内容正文:
第六节 演讲稿和倡议书
文体1 演讲稿
写作架构
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等。写此类作文时,要明确发言的对象。该文体通常要有吸引力,在语言使用上一般要简洁明快、观点鲜明、层次清楚、条理分明。
增分佳句
1.开头常用语
①I am honored to have a chance to deliver a speech to you today.
今天我很荣幸有机会给大家发表演讲。
②My name is Li Ping.Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to deliver this speech.I shall be speaking about what we can do to protect the environment.
我是李萍,今天很高兴能有机会发表这个演讲。我演讲的内容是我们能为保护环境做些什么。
③It's my honour to stand here and say something about how to study English well.
我很荣幸能站在这里谈谈如何学好英语。
2.主体部分常用语
①We are very proud of ourselves,believing we can make more contributions to a better world.
我们为自己感到自豪,相信我们会为一个更加美好的世界作出更多的贡献。
②It is a pity that many people don't realise the importance of environmental protection.
遗憾的是,很多人没有意识到环境保护的重要性。
③As is known to us all,failure is the mother of success,but few people can really understand what the saying means.
众所周知,失败是成功之母,但是很少有人能真正理解这句格言的真谛。
3.结尾常用语
①Thanks for your listening (to my speech).
感谢大家倾听(我的演讲)。
②That's all I want to say about this point.
关于这一点,我就讲这些。
对点训练
你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛。请你以“Be Smart Online Learners”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括:
1.分析在线学习的优势与不足;
2.提出学习的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be Smart Online Learners
Online learning is an important way to study recently._______________________________
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[三步行文]
第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:演讲稿;
2.定人称:第一人称;
3.定时态:一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段:开篇点题;
第二段:分析优势与不足;
第三段:提出学习建议。
第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.作为聪明的网络学习者,我们可以充分利用线上教育资源拓宽视野。
As smart online learners,we can make full use of the online educational resources to_broaden_our_horizons.
2.面对互联网上的各种信息,我们分不清真假,这可能对我们的学习和生活有害。
(1)When we are faced with all kinds of information on the Internet,we can't_tell_the_difference_between_the_true_and_the_false.It may be harmful to our study and life.
(2)高级句式:Faced_with_all_kinds_of_information_on_the_Internet,we_can't_tell_the_difference_between_the_true_and_the_false,which_may_be_harmful_to_our
_study_and_life.(分词作状语;定语从句)
3.网上学习本身存在一些缺陷,使我们很难不受影响。
(1)Online learning itself has some imperfections,which make_it_difficult_for_us_not_to_be_affected.
(2)高级句式:Online_learning_itself_has_some_imperfections,making_it_difficult_for_us_not_to_be_affected.(分词短语作状语)
4.我们应该充分了解它的优点和缺点,找到一种合适的方法来使我们的学习更有效率。
(1)We should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages.We should find_a_proper_way_to_make_our_study_more_efficient.
(2)高级句式:We_should_have_a_good_understanding_of_its_advantages_and_disadvantages
_and_find_a_proper_way_to_make_our_study_more_efficient. (并列句)
第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
[参考范文]
Be Smart Online Learners
Online learning is an important way to study recently.Being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.
As smart online learners,we can make full use of the online educational resources to broaden our horizons.However,faced with all kinds of information on the Internet,we can't tell the difference between the true and the false,which may be harmful to our study and life.On the other hand,online learning itself has some imperfections,making it difficult for us not to be affected.
In conclusion,we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
文体2 倡议书
写作架构
倡议书是为号召大家参加某项活动而发起的书信。一般由称呼、正文、结尾、落款四个部分组成。
增分佳句
1.开头常用语
①Nowadays,people in many big cities are always complaining about the heavy traffic.As high school students,what should we do?
如今,许多大城市的人们总在抱怨拥挤的交通。作为高中生,我们应该做些什么呢?
②In order to build a “harmonious society”,I think we should try our best to do whatever we can.
为了建设“和谐社会”,我认为我们应该尽自己所能去做任何我们能做的事情。
③It's worrying me a lot that pollution is getting more and more serious.Therefore,it's strongly advocated that we should take action as soon as possible.
