Unit 2 Home Sweet Home（电子邮件）（单元同步写作讲义）英语人教版2024八年级上册

Unit 2 Home Sweet Home同步写作课讲义 本单元以“温馨之家”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此 类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①家庭生活中的温 暖氛围；②家庭生活中家务活的积极参与；③家 庭生活中的爱与感恩。通过对这一话题的写作练习，旨在让同学们用英语描述家庭生活的点滴，表达对家庭的热爱与感恩之情，同时提升运用英语进行日常交流和表达观点的能力。 教材写作任务 实例讲解1 假如你是Jimmy，你的好朋友Sam要搬进新居，他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识，回复邮件表达你的建议。 Hi, Jimmy, You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed afer school. What color should I paint the wall? What can make me feel energetic? Could you please offer me some advice? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Sam 要求：1.要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ； 2.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jimmy 写作分析 依据题目要求，写一封邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间的邮件，需包含装饰房间的背景、现有情况、计划、具体求助（可参考题目列举：buy some flowers 、make a poster 等 ）、时间地点约定，按邮件格式组织内容，完成有效沟通 。 本作文围绕 “邀请朋友协助装饰房间” 展开，聚焦日常人际交往与生活场景，需清晰传达房间装饰需求、计划及具体求助内容，展现合理沟通逻辑，让朋友明确任务，属于实用类邮件写作，贴近生活，考查语言实际运用与信息组织能力 。 写作要求 （一）内容要求 需涵盖房间现有情况（如布局、装饰现状等 ）、装饰计划（想调整的部分，像墙面颜色、装饰风格 ）、具体求助事项（如购买材料、制作装饰物件、现场协助等 ），以及约定时间、地点等关键信息，内容要完整、有条理。 （二）格式要求 遵循邮件格式，有 “To（收件人）”“Subject（主题）” ，正文包含称呼、内容、结束语、署名，格式规范才能体现邮件文体特征。 （三）语言要求 用简洁、清晰、礼貌的语言，因是邀请朋友帮忙，语气要得体，可适当用委婉表达（如 “Could you...?”“Would you mind...?” ），让沟通更自然亲切，同时准确运用词汇描述装饰相关动作、物品 。 写作框架 （一）开头（引入话题） 以亲切称呼开启（如 “Hi [Friend's Name],” ），简单寒暄或提及过往关联（像之前帮对方做过类似事、共同装饰经历 ），自然引出 “想装饰房间，希望朋友帮忙” 这一核心诉求，快速入题。示例：Hi Lily, We had so much fun decorating the school classroom together last time. Now, I'm planning to spruce up my bedroom and really need your help! （二）中间（展开内容） 描述房间现状：说明房间目前样子，比如 “My room walls are currently light blue, but there are some old posters that look messy. The desk is a bit cluttered too...” ，让朋友了解基础情况，为后续装饰需求做铺垫。 阐述装饰计划：讲清楚想怎么改，如 “I want to paint the walls light green to make it feel fresher. Also, I plan to hang some DIY paper - cuttings and a new poster above the bed...” ，明确方向，便于朋友配合。 罗列求助事项：分点或连贯表述具体需要朋友帮的忙，参考题目给定（或自行拓展 ）内容，像 “Could you help buy some colorful flowers to put on the windowsill? And bring a pair of scissors to make paper cuttings. Also, we can go shopping together to get glue and maybe a nice brush for painting...” ，清晰罗列，让朋友清楚任务。 约定细节：提及见面时间、地点，如 “Let's meet at the shopping mall at 10 a.m. this Sunday. We can get supplies first and then head to my place to start decorating.” ，让计划落地。 （三）结尾（收尾致谢） 表达期待朋友回应与感谢，如 “Please let me know if you can make it. Thanks a lot for your help! I'm sure we'll have a great time decorating.” ，用礼貌结束语（如 “Best,” ）和署名收尾，让邮件完整。 四、写作体材 属于实用类邮件，应用于日常朋友间沟通协助场景，目的是清晰传递装饰房间需求与求助，解决实际生活问题，语言需贴合日常交流，真实、自然、易懂 。 【精彩范文】 Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace to your mind and body. As a Grade 9 student, you always have much homework to do and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom. They can make the room full of life and make you feel energetic. Hope my advice will be of some help and you will enjoy your new life! Yours, Jimmy [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，给出关于卧室装修的详细建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①too much太多 ②had better do sth.最好做某事 ③full of充满 [高分句型] ①A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. (so连接的并列句，宾语从句) ②As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. (原因状语从句) 实例讲解2 假设你是李华，以 “我的温馨家庭” 为主题，写一封电子邮件给笔友Penpal，分享自己的家庭生活。 写作要求： 1采用电子邮件格式，包含收件人邮箱、主题、称呼、正文、结尾问候及署名。 2.正文需介绍家庭成员的日常行为和家庭活动，体现家庭的爱与幸福。 3.用词准确，句子通顺，字数不少于 80 字。 写作分析 写作体裁：应用文（电子邮件） 内容规范：需围绕 “家庭生活” 主题展开，可涉及家务分担、家庭活动、情感互动等具体场景，避免内容空洞。确保逻辑清晰，按照 “引入 - 主体 - 升华” 的结构布局，各部分衔接自然。细节描写需具体，通过动作、语言、环境等描写增强画面感，如描述妈妈做饭时可加入 “油锅里滋滋作响的声音” 等细节。 语言要求：正确使用第一人称与第三人称结合的叙述方式，第一人称用于自身感受表达，第三人称用于家人行为描述。 以一般现在时为主，若涉及回忆性内容可适当使用一般过去时，注意时态一致性。 准确运用本单元所学短语（如 clean the living room、have a family movie night）和句型（如 “My family and I often + 动词短语”），避免语法错误。 .开篇引入： 情感共鸣法：“There is no place like home. My home is the coziest place in the world, filled with love and laughter.” 直接点明家在心中无可替代的地位，引出对家庭生活的描述。 提问形式：“What does home mean to you? For me, it’s a place full of wonderful memories and warmth.” 激发读者兴趣，自然过渡到下文。 场景引入式：“As the evening falls, the warm light from my home window always makes me feel relaxed.”（当夜幕降临时，家里窗户透出的温暖灯光总让我感到放松。） 引用名言式：“East or west, home is best.” This saying perfectly describes how I feel about my home.（“金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。” 这句谚语完美诠释了我对家的感受。） 情感爆发式：“I can't imagine my life without the laughter and warmth that fill my home every day.”（我无法想象没有每天家中充满的笑声和温暖，我的生活会怎样。） 主体叙述：按照一定逻辑，分点描述家庭生活。 家务分担：“My mother is always busy with housework. She gets up early every morning to make breakfast for us. After that, she does the dishes and sweeps the floor.” 接着写爸爸，“My father often helps with heavier tasks. He takes out the rubbish and cleans the windows on weekends.” 最后提及自己，“As for me, I usually fold my clothes and tidy my room. Sometimes, I help water the plants in the balcony.” 家庭活动：“Every Saturday night, we gather in the living room to play board games, with everyone laughing loudly at the funny moves.”（每个周六晚上，我们聚集在客厅玩桌游，每个人都为有趣的举动大声欢笑。） 细节描写：“My mother skillfully cooks delicious dinner every day. She cuts the vegetables carefully and stir-fries them with a big smile on her face, filling the kitchen with warm smells.”（妈妈每天熟练地做美味晚餐，她仔细切菜，面带微笑翻炒，让厨房充满温暖香气。） 结尾升华： 总结家庭生活的意义：“In conclusion, my home is not just a building, but a place where love grows. I cherish every moment spent with my family here.” 抒发对家的热爱：“Home is where our story begins, and I am so lucky to have such a sweet home full of love and care.” 总结升华式：“In short, my home is not just a place to live, but a harbor where I can always find love and strength.”（总之，我的家不仅是居住的地方，更是我总能找到爱与力量的港湾。） 展望未来式：“I hope that even when I grow up, my home will still be the place where I can return to for warmth and happiness.”（我希望即使长大后，家仍将是我能回归获取温暖与幸福的地方。） 