准大学生被新电脑占据，从‘网抑云’到‘农场嗨’，我找到了快乐密码 等讲义-2025届高考英语复习读后续写专项

阅读下面材料，标黑加粗斜体黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 陕西省安康市2025 届高三年级第二次质量联考英语试题 第二节(满分25 分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It all started with the gift(交代故事背景). A few months before I began college, my parents surprised me with the one thing every young adult desires: a brand new laptop. That summer, I was glued (全神贯注于) to the screen, living (现在分词短语做伴随动作)in a digital world. I spent hours on social media, chatting with(现在分词短语做伴随动作) friends, and ignoring(现在分词短语做伴随动作)the real one around me. I was more concerned with the virtual interactions than the actual people and places around me. Being online(现在分词短语做伴随动作) was more important than anything else.(交代故事背景) So, when I heard my dad's plan for our family vacation that year, I was less than thrilled(情绪描写：不开心). “This year,” he announced, “we' re going to try something different. We' re going to a farm.” A farm wasn't my ideal vacation(), but it was still a break from the routine. I went through the packing-up and planning, barely listening to(现在分词短语做伴随动作) the instructions. My mind was elsewhere, on the Internet, where my conversations never stopped. I was so absorbed in my digital world that the first time I really paid attention to the real world was when we get to our destination——a remote farm(表语从句). I stared out the window to see the breathtaking views outside. The air coming through the open windows(现在分词短语后置定语) was warm and carried the fresh smell of the forest(无灵主语句). But the view wasn't what caught my attention.The moment I got off the car(the moment一...就), I rushed into the farmhouse. The real shock came(无灵主语句) when I tried to check my e-mail and found that I had no Internet connection. “We have no Wi-Fi here” a boy said softly. He might be the oldest of the 3 kids on the farm. I looked at him, too depressed to say anything(adj做主语补语). My laptop would be completely useless. I would live in the wilderness for a week with no way to connect to the online world. I was close to tears(情绪描写), afraid of the boredom(adj短语做主语补语) I had to tolerate in the coming days. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Early next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. 陕西省安康市2025 届高三年级第二次质量联考英语试题 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It all started with the gift. A few months before I began college, my parents surprised me with the one thing every young adult desires: a brand new laptop. That summer, I was glued (全神贯注于) to the screen, living in a digital world. I spent hours on social media, chatting with friends, and ignoring the real one around me. I was more concerned with the virtual interactions than the actual people and places around me. Being online was more important than anything else. So, when I heard my dad's plan for our family vacation that year, I was less than thrilled. “This year,” he announced, “we' re going to try something different. We' re going to a farm.” A farm wasn't my ideal vacation, but it was still a break from the routine. I went through the packing-up and planning,barely listening to the instructions. My mind was elsewhere, on the Internet, where my conversations never stopped. I was so absorbed in my digital world that the first time I really paid attention to the real world was when we get to our destination——a remote farm. I stared out the window to see the breathtaking views outside. The air coming through the open windows was warm and carried the fresh smell of the forest. But the view wasn't what caught my attention.The moment I got off the car, I rushed into the farmhouse. The real shock came when I tried to check my e-mail and found that I had no Internet connection. “We have no Wi-Fi here” a boy said softly. He might be the oldest of the 3 kids on the farm. I looked at him, too depressed to say anything. My laptop would be completely useless. I would live in the wilderness for a week with no way to connect to the online world. I was close to tears, afraid of the boredom I had to tolerate in the coming days. 注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Early next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. 