高频话题 04 成长变化（同步写作讲义）英语九年级上学期通用版

高频话题04：成长变化 九年级同步写作课讲义 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元的话题是“成长变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事，以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等；描述生活中发生的变化，以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题： ①介绍自己现在和过去的变化； ②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化； ③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) ( 任务1-邮件 ) 假如你是李华，Bob是你三年前的同学，他在电子邮件里问你这三年的变化和今年的目标和计划。请根据下面的表格内容给他回一封电子邮件。 1. Changes: In the past Now Appearance &Personalities short, shy, quiet tall, outgoing, make friends Hobbies & Abilities play computer games Read books … … Study … … 2. My plans：①…  ②…（至少补充两点） 要求：1. 文中必须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 结合自身实际，补充信息和要点，但不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Bob, I’m glad to hear from you and I also miss you very much. ________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m happy I have changed a lot. How about your changes and plans? Yours, Li hua 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作框架】 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I’m glad to hear from you and I also miss you very much. I’m taller than before. I used to be a shy and quiet boy, but now I’m not afraid of speaking in public anymore. What’s more, I become more outgoing and make lots of friends in my class. Playing computer games used to be my favorite activity. But my parents worried me a lot because of this. Now I prefer to spend time reading books. In the past, I didn’t like sports at all. But now I’m good at swimming and I become much healthier than before. In the past, I didn’t like studying, but now I pay more attention to it. I’m happy I have changed a lot. How about your changes and plans? Yours, Li hua ( 任务2-说明文 ) 自从国家实行“双减” (double reduction) 政策以来，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。请以“Changes in My School Life”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍自己校园生活的变化。 写作要点： (1) 学习压力方面 (2) 作业方面 (3) 睡眠时间方面 (4) 运动时间方面 (5) 其它 写作要求： (1)词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； (2)合理增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 参考词汇：reduce study pressure减少学习压力，efficiently高效地 Changes in My School Life It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double reduction” has been carried out.___________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 【框架设计】 【参考范文】 Changes in My School Life It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double reduction” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot. The study pressure has been greatly reduced. I used to have a lot of homework every day, but now I have less to do, allowing me more time to understand the subjects better. Additionally, I get more sleep every night, which makes me feel more energetic during the day. With the extra sleep, I also have more time for exercise and I have become healthier and more active. This new policy has also given me more opportunities to explore other interests and spend valuable time with my family, making my life much happier and more fulfilling. ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 【性格】humorous， silent， helpful， shy， outgoing， quiet, calm, active, interesting, funny,serious,popular,talkative,lazy,be easy/hard to get along with, be ready to help .... 【外貌】tall，short，thin，heavy，strong，big eyes，wear glasses, beautiful, handsome，be of medium height/build, straight/curly/long/short/black/blond hair.... 【兴趣与爱好】in the school music／...club， on a basketball/... team,love/ like / enjoy (playing)_soccer / .... be interested in' / be good at ..., dislike / can' t stand ... 【行为习惯】watch TV／ movies， listen to pop ／ ：.. music, hate P.E. /... class, not cat a lot of vegetables / ..., not read a lot of books, be afraid of the dark/ high places / being alone / giving a speech in public ... 【学习】study ／ work hard， get good scores ／ grades on one＇ s exams， do well in school， be good at English／ .w..become less/more interested in studying, be absent from classes, fail the exam, be bad at / be poor in / be bored with/ do badly in... 【衣着】dress in black ／ ...， wear jeans ／ ...， be dressed as a boy， dress beautifully ／ nicely／ poorly ／ simply／ .. ( 句型积累 ) 1.How time flies!时光飞逝! 2.I have changed a lot in the past/last few years.在过去的几年里我改变了很多。 3.In class,l either..or..在课堂上，我要么….要么... 4.To deal with... took up...为了应对.., 5.I became interested in...