UNIT 1 SECTION 7 WRITING——生活方式选择-【创新教程】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册五维课堂同步Word教案（北师大版2019）

SECTION Ⅶ　WRITING 主题写作——生活方式选择 假定你是李华，校学生会正在组织大家向宇航员王亚平学习，请根据以下要点写一则关于王亚平的短文： 1．高中毕业后成为一名飞行员； 2．主动加强训练； 3．2021年12月9日太空授课。 注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 I would like to introduce our astronaut Wang Yaping to you.________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ We teenagers should learn from her. ●[写作思路] 1．一审：体裁、主题与结构 体裁：应用文——人物介绍 主题：宇航员王亚平 结构(三段) 2．二定：时态与人称 时态：一般过去时为主 人称：第三人称为主 3．三明确：写作要点 第一段：写作的目的(介绍王亚平)； 第二段：主体部分(王亚平的相关事迹)； 第三段：向王亚平学习。 ●[素材积累] 1．关键词语 ①be faced with面对 ②with high quality高质量地 ③tough as it was尽管很艰难 ④a confident and competent astronaut一个自信而有能力的宇航员 ⑤according to按……所说，根据 ⑥a range of一系列；一些；一套 ⑦be of significance重要 ⑧count for有价值，有重要性 ⑨good psychological mood良好的心理状态 ⑩be responsible for对……负责 ⑪catch up with跟上，赶上 ⑫commit yourself to something meaningful投身于有意义的事情 2．完成句子 ①Wang Yaping became a pilot after 　graduating_from_senior_secondary_school　. 王亚平高中毕业后成为一名飞行员。 ②　Facing　 challenging training，　whatever_challenges_arose　， she always insisted on using all her leisure time to voluntarily strengthen training until she entirely grasped it 　with_high_quality　. 面对具有挑战性的训练，无论遇到什么挑战，她都坚持利用自己所有的业余时间主动加强训练，直到高质量地完全掌握。 ③　Suffering_from_stressful　 training，　tough_as_it_was　， she 　became_addicted_to　 it. 经受着压力训练的痛苦，尽管训练很艰苦，她却对此很痴迷。 ④From a pilot to a 　confident_and_competent　 astronaut, she has spent ten years 　getting_ahead　. 从飞行员到自信而有能力的宇航员，她花了十年时间获得了成功。 ⑤On December 9,2021, 　according_to_the_previous_formal_schedule　， Wang Yaping gave a lecture in space 　in_person　， vividly introducing 　a_range_of　 the working and living scenes of the space station. 2021年12月9日，根据之前的正式日程安排，王亚平亲自在太空做演讲，生动地介绍了空间站的一系列工作和生活场景。 ●[范文展示](黑体字为本单元重点词汇) 　I_would_like_to_introduce_our_astronaut_Wang_Yaping_to_you　. Wang Yaping became a pilot after graduating from senior secondary school. Facing challenging training, whatever challenges arose, she always insisted on using all her leisure time to voluntarily strengthen training until she entirely grasped it with high quality. Suffering from stressful training, tough as it was, she became addicted to it. From a pilot to a confident and competent astronaut, she has spent ten years getting ahead. On December 9,2021, according to the previous formal schedule, Wang Yaping gave a lecture in space in person，vividly introducing a range of the working and living scenes of the space station. 　We_teenagers_should_learn_from_her　. [名师点评] 第一段：导入＋写作目的。 第二段：介绍王亚平的事迹。 句型：第一句中after graduating from senior secondary school是介词after后加动词­ing形式作状语；第二句中Facing challenging training是现在分词短语作伴随状语；whatever challenges arose是whatever引导的让步状语从句。 第三句中Suffering from stressful training是现在分词短语作伴随状语；tough as it was是as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构，将表语tough提前；第四句中使用了spend time (in) doing sth“花费时间做某事”结构；第五句中vividly introducing a range of...是现在分词短语作伴随状语。 第三段：呼吁向王亚平学习。 假定你是某高校学生李华，即将大学毕业，你的朋友Peter写信询问你毕业后的打算。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信： 1．想去支教； 2．理由与资格； 3．期待Peter的加入。 注意：1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter， You wrote to ask me about my plan after graduation from university.________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua [参考范文] 　Dear_Peter，　 　You wrote to ask me about my plan after graduation from university.　 I intend to challenge myself and have a different lifestyle applying for a volunteer job as a secondary school teacher. During my college campus life, I eagerly participated in various high­quality activities, constantly updated my teaching skills and consulted professional experts. With a teacher's certificate and confidence as well as dynamic, I'm competent to independently organise teaching activities and deal with a range of tough tasks. I'm looking forward to your joining me as a volunteer, making a contribution to the education in person. 　Yours，　 　Li_Hua　 [附]话题常用表达句式 1．graduate from senior secondary school高中毕业 2．insist on doing sth.坚持做某事 3．suffer from(身体或精神上)遭受(痛苦) 4．become addicted to对……着迷、上瘾 5．get ahead取得进步，获得成功 6．in person亲自 7．dedicate oneself/one's life to致力于；献身于 8．a qualified volunteer一名合格的志愿者 9．pursue one's goal追求梦想 10．make a difference有影响，很重要，产生差别 11．overcome difficulties克服困难 12．the real meaning of life生活的真谛 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$