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阅读下面材料，标黑加粗斜体黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 福建省厦门市第一中学2024-2025学年高三下学期第一次质检模拟英语试题 67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ballet was a way of life in Kelly’s family. Her elder sister Serena was now dancing at a top college. Though Kelly’s mom always wanted her to follow in her sister’s footsteps and Kelly herself was good at ballet, her love for ballet had faded years before, and she was eager for a new challenge(背景信息交代，相当于电影的画外音). One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio, she walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers(过去分词短语做原因状语) training(现在分词做后置定语) inside the boxing ring(一次多义，有没有很熟悉？). She was deeply impressed by how hard they hid and how fast they moved. In fact, she’d long been attracted to boxing. She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack. On the familiar Oakwood High School Club Sign-up Sheet was the phrase(倒装句): BOXING CLUB TRYOUT(选拔). That was what Kelly really wanted to do(表从). She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet. Tired of trying to keep up with her sister(adj短语做主语补语), Kelly was ready to carve out her own path. The next day, she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion. At first, Serena didn’t understand and thought she was just joking. But when she saw Kelly was serious, she replied, “ You know Mom wants you to be a ballet dancer, right? Besides, boxing is only for boys, and you’re so good at ballet. Lean into your strength, Kelly.” “But this is where I want to put my strength(表从),” Kelly insisted, “ and what exactly does ‘ only for boys’ means, anyway? Boxing is a sport for everyone !” Gradually, touched by her determination and passion(过去分词短语做原因状语), Serena began to understand and support her. Kelly could feel it. Her sister was going to respect her decision, no matter what. But that was nothing compared to the preparations for the tryout(过去分词短语做实际主语), where she was required to show her footwork and punching abilities(细节点，可以衔接) with other candidates. Boxing didn’t come natural to Kelly, but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：Then Kelly began her training, keeping it a secret from her mom. Paragraph 2：The following Monday, results of boxing tryout were posted. 福建省厦门市第一中学2024-2025学年高三下学期第一次质检模拟英语试题（含答案） 67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ballet was a way of life in Kelly’s family. Her elder sister Serena was now dancing at a top college. Though Kelly’s mom always wanted her to follow in her sister’s footsteps and Kelly herself was good at ballet, her love for ballet had faded years before, and she was eager for a new challenge. One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio, she walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers training inside the boxing ring. She was deeply impressed by how hard they hid and how fast they moved. In fact, she’d long been attracted to boxing. She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack. On the familiar Oakwood High School Club Sign-up Sheet was the phrase: BOXING CLUB TRYOUT(选拔). That was what Kelly really wanted to do. She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet. Tired of trying to keep up with her sister, Kelly was ready to carve out her own path. The next day, she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion. At first, Serena didn’t understand and thought she was just joking. But when she saw Kelly was serious, she replied, “ You know Mom wants you to be a ballet dancer, right? Besides, boxing is only for boys, and you’re so good at ballet. Lean into your strength, Kelly.” “But this is where Iwant to put my strength,” Kelly insisted, “ and what exactly does ‘ only for boys’ means, anyway? Boxing is a sport for everyone !” Gradually, touched by her determination and passion, Serena began to understand and support her. Kelly could feel it. Her sister was going to respect her decision, no matter what. But that was nothing compared to the preparations for the tryout, where she was required to show her footwork and punching abilities with other candidates. Boxing didn’t come natural to Kelly, but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：Then Kelly began her training, keeping it a secret from her mom. Paragraph 2：The following Monday, results of boxing tryout were posted. 1. 文章分类与续写思路分析 文章类型：本文属于“个人成长与选择”类型的读后续写。文章围绕主人公Kelly在家庭期望与个人兴趣之间的冲突展开，重点描写了她如何选择自己的道路并为之努力。 续写思路构思： 布局：续写应围绕Kelly的训练过程和她如何面对母亲的反应展开，最终以她是否通过选拔作为结尾。 框架提炼： 训练过程：描写Kelly如何在秘密训练中克服困难，展现她的坚持与成长。 母亲的反应：描写母亲发现真相后的反应，突出家庭冲突与理解。 选拔结果：通过选拔结果揭示Kelly的努力是否得到回报，呼应主题。 实施：续写应注重情感递进，从Kelly的训练到家庭冲突，再到选拔结果，逐步推进情节。 承接原文：续写需承接Kelly的决心、Serena的支持以及母亲对芭蕾的期望，保持人物性格和情节的一致性。 