我对...产生了兴趣。 6.I got good grades...我取得了好成绩... 7.Since then,I ...从那以后，我..... 8.Now I’m not shy anymore.我现在不再害羞了。 9.My life has changed a lot in the last few years.在过去的几年里，我的生活改变了很多。 10.This is my most important change because … 这是我最重要的变化，因为…… 11.You may wonder why l have changed a lot. 你可能想知道我为什么改变这么大。 12.Thanks to..., |have made great progress..多亏了., 我我...取得了很大的进步。 13.How lucky l am to meet him/her!遇见他/她我是多么幸运啊! 14.You can't change the fact, but you can change the attitude,你不能改变事实，但是你可以改变态度。 15.Change your thoughts and you change your world.改变你的想法就能改变你的命运。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1. Time tries all, and changes all. 时间考验一切，也改变一切。 2. As the tree grows, so the fruit forms. 树如何生长，果便如何成形。 3. People change with the times. 人随时代而变。 4. Growth is a series of changes. 成长是一连串的变化。 5. Every new day brings a new change. 每个新的日子都带来新的变化。 6. The river changes its course, but not its source. 河流改道，源头不变。 7. We change as we learn, and learn as we change. 我们因学习而改变，因改变而学习。 8. What we were yesterday is not what we are today. 昨日之我非今日之我。 9. Little by little, one goes far in change. 一点一滴，在变化中走远。 10. Circumstances shape us, and we shape ourselves. 环境塑造我们，我们也塑造自己。 11. Change comes not from standing still, but moving forward. 变化并非源于停滞，而是源于前行。 12. As fire tries gold, so time reveals change in us. 火炼真金，时间显露出我们的变化。 13. From small seeds, great plants grow—and so do we. 小小种子长成参天大树，我们亦是如此。 14. We are molded by our choices, and changed by their fruits. 我们被自己的选择塑造，被选择的结果改变。 15. The caterpillar turns, and so do we in our own time. 毛毛虫会蜕变，我们也会在属于自己的时间里改变。 ( 写作模板 ) ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 湖北武汉 本学期，你所在的班级开展了生活技能学习活动，如整理收纳、烹饪、手工制作等。 材料作文 2024年 贵州 以“Changes makes me ...”主题征文活动 材料作文 2024年 四川自贡 学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 材料作文 2022年 江苏泰州 回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。 材料作文 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 学校英文报正在举办主题为“我的变化”的征文活动。请结合你的经历，以 “I Have Changed a Lot” 为题，用英文写一篇短文，向学校英文报投稿。 写作提示： 1. What did you use to be like? 2. What is the the most important change and how did it happen? 3. What have you learned from the experience? 写作要求： 1. 短文包含以上要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁。 3. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。 I Have Changed a Lot How time flies! I’m now in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the last few years. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 上周五，你参加了一个题为“How I’ve changed”的英语演讲比赛 (English speech contest)，在演讲的现场，观众 (the audience) 却是这样的情况…… 发生了什么呢？请根据上述文字，结合图片内容完整讲述一个故事，写清楚你是如何让观众改变的，以及你心情的变化和感悟。 要求： 1. 词数80-120词，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Beginning noisy, chat with each other, use phones... Turning point control feelings: calm down, take a deep breath… attract their attention: tell a funny story, ask an interesting question… Ending listen carefully, give a big hand, praise… The lesson learned … Last Friday, I took part in an English speech contest “How I’ve changed!”. At first ____________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 进入初中两年多了，同学们在外貌、性格、兴趣和习惯等方面肯定发生了一些变化。请以How I have Changed为题写一篇英语作文。 内容： 1. 介绍你的变化（外貌、性格、兴趣或习惯等）； 2. 重点谈谈你最大的一个改变（过程、原因、感受等）。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息； 2. 词数不少于 80，文章标题、首句已经给出，不计入总词数。 How I have Changed I have changed a lot in the past few years.  __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 假定你是李华。你的好友陈辉发来邮件问候你新年快乐，询问你目前的学习情况，并想了解你三年来的变化。请你给他回封邮件。 包含以下内容： 1. 你最擅长的学科及你的学习方法； 2. 你三年来的变化； 3. 你寒假的打算。 注意： (1) 词数80左右； (2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 Dear Chen Hui, Thanks for your letter. Long time no see. I miss you very much. ___________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （5） 在成长的旅程中，每个人都会经历一系列的变化。学校英语俱乐部即将举办一次以“How I Have Changed”为主题的英语征文活动，假如你叫Fu Xing，以“How I Have Changed”为题，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要求： 1. 词数80-120词。 2. 写自己的过去与现在，可以适当描述变化的原因。 参考信息： 1. 性格外貌方面：shy，short，long hair... 2. 兴趣爱好方面：play basketball，watch TV，read books... 3. 生活学习习惯方面：stay up late，get up early，finish homework on time... 4. …… How I Have Changed ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） 亲爱的同学们，一转眼初三生活就已经过半了， 你可还记得自己刚升入初中时的样子？如今的你有了怎样的变化？面对未来，你有着怎样的规划？请根据图示，写一篇英文短文。 要求：词数：1. 80-100词 （文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含已给相关信息，并适当发挥。 Over the past few years, I have changed a lot. _________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） 时光荏苒，转眼间我们成为一名中学生已经两年多了。