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When Jayoe Crowder was in kindergarten,he began noticing that he koked differemt froen his
classmates.They hod two hands.But he hnd only one.
It started when ane boy teased him.Jayce was in a bad mood.He'd return home in Des Moines.
lowa,with questos Wby am I different?Why me?Why?"He aetually told us that he wi mad at
looking so different frum athera,"snid his mnther,Cortney Lewis."That really hurt him.
Lewis admitted sbe didn't know what to do at that point.How could she proride answers to her
son's questions when she had never jound those answrers herself?
A few weeks Later,Lewis came homme from her job and turned an the T'V to a sews story shout
Trashaun Willis.an eigbth grader irum Washington.lown,The boy.then 14.had become an Internet
star after posting videos of bis slam dunks )nnd,like Jayce.he was missing most of his left
arm.Lewis called Jayce in.He was shocked,staring at one dunk after another.
At the time,it seemed that watehing Trsashaun would simply be an inspiring moment for Jayre-
he'd see a shining role model with s aeemingly similar born disahility.And had it atayed just that.
Lewis would have been hoppy.But little did she know that a family friend had alresdy reached out to
the Des Moines Register,asking the newspaper to help set up a meeting with Trashaun to huild
Jayee's coefidence,
“t reaxaured me,“wid【.i说1k=ow in my heart that everting's going to be(K,Trashaun
has grown up to be a wonderful kid.And I know Jayce is too,"
Trashaun did get serious with Jayee.Finally,the boys met at Washington Middle Scbool on a
Saturday afternoon e couple of months later,in April 2017,and they inatantly bonded.
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The day was not spent on self-pity-it was really fun and unfurgettable
After the meeting.Jayce learned to aoeept his disabality.
(=)
He was n the firt third-grade class I tught at Saint Mary's chool All of my students were
dear to me,except Mark Fklund.He aften talked comstantly.I had to remind him agnin and again that
talking without permission was not acreptable.
One morning my patience was growing thin,and then I made a new teacber's mistake.I looked at
him,sing,"you say one more word.1m going to use tape to shut yuu up!"
It waan't ten seconda later when Chuck,anotber student,blurted,"Mark is talking again,"Since I
had stated the punishment.I had to act on it.I took a roll of tape out of my drawer.Withuut sayine a
word.I proceeded to Mark's desk,tore off two peeces of tape and made a big X uver his mouth.When
I walled beek to Mark's desk and removed the tape,his fiest words were,"Thank you fog correeting
mn,Sxer,“
One Friday,I asiced the students to list the names of the otber students,leaving a spare between
each name.Then I told them to write down the nicest thing they could sey about each of their
classmates.As they left.each one handed me the paper.
That Saturday.I wrote down the name of ench student and listed wbat everyone else had said
about that individual.On Mondsy 1 gave each stulent his oe her list.Before lang.the entire class was
amiling."Really?"I heard the whiapers."I never knew that meant anything to anyome!""I didn't know
others liked me so much!"The Mark sd"Thank you far teaching me,Siser."
Years later.after I returned from vacation,my pareats met me at the airport.My father cleared
his throat as he usually did before saying something important."The Eklunds called last night,"be
began."Really?"I said."I haven't heard from them in years.I wonder how Mark is."Dad tesponded
quietly,"Mark was killed in Vietnam."he said,"The funeral is tomorrow and his parunts would like
it if you could artend.
I had neves seen a serviceman in a military coffin hefore.Mark looked so handsoee,so matare.
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Aiter the funeral.Mark's mother and father found me.
Mark's classmates started to gather around us.
《
On a bright,warm July afternoon.Moc Hollan.a primary school teecher.was cycling from his
home o Alaska with his friends.One of his friends had sopped to make a bicye repair,but they had
noouraged Mac t世earry on and they would catch up with him soon,As Mac pedaled《骑t行》lang
alone,he thought fondly af his wife and wo young daughters shoe.He hoped toow them this
benutiful plaee soseday.
Then Mae beard qubek and loud breathing behind him."Man.that's a big dog!"he thought.But
wben he looked to the side.he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all.but a wolf.quickly catching up
with him
Mac's heart jumped.He found ou his can of bar spray.With ane hand on the hars.he fired the
apray at the wal,A bright rd dloud envelaped (the amiml,nd to Mae's relief,it fel haek,
ahaking its head.But a minute later,it was by his side tgain.Then it attacked the back of Mat's
bike.tering open his tent bag.He fired at the wolf a second time,andi fell back only to
quickly restart the chase).
