内容正文:
Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal !
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
本单元的写作是围绕着“食物制作”这一话题展开,涉及“饮食与健康”。写作内容要求学生通过使用制作食物的常用句型介绍某种食物的制作过程,包括所需要的食材、制作步骤和注意事项等,能恰当地使用顺序连接词连贯文章。人称多用第二人称,时态主要用一般现在时。
相关话题写作素材有:
词汇
Ingredients: apple, banana, egg, tomato, sugar, salt, milk, oil,chicken,beef,flour
Actions: wash, cut, mix, peel, stir, add, pour, chop,heat, turn on/off, cook, fly,taste, serve,enjoy
Adjectives: fresh, sweet, tasty, cold, soft
短语
wash carefully, for about ... minutes, cut into small pieces, add... to..., pour...into...,
put...on..., mix well/together, put in the fridge, over low/medium/high heat 用小火/中火/大火, a cup/spoon/teaspoon/tablespoon of...
句型
①First / Firstly, you need to ... the ... to get it ready.
②After ..., it’s time to....
③Finally/In the end,....
④ It tastes best when...
⑤The next step is to ...
⑥It's time to ...
⑦Make sure the pan is hot...
⑧... should be cooked until soft...
⑨Make sure to .. for about...so that....
⑩The secret to making it delicious is to....
⑪When you see ..., you know it’s almost done.
名言
①Good food is good mood. (Delicious food brings happiness.) 美食能带来好心情。
②You can’t make bread without flour. 无米不成炊。
写作步骤
懂
一、Before-writing
1. Choose a simple dish
Pick a dish you know well and is easy to make (e.g.fruit salad, scrambled eggs with tomatoes, milk pudding). Avoid complex ones with too many steps!
2. List basic information
①Ingredients: Write down what you need (e.g.3 apples, 2 spoons of honey, 1 cup of yogurt).
②Tools: Note tools like a knife, bowl, or pan.
③ Steps: Think about the order. Ask: What do I do first? Then? Finally?
3. 搭建写作框架
Beginning
引出食物:清晰说明你要介绍的是什么食物。 简单说明为什么选它(简单、美味、受欢迎、健康、有文化意义等)。
点明主题:表明你将介绍它的制作过程。
Let me tell you how to make...
让我告诉你如何制作……
... is a popular and delicious dish in... ...是...一道受欢迎且美味的菜肴。)
Today, I'd like to share with you how to make...
今天,我想和大家分享一下如何制作...
Here is one way to make... 这有一种制作……的方法。
Do you know how to make...? 你知道怎样制作……吗?
Body
使用表示顺序的连接词分步骤描述 制作过程。 重点描述:准备阶段; 烹饪阶段;增加关键细节: 温度(中火?)、时间(大约几分钟?)、状态变化(变软?变色?冒泡?)。
First, you need to prepare the ingredients. 首先,你需要准备好食材。
Next/Then/After that, ... 接下来/然后/之后,...
Pour... into... 把……倒入……
Don’t forget to add... 不要忘记加……
Cover the pot and wait for another... minutes.
盖上锅 (盖),再等……分钟
While ... is cooking, you can ... 当...在烹饪时,你可以...
Make sure to ... 确保要...
Cook/Stir/Fry ... until ... 煮/搅拌/炒...直到... (变成金黄色/变软/熟透)
Be careful not to ... 小心不要... (烧焦/煮过头)
Ending
说明最后的步骤(装盘?加装饰?)。
作出总结或者表达感受:再次强调这道菜的特点(美味、简单、值得一试),或者分享品尝的感受。
Finally, ... is ready to serve/serve hot! 最后,...就可以上桌了/趁热吃吧!
It smells fantastic and tastes even better!它闻起来棒极了,吃起来更美味!
Now you can enjoy your homemade ... !现在你可以享用你自制的...了!
Remember, "You are what you eat!" So enjoy this healthy dish! 记住,“人如其食!”所以享受这道健康菜肴吧!