回顾当年初进校园，再看看现在的自己，你一定有很多感慨，请你结合下面的内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的发言稿。 内容要点如下： 1. 介绍你外貌、性格、爱好上的变化； 2. 在英语学习方面你的变化； 3. 和同学们分享一下你通过何种方式取得了英语学习的进步(至少两条)。 4. 你对未来的期望。 Dear teachers and students, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    That’s all. Thank you. / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 高频话题04：成长变化 九年级同步写作课讲义 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元的话题是“成长变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事，以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等；描述生活中发生的变化，以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题： ①介绍自己现在和过去的变化； ②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化； ③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) ( 任务1-邮件 ) 假如你是李华，Bob是你三年前的同学，他在电子邮件里问你这三年的变化和今年的目标和计划。请根据下面的表格内容给他回一封电子邮件。 1. Changes: In the past Now Appearance &Personalities short, shy, quiet tall, outgoing, make friends Hobbies & Abilities play computer games Read books … … Study … … 2. My plans：①…  ②…（至少补充两点） 要求：1. 文中必须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 结合自身实际，补充信息和要点，但不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Bob, I’m glad to hear from you and I also miss you very much. ________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m happy I have changed a lot. How about your changes and plans? Yours, Li hua 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作框架】 【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I’m glad to hear from you and I also miss you very much. I’m taller than before. I used to be a shy and quiet boy, but now I’m not afraid of speaking in public anymore. What’s more, I become more outgoing and make lots of friends in my class. Playing computer games used to be my favorite activity. But my parents worried me a lot because of this. Now I prefer to spend time reading books. In the past, I didn’t like sports at all. But now I’m good at swimming and I become much healthier than before. In the past, I didn’t like studying, but now I pay more attention to it. I’m happy I have changed a lot. How about your changes and plans? Yours, Li hua ( 任务2-说明文 ) 自从国家实行“双减” (double reduction) 政策以来，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。请以“Changes in My School Life”为题，写一篇英语作文，介绍自己校园生活的变化。 写作要点： (1) 学习压力方面 (2) 作业方面 (3) 睡眠时间方面 (4) 运动时间方面 (5) 其它 写作要求： (1)词数100左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数) ； (2)合理增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 参考词汇：reduce study pressure减少学习压力，efficiently高效地 Changes in My School Life It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double reduction” has been carried out.___________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 【框架设计】 【参考范文】 Changes in My School Life It’s really wonderful news that the policy of “double reduction” has been carried out. Our school life has changed a lot. The study pressure has been greatly reduced. I used to have a lot of homework every day, but now I have less to do, allowing me more time to understand the subjects better. Additionally, I get more sleep every night, which makes me feel more energetic during the day. With the extra sleep, I also have more time for exercise and I have become healthier and more active. This new policy has also given me more opportunities to explore other interests and spend valuable time with my family, making my life much happier and more fulfilling. ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 【性格】humorous， silent， helpful， shy， outgoing， quiet, calm, active, interesting, funny,serious,popular,talkative,lazy,be easy/hard to get along with, be ready to help .... 【外貌】tall，short，thin，heavy，strong，big eyes，wear glasses, beautiful, handsome，be of medium height/build, straight/curly/long/short/black/blond hair.... 【兴趣与爱好】in the school music／...club， on a basketball/... team,love/ like / enjoy (playing)_soccer / .... be interested in' / be good at ..., dislike / can' t stand ... 【行为习惯】watch TV／ movies， listen to pop ／ ：.. music, hate P.E. /... class, not cat a lot of vegetables / ..., not read a lot of books, be afraid of the dark/ high places / being alone / giving a speech in public ... 【学习】study ／ work hard， get good scores ／ grades on one＇ s exams， do well in school， be good at English／ .w..become less/more interested in studying, be absent from classes, fail the exam, be bad at / be poor in / be bored with/ do badly in... 