高频话题 03 居住环境（同步写作讲义）英语九年级上学期通用版

高频话题03：居住环境 九年级同步写作课讲义 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 以“居住环境”为视角，可以是居住社区的配套设施、发展以及变迁，有时候会涉及邻里关系等；以主人公所在的城市或乡村发展为角度，讲述家乡的发展变迁，或所面临的问题。主要包括以下写作要点：①总述生活环境的现状；②具体讲述相关的配套设施；③表达对未来发展的美好期待。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) ( 任务1-邮件 ) 假定你是李华，你家附近的梅石社区食堂就要开业了。请你结合以下表格内容，用英语为生活在你家附近的英国朋友David写一封邮件，向他介绍一下这个社区食堂并邀请他一起参观体验。词数80左右。 The Meishi Community Canteen 参考词汇：Mianxian Paste 面线糊，Oyster Omelette 海蛎煎 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear David, I’m excited to share some news with you! _____________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一封邀请信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求，均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 【写作框架】 【参考范文】 Dear David, I’m excited to share some news with you! There’s a new community canteen opening near my home on July 1, 2025. It’s located on Yifeng Street. The canteen offers delicious home-made dishes like Mianxian Paste and Oyster Omelette. The best part is that it’s free for people over 65 and half price for children. It’s a great place to enjoy good food and have a good time. I think it will offer a lot of convenience to us. Would you like to visit and experience it with me? I’m sure you’ll love it! Yours, Li Hua ( 任务2-说明文 ) 学校英文报正在征集以“我与社区”为主题的征文。假如你是李欣，你居住的幸福社区有很多有趣的地方，如博物馆、图书馆、体育馆、艺术厅、咖啡厅等。请你根据以下提示问题，写一篇英语短文介绍你与这个地方的故事。 Which is your favorite place in your neighborhood? What do you usually do there? Why do you like the place? Something more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100词左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。 My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【框架设计】 【参考范文】 My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community. My favorite place here is the community library. It’s a quiet and bright space with tall bookshelves filled with all kinds of books. I usually go there after school to read novels or do my homework. The library also holds weekly reading clubs, where I discuss stories with other book lovers. What I love most is the peaceful atmosphere. Here I can escape the noise and dive into different worlds through books. The librarians are friendly and always ready to recommend good reads. This is my favorite place in my neighborhood. It’s not just a library; it’s a corner where knowledge and friendship grow together. ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) ◆方位介词（短语） 1. across from 在……对面 2. in front of 在……前面 3. in the center of 在……的中心 4. be close to 靠近 5. far from 远离 6. between... and... 在……和……之间 7. on the left/ right 在左边/右边 8. in the east/ west/ south/ north of... 在……的东部/西部/南部/北部 ◆常见动词短语 1. be covered with 被……覆盖 2. provide sb. with sth. 向某人提供某物 3. be different from 与……不同 4. used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 5. go through 穿过 ( 句型积累 ) 【必备句型】 1.... is located in/ lies in... 2. ... is my favorite place in my neighborhood. 3. ... is in front of/ in the back of/ behind... 4. Behind/ In front of..., there is... 5. It is very convenient for... to come to... 6. Turn left/ right, and you will see... 7. We... in order to make it more and more beautiful. 8. I hope it will... so that I can... 【居住环境】 1. I live in the countryside/ a small village/ a quiet city/ a modern city. 我住在乡下/一个小村庄/一个安静的城市/一个现代化的城市。 2. I moved to... with my parents last year and we are living in a beautiful house now. 去年我和我的父母搬到了……我们现在住在一个漂亮的房子里。 3. The peaceful park beside our community provides me with a good place to relax. I can also enjoy the beauty of nature. 我们小区旁边那个宁静的公园给我提供了一个放松的好地方。我也可以享受大自然的美丽。 4. The neighbours here are very friendly to each other and helpful. 这里的邻居彼此都很友好，乐于助人。 【家乡发展】 1. It’s a small city but I think this city is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. 这是一个小城市，但我认为这个城市是世界上最美丽的城市之一。 2. It’s popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air. It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms. 它深受人们的欢迎，不仅因为它的好天气，而且因为它的新鲜空气。它也有许多具有自己民族形式的传统艺术。 3. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. 工厂、学校、医院、电影院和剧院如雨后春笋般涌现。 4. Even though our town has no wide roads..., it is still a perfect place for me to live in. 尽管我们镇没有宽阔的道路……，但它对我来说仍然是一个完美的居住地。 