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Section Ⅳ Reading for Writing & Other Parts
Ⅰ.重点词汇
1.plate n.盘子;碟子
2.adventure n.冒险;奇遇
3.youth n.青年时期;青春
4.expert n.专家;行家adj.熟练的;内行的;专家的
5.generation n.一代(人)
6.focus vi.& vt.集中(精力、注意力等);(使)调节焦距 n.中心;重点;焦点
Ⅱ.拓展词汇
1.survive v.生存;存活;幸存;比……活得时间长→survival n.生存;幸存;幸存事物→survivor n.幸存者;生还者
2.behave v.表现;表现得体;有礼貌→behaviour n.行为;举止
3.attract vt.吸引;引起……的注意(或兴趣) →attractive adj.吸引人的;有吸引力的→attraction n.吸引;吸引力;有吸引力的事
4.addict n.对……入迷的人;吸毒成瘾的人→addicted adj.有瘾的;上瘾的;入迷的→addictive adj.使人上瘾的;使人入迷的→addiction n.瘾;入迷;嗜好
5.adult n.成年人 adj.成年的;成熟的→adulthood n.成年
动词加后缀al构成名词,后缀al表示“……的过程/状态”。
survive→survival arrive→arrival
refuse→refusal approve→approval
Ⅲ.短语互译
1.集中;特别关注 focus_on
2.对……很入迷 addicted_to
3.喜爱;被吸引 be_attracted_to
4.be worried about 担忧
5.feel terrible 感觉很糟糕
6.talk to sb. 找某人谈话
7.concentrate on 把精力集中于;全神贯注于
8.try out for 角逐;参加……选拔
9.the number of ... ……的数量
Ⅳ.重点句式
1.句型:动名词短语作主语
教材原句:But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
翻译:然而,花费太多时间上网不健康,也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。
2.句型:Why not+动词原形 ...?
教材原句:Why not discuss the problem together?
翻译:(你们)为什么不一起讨论一下这个问题呢?
3.句型:since引导原因状语从句
教材原句:I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.
翻译:我相信他会听你的,因为你是他的好朋友。
Ⅰ.文本理解
►语篇特征
The text is a letter_of_advice.
►文章架构
►细节探究
1.What's wrong with Worried Friend? ( )
A.He is anxious and feels terrible.
B.He plays computer games too often.
C.He cannot concentrate on school and family life.
D.He wants to discuss the problem with others.
2.What suggestion does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend? ( )
A.To make new friends.
B.To ask parents for help.
C.To talk to his friend.
D.Don't care too much.
3.What's the main idea of the second paragraph? ( )
A.What Worried Friend is worried about.
B.Why he can't spend too much time online.
C.What problems he has.
D.What advice Susan Luo gives.
答案:1~3 ACD
►难句突破
But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
分析:这是一个简单句。句子中动名词短语spending too much time online作主语;and连接两个并列的谓语动词is和makes;makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life是“动词+it+宾语补足语+真正的宾语”结构,其中it是形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式短语to focus on other things in life。
翻译:然而,花费太多时间上网不健康,也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。
►课文语法填空
The Worried Friend is very 1.worried(worry) about his friend,Chen Lei.He thinks that his friend 2.plays(play) computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Susan Luo recommends that he 3.talk(talk) to his friend about his 4.behaviour(behave).It is not unusual for teenagers of his generation 5.to_be_attracted(attract) to computer games and the online world.But 6.spending(spend) too much time online is unhealthy and makes 7.it very difficult to focus on other 8.things(thing) in life.Some students even become addicted 9.to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.She suggests that they discuss the problem together and she is sure his friend will listen to him,10.since they are good friends.
Ⅱ.原文释译
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
❶I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.❷Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. ❸I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.❹Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
参考译文
2018年9月10日
亲爱的有烦恼的朋友:
你在信中写道,你十分担心你的朋友陈雷。我完全理解你的焦虑和担忧。你认为你的朋友玩电脑游戏过于频繁,而且上网时间太长。
我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。你们这一代的青少年被电脑游戏和网络世界吸引,这没有什么不正常。然而,花费太多时间上网不健康,也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。有些学生甚至上网成瘾,无法把精力集中在学习和家庭生活上。我认为你应该鼓励你的朋友去尝试一些新的爱好。(你们)为什么不一起讨论一下这个问题呢?我相信他会听你的,因为你是他的好朋友。
祝一切顺利!