1. 文章分类与读后续写思路分析 文章类型：本文属于“个人成长与自我反思”类型的读后续写。文章通过主人公从沉迷虚拟世界到逐渐融入现实生活的转变，展现了个人成长的过程。 续写思路构思： 布局：续写应围绕主人公在农场的生活展开，重点描写他从抗拒到接受、再到享受自然的过程。第一段可以描写主人公与农场孩子们的互动，第二段则突出主人公内心的转变。 提炼框架：续写应紧扣“从虚拟到现实”的主题，突出主人公的心理变化和与环境的互动。 实施：通过细腻的心理描写、动作描写和环境描写，展现主人公的成长过程。 承接原文：续写需承接原文中主人公对农场生活的抗拒和对虚拟世界的依赖，逐步过渡到他对现实生活的接受和享受。 巧妙设计：可以通过描写主人公与农场孩子们的互动、自然环境的魅力以及他内心的逐渐平静，来展现他的转变。 2. 故事山模式分析与原文衔接 故事山模式： 引入：主人公沉迷虚拟世界，对农场生活感到抗拒。 上升：到达农场后发现没有网络，感到沮丧。 高潮：与农场孩子们互动，逐渐融入现实生活。 下降：主人公开始享受自然，不再依赖虚拟世界。 结局：主人公内心发生转变，意识到现实生活的美好。 原文衔接点： 心情反映：“I was close to tears, afraid of the boredom I had to tolerate in the coming days.”（反映出主人公的沮丧和恐惧） 动作描写：“I rushed into the farmhouse.”（表现出主人公的急切） 关键转折点：发现农场没有网络，主人公被迫面对现实生活。 伏笔与冲突点： 伏笔：主人公对虚拟世界的依赖，农场没有网络。 冲突点：主人公对农场生活的抗拒与现实环境的冲突。 隐含线索：主人公内心的转变，从抗拒到接受。 解决方案：通过与农场孩子们的互动和自然环境的熏陶，主人公逐渐融入现实生活。 3. 分析角度表格 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 主人公从沉迷虚拟世界到融入现实生活的转变 “I was glued to the screen, living in a digital world.” 情感层次 从沮丧、抗拒到接受、享受 “I was close to tears, afraid of the boredom I had to tolerate.” 关键情节点 发现农场没有网络，被迫面对现实生活 “The real shock came when I tried to check my e-mail and found no Internet.” 语言特色 语言简洁，情感表达直接 “I was more concerned with the virtual interactions than the actual people.” 关键词分析 虚拟世界、现实生活、转变 “Being online was more important than anything else.” 心理描写 主人公对农场生活的抗拒和恐惧 “I was close to tears, afraid of the boredom I had to tolerate.” 动作描写 主人公急切地冲进农舍 “I rushed into the farmhouse.” 环境描写 农场自然环境的描写，突出与虚拟世界的对比 “The air coming through the open windows was warm and carried the fresh smell of the forest.” 隐含主题 个人成长与自我反思 “I was more concerned with the virtual interactions than the actual people.” 情感转折 从沮丧到接受 “I was close to tears, afraid of the boredom I had to tolerate.” 空间转换 从虚拟世界到现实农场 “I stared out the window to see the breathtaking views outside.” 时间过渡 从到达农场到逐渐适应 “The moment I got off the car, I rushed into the farmhouse.” 4. 续写推荐例句与高级替换词 动作描写推荐例句： He slowly walked towards the barn, feeling the crunch of the gravel beneath his feet. She eagerly ran to the field, her heart pounding with excitement. The boy gently patted the cow, his hands trembling slightly. They carefully climbed the fence, trying not to make any noise. He quickly grabbed the bucket, rushing to fetch water from the well. She hesitantly approached the horse, unsure of how it would react. They joyfully danced around the bonfire, their laughter echoing in the night. He skillfully tied the rope, securing the boat to the dock. 心理描写推荐例句： A sense of calm washed over him as he gazed at the endless fields. She felt a pang of guilt for neglecting her family during her digital obsession. He couldn't help but smile as he watched the children play. A wave of nostalgia hit her as she remembered her childhood summers. He felt a deep sense of peace, something he hadn't experienced in years. She was overwhelmed with gratitude for the simple joys of life. He struggled with the thought of leaving this serene place. She felt a sudden surge of confidence, ready to face the challenges ahead. 环境描写推荐例句： The sun slowly rose over the horizon, casting a golden glow on the fields. The gentle breeze carried the scent of blooming flowers through the air. The stars twinkled brightly in the clear night sky, creating a magical atmosphere. The sound of chirping birds filled the air, signaling the start of a new day. The dense forest loomed in the distance, its shadows stretching across the ground. The river flowed peacefully, its waters reflecting the surrounding trees. The clouds drifted lazily across the sky, creating ever-changing patterns. The moonlight bathed the landscape in a soft, silvery light. 高级替换词： Happy → Elated, Joyful, Content, Jubilant, Blissful Sad → Melancholic, Sorrowful, Despondent, Mournful, Gloomy Beautiful → Stunning, Gorgeous, Exquisite, Breathtaking, Picturesque Interesting → Fascinating, Captivating, Intriguing, Compelling, Engaging Important → Crucial, Vital, Significant, Essential, Paramount 5. 高中语法现象与地道搭配分析 语法现象： 现在分词作状语：表示伴随动作或状态。 例句：I spent hours on social media, chatting with friends. 虚拟语气：用于表达与事实相反的假设。 例句：If I had known about the farm, I would have prepared differently. 定语从句：用于修饰名词，提供额外信息。 