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WELCOME UNIT
UNIT 5 EDUCATION
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
本单元的写作任务为看图作文。看图作文属于记叙文文体,在文章开头要交代故事发生的时间、地点和人物,然后写事件的原因及发展过程,最后写结果。
1.开头:简要介绍事情发生的时间、地点和人物等。
2.故事发展:以时间为主线,按时间顺序,分别描述每幅图的要点和细节,注意衔接与过渡。
3.结尾:得到的启示或体会。
注意:要把握住记叙文的六个要素,即时间 (when),地点 (where),人物 (who),事件 (what),原因 (why)和过程 (how)。把握好这六个要素,写看图类记叙文就成功了一半。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
1.开头常用句式
①Last summer I spent a twoweek vacation at Hawaii.
去年夏天我在夏威夷度过了两周的假期。
②As it became hotter and hotter, I went together with my friends to go swimming.
天气越来越热,我和朋友去游泳。
③It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, and the street was deserted.
那是一个刮风下雨的早晨。天空阴沉,街道上空无一人。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
2.主体段落常用句式
①The occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening where everybody will share his experiences to others.
这次活动将于晚上7点开始,每个人都将与他人分享自己的经历。
②There will be activities, such as singing, dancing and drama performances.
有许多活动,比如唱歌、跳舞和话剧表演。
③The lecture will be held this afternoon at two o'clock in the school hall.
讲座将于今天下午两点在学校礼堂举行。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
④This event aims to help more people learn about China's education system.
这次活动的目的是帮助更多人了解中国的教育制度。
⑤I'm sure you will take an interest in the activities at the party.
我相信你会对聚会上的活动感兴趣的。
⑥After school, they would like to walk arm in arm.
放学后,他们喜欢挽臂而行。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
3.结尾常用句式
①After that, how delighted we were!
从那以后,我们多么高兴!
②Only then did I realize that a good education is the gateway to success.
直到那时我才意识到良好的教育是通往成功之路。
③The activity/thing implies that we should take some measures to solve it.
这个活动/事情说明了我们应该采取措施来解决它。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
假设你是红星中学的学生李华,请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英文写一篇周记,记述上周六你和父母一起参加奥林匹克森林公园健步走活动的过程。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.周记的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Saturday, I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk, and I'm Fit”. ﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍﹍
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
[精彩范文]
Last Saturday, I went to the Olympic Forest Park with my parents to take part in an activity called “I Walk, and I'm Fit”. The activity we participated in was meaningful, which gave me a great deal of inspiration.
Early in the morning, hardly had we arrived at the registration place when we signed our names immediately. Seeing the sea of people doing warmup exercise, we couldn't wait to join them. Soon afterwards, a signal was given off and we went along the
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walking route, which ran around the park. It seemed that no one wanted to be left behind. Thinking of that, I couldn't help walking faster than ever. More than one hour later, our effort paid off. We won first prize. How delighted we were!
Only then did I realize that taking part in activities like this regularly is a good way for us to keep fit. I'd like to participate in such activities as much as possible in the future.
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总评 本篇范文写作内容完整,细节到位,最后写出个人体会。行文上句式多变,衔接自然,展示出较好的语言表达能力。
[亮点呈现]
(1)hardly had we arrived at the registration place when we signed our names immediately使用hardly ... when句型,使文章具有高级感。
(2)Seeing the sea of people doing warmup exercise, we couldn't wait to join them. 使用现在分词短语作状语,使句子更有层次感。
写作园地 话题写作——看图作文
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,下面四幅图描述了上周日你放学回家的经历。请根据图片的先后顺序,将这件事以日记形式记述下来,并适当表达自己的感受。
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注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.日记的开头已写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:烟斗 pipe; 桶 bucket
April 5th, Sunday Cloudy
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[精彩范文]
April 5th, Sunday Cloudy
There was an old house on my way from school to home. Last Sunday, I happened to see some smoke coming out of its window when I passed by. There was no doubt that the house was on fire. I was so worried that I took immediate actions to solve the problem. I found a bucket far away from the house and carried some water with it. Luckily, the fire did not grow bigger. So I put out the fire with the water at once.To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window. He shouted at me angrily with a wet pipe in his hand. At that moment, it suddenly occurred to me that the smoke was from his pipe. As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.
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