【表达期待】 1. With our effort, I’m sure my home will be better and better. 通过我们的努力，我相信我的家会越来越好。 2. If everyone does our best, our city will become more beautiful and many more visitors will choose to visit. 如果每个人都尽我们最大的努力，我们的城市将变得更加美丽，更多的游客会选择来参观。 3. The traditional culture not only shows people’s way of life, but also the love for their hometown. Let’s take action to protect the culture in our hometown. 传统文化不仅表现了人们的生活方式，也表现了他们对家乡的热爱。 让我们采取行动来保护家乡的文化吧。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1. East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝。 2. A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village. 远亲不如近邻。 3. There is no place like home. 没有地方像家一样。 4. Everyone for environmental protection, environmental protection for everyone. 人人为环保，环保为人人。 5. Protect the environment, good health. 保护环境，有益健康。 6. Garbage away, beautiful stay. 垃圾带走，美丽存留。 7. To protect the environment is to cherish life. 保护环境就是爱惜生命。 8. Let the earth away from pollution, let the green into the home. 让地球远离污染，让绿色走进家园。 9. Save water, save life. 节约用水，拯救生命。 10. Plant a tree, grow a hope. 种一棵树，孕育一个希望。 ( 写作模板 ) Welcome to Hebei I’m _______ from ________. I’d like to recommend _________ to you. It lies in _________. The culture here is ______________. The people here are _________________. No matter what difficulty you meet, there will be someone to help you. The weather here is ___________, and here are four seasons: __________________________________________. There are also many places of interest in________, such as___________________. There you can _______________. I hope everyone can come to __________________ and enjoy the beautiful scenery and delicious food. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 甘肃兰州 为小区写一篇英文宣传报道 材料作文 2024年 安徽芜湖 以 “What my hometown surprise me”主题征稿 材料作文 2023年 河南新乡 以 “My living place”为题写一篇英语短文投稿 材料作文 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 英文有句谚语“East, west, home’s best”， 介绍你家的情况。内容包括： 你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系， 并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。 写作要求： （1）写作要点齐全， 并做适当发挥； （2）语句通顺， 意思连贯，语法正确； （3）文中不得出现题目以外的人名、校名或地名， 否则不子评分； （4）词数： 80词左右。 East, west, home, best ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） 假定你是李平，你们学校下周将迎来一批意大利交换生，最近你收到了其中一位交换生David的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80词左右。 From: David To: Li Ping Dear Li Ping, In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school activities. I can't wait to set off! Since I will live in your home, could you tell me something about your neighborhood? Are there any interesting places to visit nearby? I would also like to know the weather in Hangzhou these days. What clothes should I take? Hope to hear from you soon. Love, David From: Li Ping To: David Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） 假设你是李华，随着越来越多的外国友人来到你的社区工作和生活。为了帮助他们更好地融入当地生活，你的社区发起“Community Introduction”活动，邀请大家用英语制作一份宣传手册，介绍社区的特色。请你围绕下图提示完成英文宣传稿。 注意： 1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、社区名称和学校名称； 3.词数80~100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数） 参考词汇：atmosphere n.氛围 A Great Community for You Welcome to our community! _______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） 俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighborhood” 的征文活动。假设你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下提示，完成一篇英语征稿。 要点： 1.社区的条件。 2.邻居。（邻居是什么样的人，他们是如何帮助别人的……） 3.你曾为邻居做过什么？举出一到两个例子。 4.你对社区的感情。 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Neighborhood My name is Li Lei . I live in Garden Neighborhood._____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） 英文有句谚语“East or west, home's best.”，某英文报以此为标题， 向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 There is an old saying, “East or west, home's best.”_______________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 高频话题03：居住环境 九年级同步写作课讲义 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 以“居住环境”为视角，可以是居住社区的配套设施、发展以及变迁，有时候会涉及邻里关系等；以主人公所在的城市或乡村发展为角度，讲述家乡的发展变迁，或所面临的问题。主要包括以下写作要点：①总述生活环境的现状；②具体讲述相关的配套设施；③表达对未来发展的美好期待。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) ( 任务1-邮件 ) 假定你是李华，你家附近的梅石社区食堂就要开业了。请你结合以下表格内容，用英语为生活在你家附近的英国朋友David写一封邮件，向他介绍一下这个社区食堂并邀请他一起参观体验。词数80左右。 