内容正文:
Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
(居住环境)
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
写作主题:传统节日
以“居住环境”为视角,可以是居住社区的配套设施、发展以及变迁,有时候会涉及邻里关系等;以主人公所在的城市或乡村发展为角度,讲述家乡的发展变迁,或所面临的问题。主要包括以下写作要点:①总述生活环境的现状;②具体讲述相关的配套设施;③表达对未来发展的美好期待。
素材积累
【必备句型】
1.... is located in/ lies in...
2. ... is my favorite place in my neighborhood.
3. ... is in front of/ in the back of/ behind...
4. Behind/ In front of..., there is...
5. It is very convenient for... to come to...
6. Turn left/ right, and you will see...
7. We... in order to make it more and more beautiful.
8. I hope it will... so that I can...
【居住环境】
1. I live in the countryside/ a small village/ a quiet city/ a modern city. 我住在乡下/一个小村庄/一个安静的城市/一个现代化的城市。
2. I moved to... with my parents last year and we are living in a beautiful house now. 去年我和我的父母搬到了……我们现在住在一个漂亮的房子里。
3. The peaceful park beside our community provides me with a good place to relax. I can also enjoy the beauty of nature. 我们小区旁边那个宁静的公园给我提供了一个放松的好地方。我也可以享受大自然的美丽。
4. The neighbours here are very friendly to each other and helpful. 这里的邻居彼此都很友好,乐于助人。
【家乡发展】
1. It’s a small city but I think this city is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. 这是一个小城市,但我认为这个城市是世界上最美丽的城市之一。
2. It’s popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air. It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms. 它深受人们的欢迎,不仅因为它的好天气,而且因为它的新鲜空气。它也有许多具有自己民族形式的传统艺术。
3. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. 工厂、学校、医院、电影院和剧院如雨后春笋般涌现。
4. Even though our town has no wide roads..., it is still a perfect place for me to live in. 尽管我们镇没有宽阔的道路……,但它对我来说仍然是一个完美的居住地。
【表达期待】
1. With our effort, I’m sure my home will be better and better. 通过我们的努力,我相信我的家会越来越好。
2. If everyone does our best, our city will become more beautiful and many more visitors will choose to visit. 如果每个人都尽我们最大的努力,我们的城市将变得更加美丽,更多的游客会选择来参观。
3. The traditional culture not only shows people’s way of life, but also the love for their hometown. Let’s take action to protect the culture in our hometown. 传统文化不仅表现了人们的生活方式,也表现了他们对家乡的热爱。 让我们采取行动来保护家乡的文化吧。
真题示例:
(2025年甘肃兰州中考真题)据报道, 某小区花墙长势喜人, 吸引众多游客前来打卡拍照。假如你是该小区住户, 请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道, 向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。
要求: 1. 报道应包括图示所有要点:
2. 条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80词左右, 文章标题和开头已给出, 请抄写在答题卡上。(不计入词数)
Beautiful Neighborhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists.________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
1.来自新加坡的Jenny在某英语论坛发布了一个帖子,假定你是李华,请你根据Jenny的帖子进行跟帖,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
注意:
1. 短文必须包含以上问题的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右:帖子第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.假定你是李华,你家附近的梅石社区食堂就要开业了。请你结合以下表格内容,用英语为生活在你家附近的英国朋友David写一封邮件,向他介绍一下这个社区食堂并邀请他一起参观体验。词数80左右。
The Meishi Community Canteen
参考词汇:Mianxian Paste 面线糊,Oyster Omelette 海蛎煎
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear David,
I’m excited to share some news with you! ___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.假设你是李华,随着越来越多的外国友人来到你的社区工作和生活。为了帮助他们更好地融入当地生活,你的社区发起“Community Introduction”活动,邀请大家用英语制作一份宣传手册,介绍社区的特色。请你围绕下图提示完成英文宣传稿。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、社区名称和学校名称;
3.词数80~100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:atmosphere n.氛围
A Great Community for You
Welcome to our community! _______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.你家附近有一个你最喜欢的公园——幸福公园。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英文短文,向同学们介绍这个公园。
内容提示:
How far is it from your home to the park?
What do people usually do in the park?
Is there a restaurant, a library or something else around the park? How is it?
Something more about the park.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;词数不少于70;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Come to Happy Park!