Mac was pedaling hard now,He waved and yelled at passing cars hut was careful not to slow
down.He saw a ateep uphill dimh belare him.He knew that once be hit the hill,he'd be essily
eaught up and the wolf's teeth would be tesring into his flesh.
At this moment.Paul and Becky were driving their ear nn their way to Alaska.They didn't think
much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A hit later.they
spotted what they,too.assmed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer.
they renlized that the dogolf Msc hrard a arge vehicle behind him He pulled in fromt of it
ax the wolf was estching up fast.juxt a dozm yardx sway now.
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The car abruptly(奥答电)topped in Iront of him
A few minutes later.tbe otber cyclists arrived.
(因)
Years ago.in a small fishing village in Holland.s young boy taught the world aboot the rewards
of unselfish service.
Beeause the emtire village lived on fisbing,a volunteer rescue team was noeded in case nf
emengency.One night.the winds screaming.a fishing boat was tumed over by a strung storm at sea.
The crew(全体船员)in trouble sent out the S..S signals,The eeptain of the restue rowboat team
somnded the alarm()and the villagers gathered in the tawn square overlooking the ara,When
the team got on their rescue bost and foucht their way through the wild waves,the villagers waited
neryously on the beach,holding lamps()to light the way beek.
An hour later,the reseue bont reappesred through the fog and the cheering villagers ran tu
greet them Falling exhausted(精腹力w的)on the sand,the volunteers reported that the rescue boat
could not hold any mare pussengers and they had to leave cee man behind.Even one more passenger
wuuld have surely averturned the rusrue baat and nll the peaple on bourd would have been lowt.
Anxiously.the captain called for another volunteer team to look for the survivor.Sixteen-year-
ald Hans atepped forward.His mother held his arm,erying,"Plesse don't go.Your father died in a
shipwreek(失事的图)10 years ago and your el时hrother,Paul.has been lost at ses{or three week%
Hans,you are all I have leit."
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Hans Tepled,Moher.I have to go.
After what seemed a century,the rescue boat finally broke through the thoek fog.
《五)
"Surprise!"wras the first thing I heard when I opened the dooc.My femily and friends were all
smiling at me.There were colorful ballooes all over the house.a big poster saying "HAPPY
HIR'THDAY",and of cuurse s cake with 12 candles.It was s woederful fneling.I knmr that I had
finally turned twelve and I might possibly get the thing I wanted most.
I saw my mom and dad ecening towards me with e small box which seemed to be a birthday
present,When I opend the hos.I couldn't belime my e I had reallygoten a mobile phone!
Throwing myself into their arms.I let outacof joy,"Thank yo I love you guys!"
"You're weleoee,We knew this wes going to make you happy but we didn't only get you this
becnuse you turned twelve.but alan becauge yoo are doing well in schoal,We expect you tn keep
getting good grade线
"Of course Iwill,"I said confidently.
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Ax sooe aa I got to school the next mornin.I was showing off my phone and asking everyoee far
their number.It was cool how I got so many contacts on the first day.
It felt like I didn't even exist in that clasa anymore.I woaddn't pay much sitention to the
teachers because I was too busy on my phone.However,I didn't get caught using it.
Iam prmty sure that the tescher did notice that I stopped paying attention to her heeaseweek
later we took a test and I failed.What was worse,my morn had to sign the test.
It was hard to show my morn the test.Sbe was ased to seeing A's and B's on my tests Finally,
I showed it to ber,nd she couldn't helieve it.She was angry hut eoat of all,she was disappainted
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Realizing the rensun for my failare,my puremts started to dslilke the fart thst I had a phooe.
Then I started to wonder if I was wrong
《★》
Cold December windpsd fight thruugh my wor co.I might have wished be at home,but
thooe dags it wasn't much warmer there than i wus standing at the bus stop.Mama had written a
letter to the electric company explaining that we were late paying our ball because my sister was ill
and Daddy had beett hd off,but the pawer wax cut off anyway.That's why wu were on our way into
town to pay the bill in person.