Cooking this dish is easy, and the result is always rewarding. 做这道菜很简单,而且结果总是很有成就感。
二、While-writing(初稿写作)
学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿,尽量使用新学的词汇和句型,注意正确使用祈使句和连接词。
三、Post - writing(完成终稿)
同伴互评:交换初稿,标注亮点表达,提出补充建议(如增加具体的烹饪细节)。
教师点评:选取典型作文展示,强调人称时态以及表达变化前后的连接词。
最后同学对自己的作文进行修改,包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等,然后完成终稿。
写作真题
赏
王梅的英国朋友John对中国的美食很感兴趣,下面是John给她发的电子邮件中的部分内容,请你根据所给内容,以王梅的名义回复一封80词左右的英文邮件。
提示:
Dear John,
I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Mei
【答案】例文
Dear John,
I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. I like the fried eggs with tomatoes very much, too. It is easy to make and it’s delicious. I am sure your mother will love it.
First, wash two tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Next, break three eggs and mix them in a bowl. Third, pour some oil into the pan and heat it until it is hot. Pour the eggs in and cook them for a moment. Take them out. Fourth, put the tomatoes in and cook them. Last, put the eggs back into the pan and mix them with the tomatoes! Don’t forget to add some salt to the dish.
I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them! I hope to get your letter soon!
Yours,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍一道中国菜——西红柿炒鸡蛋;
第二步,根据图片提示介绍如何制作西红柿炒鸡蛋;
第三步,书写结语,表达期望收到对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
①for a moment一会儿
②take out取出,拿出
③forget to do sth忘记做某事
[高分句型]
①Don’t forget to add some salt to the dish.(祈使句)
②I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them!(宾语从句)
题型通关
练
1.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter想向你学习如何包粽子。请你结合表格内容的提示,给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件,告诉他如何包粽子。
Ingredients (材料)
rice, beans, dates (枣), leaf (leaves)
Tools (工具)
string (细绳), pot (锅)
Steps (步骤)
wash…
keep…in the water for hours
make a cone (锥体) shape with...
put...into the cone
tie (绑)…
boil (煮)… and enjoy…
要求:
1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
2. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
How are you? I hear you want to know how to make zongzi.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.提示:为培育时代新人,新时代劳动教育又回到学校教育中。劳动教育鼓励中学生要掌握一定的生活技能,其中炒菜做饭不仅能使我们提高生活自理能力,还能增强我们的家庭责任意识。请以“An Experience to Make ________ ”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一次你制作一道美食的经历及感受。
要求:1. 请先将题目补全后,再作答;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于70个;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
An Experience to Make ________
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3.“人间烟火气,最抚凡人心。”从手到口,从口到心, 中国人延续着对世界和人生特有的感知方式。或地方特色,或家常便饭,只要端起碗筷,总有一道美食触动了你的味蕾。请以”Special Food Full of Memories”为题分享一下你和美食之间的故事吧。
要点提示:
1. 介绍最触动你的一道美食;
2. 谈谈这道美食为什么特殊;
3. 分享这道美食曾带给你的回忆。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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4.众所周知,饮食也是一种文化。中国的饮食文化丰富多彩,源远流长。假如你的外教老师马克(Mark)要到你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的英文提示,向你的外教介绍一下你家乡的特色美食,并简述其制作过程。
提示:
1. your hometown;
2. special food there;
3. how to make it...
要求:
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
I’m from Sichuan. My hometown is famous for delicious hotpot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.2024年四川省中小学生”用英语讲好中国故事”爱国主义主题展示活动即将开始,请以“一道中国传统美食”为主题,写一篇演讲稿进行投稿。
写作要点:
1. 简单介绍一道中国传统美食。
2. 介绍这道中国传统美食的制作方法。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不提及真实的人名、地名和校名;
3. 词数不少于80词,题目和开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:ingredient n.(食品的)成分,原料;要素,因素
Ladies and Gentlemen,
There are so many traditional dishes in China. Today, I’d like to introduce
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Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal !
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
本单元的写作是围绕着“食物制作”这一话题展开,涉及“饮食与健康”。写作内容要求学生通过使用制作食物的常用句型介绍某种食物的制作过程,包括所需要的食材、制作步骤和注意事项等,能恰当地使用顺序连接词连贯文章。人称多用第二人称,时态主要用一般现在时。
相关话题写作素材有:
词汇
Ingredients: apple, banana, egg, tomato, sugar, salt, milk, oil,chicken,beef,flour
Actions: wash, cut, mix, peel, stir, add, pour, chop,heat, turn on/off, cook, fly,taste, serve,enjoy
Adjectives: fresh, sweet, tasty, cold, soft
短语
wash carefully, for about ... minutes, cut into small pieces, add... to..., pour...into...,
put...on..., mix well/together, put in the fridge, over low/medium/high heat 用小火/中火/大火, a cup/spoon/teaspoon/tablespoon of...
