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阅读下面材料，标黑加粗斜体黄，可积累文本！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单斜体（状从）；其余非谓语形式都会标注；B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释) 成都市2022级高中毕业班第二次诊断性检测 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mrs.Grady welcomed her class back inside the warm cheerful room.The children settled down at their desks,still chatting about(现在分词做伴随动作) the activities they had enjoyed over the winter break. It took a few minutes for Mrs.Grady to get their full attention.(背景信息交代) “I'm so glad you're all back.I'm sure you're well rested and ready to get back to work!”she smiled.The children made faces, but most of them were happy to be back at school with their friends after two weeks off. “Since it's the start of a new year, we'll talk a little bit about something people do this time of year. It's called making resolutions. Does anyone know what that means?" Mrs.Grady asked. The teacher's eyes focused like lasers on the boys still chatting(现在分词做后置定语). They immediately stopped and looked down at their fingernails to avoid her stare(todo状语). Olivia raised her hand. "I know. It's when you decide to do something different for the new year." Olivia always seemed to have the answers. Mrs.Grady nodded.“Yes, that's close. It doesn't have to be at the beginning of the year, but a resolution is a decision to make some kind of change and stick to it(todo后置定语)." Several hands shot up in the air. Suggestions such as eating more vegetables, eating less candy, and drinking lots of water(并列) were offered.Mrs.Grady agreed they were good choices to make for a healthy resolution(目的状语).“ But the resolution we make is a bigger idea. And now, I would like all of you to take a few minutes to think about what kind of resolution you could make this year, and a few ways you would be able to achieve it." the teacher suggested. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：Olivia thought about it. Paragraph 2：Olivia took out her workbook and started writing. 1. 读后续写类型与构思分析 类型分类：本文属于日常学习生活类的读后续写，主题围绕“新年决心”展开，涉及师生互动和学生自我反思。 构思思路： 布局：续写应围绕学生们的“新年决心”展开，描述他们如何制定并实施这些决心，同时穿插情感变化和互动。 框架提炼：1) 学生提出各自的决心；2) 决心实施过程中的挑战与成长；3) 结局总结，体现成长与反思。 实施：通过对话、心理描写和动作描写推进情节，突出学生的成长和老师的引导作用。 承接原文：续写需承接原文的“新年决心”主题，保持师生互动的氛围，延续轻松愉快的课堂气氛。 注意事项：保持语言风格一致，情感过渡自然，避免情节突兀。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山模式： 开端：Mrs. Grady 引导学生讨论新年决心。 发展：学生提出各自的决心，老师引导他们思考如何实现。 高潮：学生在实施决心的过程中遇到困难或挑战。 结局：学生通过努力克服困难，实现成长。 原文衔接点： 衔接点：学生提出的决心（如吃更多蔬菜、少吃糖果）可作为续写的基础。 心情反映：Mrs. Grady 的“eyes focused like lasers”反映出她的严肃与期待；学生的“made faces”和“looked down at their fingernails”反映出他们的紧张与不安。 动作描写：学生“settled down at their desks”“raised her hand”“shot up in the air”等动作描写生动展现了课堂氛围。 关键转折点：Mrs. Grady 提出“think about what kind of resolution you could make”是情节推进的关键。 伏笔与冲突：伏笔在于学生如何实现决心；冲突可能在于决心实施过程中的困难。 隐含线索：学生的决心与他们的日常生活紧密相关。 解决方案：通过老师的引导和学生的努力，最终实现决心。 表格分析： 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Mrs. Grady 是一位严肃但关心学生的老师；Olivia 是积极回答问题的学生。 “Mrs. Grady’s eyes focused like lasers”；“Olivia raised her hand.” 情感层次 学生从轻松到紧张，再到积极参与。 “The children made faces”；“They immediately stopped and looked down.” 关键情节点 老师引导学生思考新年决心。 “I would like all of you to take a few minutes to think about...” 语言特色 语言简洁，对话生动，适合课堂场景。 “Does anyone know what that means?” 关键词分析 “resolution”（决心）是核心词。 “A resolution is a decision to make some kind of change and stick to it.” 心理描写 学生紧张、期待、反思的心理变化。 “They immediately stopped and looked down at their fingernails.” 动作描写 学生的动作反映课堂氛围。 “Several hands shot up in the air.” 环境描写 温暖愉快的教室环境。 “The warm cheerful room.” 隐含主题 新年决心与个人成长。 “Think about what kind of resolution you could make this year.” 情感转折 从轻松到严肃再到积极参与。 “The children made faces”；“Several hands shot up in the air.” 空间转换 教室内，学生与老师的互动。 “The children settled down at their desks.” 时间过渡 从寒假结束到新学期开始。 “The activities they had enjoyed over the winter break.” 3. 续写语料推荐 动作描写例句： She nervously tapped her pencil on the desk. He leaned forward, eager to share his resolution. The students exchanged glances, unsure of what to say. Mrs. Grady walked around the room, observing each student. Olivia scribbled her resolution in her notebook. A boy raised his hand hesitantly, his voice trembling. The class erupted into laughter as one student shared a funny resolution. Mrs. Grady clapped her hands to regain the students’ attention. 心理描写例句： Olivia felt a surge of pride as she answered the question correctly. He wondered if his resolution was too ambitious. A sense of determination filled the room as the students thought about their goals. She felt a pang of guilt for not keeping last year’s resolution. The boy’s heart raced as he prepared to share his resolution. Olivia couldn’t help but smile at the thought of achieving her goal. He felt a mix of excitement and anxiety about the new year. The students were inspired by Mrs. Grady’s encouraging words. 环境描写例句： The warm sunlight streamed through the classroom windows. The walls were adorned with colorful posters and student artwork. A gentle breeze rustled the papers on the desks. The classroom buzzed with the energy of eager students. The scent of freshly sharpened pencils filled the air. The clock on the wall ticked softly, marking the passage of time. The students’ laughter echoed through the hallway. The room felt cozy and inviting, a perfect place for learning. 