巧妙设计：可以通过描写Kelly在训练中的心理变化、与母亲的对话以及选拔时的紧张氛围，增强故事的张力和情感深度。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Kelly是一个有主见、敢于追求梦想的女孩，Serena是理解和支持妹妹的姐姐。 “But this is where I want to put my strength,” Kelly insisted. 情感层次 Kelly对芭蕾的厌倦与对拳击的热爱形成对比，Serena从不解到支持的情感变化。 “Gradually, touched by her determination and passion, Serena began to understand and support her.” 关键情节点 Kelly决定参加拳击选拔，Serena的支持，Kelly的秘密训练。 “She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack... BOXING CLUB TRYOUT.” 语言特色 语言简洁明了，情感描写细腻，突出人物内心冲突。 “Tired of trying to keep up with her sister, Kelly was ready to carve out her own path.” 关键词分析 “carve out her own path”（开辟自己的道路）、“determination”（决心）。 “Kelly was ready to carve out her own path.” 心理描写 Kelly对拳击的热爱与对母亲期望的担忧。 “She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet.” 动作描写 Kelly被拳击训练吸引，Serena的反应从惊讶到支持。 “She walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers training inside the boxing ring.” 环境描写 学校环境（舞蹈室、健身房）为情节发展提供背景。 “One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio...” 隐含主题 追求自我与家庭期望的平衡，勇敢追随内心。 “Kelly was ready to carve out her own path.” 情感转折 Kelly从对芭蕾的厌倦到对拳击的热爱，Serena从不解到支持。 “Gradually, touched by her determination and passion, Serena began to understand and support her.” 空间转换 从舞蹈室到健身房，象征Kelly从芭蕾到拳击的转变。 “She walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers training inside the boxing ring.” 时间过渡 从Kelly决定参加选拔到训练，再到选拔结果公布。 “The next day, she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion.” 伏笔与冲突点： 伏笔：Kelly对拳击的热爱、Serena的支持、母亲对芭蕾的期望。 冲突点：Kelly的兴趣与母亲期望的冲突，训练中的困难。 隐含线索：Kelly的决心和Serena的支持暗示她最终会成功。 解决方案：Kelly通过努力证明自己的选择，母亲最终理解并支持她。 3. 续写语料推荐 动作描写例句： She practiced her footwork tirelessly, her movements becoming more precise with each session. Her punches landed on the heavy bag with a satisfying thud, echoing through the empty gym. Sweat dripped from her forehead as she dodged and weaved, mimicking her opponent’s moves. She shadowboxed in front of the mirror, her reflection showing a determined expression. With a swift motion, she executed a perfect jab-cross combination. Her legs burned as she skipped rope, but she pushed through the pain. She sparred with a teammate, her focus unwavering despite the fatigue. The final bell rang, and she collapsed onto the bench, exhausted but proud. 心理描写例句： Doubt crept into her mind, but she quickly pushed it aside, reminding herself of her goal. She felt a surge of confidence as she mastered a new technique. The fear of disappointing her mom lingered, but her passion for boxing outweighed it. Her heart raced with excitement as she imagined herself in the ring. She wondered if she was making the right choice, but her determination kept her going. The pressure of the upcoming tryout weighed heavily on her, but she refused to give up. She felt a sense of pride as she noticed her improvement day by day. The thought of her sister’s support gave her the strength to continue. 环境描写例句： The gym was filled with the sound of gloves hitting bags and the coach’s sharp instructions. The dim light of the early morning cast long shadows on the gym floor. The smell of sweat and leather filled the air, a testament to the hard work of the athletes. The cold metal of the weights sent a shiver through her hands as she lifted them. The rhythmic sound of the jump rope hitting the floor echoed in the empty gym. The bright lights of the boxing ring illuminated the determined faces of the competitors. The chalk dust floated in the air as she prepared for her next set of drills. The silence of the gym at night was broken only by the sound of her heavy breathing. 高级替换词： Tired → Exhausted, Fatigued, Weary, Drained, Spent Happy → Elated, Jubilant, Ecstatic, Thrilled, Overjoyed Sad → Melancholic, Sorrowful, Despondent, Mournful, Heartbroken Important → Crucial, Vital, Pivotal, Significant, Paramount Difficult → Challenging, Arduous, Grueling, Taxing, Formidable 4. 语法现象与语料积累 高中语法现象： 现在分词作状语： “Tired of trying to keep up with her sister, Kelly was ready to carve out her own path.” 功能：表示原因或伴随状态。 定语从句： “Her elder sister Serena, who was now dancing at a top college, was her role model.” 功能：修饰名词，补充信息。 虚拟语气： “If she were to give up now, she would regret it forever.” 功能：表示假设或与事实相反的情况。 并列句： “She knew her mom had high expectations for her, but she was determined to follow her own path.” 功能：连接两个相关但独立的句子。 