句型
①First / Firstly, you need to ... the ... to get it ready.
②After ..., it’s time to....
③Finally/In the end,....
④ It tastes best when...
⑤The next step is to ...
⑥It's time to ...
⑦Make sure the pan is hot...
⑧... should be cooked until soft...
⑨Make sure to .. for about...so that....
⑩The secret to making it delicious is to....
⑪When you see ..., you know it’s almost done.
名言
①Good food is good mood. (Delicious food brings happiness.) 美食能带来好心情。
②You can’t make bread without flour. 无米不成炊。
写作步骤
懂
一、Before-writing
1. Choose a simple dish
Pick a dish you know well and is easy to make (e.g.fruit salad, scrambled eggs with tomatoes, milk pudding). Avoid complex ones with too many steps!
2. List basic information
①Ingredients: Write down what you need (e.g.3 apples, 2 spoons of honey, 1 cup of yogurt).
②Tools: Note tools like a knife, bowl, or pan.
③ Steps: Think about the order. Ask: What do I do first? Then? Finally?
3. 搭建写作框架
Beginning
引出食物:清晰说明你要介绍的是什么食物。 简单说明为什么选它(简单、美味、受欢迎、健康、有文化意义等)。
点明主题:表明你将介绍它的制作过程。
Let me tell you how to make...
让我告诉你如何制作……
... is a popular and delicious dish in... ...是...一道受欢迎且美味的菜肴。)
Today, I'd like to share with you how to make...
今天,我想和大家分享一下如何制作...
Here is one way to make... 这有一种制作……的方法。
Do you know how to make...? 你知道怎样制作……吗?
Body
使用表示顺序的连接词分步骤描述 制作过程。 重点描述:准备阶段; 烹饪阶段;增加关键细节: 温度(中火?)、时间(大约几分钟?)、状态变化(变软?变色?冒泡?)。
First, you need to prepare the ingredients. 首先,你需要准备好食材。
Next/Then/After that, ... 接下来/然后/之后,...
Pour... into... 把……倒入……
Don’t forget to add... 不要忘记加……
Cover the pot and wait for another... minutes.
盖上锅 (盖),再等……分钟
While ... is cooking, you can ... 当...在烹饪时,你可以...
Make sure to ... 确保要...
Cook/Stir/Fry ... until ... 煮/搅拌/炒...直到... (变成金黄色/变软/熟透)
Be careful not to ... 小心不要... (烧焦/煮过头)
Ending
说明最后的步骤(装盘?加装饰?)。
作出总结或者表达感受:再次强调这道菜的特点(美味、简单、值得一试),或者分享品尝的感受。
Finally, ... is ready to serve/serve hot! 最后,...就可以上桌了/趁热吃吧!
It smells fantastic and tastes even better!它闻起来棒极了,吃起来更美味!
Now you can enjoy your homemade ... !现在你可以享用你自制的...了!
Remember, "You are what you eat!" So enjoy this healthy dish! 记住,“人如其食!”所以享受这道健康菜肴吧!
Cooking this dish is easy, and the result is always rewarding. 做这道菜很简单,而且结果总是很有成就感。
二、While-writing(初稿写作)
学生根据列好的提纲开始撰写作文草稿,尽量使用新学的词汇和句型,注意正确使用祈使句和连接词。
三、Post - writing(完成终稿)
同伴互评:交换初稿,标注亮点表达,提出补充建议(如增加具体的烹饪细节)。
教师点评:选取典型作文展示,强调人称时态以及表达变化前后的连接词。
最后同学对自己的作文进行修改,包括补充或删减内容、调整句子结构、纠正语法错误、替换平淡词汇等,然后完成终稿。
写作真题
赏
王梅的英国朋友John对中国的美食很感兴趣,下面是John给她发的电子邮件中的部分内容,请你根据所给内容,以王梅的名义回复一封80词左右的英文邮件。
提示:
Dear John,
I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Wang Mei
【答案】例文
Dear John,
I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. I like the fried eggs with tomatoes very much, too. It is easy to make and it’s delicious. I am sure your mother will love it.