Happy Park is a public park in my neighborhood._______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.学校英文报正在征集以“我与社区”为主题的征文。假如你是李欣,你居住的幸福社区有很多有趣的地方,如博物馆、图书馆、体育馆、艺术厅、咖啡厅等。请你根据以下提示问题,写一篇英语短文介绍你与这个地方的故事。
Which is your favorite place in your neighborhood?
What do you usually do there?
Why do you like the place?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood
My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community.____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.俗话说:“远亲不如近邻”。近日,你校英文社正在举行题为“My Neighborhood”的征文活动。假如你是李华,住在红梅社区,请结合下图内容及提示,写一篇不少于80词的英文征文稿。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Neighborhood
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。请你以“Dream home, Dream neighborhood”为题,根据下面提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你理想的家和邻里,以及你对它们的想法。
写作要点:
1. What is your dream home like?
2. What’s in your dream neighborhood?
3. Do the neighbors help each other? How?
4. What do you think of your dream home and neighborhood?
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dream home, Dream neighborhood
People surely have their own ideas about the dream home and dream neighborhood. My dream home can be______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighborhood”的征文活动。假如你是李华,住在花园社区,根据以下流程图提示,完成一篇英文征文稿。
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,文中不得使用真实姓名和校名;
2.文章必须包括流程图中所有要点内容,可适当发挥。
3.不少于80词,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Neighborhood
My name is Li Hua. I live in Garden Neighborhood. It is very beautiful and clean.______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.假定你是李平,你们学校下周将迎来一批意大利交换生,最近你收到了其中一位交换生David的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80词左右。
From: David
To: Li Ping
Dear Li Ping,
In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school activities. I can't wait to set off! Since I will live in your home, could you tell me something about your neighborhood? Are there any interesting places to visit nearby? I would also like to know the weather in Hangzhou these days. What clothes should I take?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
David
From: Li Ping
To: David
Dear David,
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Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
(居住环境)
单元写作精练
写作主题
识
写作主题:传统节日
以“居住环境”为视角,可以是居住社区的配套设施、发展以及变迁,有时候会涉及邻里关系等;以主人公所在的城市或乡村发展为角度,讲述家乡的发展变迁,或所面临的问题。主要包括以下写作要点:①总述生活环境的现状;②具体讲述相关的配套设施;③表达对未来发展的美好期待。
素材积累
【必备句型】
1.... is located in/ lies in...
2. ... is my favorite place in my neighborhood.
3. ... is in front of/ in the back of/ behind...
4. Behind/ In front of..., there is...
5. It is very convenient for... to come to...
6. Turn left/ right, and you will see...
7. We... in order to make it more and more beautiful.
8. I hope it will... so that I can...
【居住环境】
1. I live in the countryside/ a small village/ a quiet city/ a modern city. 我住在乡下/一个小村庄/一个安静的城市/一个现代化的城市。
2. I moved to... with my parents last year and we are living in a beautiful house now. 去年我和我的父母搬到了……我们现在住在一个漂亮的房子里。
3. The peaceful park beside our community provides me with a good place to relax. I can also enjoy the beauty of nature. 我们小区旁边那个宁静的公园给我提供了一个放松的好地方。我也可以享受大自然的美丽。
4. The neighbours here are very friendly to each other and helpful. 这里的邻居彼此都很友好,乐于助人。
【家乡发展】
1. It’s a small city but I think this city is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. 这是一个小城市,但我认为这个城市是世界上最美丽的城市之一。
2. It’s popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air. It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms. 它深受人们的欢迎,不仅因为它的好天气,而且因为它的新鲜空气。它也有许多具有自己民族形式的传统艺术。
3. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. 工厂、学校、医院、电影院和剧院如雨后春笋般涌现。
4. Even though our town has no wide roads..., it is still a perfect place for me to live in. 尽管我们镇没有宽阔的道路……,但它对我来说仍然是一个完美的居住地。
【表达期待】
1. With our effort, I’m sure my home will be better and better. 通过我们的努力,我相信我的家会越来越好。
2. If everyone does our best, our city will become more beautiful and many more visitors will choose to visit. 如果每个人都尽我们最大的努力,我们的城市将变得更加美丽,更多的游客会选择来参观。
3. The traditional culture not only shows people’s way of life, but also the love for their hometown. Let’s take action to protect the culture in our hometown. 传统文化不仅表现了人们的生活方式,也表现了他们对家乡的热爱。 让我们采取行动来保护家乡的文化吧。
真题示例:
(2025年甘肃兰州中考真题)据报道, 某小区花墙长势喜人, 吸引众多游客前来打卡拍照。假如你是该小区住户, 请根据以下内容为小区写一篇英文宣传报道, 向某英文杂志旅游专栏投稿。
要求: 1. 报道应包括图示所有要点:
2. 条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥;
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息;
4. 词数80词左右, 文章标题和开头已给出, 请抄写在答题卡上。(不计入词数)
Beautiful Neighborhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists.________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】
Beautiful Neighborhood
It is reported that the lovely flowers of my neighbourhood have attracted lots of tourists. Our neighborhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of friendly and polite people.