The Meishi Community Canteen 参考词汇：Mianxian Paste 面线糊，Oyster Omelette 海蛎煎 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear David, I’m excited to share some news with you! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一封邀请信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求，均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 【写作框架】 【参考范文】 Dear David, I’m excited to share some news with you! There’s a new community canteen opening near my home on July 1, 2025. It’s located on Yifeng Street. The canteen offers delicious home-made dishes like Mianxian Paste and Oyster Omelette. The best part is that it’s free for people over 65 and half price for children. It’s a great place to enjoy good food and have a good time. I think it will offer a lot of convenience to us. Would you like to visit and experience it with me? I’m sure you’ll love it! Yours, Li Hua ( 任务2-说明文 ) 学校英文报正在征集以“我与社区”为主题的征文。假如你是李欣，你居住的幸福社区有很多有趣的地方，如博物馆、图书馆、体育馆、艺术厅、咖啡厅等。请你根据以下提示问题，写一篇英语短文介绍你与这个地方的故事。 Which is your favorite place in your neighborhood? What do you usually do there? Why do you like the place? Something more about it. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100词左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。 My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【框架设计】 【参考范文】 My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community. My favorite place here is the community library. It’s a quiet and bright space with tall bookshelves filled with all kinds of books. I usually go there after school to read novels or do my homework. The library also holds weekly reading clubs, where I discuss stories with other book lovers. What I love most is the peaceful atmosphere. Here I can escape the noise and dive into different worlds through books. The librarians are friendly and always ready to recommend good reads. This is my favorite place in my neighborhood. It’s not just a library; it’s a corner where knowledge and friendship grow together. ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) ◆方位介词（短语） 1. across from 在……对面 2. in front of 在……前面 3. in the center of 在……的中心 4. be close to 靠近 5. far from 远离 6. between... and... 在……和……之间 7. on the left/ right 在左边/右边 8. in the east/ west/ south/ north of... 在……的东部/西部/南部/北部 ◆常见动词短语 1. be covered with 被……覆盖 2. provide sb. with sth. 向某人提供某物 3. be different from 与……不同 4. used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 5. go through 穿过 ( 句型积累 ) 【必备句型】 1.... is located in/ lies in... 2. ... is my favorite place in my neighborhood. 3. ... is in front of/ in the back of/ behind... 4. Behind/ In front of..., there is... 5. It is very convenient for... to come to... 6. Turn left/ right, and you will see... 7. We... in order to make it more and more beautiful. 8. I hope it will... so that I can... 【居住环境】 1. I live in the countryside/ a small village/ a quiet city/ a modern city. 我住在乡下/一个小村庄/一个安静的城市/一个现代化的城市。 2. I moved to... with my parents last year and we are living in a beautiful house now. 去年我和我的父母搬到了……我们现在住在一个漂亮的房子里。 3. The peaceful park beside our community provides me with a good place to relax. I can also enjoy the beauty of nature. 我们小区旁边那个宁静的公园给我提供了一个放松的好地方。我也可以享受大自然的美丽。 4. The neighbours here are very friendly to each other and helpful. 这里的邻居彼此都很友好，乐于助人。 【家乡发展】 1. It’s a small city but I think this city is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. 这是一个小城市，但我认为这个城市是世界上最美丽的城市之一。 2. It’s popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air. It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms. 它深受人们的欢迎，不仅因为它的好天气，而且因为它的新鲜空气。它也有许多具有自己民族形式的传统艺术。 3. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. 工厂、学校、医院、电影院和剧院如雨后春笋般涌现。 4. Even though our town has no wide roads..., it is still a perfect place for me to live in. 尽管我们镇没有宽阔的道路……，但它对我来说仍然是一个完美的居住地。 【表达期待】 1. With our effort, I’m sure my home will be better and better. 通过我们的努力，我相信我的家会越来越好。 2. If everyone does our best, our city will become more beautiful and many more visitors will choose to visit. 如果每个人都尽我们最大的努力，我们的城市将变得更加美丽，更多的游客会选择来参观。 3. The traditional culture not only shows people’s way of life, but also the love for their hometown. Let’s take action to protect the culture in our hometown. 传统文化不仅表现了人们的生活方式，也表现了他们对家乡的热爱。 