【衣着】dress in black ／ ...， wear jeans ／ ...， be dressed as a boy， dress beautifully ／ nicely／ poorly ／ simply／ .. ( 句型积累 ) 1.How time flies!时光飞逝! 2.I have changed a lot in the past/last few years.在过去的几年里我改变了很多。 3.In class,l either..or..在课堂上，我要么….要么... 4.To deal with... took up...为了应对.., 5.I became interested in...我对...产生了兴趣。 6.I got good grades...我取得了好成绩... 7.Since then,I ...从那以后，我..... 8.Now I’m not shy anymore.我现在不再害羞了。 9.My life has changed a lot in the last few years.在过去的几年里，我的生活改变了很多。 10.This is my most important change because … 这是我最重要的变化，因为…… 11.You may wonder why l have changed a lot. 你可能想知道我为什么改变这么大。 12.Thanks to..., |have made great progress..多亏了., 我我...取得了很大的进步。 13.How lucky l am to meet him/her!遇见他/她我是多么幸运啊! 14.You can't change the fact, but you can change the attitude,你不能改变事实，但是你可以改变态度。 15.Change your thoughts and you change your world.改变你的想法就能改变你的命运。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1. Time tries all, and changes all. 时间考验一切，也改变一切。 2. As the tree grows, so the fruit forms. 树如何生长，果便如何成形。 3. People change with the times. 人随时代而变。 4. Growth is a series of changes. 成长是一连串的变化。 5. Every new day brings a new change. 每个新的日子都带来新的变化。 6. The river changes its course, but not its source. 河流改道，源头不变。 7. We change as we learn, and learn as we change. 我们因学习而改变，因改变而学习。 8. What we were yesterday is not what we are today. 昨日之我非今日之我。 9. Little by little, one goes far in change. 一点一滴，在变化中走远。 10. Circumstances shape us, and we shape ourselves. 环境塑造我们，我们也塑造自己。 11. Change comes not from standing still, but moving forward. 变化并非源于停滞，而是源于前行。 12. As fire tries gold, so time reveals change in us. 火炼真金，时间显露出我们的变化。 13. From small seeds, great plants grow—and so do we. 小小种子长成参天大树，我们亦是如此。 14. We are molded by our choices, and changed by their fruits. 我们被自己的选择塑造，被选择的结果改变。 15. The caterpillar turns, and so do we in our own time. 毛毛虫会蜕变，我们也会在属于自己的时间里改变。 ( 写作模板 ) ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 湖北武汉 本学期，你所在的班级开展了生活技能学习活动，如整理收纳、烹饪、手工制作等。 材料作文 2024年 贵州 以“Changes makes me ...”主题征文活动 材料作文 2024年 四川自贡 学校英文报正在举办主题为“改变我的一个人”的征文活动。请你结合初中三年的经历，以“A Person Who Changes Me a Lot”为题，写一篇短文参赛。 材料作文 2022年 江苏泰州 回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。 材料作文 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 学校英文报正在举办主题为“我的变化”的征文活动。请结合你的经历，以 “I Have Changed a Lot” 为题，用英文写一篇短文，向学校英文报投稿。 写作提示： 1. What did you use to be like? 2. What is the the most important change and how did it happen? 3. What have you learned from the experience? 写作要求： 1. 短文包含以上要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁。 3. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。 I Have Changed a Lot How time flies! I’m now in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the last few years. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I Have Changed a Lot How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m more outgoing. The most important change in my life is that I have made much progress in English learning. In the past, I didn’t like my English class. Every class was like a bad dream. I didn’t understand my teacher most of time and I was afraid to ask questions. But my English teacher encouraged me a lot and gave me some useful suggestions. For example, she advised me to learn English by listening to tapes and repeating out loud. She also told me to have more conversations with other students. I worked hard as what she told me. With her help, I really enjoy my English class now and I often get good grades in English exams. From the experience, I’ve learned that nothing is difficult if we put our heart into it. So whenever we meet difficulties, just try our best and challenge ourselves. Then we can make it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：阐述你以前是什么样子； 第二步：展开阐述最重要的变化是什么，它是如何发生的； 第三步：阐述你你从这次经历中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①used to曾经 ②make much progress取得很大进步 ③have conversation with sb和某人交谈 [高分句型] ①The most important change in my life is that I have made much progress in English learning.(表语从句) ②From the experience, I’ve learned that nothing is difficult if we put our heart into it.（if引导的条件状语从句） （2） 上周五，你参加了一个题为“How I’ve changed”的英语演讲比赛 (English speech contest)，在演讲的现场，观众 (the audience) 却是这样的情况…… 发生了什么呢？请根据上述文字，结合图片内容完整讲述一个故事，写清楚你是如何让观众改变的，以及你心情的变化和感悟。 要求： 1. 