例句：The boy, who might be the oldest of the 3 kids, said softly. 地道搭配： Be glued to：全神贯注于 例句：I was glued to the screen, living in a digital world. Go through：经历 例句：I went through the packing-up and planning. Be absorbed in：专注于 例句：I was so absorbed in my digital world. Catch one's attention：引起某人的注意 例句：The view wasn't what caught my attention. 生词短语： Breathtaking (adj.)：令人惊叹的 近义词：Stunning, Amazing 反义词：Ordinary, Mundane 例句：The view from the top of the mountain was breathtaking. Depressed (adj.)：沮丧的 近义词：Sad, Downcast 反义词：Happy, Cheerful 例句：She felt depressed after hearing the bad news. Tolerate (v.)：忍受 近义词：Endure, Bear 反义词：Reject, Resist 例句：I can't tolerate the noise anymore. Remote (adj.)：偏远的 近义词：Isolated, Secluded 反义词：Central, Urban 例句：They live in a remote village far from the city. Virtual (adj.)：虚拟的 近义词：Digital, Online 反义词：Real, Physical 例句：The virtual world can sometimes be more appealing than reality. 5. Possible Versions(4) Paragraph 1: Early next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. I reluctantly followed them to the kitchen, where the smell of freshly baked bread filled the air. As I sat down at the wooden table, I noticed the simplicity of the farmhouse. The boys chatted excitedly about their plans for the day, and I found myself slowly drawn into their conversation(过去分词短语做状态描述). Despite my initial reluctance, I began to feel a sense of curiosity about the farm life. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. Instead, I found myself enjoying the simple pleasures of the farm. I helped the boys feed the animals, explored the surrounding forests, and even learned(动作并列) how to milk a cow. The days passed quickly(无灵主语句), and I realized that I had been missing out on the beauty of the real world. By the end of the week, I felt a deep sense of peace and gratitude for the experience. It was a week that changed my perspective on life(强调句), teaching me the value of disconnecting from the digital world and embracing the present moment(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Version 1 Paragraph 1: Early the next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. As we sat around the wooden table, the aroma of freshly baked bread and sizzling bacon filled the air(环境描写，食物的描写), making my stomach growl(现在分词短语做结果状语). The boys, with their cheerful chatter, quickly drew me into their world. They shared stories about their daily routines on the farm, and I found myself fascinated(过去分词短语做主补语) by their simple yet fulfilling lives. After breakfast, they suggested we explore the nearby forest, and I agreed, feeling a spark of excitement(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I hadn’t felt in months. As we walked through the dense trees, the sunlight filtering through the leaves(独立主格), I realized how much I had missed the beauty of the natural world. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. Instead, I found myself immersed in the rhythm of farm life(过去分词短语做后置定语或补语). Each day brought new adventures(无灵主语句)—whether it was helping to harvest vegetables, feeding the chickens, or simply sitting by the bonfire(动词并列) under the starry sky. The absence of Wi-Fi, which had initially seemed like a disaster, turned out to be a gift. It allowed me to connect deeply with the people around me and appreciate the simplicity of life. By the end of the week, I felt a profound sense of peace and gratitude. I realized that true happiness doesn’t come from a screen but from the moments(递进句式) we share with others and the world around us. Version 2 Paragraph 1: Early the next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. The smell of pancakes and maple syrup wafted through the kitchen(环境描写), and I couldn’t help but smile as I joined them at the table. Their enthusiasm was contagious, and soon we were discussing plans for the day. They suggested we visit the nearby river, and I agreed, feeling a sense of anticipation(现在分词做伴随动作) I hadn’t felt in a long time. As we walked along the riverbank, the sound of flowing water and the sight of colorful wildflowers filled me with a sense of calm(无灵主语句，描写环境与人的情感). The boys taught me how to skip stones, and we spent hours laughing and competing to see who could make the most skips(目的状). It was a simple joy, but one that felt incredibly meaningful(主动表被动). Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. The days passed in a blur of activities—fishing by the river, helping with farm chores, and star-gazing at night(动名词短语并列). Each experience brought me closer to nature and to the people around me(无灵主语句). I began to see the farm not as a place of isolation but as a sanctuary(递进句式) where I could truly be myself. The lack of Internet, which had once seemed like a punishment(夸张), became a blessing. It allowed me to slow down and appreciate the little things—the warmth of the sun on my skin, the sound of birds chirping in the morning, and the taste of freshly picked fruit.(名词短语并列) By the end of the week, I felt a deep sense of contentment and a renewed appreciation for the beauty of the real world. Version 3 Paragraph 1: Early the next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. The kitchen was alive with the sounds of sizzling eggs and bubbling coffee, and the warmth of the farmhouse enveloped me like a cozy blanket(无灵主语句，描写环境). As we ate, the boys shared their plans for the day, and I found myself eagerly joining in. They suggested we build a treehouse in the nearby woods, and I agreed, feeling a sense of adventure(现在分词短语做伴随动作) I hadn’t felt in years. We spent the morning gathering materials and working together, our laughter echoing through the trees(独立主格刻画环境). By the afternoon, we had created a small but sturdy structure, and I felt a sense of pride I hadn’t experienced in a long time. Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. Instead, I found myself fully engaged in the present moment(过去分词短语做补语). Each day brought new challenges and joys(无灵主语句)—whether it was building the treehouse, helping with farm chores, or simply sitting by the fire and sharing stories(动作并列). The absence of Wi-Fi, which had initially seemed like a punishment, turned out to be a gift, allowing(现在分词短语做结果状语) me to reconnect with myself and the world around me. By the end of the week, I felt a deep sense of fulfillment and a renewed appreciation for the simple pleasures of life. I realized that true happiness comes not from virtual connections but from the moments we share with others and the beauty of the natural world. 加分点与亮点词汇短语 1. 高中语法加分点 过去进行时： 例句：I was sitting by the fire, listening to the crackling of the wood. 搭配：was/were + V-ing 近义词：was engaged in, was absorbed in 现在分词作状语： 例句：Laughing and chatting, we walked through the forest. 搭配：V-ing + 主句 近义词：while laughing, as we laughed 定语从句： 例句：The treehouse, which we built together, became our favorite spot. 搭配：which/that + 从句 近义词：that we constructed, that we created 虚拟语气： 例句：If I had known how much fun this would be, I would have come sooner. 搭配：If + had + V-ed, would have + V-ed 近义词：If I had realized, I might have joined earlier 2. 情绪描写亮点词汇 Excitement：替换词：anticipation, thrill, eagerness 例句：I felt a thrill of excitement as we set out for the forest. Contentment：替换词：fulfillment, satisfaction, peace 例句：A deep sense of contentment washed over me as I watched the sunset. Gratitude：替换词：thankfulness, appreciation, recognition 例句：I felt a surge of gratitude for the simple joys of farm life. 3. 动作描写亮点词汇 Laughing：替换词：chuckling, giggling, roaring with laughter 例句：We were laughing so hard that tears streamed down our faces. Exploring：替换词：venturing, discovering, wandering 例句：We spent the day exploring the hidden corners of the forest. Building：替换词：constructing, assembling, crafting 例句：We worked together, building a treehouse that would become our sanctuary. 4. 升级替换词与例句 Beautiful → Breathtaking： 例句：The view from the hill was breathtaking, with the sun setting over the horizon. Happy → Elated： 例句：I felt elated as we finished the treehouse, a sense of accomplishment filling my heart. Interesting → Fascinating： 例句：The stories they shared about farm life were fascinating, full of wisdom and humor. Important → Crucial： 例句：This trip was crucial in helping me reconnect with the real world. Sad → Melancholic： 例句：As the week ended, I felt a melancholic longing to stay on the farm forever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$