苏珊·罗
◆精学表达
Ⅰ.文本特征
本文是一封比较正式的书信,包括日期、称呼、正文、结尾和署名,是Susan Luo写给一位因朋友沉迷于电脑游戏和网络而为其担忧的青少年的建议信。
Ⅱ.语言特色
1.人物描写
❷使用了形容词短语addicted to和动词短语concentrate on结合否定表达cannot,描写生动形象,发人深省。
2.多变表达
❶❸❹在提出建议时,采用了多样化的句式(“I recommend that ...”“I think you should ...”“Why not ...”),语气委婉。
3.逻辑衔接
巧妙运用连词but和副词even,强调了沉迷网络的危害,情理交融,客观可信,极具说服力。
◆续写积累
1.人物关系描写——朋友
I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.
[仿写]完成句子
我等着我的朋友回来,分享我们的故事。
I waited_for_my_friend to return and shared_our_stories.
2.人物心理描写——担心
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.
[仿写]完成句子
在等待晚餐的时候,她有点担心贾斯珀出错。
While waiting for the dinner to be served,she was_a_little_worried_about Jasper making mistakes.
1 expert n.专家;行家adj.熟练的;内行的;专家的
We'll learn how to live in the wild from some experts.
我们将向一些专家学习如何在野外生存。
[要点突破]
①an expert at/in/on (doing) sth.(做)某事的专家/行家/能手
②be expert on/at/in (doing) sth.在(做)某事上熟练/擅长/内行
[写作佳句]
It's universally acknowledged that Lin Qiaozhi is an expert in women's and children's disease.
林巧稚是举世公认的妇幼疾病专家。
[学以致用]
单句填空/完成句子
①“It's destroying the environment.It's them or us,” says Michael Massimi,an expert in this field.
②Experts(expert) encourage parents to reward their children for their good behaviours.
③They have to be expert at dealing(deal) with any problem that arises at any time.
④I have found you a tai chi coach,Mr.Wang,who is 50 and an expert at/in/on tai chi.
⑤既然你是这方面的专家,你能给我推荐一些合适的音乐剧吗?
Since you are_expert_at/in/on it,would you be so kind as to give me some recommendations on suitable musicals?
2 behaviour n.行为;举止
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.
我建议你和你的朋友谈谈他的行为。
[要点突破]
①behave vi.表现 vt.表现得体;有礼貌
behave oneself有礼貌;表现得体
②wellbehaved adj.彬彬有礼的;(尤指儿童)规规矩矩的
badlybehaved adj.表现差的;不守规矩的
[写作佳句]
She called Susan,apologized for her behaviour and expressed her sincere gratitude.
她打电话给苏珊,为自己的行为道歉,并表达了她真诚的谢意。
[学以致用]
单句填空/完成句子
①After a while,she apologized for the way she behaved(behave) at the beginning.
②Pinocchio promised to study and behaved himself(him).
③Day by day,Debbie's outstanding learning ability and kind behaviour(behave) made her popular among students.
④她是我教过的最可爱、最乖巧的孩子。
She was the_sweetest_and_most_wellbehaved_kid I had ever taught.
⑤鼓励其他同学举止得当也会有帮助。
It would also be helpful to encourage other schoolmates to_behave_properly.
3 attract vt.吸引;引起……的注意(或兴趣)
It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
你们这一代的青少年被电脑游戏和网络世界吸引,这没有什么不正常。
[要点突破]
①attract one's attention/mind吸引某人的注意力
be attracted to喜爱
be attracted by被……吸引
②attraction n.吸引;吸引力;有吸引力的事
tourist attraction 旅游胜地/景点
③attractive adj.吸引人的;诱人的;有吸引力的
be attractive to ...对……有吸引力
[写作佳句]
(2024·全国甲卷)If a pet cat is hungry,it will keep meowing to attract attention and find food.
如果宠物猫饿了,它会一直喵喵叫,以此吸引人的注意并寻求食物。
What attracts me most in Guangxi is that there are many attractions, like the Li River and Elephant Trunk Hill.They are so attractive as to attract eyes from every corner of the world.
广西最吸引我的是有很多景点,像漓江和象鼻山。它们如此有吸引力,以至于吸引着来自世界各个角落的目光。
[学以致用]
单句填空/完成句子
①It has always been an attraction(attract) for those who are keen on anything that is Chinese.