情感共鸣式：“How about your home? I'm sure it's also full of love and warmth like mine.”（你的家呢？我确信它也像我的家一样充满爱与温暖。） 写作步骤 1.确定邮件的收件人、主题和称呼。 2.思考要介绍的家庭成员及其日常，列出要点。 3.描述家庭活动，如周末的安排等。 4.组织语言，完成邮件正文，注意结尾的问候和署名。 5.检查邮件格式是否正确，内容是否符合要求，有无语法错误 写作框架 【精彩范文】 收件人：penpal@example.com 主题：My Sweet Home Dear Penpal, There is no place like home. My home is full of love and happiness. My mother is a kind-hearted woman. She is always busy with housework. Every morning, she gets up early to make a nutritious breakfast for us. After breakfast, she starts to wash the dishes and clean the rooms. She makes our home clean and comfortable. My father is a hard-working man. He works outside all day. But when he comes back home, he often helps my mother. He takes out the rubbish and sometimes helps with cooking. As for me, I usually do my homework first. Then I help fold the clothes. On weekends, we often have a family movie night. We sit on the sofa, eat popcorn, and enjoy the movie together. In a word, my home is the sweetest place in the world. I love my family and our happy home life. Looking forward to hearing about your family. Best wishes, LiHua [总体分析] 结构分析 开头段：采用情感共鸣式 + 名言引用开篇，以 "There is no place like home." 经典谚语切入，直接点明 “家充满爱与幸福” 的主题，符合写作框架中 “开门见山” 的要求。 主体段： 按照 “母亲 - 父亲 - 自己” 的顺序展开，符合 “家庭成员分工” 的叙述逻辑。 家务描述涵盖日常 chores（早餐、洗碗、打扫） 和周末活动（家庭电影夜），内容层次分明。 动作细节丰富，如 “gets up early to make breakfast”“wash the dishes and clean the rooms” 等，符合 “细节描写” 要求。 结尾段：用 “In a word” 总结升华，重申 “家是最甜蜜的地方”，呼应开头并强化主题。 语言亮点 词汇运用： 家务类词汇：wash the dishes, clean the rooms, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish，均为单元核心词汇。 情感词汇：kind-hearted, hard-working, happy life，准确表达家庭情感。 句型结构： 时间状语从句：“When he comes back home, he often helps my mother.” 并列结构：“We sit on the sofa, eat popcorn, and enjoy the movie together.” 体现动作连贯性。 时态与人称： 以一般现在时为主，描述日常行为；无时态冲突。 第一人称（I）与第三人称（my mother, my father）结合，符合写作要求。 细节分析 场景具体化：家庭电影夜的描写（sit on the sofa, eat popcorn）增强画面感，符合 “细节使文章生动” 的指导原则。 逻辑衔接：用 “But”“As for me”“Then” 等连接词过渡，使段落衔接自然。 实例讲解3 假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary来信询问你做家务的相关情况。请根据下列要点提示给她回复一封80~100词的电子邮件。 要点提示: 1. Do you often do housework? 2. What chores do you like or hate to do? Why? 3. Do you think children should do housework? Why? ［审题指导］ 1.体裁: 应用文 2. 人称: 以第一人称为主 3. 时态: 以一般现在时为主 写作框架设计 ［遣词造句］ 就结构图中的要点完成句子。 1.我经常扫地，擦桌子，浇花和叠衣服。 I often ________________, ____________________,________________ and fold the clothes. 2.当我自己做饭的时候，我很开心。 I will be happy when I cook a dish ____________. 3.我不喜欢刷碗，我认为它很无趣。 I hate to ______________________. I don’t think it is interesting. 4.我认为我们孩子应该做一些家务。 I think we children should __________________. 答案：1. sweep the floor; clean the table; water the flowers 2. by myself 3. do the dishes 4. do some housework 【精彩范文】 Dear Mary, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you about doing housework. I help my parents do housework almost every day. I often sweep the floor, clean the table, water the flowers and fold the clothes. I like to help my mother make meals very much. I will be happy when I cook a dish by myself. But I hate to do the dishes. I don’t think it is interesting. I think we children should do some housework. We can not only give our parents a hand but also learn a lot from it. Doing housework teaches us responsibility and helps us learn to take care of ourselves. Do you think so? Yours, Li Hua 【范文说明】 1. 结构清晰：开头直接表明写信目的；中间部分按照要点提示，先说明自己经常做家务，接着列举喜欢和讨厌做的家务，最后阐述对孩子做家务的看法及原因；结尾询问对方情况并期待回复。 1. 语言运用恰当：运用了本单元所学的做家务相关词汇，如 “sweep the floor”“clean the table”“do the dishes” 等，准确表达了做家务的内容。同时，使用了 “because”“however”“also” 等连接词，使文章逻辑连贯。在阐述观点时，“By doing housework, we can...” 等句型运用正确，表达清晰明了。 1. 内容完整：涵盖了题目所给的所有要点，且对每个要点都有适当的拓展，没有简单罗列，字数也符合要求。 词汇积累 相关短语 家务类：clean the living room（打扫客厅）、wash the clothes（洗衣服）、make the bed（整理床铺）、wipe the table（擦桌子）、sweep the floor（扫地）、do the dishes（洗碗） 家庭活动类：have a family movie night（有家庭电影之夜）、play badminton in the yard（在院子里打羽毛球）、have a family picnic（进行家庭野餐）、tell stories before bedtime（睡前讲故事）、watch TV together（一起看电视）、play board games（玩桌游） 情感表达类：love my family deeply（深深地爱我的家人）、feel warm at home（在家感到温暖）、cherish family time（珍惜家庭时光） 相关句型 “My family and I often + 动词短语，which makes us feel + 形容词.” 如 “My family and I often go for a walk after dinner, which makes us feel relaxed.” “There is always + 名词 + in my home.” 例如 “There is always a warm atmosphere in my home.” “I enjoy + 动词 ing 形式 + with my family because + 原因状语从句.” 像 “I enjoy doing housework with my family because it makes us closer.” 好句积累 1. 家务分担场景 My sister carefully folds the clothes while I sweep the floor, and we often chat about our school life during the work.（我姐姐仔细叠衣服，我扫地，我们经常在干活时聊学校生活。） Although taking out the rubbish is tiring, I feel proud when I see the clean kitchen.（虽然倒垃圾很累，但看到干净的厨房我就感到自豪。） 2. 家庭活动场景 During the family picnic last week, my father told us stories about his childhood, which made us understand him better.（在上周的家庭野餐中，爸爸给我们讲他的童年故事，让我们更了解他。） 3. 情感互动场景 When I feel sad, my mother always gives me a warm hug and says, "Everything will be okay."（当我难过时，妈妈总是给我一个温暖的拥抱，说：“一切都会好起来。”） My parents listen to my problems patiently and give me useful advice, which makes me feel supported.（父母耐心听我倾诉问题并给我有用建议，让我感到被支持。） 句式积累 开头句 1. 开门见山式：直接点明写作主题，如 “I often do housework at home. Today, I want to tell you about my experience of cleaning the house.（我经常在家做家务。今天，我想和你讲讲我打扫房子的经历。）” 1. 引用谚语式：引用与家庭相关的谚语，如 “As the saying goes, ‘There's no place like home.’ My home is full of love and warmth, and I often do something to make it more comfortable.（俗话说，‘金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。’我的家充满爱与温暖，我经常做些事情让它更舒适。）” 1. 提问式：通过提问引起读者兴趣，如 “Are you helpful at home? What kind of housework do you usually do? I would like to share my story with you.（你在家帮忙做家务吗？你通常做哪种家务？我想和你分享我的故事。）” 中间句 1. 描述具体事件或活动：按照一定顺序（如时间顺序）详细描述做家务或家庭活动的过程。