First, wash two tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Next, break three eggs and mix them in a bowl. Third, pour some oil into the pan and heat it until it is hot. Pour the eggs in and cook them for a moment. Take them out. Fourth, put the tomatoes in and cook them. Last, put the eggs back into the pan and mix them with the tomatoes! Don’t forget to add some salt to the dish.
I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them! I hope to get your letter soon!
Yours,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍一道中国菜——西红柿炒鸡蛋;
第二步,根据图片提示介绍如何制作西红柿炒鸡蛋;
第三步,书写结语,表达期望收到对方回复。
[亮点词汇]
①for a moment一会儿
②take out取出,拿出
③forget to do sth忘记做某事
[高分句型]
①Don’t forget to add some salt to the dish.(祈使句)
②I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them!(宾语从句)
题型通关
练
1.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter想向你学习如何包粽子。请你结合表格内容的提示,给你的朋友Peter写一封英文电子邮件,告诉他如何包粽子。
Ingredients (材料)
rice, beans, dates (枣), leaf (leaves)
Tools (工具)
string (细绳), pot (锅)
Steps (步骤)
wash…
keep…in the water for hours
make a cone (锥体) shape with...
put...into the cone
tie (绑)…
boil (煮)… and enjoy…
要求:
1. 必须包含表格中所有提示信息,可适当增加细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
2. 词数80左右,开头与结尾已给,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
How are you? I hear you want to know how to make zongzi.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How are you? I hear you want to know how to make zongzi. I learnt how to make zongzi this Dragon Boat Festival.
To make zongzi, we need to have rice, beans, dates, some leaves, some strings and a pot. How do we make zongzi? First, we need to wash the rice. Then, we keep the rice in the water for hours. Next, we make a cone shape with the leaves. After that, we put the rice, beans and dates into the cone. And then, we tied zongzi with strings. In the end, we boil zongzi in a pot. When it is ready, we can enjoy the delicious food.
It’s interesting to make zongzi. You can try to make zongzi by yourself. And don’t forget to share your experience with me.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出包粽子的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述介绍包粽子的步骤;
第三步,书写结语。总结包粽子的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth. 需要做某事
②put sth. into. sw. 把某物放进某处
③try to do sth. 尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①When it is ready, we can enjoy the delicious food. (when引导时间状语从句)
②It’s interesting to make zongzi. (it作形式主语)
③And don’t forget to share your experience with me. (否定祈使句)
2.提示:为培育时代新人,新时代劳动教育又回到学校教育中。劳动教育鼓励中学生要掌握一定的生活技能,其中炒菜做饭不仅能使我们提高生活自理能力,还能增强我们的家庭责任意识。请以“An Experience to Make ________ ”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一次你制作一道美食的经历及感受。
要求:1. 请先将题目补全后,再作答;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于70个;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
An Experience to Make ________
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【答案】例文
An Experience to Make Scrambled Eggs and Tomatoes
At the class meeting, we were asked to make a dish for our parents after school.
Seeing the vegetables in the kitchen, I chose to cook the scrambled eggs and tomatoes. After watching the video on how to cook it, I started. Unfortunately, it burned and I failed. It was at that moment that I realized if I didn’t add enough oil, the eggs would be easily stuck to the pan and be burnt. Changing the way, I succeeded in the end. After my parents saw my dish, they were so moved and happy that they ate it up.
Through this experience, I learned that labour can not only be a meaningful thing but also make me feel satisfied and happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据题干要求介绍自己制作一道美食的经历,适当添加细节,完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全题目;
第二步,具体介绍是如何做这道菜的;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① choose to do 选择做某事
② in the end 在最后
③ ate it up 吃光
[高分句型]
①It was at that moment that I realized if I didn’t add enough oil, the eggs would be easily stuck to the pan and be burnt.(条件状语从句)
②After my parents saw my dish, they were so moved and happy that they ate it up.(结果状语从句)
③Through this experience, I learned that labour can not only be a meaningful thing but also make me feel satisfied and happy.(宾语从句和并列句)
3.“人间烟火气,最抚凡人心。”从手到口,从口到心, 中国人延续着对世界和人生特有的感知方式。或地方特色,或家常便饭,只要端起碗筷,总有一道美食触动了你的味蕾。请以”Special Food Full of Memories”为题分享一下你和美食之间的故事吧。
要点提示:
1. 介绍最触动你的一道美食;
2. 谈谈这道美食为什么特殊;
3. 分享这道美食曾带给你的回忆。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】例文
Special Food Full of Memories
Everyone has their own favorite cuisine. Some people like to eat meat, while others like to eat vegetables. But my favorite dish is steamed eggs. Its approach is very simple. You only need a few eggs, cooking oil, and some leeks. When it is brought to the table, its color is very tempting, ranging from yellow to green.