②Beijing is attractive(attract) to tourists for its beautiful scenery and historical sites.
③即使你对京剧的戏剧背景一无所知,你也会被它深深吸引。
You_will_be_strongly_attracted_to Beijing Opera even if you know nothing of the dramatic background of it.
④其中一个书架上的一本书引起了我的注意,于是我拿起了它。
A book on one of the shelves attracted_my_attention/mind,and I picked it up.
⑤她被漓江的美丽所吸引,所以她决定再待两天。
She was_attracted_by the beauty of the Li River,so she decided to stay another two days.
4 focus on 集中;特别关注
But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
然而,花费太多时间上网不健康,也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。
[要点突破]
①focus one's attention/eyes/energy on ...把某人的注意力/目光/精力集中于……
②the focus of attention/concern关注的焦点
[写作佳句]
(2024·北京卷)They focus on one thing and do it really well.
他们只专注于一件事并且把这件事做得很好。
表示“集中(注意力/精力等)于某事”的短语
①pay attention to sth.
②put one's heart into sth.
③fix one's attention/mind on sth.
④concentrate (one's attention/mind) on sth.
[学以致用]
单句填空/一句多译
①I had only focused on the fact that it was another school project and one I wanted to get a good grade on.
②Health and environmental problems have increasingly become the focus of attention/concern.
③吵闹声不绝于耳,我无法专心学习。
→I can't focus_(my_mind/attention)_on_my_studies with all that noise going on.(focus)
→I can't concentrate_(my_mind/attention)_on_my_studies with all that noise going on.(concentrate)
→I can't fix_my_attention/mind_on_my_studies with all that noise going on.(fix)
5 addicted to对……很入迷
Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
有些学生甚至上网成瘾,无法把精力集中在学习和家庭生活上。
[要点突破]
①addicted adj.有瘾的;上瘾的;入迷的
be/become/get addicted to (doing) sth.沉溺于(做)某事;对(做)某事上瘾
②addict n.对……入迷的人;吸毒成瘾的人
a work addict一个工作狂
③addiction n.瘾;入迷;嗜好
addiction to sth.对某物成瘾
④addictive adj.使人上瘾的;使人入迷的
[写作佳句]
Our life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to the Internet games.
如果我们沉迷于网络游戏,我们的生活将会受到很大的影响。
[学以致用]
单句填空/句式升级
①Teenagers addicted(addict) to the Internet are more likely to suffer from depression.
②He successfully quit smoking,and overcame his addiction(addict) to alcohol.
③You should stop taking this medicine because it is addictive(addict).
④They are rock music addicts(addict).
⑤The boy was addicted to computer games,so he couldn't focus on his study.
→Addicted_to_computer_games,the boy couldn't focus on his study.(形容词短语作状语)
动名词短语作主语
But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
然而,花费太多时间上网不健康,也会让你们很难把精力放在生活中的其他事情上。
[情境探究]
①Going from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challenge.
从初中过渡到高中真是一项巨大的挑战。
②Being a volunteer makes me understand love and responsibility.
做志愿者让我理解了爱和责任。
③(2024·新课标 Ⅰ 卷)When I got back home,suddenly riding my bike didn't seem quite as appealing.
我返回家中后,突然间,骑自行车似乎不像原来那样吸引人了。
[要点突破]
①动名词(短语)作主语通常表示泛指习惯性、经常性、不具体的动作;而不定式(短语)作主语则表示特指一次性、未来、具体的动作。动名词(短语)作主语时,谓语动词常用单数。
②动名词的复合结构作主语时,其逻辑主语必须是形容词性物主代词或名词所有格。
③当use、good、pity、time、fun、nice、worth等作表语时,常用it作形式主语,把作主语的动名词后置。其他情况下,当动名词移至句尾时,通常改为不定式形式。
[学以致用]
单句填空/一句多译
①Being_exposed(expose) to sunlight too long is harmful to your skin.
②It's no use arguing (argue) with him over this matter.
③His(he) coming home late worries his mother.
④Playing computer games too much is(be) a waste of time.
⑤他的爱好之一是集邮。
→Collecting_stamps is one of his hobbies.
→It is one of his hobbies _to_collect_stamps.
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