地道搭配与语料积累： carve out one’s own path（开辟自己的道路） 近义词：forge one’s own way 反义词：follow in someone’s footsteps 例句： She decided to carve out her own path instead of following her family’s expectations. Many young people strive to carve out their own path in life. lean into one’s strength（发挥自己的优势） 近义词：play to one’s strengths 反义词：ignore one’s strengths 例句：He leaned into his strength in mathematics to solve the complex problem. The coach advised her to lean into her strength in speed during the race. make up one’s mind（下定决心） 近义词：decide firmly 反义词：hesitate 例句： She made up her mind to pursue her dream of becoming a writer. Once he made up his mind, nothing could change it. stick with one’s choice（坚持自己的选择） 近义词：persist in one’s decision 反义词：abandon one’s choice 例句： Despite the challenges, she stuck with her choice to study abroad. He advised her to stick with her choice and not give up. keep something a secret（保密） 近义词：conceal something 反义词：reveal something 例句： She decided to keep her training a secret from her family. He kept his plans a secret until the last moment. 5. Possible Versions (4) Version 特供 Paragraph 1: Then Kelly began her training, keeping it a secret from her mom. Every day after school, she would rush to the gym, her heart pounding with both excitement and fear of being discovered(独立主格，刻画人物复杂的心理). She practiced tirelessly, her punches growing stronger and her footwork more precise(独立主格，刻画人物的变化及衔接原文). What she didn’t know was that her mom had already noticed her absence from ballet classes(表从). Instead of confronting her, her mom secretly asked Serena to keep an eye on Kelly and support her. Serena, touched by her sister’s determination(过去分词短语做伴随动作), began sending her encouraging messages and even asking her boxer-friend helped her with training tips. Kelly felt a strange sense of support but had no idea it was coming from her mom(同位从). Paragraph 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. Kelly’s hands trembled(情绪描写：紧张) as she scanned the list, and when she saw her name, she let out a cry of joy(情绪描写：开心). She ran home, bursting with excitement(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and found her mom waiting with a knowing smile. “Mom, I made the boxing team!” Kelly exclaimed, her eyes shining with pride(独立主格，刻画人物心理). Her mom hugged her tightly and said, “I’ve always known, Kelly. I just wanted you to follow your heart. Dreams come in all sizes, but the ones you love are the best.” Kelly was stunned(情绪描写：惊讶) but overwhelmed with gratitude(情绪描写：感恩). For the first time, she realized that her mom’s silence had been her way of saying, “I believe in you.” 语法加分点与亮点词汇 独立主格： “Her heart pounding with both excitement and fear, she rushed to the gym.” 替换词：pounding → racing, thumping 例句： The sun setting, the sky turned a deep shade of orange. Her voice trembling, she confessed her secret. 定语从句： “Serena, who had been secretly supporting her, sent encouraging messages.” 替换词：supporting → helping, encouraging → motivating 例句： The book, which had been on the shelf for years, was finally opened. The teacher, who was known for her patience, explained the concept again. 情绪描写亮点词汇： bursting with excitement（充满兴奋） 替换词：overflowing with joy, brimming with excitement eyes shining with pride（眼中闪烁着自豪） 替换词：beaming with pride, glowing with satisfaction 动作描写亮点词汇： rushed to the gym（冲向健身房） 替换词：dashed to the gym, hurried to the gym let out a cry of joy（发出喜悦的叫声） 替换词：shouted with joy, exclaimed in delight Version 1 Paragraph 1: Then Kelly began her training, keeping it a secret from her mom. Every morning before school, she would sneak into the gym, her footsteps echoing in the empty space(独立主格，刻画训练的场景). She focused on perfecting her punches(与原文进行衔接), her fists slamming into the heavy bag with rhythmic precision(独立主格刻画人物动作). Despite the blisters on her hands and the aching muscles(介词短语状语), she pushed herself harder, determined to prove her worth(adj做主语补语). Her coach, noticing her dedication(现在分词短语做伴随动作), often stayed late to guide her. “You’ve got potential,” he said, his voice filled with encouragement(独立主格刻画人物). Kelly’s heart swelled with pride, but she knew the real challenge was yet to come—the tryout. Paragraph 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. Kelly’s heart pounded(心理描写) as she scanned the list, her eyes darting frantically(独立主格刻画人物心理) until she saw her name. A wave of relief and joy washed over her(心理描写：释然与开心), and she couldn’t help but let out a small cheer. She immediately texted Serena, who replied with a string of celebratory emojis. That evening, Kelly sat her mom down and confessed everything. “Mom, I’ve been training for boxing,” she began, her voice trembling slightly(独立主格刻画人物心理). Her mom’s initial shock melted into a soft smile as she pulled Kelly into a warm embrace(状从，拥入怀中). “I may not understand your choice,” she said, “but I’m proud of your determination.” 语法加分点与亮点词汇： 现在分词作状语： “Her fists slamming into the heavy bag with rhythmic precision.” 替换词：hitting → slamming, striking 例句： The waves crashed against the rocks, creating a mesmerizing sound. The children ran through the park, laughing joyfully. 