例如写家庭大扫除，“First, we made a plan. My father was responsible for cleaning the windows, my mother would clean the bathroom, and I was in charge of sweeping the floor. Then, we started to work. I swept every corner of the rooms carefully, while my parents were busy with their tasks.（首先，我们制定了一个计划。我爸爸负责擦窗户，我妈妈打扫浴室，我负责扫地。然后，我们开始工作。我仔细地清扫房间的每个角落，而我的父母则忙于他们的任务。）” 1. 加入细节描写：运用动作描写、语言描写、心理描写等使文章更生动。如动作描写 “He helped us pull the heavy luggage into the house.（他帮我们把沉重的行李拖进屋里。）”；语言描写 “‘Ah, home again!’ said Mum with a smile.（‘啊，又回家了！’妈妈微笑着说。）”；心理描写 “I felt so warm and happy to see all my family together.（看到全家人聚在一起，我感到非常温暖和开心。）” 1. 阐述观点或感受：在描述过程中适时阐述自己对做家务或家庭活动的观点、感受。如 “I think doing housework together can make our family closer. During the cleaning, we talked and laughed, sharing our daily stories.（我认为一起做家务可以让我们的家庭关系更亲密。在打扫过程中，我们有说有笑，分享着日常的故事。）” 结尾句 1. 总结收获式：总结通过做家务或家庭活动所获得的收获。如 “From this housework experience, I not only learned how to clean the house, but also understood the importance of sharing the housework with my family. It made our home more harmonious.（从这次做家务的经历中，我不仅学会了如何打扫房子，还明白了和家人分担家务的重要性。这让我们的家更加和谐。）” 1. 展望未来式：表达对未来家庭生活的期望。如 “I hope we can have more such meaningful family activities in the future, making our home full of more laughter and love.（我希望未来我们能有更多这样有意义的家庭活动，让我们的家充满更多的欢笑和爱。）” 1. 再次强调主题式：再次强调家庭的重要性或对家庭的热爱。如 “Home is not just a building. It's where our hearts belong. I will always cherish every moment with my family and do my part to keep our home sweet.（家不仅仅是一座建筑。它是我们心灵的归属。我将永远珍惜和家人在一起的每一刻，尽我所能让我们的家温馨甜蜜。）” 谚语积累 1. East or west, home is best.（东好西好，还是家里最好。） 1. There's no place like home.（金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。） 1. A happy family is but an earlier heaven.（幸福的家庭是提前到来的天堂。） 1. Home is the place where, when you have to go there, it has to take you in.（无论何时何地家永远是向游子敞开大门的地方。） 写作模板 情感共鸣式 There is no place like home. My home is filled with _______ (warmth/love/laughter) and has been the sweetest shelter in my life. 提问式 What does "home" mean to you? For me, it is not just a building, but a place where _______ (family love gathers/wonderful memories are made). 名言引用式 As the saying goes, "East or west, home is best." My home truly embodies this idea, as it is always full of _______ (warmth and happiness). 主体段 1（家庭生活描述） 角度一：家务分工 My mother often _______ (does the dishes/cleans the room) and makes our home comfortable. My father usually helps with _______ (taking out the rubbish/repairing things) when he is free. As for me, I enjoy _______ (folding clothes/watering plants) and _______ (sharing stories with family) while doing chores. 角度二：家庭活动 Every _______ (weekend/holiday), my family and I _______ (have a movie night/play board games) together. During the activity, we _______ (laugh/talk/share snacks), and it makes us feel _______ (relaxed/connected). 角度三：情感互动 When I _______ (feel sad/face difficulties), my family always _______ (gives me a hug/encourages me), saying "_______ (encouraging words)". I am grateful for _______ (their support/love), which makes me _______ (stronger/happier). 主体段 2（细节描写与拓展） 动作细节： My mother skillfully _______ (cooks dinner/waters flowers), _______ (cutting vegetables carefully/smiling while working), and the _______ (smell/sound) fills the house. 场景拓展： Last _______ (weekend/holiday), we _______ (decorated the house/had a picnic), and _______ (a specific event, e.g., "my father told us funny stories"). It made me realize _______ (the importance of family time). 结尾段（升华主题） 总结感受 In a word, my home is _______ (the sweetest place in the world), and I _______ (love my family/cherish every moment here) deeply. 展望未来 I hope we can _______ (have more family activities/keep our home warm) forever, as home is where _______ (love and happiness last). 情感共鸣 Home is not just a place to live, but _______ (a harbor of love). I believe everyone has a sweet home, and _______ (sharing housework/treasuring family) makes it more wonderful. 考情分析 年份 地区 试卷简称 话题聚焦 命题形式 词数要求 2024 浙江温州 中考英语 与父母共同完成家务的经历与感受 文字提示 + 写作要点 90 词左右 2024 四川成都 中考英语 记录一次家人互助的温暖瞬间 图片（四格漫画）作文 100-120 词 2023 江苏苏州 中考英语 “Family Love”——写一件体现家庭之爱的小事 文字提纲作文 100 词左右 2023 山东青岛 中考英语 向外国笔友介绍中国孩子日常家务现状 书信（应用文） 不少于 80 词 2022 福建 中考英语 感恩父母：回忆一次被理解或帮助的经历 文字提示 + 思维导图 100 词左右 2022 湖南长沙 中考英语 描述“最温暖的一顿饭”的家庭场景 图画作文（单幅情景图） 90-110 词 单元写作拓展 1. 俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每 一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，老师开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合图片，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊 English Learning 投稿。 要求： (1) 短文须包括所 给要点信息，可适当发挥；    (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名以及地名； (3) 词数 80 左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总 词数)。 In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.__________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.作为一名中学生，在学习之余，我们也需要做一些劳动。一方面，锻炼我们的生活自理能力；另 一方面，也可以帮助父母减轻负担。请你根据提示及要求，以“Let’s do chores!”为题，写一篇英文 倡导书，呼吁大家多做家务。 提示： 1.分担家务可以让父母多一点休息时间；     2.作为家庭的一份子，我们应该做一些家务； 3.可以做一些简单的如整理床铺、洗衣服、洗碗、倒垃圾等家务。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 请你以 “A Special Birthday Gift（一份特殊的生日礼物）” 为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，讲述你在父（母）亲或其他长辈生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日礼物：家务劳动。 内容包括： 1. 做家务的理由； 1. 做家务的过程（扫地、打扫厕所、收拾衣服等）； 1. 你的感受。 注意：词数 80 左右，开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 家是我们心灵的港湾，成长的摇篮，为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆，红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动，希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事（如分担家务，陪伴家人等）并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示，写文章参与此征文活动。 要求：1．80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2．书写规范，内容连贯，文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。 参考要点： Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired… Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills… Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy… Love Family, Be Helpful Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 劳动创造美好生活。