I sat close to Buddy Farl for warmth an the hus when it finally showed up.The walk to the
eleetrie company office from the bas stop was only a couple of blocks,but it was a relief to get inside.
After settling the hill Mama brought us oner to Rirh's department store.There was Sants in a
big wooden chair."You two go talk to him,"she said."Jut don't expoet to get all you ask for,"Buddy
Earl and I joined the line of children waiting,and Mama sat on a bench nearby.
Then Sasta atarted talking with us and asked us what we wantrd.Santn renched in his pocket,
pulled out a notepad and scribbled something with a pencilsyourmoher withoo?"be asked.
I pointed to the bench."That's oar mams aver there.She's waiting for us to fimish."Santa lifted
Beddy Earl off his knee."Could you ask ber to come and talk to me?"he said.
Later.Mama and Santa talked for a few minutes.Sants took a couple more notes.Then Mama
brought us home.We ddn't dare to ask shout their private coeversation,(M Chzistmas morning
Mama and Daddy gatbered us around our tree to give thanks for all we had.There were no toys from
Santa under the tree.No presents at.all.really.But that was okay,epecially xince we had electricity
agsin.I felt pretty good as I took my seat at the kitehen table.
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Suddenly there wes a knoek at the door.
Mama and Daddy looked st each other.nd ahe umpacked the food from the bor.
(七)
One fall,my wile Elli and I had a single gunl:to photograph polar hears.We were staying at n
research camp outside"the polar bear.capital od the world"-the town of Churchill in Manitobo.
Cansda.
Taking pictures of polsr bears ie amazing hut also dangerous.Pular bears-like all wild
animals-should be photogrephed from a safe distance.When I'm face to face with a polar bear.I like
it to he through a eamern with a telephoto fens.But sometienes.that is easier said thaa done.This
was one of thnse times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner,young male polar bear who was playing in a pearby lake sniffed.
and amellod our garlie bred,
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp.which was sarrounded by a high wire fence.He
pelled and hit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pusbed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrifind,Elli and I tried all the bear defense nctions we knew,We yelled at the bear,hit pots
hard.and fired blank shosgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears ofl.
Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tesr down the fence with his massive pews (F).
I radined the camp manager for help.He told me n helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30
minutes before it arrived.Making the hest of this close enoounter),I took some pictures of the
bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutex of the bear'x punishment.The
camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears'eyes.but doesn't burt them.
So I appecoched our uninvited guest slowly and,through the femee,sprayed him in the face.With an
ngry ror佩叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his ey
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A few minutex later.the bear headed back to our earp.
At that very momemt.the helcopter arrived.
(八)
It was Late apeing when my morn and 1 were driving through the countryxide,Back them I was 13
years old and always felt unhappy with Momn.However,little did I know that this trip was going to
be a special one.
A pot of flowerx ast in ber back geat.whowe pleaant wmnell filled the car.Suddenly,in the middle
of nowhere.my mom pulled over."What are you doing?"I cried,fearing that the car hod broken down
and we'd be stock there,so far from boce.Fortunately,that wasn't the ease.My mom hopped out of
the cargrabbing the flowers from the hack seat,"It'll just he a minute."she called hack through the
open windows.
Impetiently,I esst my eye towards the edge of the rond before they settled cn a little sign
showing that it was a nursing home,I looked hack to the building.pomewhat annoyed,as my momn
reappeared empty-handed.
Befare she started the cur,curcaity drove me to tak,"Do you know someeane there?"She shook
her bend."Then what did you do with the flowers?"She smiled slightly."I gave them tn the
receptiois(前台接待员)."What?"She laughed at my confsn.“Itold the reeeptioeist to give the
flowers to whoever seded thmespeclly those who hven't received any in awhile.
I kept silent for s moeent.Not long after we went on with our driving,I spoke sgain,"Did you
leave your name?"To this she mnswered instantly,"No.Leaving flowers there for somrone who will
appreciate them makes me feel good.which is enough for me.
Suddemly,still thinking aboat Mom's deeds,I heard something hurat Loudly.It wes our eat that
broke down!Nothing cnuld be warse.because neither my morn nor I understood how to repair it,and
we didn't know where the garage was.It also seemed impossible to wait for any passerby,since we
hadl ser so few alon the way,
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I let out a sigh while Mum leaned agninst the car worrying about what could be done.
As we drove alang.a flower shop ewme into sight on the road.