Residents here enjoy various activities. There are exciting sports games like volleyball tournaments and interesting art shows where people draw on stones. These activities make our life colorful.
In the coming days, we’ll focus on recycling and reusing used things. We aim to turn waste into useful items, making our neighborhood a more eco-friendly and charming place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意要点齐全,可适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。文章开头直接描述了社区的美丽景象,以此引出下文对社区的详细介绍。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述社区环境并介绍社区活动。
第三步,书写结语。介绍未来环保计划的展望,传达了作者对社区的热爱和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①attract吸引
②various各种各样的
③eco-friendly环保的
[高分句型]
Our neighborhood, which is always clean and tidy, is full of friendly and polite people. (which引导的定语从句)
1.来自新加坡的Jenny在某英语论坛发布了一个帖子,假定你是李华,请你根据Jenny的帖子进行跟帖,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
注意:
1. 短文必须包含以上问题的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右:帖子第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Hi, I am Li Hua. There are a lot of public places to visit in my neighborhood, for example, a big shopping mall and a cinema. And my favourite place is a library which is next to my home.
On weekends or during the holiday, I always go there with some of my friends. The library is bright and quiet, just right for doing homework. Another reason I like going there is that I can borrow books or read the latest magazines.
I feel happy living in such a wonderful neighborhood.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕社区环境展开,介绍了社区内的公共场所、最喜欢的图书馆及其特点,以及在图书馆的活动和居住感受等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍并总述社区有很多公共场所,引出最喜欢的图书馆及其位置;
第二步,描述周末/假期常去图书馆,说明图书馆的环境特点和功能;
第三步,总结居住在该社区的幸福感。
[亮点词汇]
①public places公共场所
②neighborhood社区
③latest magazines最新杂志
[高分句型]
①And my favourite place is a library which is next to my home. (which引导的定语从句)
2.假定你是李华,你家附近的梅石社区食堂就要开业了。请你结合以下表格内容,用英语为生活在你家附近的英国朋友David写一封邮件,向他介绍一下这个社区食堂并邀请他一起参观体验。词数80左右。
The Meishi Community Canteen
参考词汇:Mianxian Paste 面线糊,Oyster Omelette 海蛎煎
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear David,
I’m excited to share some news with you! ___________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m excited to share some news with you!
There’s a new community canteen opening near my home on July 1, 2025. It’s located on Yifeng Street. The canteen offers delicious home-made dishes like Mianxian Paste and Oyster Omelette. The best part is that it’s free for people over 65 and half price for children. It’s a great place to enjoy good food and have a good time. I think it will offer a lot of convenience to us.
Would you like to visit and experience it with me? I’m sure you’ll love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邀请信;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求,均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。使用“I’m excited to share some news with you!”来引出将要介绍的社区食堂。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——开业日期、地点、服务内容、费用和益处等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达邀请对方一起参观体验的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①delicious home-made dishes美味的家常菜
②offer convenience提供便利
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It’s a great place to enjoy good food and have a good time. (It’s a great place to do sth.句型)
②I think it will offer a lot of convenience to us. (省略引导词的宾语从句)
3.假设你是李华,随着越来越多的外国友人来到你的社区工作和生活。为了帮助他们更好地融入当地生活,你的社区发起“Community Introduction”活动,邀请大家用英语制作一份宣传手册,介绍社区的特色。请你围绕下图提示完成英文宣传稿。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、社区名称和学校名称;
3.词数80~100 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:atmosphere n.氛围
A Great Community for You
Welcome to our community! _______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A Great Community for You
Welcome to our community! Located in the heart of our city, it’s just a 5-minute walk from the nearest subway station, making travel around the city convenient. Nearby, there’s a large shopping mall where you can satisfy all your daily needs.