每个人都可以从劳动中收获珍贵的回忆。作为一名初中生，在学习之余，承担起家务劳动，有助于提升自己的生活能力。请大家以“Labor is the Key of Happiness”为题，讲述一次自己做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。 写作要求如下： （1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数70词左右； （2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 假设你是李辉，你校英语社团正在开展以“Doing housework makes me _________”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。 要点提示： （1） What kind of housework do you often do at home? （2） Why do you do it? 写作要求： （1）词数80-100，标题已给出，不计入总词数； （2）内容应包括所有要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不得出现任何真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。 Doing housework makes me _________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 随着社会的变化，越来越多的人认为中学生应当掌握基本的生活技能，如洗衣、做饭、打扫卫生、修理等。你是第一中学的学生，你的学校将要举行主题为 “More Skills, Better Life” 的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题，写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 你掌握了哪种生活技能？你是如何学到的？ 2. 为什么中学生应当学会基本的生活技能？列举两个理由。 3. 呼吁中学生多学生活技能，快乐生活。 提示词：independence n. 独立； improve v. 提高； life skills 生活技能 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，书写工整，词数80词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 More Skills, Better Life Good morning, dear all. I am happy to give a talk today. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 假如你是李鹏，你校学生会正在积极开展“我劳动、我学习、我快乐”的主题活动，希望能以此让大家认识到家务劳动的重要性和必要性。请你根据以下要点提示，以“Do Housework Together!”为题，用英语写一篇文章。 What kind of housework do you plan to do? How often will you do housework? What do you think of doing housework? 要求： 1. 需包括提示中所有的写作要点； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 3. 文章中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息； 4. 词数：不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Do Housework Together! Doing housework is not our parents’ duty, and we should do housework together. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, doing housework is helpful to my family as well as my personal growth. 7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Home Sweet Home同步写作课讲义 本单元以“温馨之家”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此 类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①家庭生活中的温 暖氛围；②家庭生活中家务活的积极参与；③家 庭生活中的爱与感恩。通过对这一话题的写作练习，旨在让同学们用英语描述家庭生活的点滴，表达对家庭的热爱与感恩之情，同时提升运用英语进行日常交流和表达观点的能力。 教材写作任务 实例讲解1 假如你是Jimmy，你的好朋友Sam要搬进新居，他想向你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识，回复邮件表达你的建议。 Hi, Jimmy, You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed afer school. What color should I paint the wall? What can make me feel energetic? Could you please offer me some advice? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Sam 要求：1.要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ； 2.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jimmy 写作分析 依据题目要求，写一封邀请朋友帮忙装饰房间的邮件，需包含装饰房间的背景、现有情况、计划、具体求助（可参考题目列举：buy some flowers 、make a poster 等 ）、时间地点约定，按邮件格式组织内容，完成有效沟通 。 本作文围绕 “邀请朋友协助装饰房间” 展开，聚焦日常人际交往与生活场景，需清晰传达房间装饰需求、计划及具体求助内容，展现合理沟通逻辑，让朋友明确任务，属于实用类邮件写作，贴近生活，考查语言实际运用与信息组织能力 。 写作要求 （一）内容要求 需涵盖房间现有情况（如布局、装饰现状等 ）、装饰计划（想调整的部分，像墙面颜色、装饰风格 ）、具体求助事项（如购买材料、制作装饰物件、现场协助等 ），以及约定时间、地点等关键信息，内容要完整、有条理。 （二）格式要求 遵循邮件格式，有 “To（收件人）”“Subject（主题）” ，正文包含称呼、内容、结束语、署名，格式规范才能体现邮件文体特征。 （三）语言要求 用简洁、清晰、礼貌的语言，因是邀请朋友帮忙，语气要得体，可适当用委婉表达（如 “Could you...?”“Would you mind...?” ），让沟通更自然亲切，同时准确运用词汇描述装饰相关动作、物品 。 写作框架 （一）开头（引入话题） 以亲切称呼开启（如 “Hi [Friend's Name],” ），简单寒暄或提及过往关联（像之前帮对方做过类似事、共同装饰经历 ），自然引出 “想装饰房间，希望朋友帮忙” 这一核心诉求，快速入题。示例：Hi Lily, We had so much fun decorating the school classroom together last time. Now, I'm planning to spruce up my bedroom and really need your help! （二）中间（展开内容） 描述房间现状：说明房间目前样子，比如 “My room walls are currently light blue, but there are some old posters that look messy. The desk is a bit cluttered too...” ，让朋友了解基础情况，为后续装饰需求做铺垫。 阐述装饰计划：讲清楚想怎么改，如 “I want to paint the walls light green to make it feel fresher. Also, I plan to hang some DIY paper - cuttings and a new poster above the bed...” ，明确方向，便于朋友配合。 罗列求助事项：分点或连贯表述具体需要朋友帮的忙，参考题目给定（或自行拓展 ）内容，像 “Could you help buy some colorful flowers to put on the windowsill? And bring a pair of scissors to make paper cuttings. Also, we can go shopping together to get glue and maybe a nice brush for painting...” ，清晰罗列，让朋友清楚任务。 约定细节：提及见面时间、地点，如 “Let's meet at the shopping mall at 10 a.m. this Sunday. We can get supplies first and then head to my place to start decorating.” ，让计划落地。 （三）结尾（收尾致谢） 表达期待朋友回应与感谢，如 “Please let me know if you can make it. Thanks a lot for your help! I'm sure we'll have a great time decorating.” ，用礼貌结束语（如 “Best,” ）和署名收尾，让邮件完整。 四、写作体材 属于实用类邮件，应用于日常朋友间沟通协助场景，目的是清晰传递装饰房间需求与求助，解决实际生活问题，语言需贴合日常交流，真实、自然、易懂 。 【精彩范文】 Dear Sam, I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom. A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace to your mind and body. As a Grade 9 student, you always have much homework to do and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom. They can make the room full of life and make you feel energetic. Hope my advice will be of some help and you will enjoy your new life! Yours, Jimmy [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，给出关于卧室装修的详细建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①too much太多 ②had better do sth.最好做某事 ③full of充满 [高分句型] ①A bedroom should make you feel relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. (so连接的并列句，宾语从句) ②As too much homework and too many exams make you feel tired easily, you need energetic colours in the bedroom. (原因状语从句) 实例讲解2 假设你是李华，以 “我的温馨家庭” 为主题，写一封电子邮件给笔友Penpal，分享自己的家庭生活。 写作要求： 1采用电子邮件格式，包含收件人邮箱、主题、称呼、正文、结尾问候及署名。 2.正文需介绍家庭成员的日常行为和家庭活动，体现家庭的爱与幸福。 3.用词准确，句子通顺，字数不少于 80 字。 写作分析 写作体裁：应用文（电子邮件） 内容规范：需围绕 “家庭生活” 主题展开，可涉及家务分担、家庭活动、情感互动等具体场景，避免内容空洞。确保逻辑清晰，按照 “引入 - 主体 - 升华” 的结构布局，各部分衔接自然。细节描写需具体，通过动作、语言、环境等描写增强画面感，如描述妈妈做饭时可加入 “油锅里滋滋作响的声音” 等细节。 语言要求：正确使用第一人称与第三人称结合的叙述方式，第一人称用于自身感受表达，第三人称用于家人行为描述。 以一般现在时为主，若涉及回忆性内容可适当使用一般过去时，注意时态一致性。 准确运用本单元所学短语（如 clean the living room、have a family movie night）和句型（如 “My family and I often + 动词短语”），避免语法错误。 