(九}
Boys like to be considered to be brave,but what kind of things can be cansidered to be bruve?It
is not s yurstion that ran he amswrred by words,bat hy the actual deed.A bay with the name Henry
gave us a good example.Romnie and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played
together and went home togethet.One day as Ronnie and Henry were going home after achool,they
saw sme people fighting in the street comner,Ronnie said excitedly."Some poople are fighting!L.e's
go and have a look!"But Henry refused."It's none of our business.We'd better go home ind don't
get close to them.Also our perents are expeeting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't
want them to wurry about me,"
"You are a coward.and afmid to go."said Ronnie.and off he ran to the spot with some other
boys,Henty had to go home alone and didn't think about at anymore.
But Ronmie thought Henry was a coward and told all the buys that,They laughed at him s great
deal.Froo then on.they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.
Henry was sad hut he wasn't angry with Ronnie for his rude behavior,heesuse he had learned
that troe cournge was shown most in bearinz misunderstanding when it was not deserved.and that be
ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus.he just ignored the other boys'laughter and
continued to atick to his thought &nd go lo xchnal and study as well,However.Rcnnie didn't invite
Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead,he had his new friends wbo also thonght Henry was a
coward.Every day after school,they didn't go home direetly but went to the river oe soenewhere to
play games and hnd lots of fum
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A few days later.something terrible happened to Roanis.
At that moment.Henry happened to pess by.
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An 8.2-magnitude earthquake struck off the eoast of porther Chile late on Tuesday.cutting
power and leoding tos landslides and a tsunami.Four men and one woenan ded-two who
suffered heart attacks and three who were hed.About 300 prisoners escaped from the northern
poet city of Iquique in the immediste aftershock.
The qunke xtruck at about 8:46 p.m.local timn,womr 60 miles northrwrest of lquiqun.It had a
depth of 12.5 mie Chile's National Emergenry Office asked astal reaidemta to leave for aufe
places."The feet is,we will know the extent of the damage s time goes by and when we inspect
)the areas in the light of day."Chile's President Michelle Bachelet said carly on Wednesday."The
contry has faced these first emergency hours very well."
Residents in the port city of Antofngasta walked calmly through the streets to higher ground as
traffic became heavy in some places."Many people nre fearlul after experiencing the powerlul
carhquake in 2010,so they immedistely rshed to higher ground when they heard the isunsmi
warning."said a government offirial,"There have been lots of altershockes and communicstions have
been eut odf in many of the affeeted aress.So people are waiting in the dark hills,not knowing what is
to comeand hoping they will be able to return to their boees sfy."
The Pacibe Tsunami Warning Ceater sent out several tsunnmi warnings.but called off all of
them by early Wednesday.Tsunami waves of more than six:feet caused by the earthquake washed
sshore on the coast of Pisagus.Iquique.with a population of more than 200,000.saw seren-foot
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Meeting Bears in National Parks
Bears and humans often meet in national parks.Althoogh campers and hikers are warned not to
feed the bears.many people ignore these warnings and feed the beasts anyway.When bears are used
topeopes food,prublemsis
Bears like to eat a wide variety of thingssboth meat and wegrtahles,Without human assistance,
benrs live nieely en roots.twigs,lravex of troew,ingeets and amall anitalx.With peuple sround,the
beurs'uates quickly epand to isclude andwithes,bot dogs,hamburgersand anything else they cn
tempt humans to give up.
Bears often develop clever straegies for getting people to let go their food spplies.More often
than not unsusecing hiker has taken off his or her pack for a rest only to baveabear charge out
of the woods.grab the pack and quickly disapper into themderbrush with it.Hanging the pack on
tree branch won't help.Bears have been known to climb upjumpoffnd catch the pock n the way
down.One mother bear stretches up with her baby o her shoulder te reacha pack stored on s pole
Many beara thrn people,cn thm to give up thir aupplis Althaugh a bear is ulikely to
attack a person and would probably run away if sereamed at,few people are willing to do Must
people drop the pack and run the other way.This,of course,delights the beat.
In some pleces,the Park Service has installed some metal barrels with lids to help campers keep
their supplies safe from bears.Although the bears are unable to open these containers.the effort has
been less than successful.Most campers.ueble to tell the metal drums from rubbish cans.never use
them for the istended parpose.