Inside the community, there’s a big park with a lake, colorful flowers, and a playground for kids. In the morning, neighbors jog or do tai chi together. On holidays, we hold exciting events like International Food Fairs and Spring Festival Lantern Parties, which strengthen the bond among neighbors. The best part is our friendly atmosphere. Here, neighbors are more like friends. They’re always ready to offer a helping hand.
You’ll surely feel at home and enjoy a colorful life in our community.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“欢迎来我们社区”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——休闲场所、活动、地理位置和人文氛围、邻里关系等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly atmosphere友好的氛围
②be ready to do sth.准备做某事
[高分句型]
①On holidays, we hold exciting events like International Food Fairs and Spring Festival Lantern Parties, which strengthen the bond among neighbors. (定语从句)
4.你家附近有一个你最喜欢的公园——幸福公园。请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英文短文,向同学们介绍这个公园。
内容提示:
How far is it from your home to the park?
What do people usually do in the park?
Is there a restaurant, a library or something else around the park? How is it?
Something more about the park.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校;词数不少于70;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Come to Happy Park!
Happy Park is a public park in my neighborhood._______________________________________________
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【答案】
Come to Happy Park!
Happy Park is a public park in my neighborhood. It’s very nice. It takes my family 30 minutes to get there by bus. There’re many trees and flowers in it. We can walk and enjoy the natural beauty there. There’s a big lake. We can go boating on it. People can camp or have a picnic by the lake. Also, it’s cool to try paragliding. After that, we can have a meal in the restaurant near the park. It’s a great place for a family to have fun there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍公园离家有多远、能在公园内体验的活动项目及公园周边生活设施;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go boating划船
②have a picnic野餐
[高分句型]
①It takes my family 30 minutes to get there by bus. (it作形式主语)
②It’s a great place for a family to have fun there. (动词不定式作定语)
5.学校英文报正在征集以“我与社区”为主题的征文。假如你是李欣,你居住的幸福社区有很多有趣的地方,如博物馆、图书馆、体育馆、艺术厅、咖啡厅等。请你根据以下提示问题,写一篇英语短文介绍你与这个地方的故事。
Which is your favorite place in your neighborhood?
What do you usually do there?
Why do you like the place?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood
My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community.____________________________________________
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【答案】
My Favorite Place in My Neighborhood
My name is Li Xin, and I live in Xingfu Community. My favorite place here is the community library. It’s a quiet and bright space with tall bookshelves filled with all kinds of books. I usually go there after school to read novels or do my homework. The library also holds weekly reading clubs, where I discuss stories with other book lovers. What I love most is the peaceful atmosphere. Here I can escape the noise and dive into different worlds through books. The librarians are friendly and always ready to recommend good reads.
This is my favorite place in my neighborhood. It’s not just a library; it’s a corner where knowledge and friendship grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,交代社区里最喜欢的地方是哪;
第二步,介绍最喜欢该地方的原因;
第三步,书写结语,表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①filled with充满
②peaceful平静的
③dive into潜入,探察
[高分句型]
①The library also holds weekly reading clubs, where I discuss stories with other book lovers.(定语从句)
②What I love most is the peaceful atmosphere.(主语从句)
6.俗话说:“远亲不如近邻”。近日,你校英文社正在举行题为“My Neighborhood”的征文活动。假如你是李华,住在红梅社区,请结合下图内容及提示,写一篇不少于80词的英文征文稿。
写作要求:
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
My Neighborhood
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【答案】
My Neighborhood
My name is Li Hua. I live in Hongmei Neighborhood.
It’s a beautiful and quiet neighborhood. There’s a beautiful park near here. People always take a walk in it. And there’s a supermarket in our neighborhood, so it’s very convenient for us to do some shopping. My neighbors are very friendly to each other. As the saying goes, “A neighbor is better than a distant relative.” I have a new neighbor, Peter. He lives on the fifth floor. As a policeman, he is kind-hearted and ready to help others. When people are in trouble, they usually ask him for help. Another neighbor is Mr. Li, a sixty-year-old man, who always helps people fix up old things. Everyone in our neighborhood likes them.