定语从句： “Her coach, who noticed her dedication, often stayed late to guide her.” 替换词：noticed → observed, recognized 例句： The book, which had been lying on the table, was finally picked up. The teacher, who was known for her patience, explained the concept again. 情绪描写亮点词汇： swelled with pride（充满自豪） 替换词：filled with pride, brimming with pride wave of relief（如释重负） 替换词：sense of relief, flood of relief 动作描写亮点词汇： sneak into（悄悄进入） 替换词：slip into, creep into pushed herself harder（更加努力） 替换词：strived harder, exerted herself more Version 2 Paragraph 1: Then Kelly began her training, keeping it a secret from her mom. She spent hours in the gym, her movements sharp and deliberate(独立主格，描写动作). The sound of her gloves hitting the punching bag(现在分词短语做后置定语) echoed through the room, a testament to her relentless effort(同位语解释说明). Despite the exhaustion that threatened to overwhelm her, she reminded herself of her goal. “This is my chance to prove myself,” she whispered under her breath. Her determination only grew stronger(心理描写，无灵主语句) when the boys in the gym mocked her. Instead of backing down, she glared at them and continued her training(刻画人物), her resolve unshaken(独立主格，刻画人物坚韧的性格). Paragraph 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. Kelly’s hands trembled(动作心理描写) as she approached the notice board, her eyes scanning the list anxiously(独立主格描写人物动作). When she finally spotted her name, a wide grin spread across her face(情绪描写：开心). She rushed to find Serena, who was waiting nearby. “I made it!” Kelly exclaimed, her voice filled with excitement(独立主格，情绪描写：开心). Serena hugged her tightly, tears of joy streaming down her face(独立主格，动作描写：流泪). That night, Kelly gathered her family and revealed her secret(衔接上文). “Mom, I’ve been training for boxing,” she said, her voice steady(独立主格，刻画人物形象). Her mom’s initial surprise turned into a proud smile(人物的情绪变化). “You’ve always been strong-willed,” she said, “and I admire that about you.” 语法加分点与亮点词汇： 虚拟语气： “If she were to give up now, she would regret it forever.” 替换词：give up → quit, abandon 例句： If I were you, I would take the opportunity. Were she to fail, she would try again. 并列句： “Her movements were sharp and deliberate, and the sound of her gloves echoed through the room.” 替换词：sharp → precise, deliberate → calculated 例句： The sun was shining, and the birds were singing. She was tired, but she refused to stop. 情绪描写亮点词汇： wide grin（灿烂的笑容） 替换词：broad smile, beaming smile tears of joy（喜悦的泪水） 替换词：happy tears, tears of happiness 动作描写亮点词汇： glared at them（怒视他们） 替换词：stared angrily, shot a look rushed to find（急忙去找） 替换词：hurried to find, dashed to find Version 3 Paragraph 1: Then Kelly began her training, keeping it a secret from her mom. She devoted every spare moment to improving her skills(刻画人物), her focus unwavering(独立主格刻画人物). The gym became her sanctuary(比喻), a place where she could forget about the pressures of ballet and embrace her newfound passion. Her coach often praised her progress, saying(现在分词做伴随动作), “You’re a natural(好经典的影视台词).” Despite the physical toll, Kelly felt a sense of fulfillment she had never experienced before. The tryout loomed ahead(经典表达), and she knew it was her chance to prove that boxing was more than just a fleeting interest—it was her calling(递进句式). Paragraph 2: The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. Kelly’s heart raced(心理描写，无灵主语句) as she approached the notice board, her eyes scanning the list nervously. When she saw her name, a surge of exhilaration coursed through her(情绪描写：开心). She immediately called Serena, who screamed with joy on the other end of the line. That evening, Kelly sat her mom down and confessed everything. “Mom, I’ve been training for boxing,” she said, her voice steady but soft.(独立主格刻画人物) Her mom’s eyes widened in surprise(刻画人物), but then she smiled. “I may not have expected this,” she said, “but I’m proud of you for following your heart.” 语法加分点与亮点词汇： 现在分词作状语： “Her focus unwavering, she devoted every spare moment to improving her skills.” 替换词：unwavering → steady, devoted → dedicated 例句： The sun setting, the sky turned a brilliant shade of orange. Her voice trembling, she confessed her secret. 定语从句： “The gym, which had become her sanctuary, was a place of solace.” 替换词：sanctuary → refuge, solace → comfort 例句： The book, which had been on the shelf for years, was finally opened. The teacher, who was known for her kindness, helped the students. 情绪描写亮点词汇： surge of exhilaration（一阵兴奋） 替换词：rush of excitement, wave of joy bated breath（屏息以待） 替换词：anxious anticipation, nervous excitement 动作描写亮点词汇： devoted every spare moment（投入所有空闲时间） 替换词：dedicated every moment, spent all her time loomed ahead（迫在眉睫） 替换词：approached, drew near 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$