词数80-120词，首句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Beginning noisy, chat with each other, use phones... Turning point control feelings: calm down, take a deep breath… attract their attention: tell a funny story, ask an interesting question… Ending listen carefully, give a big hand, praise… The lesson learned … Last Friday, I took part in an English speech contest “How I’ve changed!”. At first ____________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Last Friday, I took part in an English speech contest “How I’ve changed!” At first, the audience was very noisy. Some were chatting and others were using their phones. I felt nervous. For a moment, I even doubted myself. I thought I must sound boring. I tried to calm down. I decided to share a funny story about my first experience at public speaking. “I was supposed to introduce myself, but I completely forgot my lines and ended up saying, ‘Hi, I’m… um… uh…’ before running off the stage!” The audience laughed loudly. Then I started to share how I changed. They listened carefully. Finally, I finished my speech. They gave me a big hand. I learned that in the face of challenges, we need to control ourselves and make changes quickly. That helps us to make a difference. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍演讲比赛的题目以及观众开始时的表现； 第二步，具体介绍自己演讲时心情的变化和观众反应； 第三步，表达自己学到的经验和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in参加 ② calm down平静下来 ③ run off逃离 ④give sb a big hand帮某人一个大忙 [高分句型] ①Then I started to share how I changed. (how引导宾语从句) ②I learned that in the face of challenges, we need to control ourselves and make changes quickly. (that引导宾语从句) （3） 进入初中两年多了，同学们在外貌、性格、兴趣和习惯等方面肯定发生了一些变化。请以How I have Changed为题写一篇英语作文。 内容： 1. 介绍你的变化（外貌、性格、兴趣或习惯等）； 2. 重点谈谈你最大的一个改变（过程、原因、感受等）。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实信息； 2. 词数不少于 80，文章标题、首句已经给出，不计入总词数。 How I have Changed I have changed a lot in the past few years.  __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How I Have Changed I have changed a lot in the past few years. First, changes have taken place in my appearance. I used to be short but now I’ve grown tall. In character, I used to be really shy and quiet, even scared to talk in public. But now, I’ve become much more outgoing and confident. I am willing to take part in class activities and express my opinions bravely. My hobbies have changed too. I used to like playing games but now reading has become my favorite. My biggest change is that I make plans now. I used to leave my tasks till the last minute. This often led to poor grades. But now I’m in the habit of planning for everything. This change has not only helped improve my grades but also made me more organized. All in all, I’m happy with my changes and I’ll keep growing and improving in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我的变化的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“进入初中两年多了，同学们在外貌、性格、兴趣和习惯等方面肯定发生了一些变化”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌的变化、性格的变化、兴趣的变化或习惯的变化等”几个方面重点介绍我的变化的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“总而言之，我对我的改变感到高兴，我将在未来继续成长和进步”的总结。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②take part in参加 ③lead to导致 ④all in all总之 [高分句型] ①My biggest change is that I make plans now. (that引导的表语从句) ②All in all, I’m happy with my changes and I’ll keep growing and improving in the future. (动名词作宾语) （4） 假定你是李华。你的好友陈辉发来邮件问候你新年快乐，询问你目前的学习情况，并想了解你三年来的变化。请你给他回封邮件。 包含以下内容： 1. 你最擅长的学科及你的学习方法； 2. 你三年来的变化； 3. 你寒假的打算。 注意： (1) 词数80左右； (2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。 Dear Chen Hui, Thanks for your letter. Long time no see. I miss you very much. ___________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Chen Hui, Thanks for your letter. Long time no see. I miss you very much. I am glad that you are interested in my study. I am good at Chinese at school. I often learn Chinese by reading a lot of novels and magazines. I find that the more you read, the better your Chinese will be. Maybe you can’t imagine how much I have changed. In the past, I was quite fat. But now, I am very tall and thin. I am much stronger than before. The New Year is coming. And I also wish myself good luck in the new year. I plan to devote myself to my studies to get into a wonderful school in 2021. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己擅长的科目和学习方法； 第二步，介绍自己三年来的变化； 第三步，分享寒假的打算，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②devote oneself to专心从事 [高分句型] ①I find that the more you read, the better your Chinese will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级的用法+that引导的宾语从句） （5） 在成长的旅程中，每个人都会经历一系列的变化。