开篇引入： 情感共鸣法：“There is no place like home. My home is the coziest place in the world, filled with love and laughter.” 直接点明家在心中无可替代的地位，引出对家庭生活的描述。 提问形式：“What does home mean to you? For me, it’s a place full of wonderful memories and warmth.” 激发读者兴趣，自然过渡到下文。 场景引入式：“As the evening falls, the warm light from my home window always makes me feel relaxed.”（当夜幕降临时，家里窗户透出的温暖灯光总让我感到放松。） 引用名言式：“East or west, home is best.” This saying perfectly describes how I feel about my home.（“金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。” 这句谚语完美诠释了我对家的感受。） 情感爆发式：“I can't imagine my life without the laughter and warmth that fill my home every day.”（我无法想象没有每天家中充满的笑声和温暖，我的生活会怎样。） 主体叙述：按照一定逻辑，分点描述家庭生活。 家务分担：“My mother is always busy with housework. She gets up early every morning to make breakfast for us. After that, she does the dishes and sweeps the floor.” 接着写爸爸，“My father often helps with heavier tasks. He takes out the rubbish and cleans the windows on weekends.” 最后提及自己，“As for me, I usually fold my clothes and tidy my room. Sometimes, I help water the plants in the balcony.” 家庭活动：“Every Saturday night, we gather in the living room to play board games, with everyone laughing loudly at the funny moves.”（每个周六晚上，我们聚集在客厅玩桌游，每个人都为有趣的举动大声欢笑。） 细节描写：“My mother skillfully cooks delicious dinner every day. She cuts the vegetables carefully and stir-fries them with a big smile on her face, filling the kitchen with warm smells.”（妈妈每天熟练地做美味晚餐，她仔细切菜，面带微笑翻炒，让厨房充满温暖香气。） 结尾升华： 总结家庭生活的意义：“In conclusion, my home is not just a building, but a place where love grows. I cherish every moment spent with my family here.” 抒发对家的热爱：“Home is where our story begins, and I am so lucky to have such a sweet home full of love and care.” 总结升华式：“In short, my home is not just a place to live, but a harbor where I can always find love and strength.”（总之，我的家不仅是居住的地方，更是我总能找到爱与力量的港湾。） 展望未来式：“I hope that even when I grow up, my home will still be the place where I can return to for warmth and happiness.”（我希望即使长大后，家仍将是我能回归获取温暖与幸福的地方。） 情感共鸣式：“How about your home? I'm sure it's also full of love and warmth like mine.”（你的家呢？我确信它也像我的家一样充满爱与温暖。） 写作步骤 1.确定邮件的收件人、主题和称呼。 2.思考要介绍的家庭成员及其日常，列出要点。 3.描述家庭活动，如周末的安排等。 4.组织语言，完成邮件正文，注意结尾的问候和署名。 5.检查邮件格式是否正确，内容是否符合要求，有无语法错误 写作框架 【精彩范文】 收件人：penpal@example.com 主题：My Sweet Home Dear Penpal, There is no place like home. My home is full of love and happiness. My mother is a kind-hearted woman. She is always busy with housework. Every morning, she gets up early to make a nutritious breakfast for us. After breakfast, she starts to wash the dishes and clean the rooms. She makes our home clean and comfortable. My father is a hard-working man. He works outside all day. But when he comes back home, he often helps my mother. He takes out the rubbish and sometimes helps with cooking. As for me, I usually do my homework first. Then I help fold the clothes. On weekends, we often have a family movie night. We sit on the sofa, eat popcorn, and enjoy the movie together. In a word, my home is the sweetest place in the world. I love my family and our happy home life. Looking forward to hearing about your family. Best wishes, LiHua [总体分析] 结构分析 开头段：采用情感共鸣式 + 名言引用开篇，以 "There is no place like home." 经典谚语切入，直接点明 “家充满爱与幸福” 的主题，符合写作框架中 “开门见山” 的要求。 主体段： 按照 “母亲 - 父亲 - 自己” 的顺序展开，符合 “家庭成员分工” 的叙述逻辑。 家务描述涵盖日常 chores（早餐、洗碗、打扫） 和周末活动（家庭电影夜），内容层次分明。 动作细节丰富，如 “gets up early to make breakfast”“wash the dishes and clean the rooms” 等，符合 “细节描写” 要求。 结尾段：用 “In a word” 总结升华，重申 “家是最甜蜜的地方”，呼应开头并强化主题。 语言亮点 词汇运用： 家务类词汇：wash the dishes, clean the rooms, fold the clothes, take out the rubbish，均为单元核心词汇。 情感词汇：kind-hearted, hard-working, happy life，准确表达家庭情感。 句型结构： 时间状语从句：“When he comes back home, he often helps my mother.” 并列结构：“We sit on the sofa, eat popcorn, and enjoy the movie together.” 体现动作连贯性。 时态与人称： 以一般现在时为主，描述日常行为；无时态冲突。 第一人称（I）与第三人称（my mother, my father）结合，符合写作要求。 细节分析 场景具体化：家庭电影夜的描写（sit on the sofa, eat popcorn）增强画面感，符合 “细节使文章生动” 的指导原则。 逻辑衔接：用 “But”“As for me”“Then” 等连接词过渡，使段落衔接自然。 实例讲解3 假如你是李华，你的笔友Mary来信询问你做家务的相关情况。请根据下列要点提示给她回复一封80~100词的电子邮件。 要点提示: 1. Do you often do housework? 2. What chores do you like or hate to do? Why? 3. Do you think children should do housework? Why? ［审题指导］ 1.体裁: 应用文 2. 人称: 以第一人称为主 3. 时态: 以一般现在时为主 写作框架设计 ［遣词造句］ 就结构图中的要点完成句子。 1.我经常扫地，擦桌子，浇花和叠衣服。 I often ________________, ____________________,________________ and fold the clothes. 2.当我自己做饭的时候，我很开心。 I will be happy when I cook a dish ____________. 3.我不喜欢刷碗，我认为它很无趣。 I hate to ______________________. I don’t think it is interesting. 4.我认为我们孩子应该做一些家务。 I think we children should __________________. 答案：1. sweep the floor; clean the table; water the flowers 2. by myself 3. do the dishes 4. do some housework 【精彩范文】 Dear Mary, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you about doing housework. I help my parents do housework almost every day. I often sweep the floor, clean the table, water the flowers and fold the clothes. I like to help my mother make meals very much. I will be happy when I cook a dish by myself. But I hate to do the dishes. I don’t think it is interesting. I think we children should do some housework. We can not only give our parents a hand but also learn a lot from it. Doing housework teaches us responsibility and helps us learn to take care of ourselves. Do you think so? Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] 1. 结构清晰：开头直接表明写信目的；中间部分按照要点提示，先说明自己经常做家务，接着列举喜欢和讨厌做的家务，最后阐述对孩子做家务的看法及原因；结尾询问对方情况并期待回复。 1. 语言运用恰当：运用了本单元所学的做家务相关词汇，如 “sweep the floor”“clean the table”“do the dishes” 等，准确表达了做家务的内容。同时，使用了 “because”“however”“also” 等连接词，使文章逻辑连贯。在阐述观点时，“By doing housework, we can...” 等句型运用正确，表达清晰明了。 1. 内容完整：涵盖了题目所给的所有要点，且对每个要点都有适当的拓展，没有简单罗列，字数也符合要求。 