让我们采取行动来保护家乡的文化吧。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1. East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝，不如自己的草窝。 2. A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village. 远亲不如近邻。 3. There is no place like home. 没有地方像家一样。 4. Everyone for environmental protection, environmental protection for everyone. 人人为环保，环保为人人。 5. Protect the environment, good health. 保护环境，有益健康。 6. Garbage away, beautiful stay. 垃圾带走，美丽存留。 7. To protect the environment is to cherish life. 保护环境就是爱惜生命。 8. Let the earth away from pollution, let the green into the home. 让地球远离污染，让绿色走进家园。 9. Save water, save life. 节约用水，拯救生命。 10. Plant a tree, grow a hope. 种一棵树，孕育一个希望。 ( 写作模板 ) Welcome to Hebei I’m _______ from ________. I’d like to recommend _________ to you. It lies in _________. The culture here is ______________. The people here are _________________. No matter what difficulty you meet, there will be someone to help you. The weather here is ___________, and here are four seasons: __________________________________________. There are also many places of interest in________, such as___________________. There you can _______________. I hope everyone can come to __________________ and enjoy the beautiful scenery and delicious food. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 命题形式 2025年 甘肃兰州 为小区写一篇英文宣传报道 材料作文 2024年 安徽芜湖 以 “What my hometown surprise me”主题征稿 材料作文 2023年 河南新乡 以 “My living place”为题写一篇英语短文投稿 材料作文 ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 英文有句谚语“East, west, home’s best”， 介绍你家的情况。内容包括： 你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系， 并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。 写作要求： （1）写作要点齐全， 并做适当发挥； （2）语句通顺， 意思连贯，语法正确； （3）文中不得出现题目以外的人名、校名或地名， 否则不子评分； （4）词数： 80词左右。 East, west, home, best ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 East, west, home’s best There is an old saying, “East, west, home’s best.” I live in a house in the countryside. There’s a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a washroom in it. There’re some trees and flowers around my house. The air is really clean. And I often hear birds singing. There’re four people in my family. They’re my parents, my sister and I. We’re helpful and friendly. And we always get on well with each other. I’m happy I have a good family. I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work. I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future. With our effort, I’m sure my home will be better and better. 【详解】题干解读：本题要求根据图表所提供的信息，介绍你家的情况：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好，可适当发挥。 写作指导：应用第一、三人称叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主，在谈到如何让你的家更美好使用一般将来时。短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，叙述要完整，语言要简洁，要介绍清楚居住的家和住在其中的家人，并由此展望如何建设美丽家园。 （2） 假定你是李平，你们学校下周将迎来一批意大利交换生，最近你收到了其中一位交换生David的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80词左右。 From: David To: Li Ping Dear Li Ping, In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school activities. I can't wait to set off! Since I will live in your home, could you tell me something about your neighborhood? Are there any interesting places to visit nearby? I would also like to know the weather in Hangzhou these days. What clothes should I take? Hope to hear from you soon. Love, David From: Li Ping To: David Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear David, I’m very glad that you will live with my family in Hangzhou. Now let me tell you something about my neighborhood. I live in a quiet neighborhood. There is a park across from my house. To get to the park, you just have to go across Center Street. When I play with my family and friends in the park, time goes quickly. It is a great place to have fun. You can also visit the science museum. There are many interesting robots in the museum. And you will never feel bored in the museum. It’s summer in Hangzhou now. The weather here is a little hot. So you can bring shorts and T-shirts with you. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】 1. 题干解读：文章属于书信作文，主要是给交换生David介绍自己所在的社区情况以及天气等，内容按照来信中提到的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第二人称相结合展开描述。主要是介绍社区环境及社区附近一些有趣的地方以及天气和衣着等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。 （3） 假设你是李华，随着越来越多的外国友人来到你的社区工作和生活。为了帮助他们更好地融入当地生活，你的社区发起“Community Introduction”活动，邀请大家用英语制作一份宣传手册，介绍社区的特色。请你围绕下图提示完成英文宣传稿。 注意： 1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、社区名称和学校名称； 3.词数80~100 (开头已给出，不计入总词数） 参考词汇：atmosphere n.氛围 A Great Community for You Welcome to our community! _______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Great Community for You Welcome to our community! Located in the heart of our city, it’s just a 5-minute walk from the nearest subway station, making travel around the city convenient. Nearby, there’s a large shopping mall where you can satisfy all your daily needs. Inside the community, there’s a big park with a lake, colorful flowers, and a playground for kids. In the morning, neighbors jog or do tai chi together. On holidays, we hold exciting events like International Food Fairs and Spring Festival Lantern Parties, which strengthen the bond among neighbors. The best part is our friendly atmosphere. Here, neighbors are more like friends. They’re always ready to offer a helping hand. You’ll surely feel at home and enjoy a colorful life in our community. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“欢迎来我们社区”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——休闲场所、活动、地理位置和人文氛围、邻里关系等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①friendly atmosphere友好的氛围 ②be ready to do sth.准备做某事 [高分句型] ①On holidays, we hold exciting events like International Food Fairs and Spring Festival Lantern Parties, which strengthen the bond among neighbors. (定语从句) （4） 俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighborhood” 的征文活动。假设你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下提示，完成一篇英语征稿。 要点： 1.社区的条件。 2.邻居。（邻居是什么样的人，他们是如何帮助别人的……） 3.你曾为邻居做过什么？举出一到两个例子。 4.你对社区的感情。 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Neighborhood My name is Li Lei . I live in Garden Neighborhood._____________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Neighborhood My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighborhood. It is a beautiful area with some tall buildings. I have some neighbors who are kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others. They help others by taking care of their pets and offering umbrellas on rainy days. I often help my neighbors when they need help. One day, one of my neighbors knocked at my door. He left his key at home. He wanted to use my phone to call his mother and I agreed. After he called his mother, I asked him to stay at home and wait for his mother. I love my neighborhood and I feel happy to live in my neighborhood. 【详解】题干解读：这是一篇命题作文。根据所给提示写一篇介绍邻居及对邻居的帮助的短文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。 例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态选用一般现在时和一般过去式；第一段介绍了自己所在的社区；第二段介绍邻居；第三段介绍自己帮助邻居做的事情；第四段就是总结。将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自己的观点态度。 高分亮点： 短语：a beautiful area with some tall buildings；be ready to；help others by doing；want to do等。 句型：I often help my neighbors when they need help.；After he called his mother, I asked him to stay at home and wait for his mother. （5） 英文有句谚语“East or west, home's best.”，某英文报以此为标题， 向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 There is an old saying, “East or west, home's best.”_______________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 There is an old saying, “East or west, home's best.” I live in a house in the countryside. There's a big living room, three bedrooms, a kitchen and a washroom in it. There’re some trees and flowers around my house. The air is really clean. And I often hear birds singing. There're four people in my family. They're my parents, my sister and I. We're helpful and friendly. And we always get on well with each other. I'm happy I have a good family. I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work. I'll study harder so that I can make more money in the future. With our effort, I'm sure my home will be better and better. 【详解】英文有句谚语“East or west, home's best.”，某英文报以此为标题， 向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。词数80左右。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】这篇短文条理清晰，层次清楚。文章语言简洁，表述清楚，既写了“家”，又写了“家人”，同时表明了“家人”建“家”的决心。重点突出，中心明确。 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$