学校英语俱乐部即将举办一次以“How I Have Changed”为主题的英语征文活动，假如你叫Fu Xing，以“How I Have Changed”为题，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。要求： 1. 词数80-120词。 2. 写自己的过去与现在，可以适当描述变化的原因。 参考信息： 1. 性格外貌方面：shy，short，long hair... 2. 兴趣爱好方面：play basketball，watch TV，read books... 3. 生活学习习惯方面：stay up late，get up early，finish homework on time... 4. …… How I Have Changed ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 How I Have Changed    My name is Fu Xing. I have changed a lot in the past few years. I used to be shy and short, but now I am tall and have long hair. I used to play basketball and watch TV, but now I am more interested in reading books and listening to music. I used to stay up late and get up late, but now I get up early and finish my homework on time. I think the biggest change is that I have become more confident and independent. I used to be afraid of speaking in public, but now I can give a speech in front of many people. I am proud of myself for these changes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己经历的一系列变化； 第三步、书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②be interested in… 对……感兴趣 ③stay up late熬夜 ④on time按时 ⑤be afraid of害怕 [高分句型] ①I think the biggest change is that I have become more confident and independent.(省略that的宾语从句；that引导表语从句) （6） 亲爱的同学们，一转眼初三生活就已经过半了， 你可还记得自己刚升入初中时的样子？如今的你有了怎样的变化？面对未来，你有着怎样的规划？请根据图示，写一篇英文短文。 要求：词数：1. 80-100词 （文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含已给相关信息，并适当发挥。 Over the past few years, I have changed a lot. _________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Over the past few years, I have changed a lot. How time flies. I will graduate from my school very soon. I still remember when I first came to this school, I was very short and a little shy. My English was poor. After class, I used to stay in the classroom reading books. I didn’t like to do sports. Now I am more outgoing than before. I’m much taller and stronger than before. I have made great progress in English. I always work hard at every subject. In the future, I plan to go to a good university. Though it’s not easy to achieve, I will try my best. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时，一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己改变了很多，愿与大家分享； 第二步，具体阐述自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己对接下来的学习生活的展望。 【亮点词汇】①graduate from从……毕业 ②used to过去常做某事 ③make great progress取得进步 【高分句型】①I still remember when I first came to this school, I was very short and a little shy. （when引导的时间状语从句） （7） 时光荏苒，转眼间我们成为一名中学生已经两年多了。回顾当年初进校园，再看看现在的自己，你一定有很多感慨，请你结合下面的内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的发言稿。 内容要点如下： 1. 介绍你外貌、性格、爱好上的变化； 2. 在英语学习方面你的变化； 3. 和同学们分享一下你通过何种方式取得了英语学习的进步(至少两条)。 4. 你对未来的期望。 Dear teachers and students, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】 Dear teachers and students, Time flies! It’s been more than two years since I became a middle school student. Looking back on the past two years, I have changed a lot. First of all, I have grown taller and stronger. Besides, I used to be afraid of speaking even in class. In order to change, I took every chance to speak in front of people. So now I dare to give a speech in public. Also, I am more outgoing and I have more friends than before. As for hobbies, I have developed a great interest in reading novels, which enriches my inner world. About English Learning, I couldn’t remember new words well and I often made mistakes in grammar in the past. However, I didn’t give up. I read English books and newspapers, watched English movies and listened to English songs. I also did a lot of exercises and asked my teacher and classmates for help. Now I have made great progress in English. For the future, I hope that I can communicate fluently with foreigners. I also want to become a more confident and excellent person. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你外貌、性格、爱好上的变化； 第二步，介绍在英语学习方面你的变化并和同学们分享一下通过何种方式取得了英语学习的进步； 第三步，最后介绍对未来的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①more than超过 ②be afraid of害怕 ③in order to为了 [高分句型] ①As for hobbies, I have developed a great interest in reading novels, which enriches my inner world. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②For the future, I hope that I can communicate fluently with foreigners. (that引导的宾语从句) / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$