词汇积累 相关短语 家务类：clean the living room（打扫客厅）、wash the clothes（洗衣服）、make the bed（整理床铺）、wipe the table（擦桌子）、sweep the floor（扫地）、do the dishes（洗碗） 家庭活动类：have a family movie night（有家庭电影之夜）、play badminton in the yard（在院子里打羽毛球）、have a family picnic（进行家庭野餐）、tell stories before bedtime（睡前讲故事）、watch TV together（一起看电视）、play board games（玩桌游） 情感表达类：love my family deeply（深深地爱我的家人）、feel warm at home（在家感到温暖）、cherish family time（珍惜家庭时光） 相关句型 “My family and I often + 动词短语，which makes us feel + 形容词.” 如 “My family and I often go for a walk after dinner, which makes us feel relaxed.” “There is always + 名词 + in my home.” 例如 “There is always a warm atmosphere in my home.” “I enjoy + 动词 ing 形式 + with my family because + 原因状语从句.” 像 “I enjoy doing housework with my family because it makes us closer.” 好句积累 1. 家务分担场景 My sister carefully folds the clothes while I sweep the floor, and we often chat about our school life during the work.（我姐姐仔细叠衣服，我扫地，我们经常在干活时聊学校生活。） Although taking out the rubbish is tiring, I feel proud when I see the clean kitchen.（虽然倒垃圾很累，但看到干净的厨房我就感到自豪。） 2. 家庭活动场景 During the family picnic last week, my father told us stories about his childhood, which made us understand him better.（在上周的家庭野餐中，爸爸给我们讲他的童年故事，让我们更了解他。） 3. 情感互动场景 When I feel sad, my mother always gives me a warm hug and says, "Everything will be okay."（当我难过时，妈妈总是给我一个温暖的拥抱，说：“一切都会好起来。”） My parents listen to my problems patiently and give me useful advice, which makes me feel supported.（父母耐心听我倾诉问题并给我有用建议，让我感到被支持。） 句式积累 开头句 1. 开门见山式：直接点明写作主题，如 “I often do housework at home. Today, I want to tell you about my experience of cleaning the house.（我经常在家做家务。今天，我想和你讲讲我打扫房子的经历。）” 1. 引用谚语式：引用与家庭相关的谚语，如 “As the saying goes, ‘There's no place like home.’ My home is full of love and warmth, and I often do something to make it more comfortable.（俗话说，‘金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。’我的家充满爱与温暖，我经常做些事情让它更舒适。）” 1. 提问式：通过提问引起读者兴趣，如 “Are you helpful at home? What kind of housework do you usually do? I would like to share my story with you.（你在家帮忙做家务吗？你通常做哪种家务？我想和你分享我的故事。）” 中间句 1. 描述具体事件或活动：按照一定顺序（如时间顺序）详细描述做家务或家庭活动的过程。例如写家庭大扫除，“First, we made a plan. My father was responsible for cleaning the windows, my mother would clean the bathroom, and I was in charge of sweeping the floor. Then, we started to work. I swept every corner of the rooms carefully, while my parents were busy with their tasks.（首先，我们制定了一个计划。我爸爸负责擦窗户，我妈妈打扫浴室，我负责扫地。然后，我们开始工作。我仔细地清扫房间的每个角落，而我的父母则忙于他们的任务。）” 1. 加入细节描写：运用动作描写、语言描写、心理描写等使文章更生动。如动作描写 “He helped us pull the heavy luggage into the house.（他帮我们把沉重的行李拖进屋里。）”；语言描写 “‘Ah, home again!’ said Mum with a smile.（‘啊，又回家了！’妈妈微笑着说。）”；心理描写 “I felt so warm and happy to see all my family together.（看到全家人聚在一起，我感到非常温暖和开心。）” 1. 阐述观点或感受：在描述过程中适时阐述自己对做家务或家庭活动的观点、感受。如 “I think doing housework together can make our family closer. During the cleaning, we talked and laughed, sharing our daily stories.（我认为一起做家务可以让我们的家庭关系更亲密。在打扫过程中，我们有说有笑，分享着日常的故事。）” 结尾句 1. 总结收获式：总结通过做家务或家庭活动所获得的收获。如 “From this housework experience, I not only learned how to clean the house, but also understood the importance of sharing the housework with my family. It made our home more harmonious.（从这次做家务的经历中，我不仅学会了如何打扫房子，还明白了和家人分担家务的重要性。这让我们的家更加和谐。）” 1. 展望未来式：表达对未来家庭生活的期望。如 “I hope we can have more such meaningful family activities in the future, making our home full of more laughter and love.（我希望未来我们能有更多这样有意义的家庭活动，让我们的家充满更多的欢笑和爱。）” 1. 再次强调主题式：再次强调家庭的重要性或对家庭的热爱。如 “Home is not just a building. It's where our hearts belong. I will always cherish every moment with my family and do my part to keep our home sweet.（家不仅仅是一座建筑。它是我们心灵的归属。我将永远珍惜和家人在一起的每一刻，尽我所能让我们的家温馨甜蜜。）” 谚语积累 1. East or west, home is best.（东好西好，还是家里最好。） 1. There's no place like home.（金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。） 1. A happy family is but an earlier heaven.（幸福的家庭是提前到来的天堂。） 1. Home is the place where, when you have to go there, it has to take you in.（无论何时何地家永远是向游子敞开大门的地方。） 写作模板 情感共鸣式 There is no place like home. My home is filled with _______ (warmth/love/laughter) and has been the sweetest shelter in my life. 提问式 What does "home" mean to you? For me, it is not just a building, but a place where _______ (family love gathers/wonderful memories are made). 名言引用式 As the saying goes, "East or west, home is best." My home truly embodies this idea, as it is always full of _______ (warmth and happiness). 主体段 1（家庭生活描述） 角度一：家务分工 My mother often _______ (does the dishes/cleans the room) and makes our home comfortable. My father usually helps with _______ (taking out the rubbish/repairing things) when he is free. As for me, I enjoy _______ (folding clothes/watering plants) and _______ (sharing stories with family) while doing chores. 角度二：家庭活动 Every _______ (weekend/holiday), my family and I _______ (have a movie night/play board games) together. During the activity, we _______ (laugh/talk/share snacks), and it makes us feel _______ (relaxed/connected). 角度三：情感互动 When I _______ (feel sad/face difficulties), my family always _______ (gives me a hug/encourages me), saying "_______ (encouraging words)". I am grateful for _______ (their support/love), which makes me _______ (stronger/happier). 主体段 2（细节描写与拓展） 动作细节： My mother skillfully _______ (cooks dinner/waters flowers), _______ (cutting vegetables carefully/smiling while working), and the _______ (smell/sound) fills the house. 场景拓展： Last _______ (weekend/holiday), we _______ (decorated the house/had a picnic), and _______ (a specific event, e.g., "my father told us funny stories"). It made me realize _______ (the importance of family time). 结尾段（升华主题） 总结感受 In a word, my home is _______ (the sweetest place in the world), and I _______ (love my family/cherish every moment here) deeply. 展望未来 I hope we can _______ (have more family activities/keep our home warm) forever, as home is where _______ (love and happiness last). 情感共鸣 Home is not just a place to live, but _______ (a harbor of love). I believe everyone has a sweet home, and _______ (sharing housework/treasuring family) makes it more wonderful. 