistances.Secondly,thehighGspeedtrainnetG
workhasrevolutionizedlongGdistancetravel,significantly
reducingtraveltimeacrossthecountry.Finaly,theriseof
newenergyvehiclesreflectsChinascommitmenttosusG
tainabledevelopmentandreducingcarbonemissions.These
advancementshighlightChinasprogressincreatingamodG
ern,efficient,andenvironmentalyfriendlytransportsysG
tem.
No.9.致歉信
Writing
[写作思路] 题目要求写一封道歉信,就不能如约一起去
书店,向Bob道歉,使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作.
写作内容包括:表示歉意;说明原因;另约时间.注意使用
连接词,使作文内容连贯.
参考范文
DearBob,
ImsorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewith
youonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoatG
tendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethe
changewilnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.
Shal wegoonSaturdaymorning? WecansetoutearG
lysothatwelhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.If
itsconvenientforyou,letsmeetat8:30outsidetheschool
gate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishould
beavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.
Yours,
LiHua
[亮点] 范文包括了所有要点内容,做到了语意连贯.范文
使用了宾语从句thatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetG
ingthatafternoon和thechangewilnotcauseyoutoomuch
trouble;目的状语从句sothatwelhavemoretimetoreadand
selectbooks;条件句Ifitsconvenientforyou;省略句Ifnot等,
长短句结合,使内容更加丰富.
No.10.感谢信
Writing
DearAlex,
IvejustlearnedyoureleavingfortheUnitedStates
soon.Atthismoment,Iwanttoexpressmysincerethanks
toyouforyourhelp.
Honestlyspeaking,butforyourhelp,Iwouldnthave
madesuchgreatprogressinEnglish.Withyourhelp,Iwon
firstprizeinanEnglishspeechcontest.WheneverIhave
difficulties,youalwayscheermeupandhelpmeout.Words
cantdescribehowthankfulIam.
Wishyouapleasantjourneyhome.
Yours,
LiHua
No.11.事件介绍
Writing1
Helo,everyone! AimingatpromotingChineseculG
ture,astudentstraditionalChinesepaintingexhibitionis
heldby ourschoolin thelibraryfrom May 30th to
June5th.
Assomeonewhohasvisitedtheexhibitionyesterday,I
personalythoughtitwasamazing.ItnotonlyshowsusdifG
ferenttypesofpainting,butalsovarioustoolsrelatedto
painting,suchasbrushpens,papersandsoon.Apartfrom
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displaying,therearemanyothergreatactivitieslikeapaintG
ingknowledgequiz,lecturesandgames.
ItisavisualfeastthatanyonewhosinterestedintraG
ditionalChinesepaintingshouldnomiss.(97words)
[范文亮点]
宣传稿应着重于宣传该展览的亮点,以达到吸引更多
人来观展的目的.根据题目要求,先开门见山指出该展览
的基本信息(时间和地点),第二段在介绍观展感受应把展
览的亮点一并写进去,如展览中有什么值得看或者有哪些
特别的活动等等;最后总结该展览并推荐更多人来观展.
在写作过程中,多使用高级句型和结构,如范文中的定语
从句,现在分词作状语和过去分词作后置定语等,这样文
章读起来不会显得索然无味.
Writing2
[审题指导]
本题是提纲式作文,要求考生为班级英语角写一篇短
文,介绍“你”和同学上周参加一次采摘活动.因为文中涉
及“你”和同学,所以要使用第一人称.采摘活动是在上
周,所以时态主要以一般过去时为主.
写作时不要漏掉题目所要求的要点,注意句子之间的
连接以及高级句式的使用.
MyWeekend
Lastweek,ourclasswenttoafarmtodoavegetable
pickinginordertoexperiencethejoyofpickingvegetables
inpersonandlearnmoreaboutorganicvegetables.
Whenwearrived,therewasafarmerexplainingtous
howtheyplantedorganicvegetablesandwhichvegetable
wecouldpick.ThenwepickedorganicvegetablesbyourG
selves,suchascucumbers,tomatoes,eggplants.Themost
excitingpartwasthatwecookedthevegetablestogether.
Atthattime,Ihadalotofharvestsandlearnedalotof
knowledgeaboutorganicvegetables!
ItwasaverymeaningfulactivityandnotonlycanI
havesomenewdiscoveriesbutalsoIexperiencethejoyof
laborandenrichmyknowledge.
No.12.新闻报道
Writing
[审题指导]
本篇作文要求写一篇报道.考生需要运用简洁精练
的语言概述事件的主要内容,文章中应包含新闻报道的五
要素(5W:何时 when,何地 where,何人 who,何因 why,何
事 what);在新闻报道中应避免使用第一人称,应从第三视
角进行客观描述;活动已经结束,因此应用一般过去时.
考生要紧扣主题,展开想象,从参加人员、跑步路线、
活动反响等方面进行写作,使每一个要点都得到明确的
体现.
ACrossGCountryRunningRace
LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycrossGcountry
runningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofevery
studentandteacherofourschool.
Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthe
competition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromour
schoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunner
triedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmates
alongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswelasenG
couragement.Atlast,altherunnersmanagedtoarriveat
thefinishline,receivingcheersfromalthedirections.
Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonly
diditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeus
morecohesive.
No.13.论坛跟贴
Writing
Hieveryone! Im LiJinfrom Chenguang Middle
School.Gladtojointheforumdiscussion! ThesixnominaG
tedentriesforthecosmicGbounddiscareimpressivelydiG
verse,coveringlanguage (“helo”invarioustongues),
iconicarchitecture(theGreatWalandpyramids),tradiG
tionalart(PekingOpera),naturalharmony(animalsounds),
andmoderntech(ChinashighGspeedtrains).Together,they
mirrorhumanityscreativity,history,andbondwithculG
tureandnature.
IbelieveChinashighGspeedtrainsstandout.More
thanadvancedtransport,theyrebridgesunitingcitiesand
people.Withspeedsupto350km/h,theyverevolutionized
travel,shrinkingdistancestohours.Theirvastnetwork
symbolizeshumaninnovationandthedrivetofosterunity
andsharedgrowth.Forextraterrestrialcivilizations,theyd
highlightourambitiontobuildaconnectedworld.
Inconclusion,whileal nominationsarevaluable,
highGspeedtrainspowerfulyrepresentourabilitytoturn
dreamsintoaunifiedfuture.
Ⅱ.读后续写
Writing1
解析:本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者被邀请去一个
农场野餐,发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了,作
者把蜂鸟救了,把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走,当作
者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时,它开始动了,但是却不肯
飞走,徘徊着,后来终于飞走了,当作者准备离开时,蜂鸟
又飞到作者面前,好像是在和作者告别.
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后,我又去了农场.”可知,
第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的.
②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开,这时蜂鸟出现了.”可
知,第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想.
2.续写线索:想起救蜂鸟的时候———回到那个房子———想到
那只蜂鸟———看见蜂鸟———蜂鸟的表现———作者的感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①思绪回到:thoughtsdriftbackto/thoughtsreturnto
②匆匆回到:rushbackto/hurrybackto
③盯着:eyeslockedon/eyesstaringat
情绪类
①宽慰:feelasurgeofrelief/feelrelieved
②感激:grateful/thankful
点睛 [高分句型1]AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdrifG
tedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbird
fromthespidersweb.(由 as引 导 的 时 间 状 语 从 句 和
when引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalhole
inthewindowwasnowheretobefound.(由that引导的主
语从句)
Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Asmy
carneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhen
Irescuedthehummingbirdfromthespidersweb.Irushed
backtothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthatthe
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