一直让我非常担忧的是污染越来越严重。因此,我强烈倡议我们应该尽快采取行动。
④It's a common sight that people drop litter everywhere,which has become a wide concern.So I strongly advocate that we attach importance to this phenomenon.
人们随地扔垃圾的场景屡见不鲜,这已经受到了广泛关注。因此,我强烈倡议我们应该重视这个现象。
2.主体部分常用语
①In my opinion,we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body.Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
在我看来,我们应该培养健康的饮食习惯来增强体质。只有这样,我们才能有足够的精力来更好地学习。
②We are supposed/required/expected to choose a healthy and environmentally friendly way of traveling,that is,bicycle riding.
我们应该选择一种健康且环保的出行方式,那就是骑自行车。
③If everyone does one thing for our school,I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
如果每个人都为我们学校做一件事情,我相信我们会把学校变成一个更好的学习和生活的地方。
④As long as we work together,we can make the impossible possible.
只要我们共同努力,我们就可以使不可能的事变成可能。
⑤If you are willing to do something to save our earth,please start from the little things right around you.
如果你愿意做一些事来拯救我们的地球,请从你身边的小事做起。
⑥It would be better if the local students help to collect money or donate books to the leftbehind children.
如果当地的学生能帮忙集资或者给留守儿童捐书,那就更好了。
3.结尾常用语
①It is high time that we started from ourselves and reduced transportation pressure by riding bikes.
现在我们是时候从自己做起,通过骑自行车来减轻交通压力了。
②I'm calling for your active participation in it,which will be of great benefit to our hometown.
我呼吁大家积极参加,这对我们家乡会有很大的益处。
③Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
让我们携起手来,立刻采取行动。
④Let's participate actively in it.Your small acts of kindness can make a great difference.
让我们积极参加吧。你小小的善举会产生巨大的影响。
⑤As an old saying goes,“Together,individuals can make a difference.” Your efforts count!
正如谚语所说:“众人拾柴火焰高。”你的努力非常重要!
对点训练
假定你是李华,请代表学生会为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份题为“Health Matters Most”的倡议书,呼吁重压之下的高三学生养成健康的生活方式。内容包括:
1.倡议的原因;
2.倡议的目的;
3.倡议的具体内容。
注意:词数 80左右。
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[三步行文]
第一步:“三定”审题 “三段”谋篇
(一)“三定”审题
1.定体裁:倡议书;
2.定人称:第一人称;
3.定时态:一般现在时。
(二)“三段”谋篇
第一段:倡议的原因;
第二段:倡议的目的及具体内容;
第三段:再次发出倡议。
第二步:斟酌词句 设计亮点
1.随着高考的临近,我们中的很多人都处于巨大的学习压力之中,因此养成了一种不健康的生活方式。
With_the_College_Entrance_Examination_approaching,many of us are under great pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle.
2.为了迎接高中学习的挑战,我们应该对不健康的生活方式说不。
(1)To_meet_the_challenges_of_the_senior_year,we should say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
(2)高级句式: To_meet_the_challenges_of_the_senior_year,we_are_supposed_to_say_no_to
_the_unhealthy_lifestyle.(用高级词替换黑体词)
3.因此,我们强烈主张早睡早起,按时吃饭。
(1)Therefore,we strongly advocate thatwe_should_go_to_bed_early_and_get_up_early and take meals regularly.
(2)高级句式:Therefore,it's_strongly_advocated_that_we_should_go_to_bed_early_and_get
_up_early_and_take_meals_regularly.(it作形式主语)
4.是我们从自己做起,并且立即采取积极的行动的时候了。
It is high time that we_started_from_ourselves_and__took_an_active_action_at_once.
第三步:巧妙过渡 完美成篇
[参考范文]
Health Matters Most
With the College Entrance Examination approaching,many of us are under great pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle—studying deep into night,rushing through meals and taking little physical exercise—which is extremely harmful to our health.
To meet the challenges of the senior year,we are supposed to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.Therefore,it's strongly advocated that we should go to bed early and get up early and take meals regularly.
It is high time that we started from ourselves and took an active action at once.
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