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话题五 人与社会 助人为乐
助人为乐话题的读后续写是热考话题之一“赠人玫瑰,手有余香”,所以在帮助别人的同时,也愉悦了自己。2024年新课标卷为帮助、理解遇到支付困难的作者,歌颂诚实守信和爱心传递的美好品德。2020年新高考卷主题为卖爆米花帮助别人,传递了人间温情。
1.(2024·湖北黄冈模拟)I was truly blessed to have received help from my students,and I would always cherish their kindness as a reminder of the goodness in humanity.
我真的很幸运能得到学生们的帮助,我会永远珍惜他们的善良,作为我人性善良的提醒。
2.Acts of kindness,no matter how small they may seem,have the power to transform someone's day and even his life.
善举,无论看起来多么微不足道,都有改变一个人一天甚至一生的影响力。
3.Lending a helping hand to those in need is a powerful way to spread hope and positivity.
向有需要的人伸出援助之手是传播希望和积极的有力方式。
4.The true meaning of life lies in selflessly serving others and making a positive impact on their lives.
生活的真谛在于无私地为他人服务,并对他人的生活产生积极的影响。
5.The kindness of others truly touched my heart and inspired me to pass it down.他人的善良真的触动了我的内心,激励我把它传递下去。
6.Receiving help from others has taught me the value of community and the strength that comes from supporting one another.
接受他人的帮助教会了我社区的价值,以及相互支持所带来的力量。
7.I am moved by the generosity and kindness of those who have helped me,and I am determined to pass on that same love and support to others.
我被那些帮助过我的人的慷慨和善良所感动,我决心把同样的爱和支持传递给其他人。
8.As the old saying goes,“Roses given,fragrance in hand.”
常言道,赠人玫瑰,手留余香。
(2025·河北石家庄质量检测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Teachers are a gift,especially Troy's teacher,Donna.She always goes above and beyond for her students,but what she did for Troy's family is truly beyond selflessness but a miracle(奇迹).
Donna is one of those teachers who pay close attention to the students in their classroom.She began to notice something odd in one of her elementary students,Troy.He was not active in class like he had been.Troy used to be a passionate student in class,engaging with teachers and his friends.Being a helping hand to the teacher and classmates,Troy was always welcomed by everybody.However,he was all of a sudden so shut down and his behavior was simply not the same.He seemed to be silent all the time,and his eyes lost light of desire for knowledge and passion for any activities.Donna grew very concerned and wondered if there was something going on that affected his performance at school.So,she reached out to Troy's mom to express her concerns.
And that was when she discovered something wrong.For the past year,his mom had been in stagefive kidney(肾) failure.She was in pain every day and desperately needed a new kidney.But she had a rare blood type,so finding a match for a kidney transplant was virtually impossible.Her condition had been a very long and anxious journey.It had been so painful for the family,and it had definitely made an impact on Troy.And in class,he had been silently carrying the pain his mom was going through at home.
The news broke Donna's heart.She knew that she just had to do something.She was there as a loving friend to help Troy with his studies,but she was also there for his mom.Donna researched how to become a kidney donor and discovered that she had the same rare blood type as Troy's mom.She got tested and,surprisingly,she was a match.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
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When Donna told the news to Troy's family,everyone was surprised.
Soon the kidney transplant took place.
One possible version:
When Donna told the news to Troy's family,everyone was surprised.They could hardly believe that their beloved teacher was willing to go through such a personal sacrifice for them.This being a onceinalifetime opportunity for the mother,all the family couldn't thank Donna enough for her kindness and compassion.Troy's mother was deeply moved by Donna's selflessness and generosity,and at the same time,the prospect of healing brought renewed hope and joy into their lives,especially for Troy,who felt a glimmer of happiness return.
Soon the kidney transplant took place.The operation was a success,and Troy's mom began to recover with the new kidney functioning well.As she started to get healthier and more energetic,the family's burden was eased.Seeing his mother regain her strength,Troy felt spirits improved significantly. He became active in class once again,engaging eagerly with his peers and teachers.The change was evident in his bright eyes and enthusiastic participation.Donna's loving support not only impacted Troy's academic performance but also helped save his mother's life,forever changing the course of their family's journey.
【导语】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个关爱学生的老师Donna注意到她的学生Troy最近学习状态不好,她和家长沟通时发现Troy的妈妈患严重的肾病,需要肾源换肾才能活下去。Donna了解了相关知识,去做了配型检测,竟然配型成功了。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当Donna把这个消息告诉Troy的家人时,每个人都很惊讶。”可知,第一段可描写Troy一家人得知老师去做了配型检测并配型成功时的惊喜与感激。
②由第二段首句内容“很快,肾脏移植手术就进行了。”可知,第二段可描写手术结果很成功,Troy恢复了活泼积极的学习状态。
2.续写线索:惊喜—感恩—手术成功—恢复健康—Troy变得开朗—感恩老师的无私与爱。
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