考情分析 年份 地区 试卷简称 话题聚焦 命题形式 词数要求 2024 浙江温州 中考英语 与父母共同完成家务的经历与感受 文字提示 + 写作要点 90 词左右 2024 四川成都 中考英语 记录一次家人互助的温暖瞬间 图片（四格漫画）作文 100-120 词 2023 江苏苏州 中考英语 “Family Love”——写一件体现家庭之爱的小事 文字提纲作文 100 词左右 2023 山东青岛 中考英语 向外国笔友介绍中国孩子日常家务现状 书信（应用文） 不少于 80 词 2022 福建 中考英语 感恩父母：回忆一次被理解或帮助的经历 文字提示 + 思维导图 100 词左右 2022 湖南长沙 中考英语 描述“最温暖的一顿饭”的家庭场景 图画作文（单幅情景图） 90-110 词 单元写作拓展 1. 俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每 一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上，老师开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论，同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合图片，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊 English Learning 投稿。 要求： (1) 短文须包括所 给要点信息，可适当发挥；    (2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名以及地名； (3) 词数 80 左右 (短文开头已给出，不计入总 词数)。 In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place.__________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 In our English class, we had a discussion about what we could do to make home a happier place. We’ve shared different ideas. Some say it’s a good idea to spend more time with family. 4 They believe family members should share happiness and worries 1 . When they meet problems, family members can do something to cheer them up 2. 5 Home is always the first place for them to get help and support. Others think it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. In my opinion 3, showing love for family is really important. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中我们能做些什么让家变得更快乐的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山介绍我们讨论了如何让家变得更快乐； 第二步，具体阐述同学们对于能做些什么让家变得更快乐的想法； 第三步，表达自己个人的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①cheer sb. up使某人高兴起来 ②in one’s opinion在某人看来 [高分句型] ①When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up. (When引导的时间状语从句) ②Others think it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. (省略that的宾语从句) 2.作为一名中学生，在学习之余，我们也需要做一些劳动。一方面，锻炼我们的生活自理能力；另 一方面，也可以帮助父母减轻负担。请你根据提示及要求，以“Let’s do chores!”为题，写一篇英文 倡导书，呼吁大家多做家务。 提示： 1.分担家务可以让父母多一点休息时间；     2.作为家庭的一份子，我们应该做一些家务； 3.可以做一些简单的如整理床铺、洗衣服、洗碗、倒垃圾等家务。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 Let’s do chores! Dear students, It’s necessary for us to do chores at home. First, sharing housework can give parents a little more rest time, because they are very tired after a day’s work. Second, as a member of the family, we should do some housework. In this way, we can understand the meaning of fairness. Third, we can do some simple housework such as making the bed, washing the clothes, washing the dishes, taking out the rubbish and so on. In a word, on the one hand, doing housework can help to improve our life ability. On the other hand, it can also make our parents feel relaxed. Let’s do some chores every day. [语言亮点分析] （一）连接词运用 序数词衔接：First, Second, Third 清晰划分论据层次，使文章逻辑脉络分明。 总结词：In a word 有效收束全文，On the one hand... On the other hand... 平衡呈现观点。 （二）核心词汇 家务类：doing chores, housework, making the bed, washing the clothes, washing the dishes, taking out the rubbish，均为单元核心词汇，准确对应 “家务劳动” 主题。 情感与意义类：necessary, rest time, fairness, improve life ability, relaxed，精准表达做家务的价值。 （三）句型结构 原因状语从句："because they are very tired after a day’s work." 解释父母需要休息的原因，增强论据合理性。 目的状语从句："In this way, we can understand the meaning of fairness." 说明做家务的目的，深化论述。 举例句型："such as making the bed... and so on." 列举具体家务，避免论述空洞。 3. 请你以 “A Special Birthday Gift（一份特殊的生日礼物）” 为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，讲述你在父（母）亲或其他长辈生日那天，送上的一份特殊生日礼物：家务劳动。 内容包括： 1. 做家务的理由； 1. 做家务的过程（扫地、打扫厕所、收拾衣服等）； 1. 你的感受。 注意：词数 80 左右，开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 A Special Birthday Gift Dear friends, Today, I want to share a special birthday gift I gave to my mom. My mom is always busy taking care of our family. On her birthday, I decided to do housework to show my love. In the morning, I swept the floor carefully and cleaned the toilet thoroughly. Then, I folded and put away the clothes. It was tiring but I kept going. When mom came back, she was surprised and happy. I felt proud because I could finally give her a break. This gift made me understand how much she does for us. Thank you! [总体分析] 1. 紧扣主题：文章围绕 “一份特殊的生日礼物 —— 做家务” 展开，详细讲述了做家务的理由、过程和自己的感受，与题目要求高度契合。 1. 过程描述详细：在描述做家务过程时，使用了 “swept the floor”“cleaned the toilet”“folded and put away the clothes” 等具体动作，让读者能清晰地了解作者所做的家务内容，且按照时间顺序叙述，逻辑清晰。 情感真挚：通过描述妈妈的反应 “surprised and happy” 以及自己的感受 “felt proud”“understand how much she does for us”，真实地表达了对妈妈的爱与感恩，使文章具有感染力。 4. 家是我们心灵的港湾，成长的摇篮，为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆，红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动，希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事（如分担家务，陪伴家人等）并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示，写文章参与此征文活动。 要求：1．80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2．书写规范，内容连贯，文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。 参考要点： Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired… Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills… Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy… Love Family, Be Helpful Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 Love Family, Be Helpful Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. Last month, I decided to help my parents more. I started by sweeping the floor and cleaning the house. At first, it was tiring, but I soon got used to it. Later, I also tried cooking dinner. Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. I realized that helping my family is not only our duty but also a great way to show love. It brings us closer and makes everyone happy. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰合理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题； 第二步，介绍自己为家庭做贡献的一次经历； 第三步，表达自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①get used to习惯于 ②decide to do sth决定做某事 ③at first起初 [高分句型] ①Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. (although引导让步状语从句) ②When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. (when引导时间状语从句) 5. 