内容正文:
主题写作(3) 活动邀请
“三步”写作流程
[典题示例]
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍; 2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、写全要点——保基本分
(一)显性要点题干找
1.个人介绍:
①I am Li Hua, in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” at our school broadcasting station.
2.写信目的:
②I'm writing to invite you to attend our program.
3.节目介绍:
③“Talk and Talk” is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive.
④It covers life, work, study and so on.
4.访谈时间:
⑤The interview with you is planned at 9 on Sunday morning.
5.访谈主题:
⑥We hope you talk about how to improve our students' communication skills in English.
(二)隐性要点关联好
1.询问时间:
⑦Would you tell me if you are free then?
⑧If not, we can arrange another time.
2.表达期盼:
⑨Looking forward to your acceptance and early reply.
二、打造亮点——增能力分
(一)高级词汇抓住眼(升格⑤⑥⑦句中的加蓝词汇)
1.planned→____________
2.hope→__________
3.free→__________
scheduled
expect
available
(二)高级句式点亮篇(按要求升级句子)
1.用非谓语动词短语作定语合并③④句
“Talk and Talk” is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive, covering life, work, study and so on.
2.将句⑥改为被动语态
You are expected to talk about how to improve our students' communication skills in English.
三、打造高颜值——“语”顺“形”美
(誊写成文,注意逻辑衔接和行文规范)
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua, in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” at our school broadcasting station. I'm writing to invite you to attend our program.
“Talk and Talk” is designed to interview some people to talk about everything positive, covering life, work, study and so on. The interview with you is scheduled at 9 on Sunday morning and you are expected to talk about how to improve our students' communication skills in English. Would you tell me if you are available then? If not, we can arrange another time.
Looking forward to your acceptance and early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
[高分评点]
(一)学谋篇布局
本文呈现了邀请信的常规写作模式:
(二)学靓丽表达
1.作文开头使用介词短语in charge of和at our ...station,用词准确,且简洁明了。然后使用动词invite, design, cover, schedule, expect, arrange等使文章生动、灵活;主动与被动语态交叉运用,表达丰富多彩。
2.高级句式的运用,如现在分词短语作定语、if条件句的省略形式等也增加了佳作的亮点。
高分素材储备
一、内化写作范式,确保形体规范
Dear ,
Knowing that (写信原因), I'm writing/I'd like to invite you to (发出邀请).
As scheduled, (活动1). In addition, (活动2), after which (活动3). I'm sure (指出好处).
Hopefully, you'll accept my invitation if it is convenient to you.(表达希望)
Yours,
Li Hua
二、写好开头、结尾,力求吸人眼球
(一)开头部分:自我介绍并发出邀请
1.I am ... I am writing to invite you ...
2.We're ... We'd like to invite you to ...
3.I think it would be a great idea if you could ...
4.Knowing that you show great interest in ... I am delighted to invite you to ...
(二)结尾部分:期待对方接受邀请并回复
1.Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to ...?
2.We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.
3.I would like to meet you there and please let me know in advance.
4.An early reply will be highly appreciated.
三、多积鲜活佳句,做到意蕴丰富
1.I'd like to invite you to attend the Chinese Excellent Calligraphy Show and admire the great works with me.
我想邀请你参加中国优秀书法作品展,和我一起欣赏这些精彩的作品。
2.Knowing you are interested in Chinese history and culture, I'm more than pleased to invite you to visit the Suzhou Gardens with me.
得知你对中国历史和文化感兴趣,我很高兴邀请你和我一起参观苏州园林。
3.This is such a golden chance to experience traditional Chinese culture that it can't be missed.
这是体验中国传统文化的绝佳机会,不容错过。
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