高级替换词： Happy → Delighted, Joyful, Content, Elated, Jubilant Sad → Melancholic, Sorrowful, Downcast, Gloomy, Disheartened Think → Ponder, Reflect, Contemplate, Meditate, Mull over Say → Utter, Express, Declare, State, Articulate Look → Glance, Gaze, Stare, Peek, Observe 4. 语法现象与语料积累 高中语法现象： 现在进行时：用于描述正在进行的动作。 例句：The children are chatting about their winter break. 一般过去时：用于描述过去的动作或状态。 例句：Mrs. Grady welcomed her class back. 情态动词：表达可能性或建议。 例句：You should think about your resolution. 定语从句：修饰名词。 例句：The boy who raised his hand is very confident. 地道搭配： Get one’s attention：吸引某人的注意力。 例句：It took a few minutes for Mrs. Grady to get their full attention. Make faces：做鬼脸。 例句：The children made faces at each other. Raise one’s hand：举手。 例句：Olivia raised her hand to answer the question. Focus like lasers：像激光一样聚焦。 例句：Mrs. Grady’s eyes focused like lasers on the boys. 生词短语： Resolution (n.)：决心。 近义词：Decision, Determination 反义词：Indecision, Hesitation 例句：She made a resolution to exercise every day. Cheerful (adj.)：愉快的。 近义词：Joyful, Happy 反义词：Gloomy, Sad 例句：The cheerful room brightened everyone’s mood. Settle down (v.)：安静下来。 近义词：Calm down, Relax 反义词：Agitate, Disturb 例句：The children settled down at their desks. Achieve (v.)：实现。 近义词：Accomplish, Attain 反义词：Fail, Miss 例句：He worked hard to achieve his goals. 5. Possible Versions(3) Version 1 Paragraph 1: Olivia thought about it. She traced the world map on her desk mat with a pencil tip(with介词短语细节刻画), thinking of her pen pal in China. While others planned fitness routines, Olivia wanted to build something lasting—a "Global Handshake" program connecting classrooms worldwide(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Each year, her class would partner with a new country: exchange mystery culture boxes, co-write multilingual story chains, and host virtual festivals(宾语的并列). "By graduation," she imagined, "we'll have friends on every continent!" Paragraph 2: Olivia took out her workbook and started writing. She created a passport-shaped chart with stamps for each milestone: First Video Call (Bronze Stamp), 100 Shared Recipes (Silver), Co-Authored Storybook (Gold). For Year 1, she listed concrete steps—learn three Chinese phrases weekly, collect local leaves for overseas partners. A pocket on the back page held sample letters: "Dear Friend, here's why fireflies glow in my hometown..." When the bell rang, three classmates clustered around her desk. "Can we join your world adventure?" Version 2 Paragraph 1: Olivia thought about it. She twirled a strand of hair around her finger(动作刻画，描写人物), remembering the plastic bottles(现在分词做伴随动作) she'd seen piled near the school pond. While others focused on personal goals, Olivia envisioned something larger—a "Green Guardian" project that could last for years(与原文衔接). She pictured monthly clean-up days where the whole class would plant milkweed for butterflies, build bird feeders from recycled materials, and track(并列动词短语) how much trash they prevented from reaching the ocean. "If we start this year," she whispered, "by sixth grade our school could be an eco-park!" Paragraph 2: Olivia took out her workbook and started writing. She divided the page into five colorful sections: Year 1 (Clean-Up Crew), Year 2 (Wildlife Habitat), Year 3 (Eco-Art Gallery). For Year 1, she sketched a calendar with seasonal targets(细节动作)—March for pond restoration, June for solar-powered fairy lights in the school garden. At the bottom, she pasted a leaf-shaped sticker labeled "Every Action Counts"(过去分词短语做后置定语) and wrote: "Measure progress by counting rescued earthworms!" Mrs. Grady peeked over her shoulder(与原文衔接，教师的互动). "This," she said softly, "is exactly the kind of resolution that changes the world." Version 3： Paragraph 1: Olivia thought about it. Her gaze drifted to the framed photo of her great-grandmother on the classroom wall. While classmates suggested individual goals, Olivia imagined creating a living history project that could span generations. She would interview elderly neighbors every month, record their stories in handmade books, and host "Time Travel Tea Parties" where kids could share these tales with preschoolers. "By high school," she thought, "we'll have a whole library of memories that never fade!" Paragraph 2: Olivia took out her workbook and started writing. She drew a timeline stretching across three pages(现在分词做伴随动作): Year 1 (Collect 50 Stories), Year 2 (Create Audio Archives), Year 3 (Publish Best Tales). For January, she designed interview cards with questions like "What made you laugh hardest at my age?" and drew microphone stickers to mark completed recordings. A special "Story Guardian" badge system filled the margin—silver for 10 stories, gold for 30. When Mrs.Grady leaned over to look(与原文衔接), Olivia smiled. "Want to be partner detectives rescuing lost memories(现在分词短语做后置定语)?" 语法亮点与结构分析 时间跨度设计： 年份阶段式目标（Year 1/Year 2/Year 3） 持续性动词：span, stretch, connect 具象化测量系统： 可视化进度工具：贴纸系统（leaf-shaped sticker）、徽章体系（silver/gold badges） 数据化目标：50 stories, 100 recipes 互动性设计： 邀请句式："Want to be partner detectives?" 多模态成果：audio archives, eco-art, virtual festivals 跨学科元素： 生态（milkweed planting） 人文（oral history interviews） 技术（video calls） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$