It’s really comfortable for me to live in my neighborhood. I’m lucky to have so many nice neighbors.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏流程图中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山介绍自己住在哪个社区;
第二步,具体阐述社区的环境以及举例说明邻里之间是如何相处的;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk散步
②be friendly to对……友好
③in trouble处于困难中
④fix up修理
[高分句型]
①There’s a beautiful park near here. (there be句型)
②When people are in trouble, they usually ask him for help. (when引导时间状语从句)
③Another neighbor is Mr. Li, a sixty-year-old man, who always helps people fix up old things. (who引导定语从句)
④It’s really comfortable for me to live in my neighborhood. (it固定句型)
7.俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。请你以“Dream home, Dream neighborhood”为题,根据下面提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你理想的家和邻里,以及你对它们的想法。
写作要点:
1. What is your dream home like?
2. What’s in your dream neighborhood?
3. Do the neighbors help each other? How?
4. What do you think of your dream home and neighborhood?
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dream home, Dream neighborhood
People surely have their own ideas about the dream home and dream neighborhood. My dream home can be______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
People surely have their own ideas about the dream home and dream neighborhood. My dream home can be small, but it must let me feel warm. I hope my bedroom has a big window to let in enough sunlight. I will keep some pets and plants that I like at home.
My dream community must be clean. There are flowers and trees in the community so that we can breathe the fresh air. There is a big enough square in the community for people to exercise. The neighbors often help each other. For example, young people often help old people take out the rubbish. I think my dream home and neighborhood are great. Not only do I like the environment but also the people there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文的时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文的大部分要点以问题的形式给出,要点之间衔接要顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述你理想的家样子;
第二步,详细介绍理想中的街区及邻居们如何互相帮助;
第三步,结束语,对理想的家及街区的评价。
[亮点词汇]
Not only...but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
I will keep some pets and plants that I like at home.(定语从句)
There are flowers and trees in the community so that we can breathe the fresh air.(目的状语从句)
8.俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighborhood”的征文活动。假如你是李华,住在花园社区,根据以下流程图提示,完成一篇英文征文稿。
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整,文中不得使用真实姓名和校名;
2.文章必须包括流程图中所有要点内容,可适当发挥。
3.不少于80词,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Neighborhood
My name is Li Hua. I live in Garden Neighborhood. It is very beautiful and clean.______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Neighborhood
My name is Li Hua. I live in Garden Neighborhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it. And big green trees are around it. You can see a lot of people talking and playing there. Near my neighborhood there is a supermarket, a bank, a hospital and many shops. So it is convenient for our life. My neighbors are very friendly. When someone has problems, they must help him. Once Aunt Li’s daughter was ill and her husband was not at home. So her neighbors helped her send her daughter to hospital, I think I should do something for my neighborhood. So every week I help the kids in our neighborhood learn English and play games with them. This is my neighborhood. Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏流程图中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山介绍自己住在哪个社区;
第二步,具体阐述社区的环境以及举例说明邻里之间是如何相处的;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②at home在家
③a lot of许多,大量
[高分句型]
①There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it.(there be句型)
②When someone has problems, they must help him.(when引导时间状语从句)
9.假定你是李平,你们学校下周将迎来一批意大利交换生,最近你收到了其中一位交换生David的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80词左右。
From: David
To: Li Ping
Dear Li Ping,
In your last e-mail, you told me a lot about your school activities. I can't wait to set off! Since I will live in your home, could you tell me something about your neighborhood? Are there any interesting places to visit nearby? I would also like to know the weather in Hangzhou these days. What clothes should I take?
Hope to hear from you soon.
Love,
David
From: Li Ping
To: David
Dear David,
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【答案】
Dear David,
I’m very glad that you will live with my family in Hangzhou. Now let me tell you something about my neighborhood. I live in a quiet neighborhood. There is a park across from my house. To get to the park, you just have to go across Center Street. When I play with my family and friends in the park, time goes quickly. It is a great place to have fun. You can also visit the science museum. There are many interesting robots in the museum. And you will never feel bored in the museum. It’s summer in Hangzhou now. The weather here is a little hot. So you can bring shorts and T-shirts with you.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】1. 题干解读:文章属于书信作文,主要是给交换生David介绍自己所在的社区情况以及天气等,内容按照来信中提到的信息描写,也可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:文章主要用一般现在时,人称用第一人称和第二人称相结合展开描述。主要是介绍社区环境及社区附近一些有趣的地方以及天气和衣着等。写作时语言要简单易懂,文章结构要完整,多使用简单词语表达,意思要通俗易懂。
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