I like it not because it is so delicious, but because my family was relatively poor in the early years.
The only eggs in my family were either sold for money, or steamed eggs were only available when there were guests at home. But at that time, we were only allowed to eat when the guests finished eating. So when we ate the few eggs left, it was very delicious. So whenever I eat steamed eggs, I remember the memories of that time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,适当增添细节,完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍最触动你的一道美食;
第二步,介绍这道美食特殊的原因;
第三步,介绍这道美食曾带给你的回忆。
[亮点词汇]
①at that time那时
②the memories of...……的回忆
[高分句型]
When it is brought to the table, its color is very tempting, ranging from yellow to green. (when引导的时间状语从句及被动语态)
4.众所周知,饮食也是一种文化。中国的饮食文化丰富多彩,源远流长。假如你的外教老师马克(Mark)要到你的家乡旅游。请你根据下面的英文提示,向你的外教介绍一下你家乡的特色美食,并简述其制作过程。
提示:
1. your hometown;
2. special food there;
3. how to make it...
要求:
1. 语句通顺、符合逻辑,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
I’m from Sichuan. My hometown is famous for delicious hotpot. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m from Sichuan. My hometown is famous for delicious hot pot.
I’m very happy to tell you how to make a hot pot at home. To make the hot pot, you need to buy the hot pot soup, some mutton and beef pieces, some vegetables and other foods you like from the supermarket. First, boil the hot pot soup. Next, wash the vegetables and put them on plates. Then, put the meat pieces and vegetables into the pot when the soup is boiled. Make sure that all the foods are boiled in the pot. Finally, get your favorite food from the pot and enjoy it!
I hope you can have a good time in Sichuan.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,适当增添细节,完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的家乡及特色美食(已给出);
第二步,讲述该特色美食的制作过程;
第三步,表示祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① at home 在家
② put sth. into... 把某物放入……
③ make sure 确保
④ have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
① I’m very happy to tell you how to make a hot pot at home. (“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
② To make the hot pot, you need to buy the hot pot soup, some mutton and beef pieces, some vegetables and other foods you like from the supermarket. (不定式作目的状语)
③ I hope you can have a good time in Sichuan. (宾语从句)
5.2024年四川省中小学生”用英语讲好中国故事”爱国主义主题展示活动即将开始,请以“一道中国传统美食”为主题,写一篇演讲稿进行投稿。
写作要点:
1. 简单介绍一道中国传统美食。
2. 介绍这道中国传统美食的制作方法。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不提及真实的人名、地名和校名;
3. 词数不少于80词,题目和开头语已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:ingredient n.(食品的)成分,原料;要素,因素
Ladies and Gentlemen,
There are so many traditional dishes in China. Today, I’d like to introduce
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【答案】例文:
Ladies and Gentlemen,
There are so many traditional dishes in China. Today, I’d like to introduce you a kind of traditional Chinese food—zongzi. Here are the ways to make it.
To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar. First, wash and mix up all the ingredients. Next, put the rice and red dates into the reed leaves and add some sugar. Then fold the leaves, put them into the pot and cook for about an hour. Finally, add some honey as needed.
Chinese food is popular all over the world. I welcome you to taste more traditional Chinese food. You will be satisfied with them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,介绍一道传统美食,注意要点齐全,写作中,避免语法错误,保证语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接文章开头,引出自己要介绍的美食;
第二步,具体介绍如何制作粽子;
第三步,最后总结,并发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②all over the world全世界
③be satisfied with对……感到满意
[高分句型]
①Here are the ways to make it.(倒装句)
②To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar.(动词不定式作目的状语)
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