劳动创造美好生活。每个人都可以从劳动中收获珍贵的回忆。作为一名初中生，在学习之余，承担起家务劳动，有助于提升自己的生活能力。请大家以“Labor is the Key of Happiness”为题，讲述一次自己做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。 写作要求如下： （1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数70词左右； （2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 Labor is the Key of Happiness Last Saturday, with my parents out, I decided to clean the messy living room. I first organized scattered books and toys, then mopped the floor until it was shiny. Doing the laundry was tiring—sorting clothes, using the machine, and hanging them to dry. Though my back ached, the house turned tidy. When my parents returned, they were surprised and praised me. I felt proud and realized how much work goes into keeping a home. This experience taught me practical skills and made me understand my parents’ efforts. Now I help with chores weekly, finding joy in creating a clean space. Labor shows me happiness comes from my own hard work. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要谈谈自己的收获，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，讲述一次自己做家务的经历； 第二步，介绍自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②help with sth帮助做某事 ③come from来自 [高分句型] ①I first organized scattered books and toys, then mopped the floor until it was shiny.（until引导时间状语从句） ②Though my back ached, the house turned tidy.（though引导让步状语从句） ③Labor shows me happiness comes from my own hard work.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） 6. 假设你是李辉，你校英语社团正在开展以“Doing housework makes me _________”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。 要点提示： （1） What kind of housework do you often do at home? （2） Why do you do it? 写作要求： （1）词数80-100，标题已给出，不计入总词数； （2）内容应包括所有要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不得出现任何真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。 Doing housework makes me _________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 Doing housework makes me independent I believe it’s necessary for us to help our parents with housework. I often do the dishes, sweep the floor and take out the rubbish at home. I think it is fair to share housework with parents, because we all live in the same house. Also, by doing housework, I can learn important life skills such as cooking and cleaning. They allow me not to depend too much on my parents. As a result, doing housework helps to develop my independence and teaches me how to look after myself. All in all, doing housework makes me independent. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“做家务让我变得独立”展开。 ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”描述日常做家务的习惯和收获。 ③提示：写作要点包括“做什么家务”、“为什么做”，并在结尾升华主题，突出“做家务让我独立”。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表达自己经常做家务。 第二步，具体说明自己经常做的家务，如洗碗、扫地、倒垃圾等。 第三步，说明做家务的原因：公平分担、学习生活技能、学会照顾自己。 第四步，总结做家务的意义，强调它让自己更独立。 [亮点词汇] ①do the dishes 洗碗 ②take out the rubbish 倒垃圾 ③such as 例如 ④as a result 因此 ⑤depend on 依赖 ⑥all in all 总之 [高分句型] ①I believe it’s necessary for us to help our parents with housework.（it is+adj+for sb. to do sth.句型） ②By doing housework, I can learn important life skills such as cooking and cleaning.（by doing结构表原因或方式） ③Doing housework helps to develop my independence and teaches me how to look after myself.（动名词短语作主语） 7. 随着社会的变化，越来越多的人认为中学生应当掌握基本的生活技能，如洗衣、做饭、打扫卫生、修理等。你是第一中学的学生，你的学校将要举行主题为 “More Skills, Better Life” 的英语演讲比赛，请你以此为题，写一篇演讲稿。内容包括： 1. 你掌握了哪种生活技能？你是如何学到的？ 2. 为什么中学生应当学会基本的生活技能？列举两个理由。 3. 呼吁中学生多学生活技能，快乐生活。 提示词：independence n. 独立； improve v. 提高； life skills 生活技能 作文要求： 1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，书写工整，词数80词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 More Skills, Better Life Good morning, dear all. I am happy to give a talk today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【精彩范文】 Good morning, dear all. I am happy to give a talk today. As for me, I’ve learned how to cook. I learn it from my mother because she is a great cook and she is very patient. Sometimes I learn how to cook by watching cooking videos. I think it is a great way to learn to cook. In my opinion, we should learn to be independent because we are not children any more. We can’t always depend on our parents, so it’s time for us to take care of ourselves. Besides, our parents are always busy with work. And we need to help with the housework. If we learn more skills from now on, I believe all of us will lead a better life in the future. 8. 假如你是李鹏，你校学生会正在积极开展“我劳动、我学习、我快乐”的主题活动，希望能以此让大家认识到家务劳动的重要性和必要性。请你根据以下要点提示，以“Do Housework Together!”为题，用英语写一篇文章。 What kind of housework do you plan to do? How often will you do housework? What do you think of doing housework? 要求： 1. 需包括提示中所有的写作要点； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 3. 文章中不能出现真实的人名和地名等信息； 4. 词数：不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Do Housework Together! Doing housework is not our parents’ duty, and we should do housework together. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, doing housework is helpful to my family as well as my personal growth. 【精彩范文】 Do Housework Together! Doing housework is not our parents’ duty, and we should do housework together. To help our parents and learn new skills, it’s necessary for us to do housework. I’ve made a plan for it this term. First of all, I decide to clean my room every day because keeping things tidy makes me feel comfortable. Besides, I’ll take out the rubbish every evening so that the house can be kept clean and fresh. What’s more, I will help with cooking twice a week. It must be meaningful to make delicious food for my family. Last but not least, I plan to help my mother water the plants. I think it will help me not only become more in-dependent but also get some other knowledge. In a word, doing housework is helpful to my family as well as my personal growth. 7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$