UNIT 4 Section Ⅴ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2025-2026学年高中英语必修第一册（人教版2019）

UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS (单元主题语境：人与自然——自然灾害) Section Ⅴ　Writing Ⅰ 概要写作 新闻摘要写作 ►写作指导 新闻摘要是对一篇新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩。新闻摘要写作要求学生通过阅读新闻文本，提炼其关键信息并归纳其要点。这种写作任务既要求学生有准确的理解能力，又要求学生具有高度的概括能力。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 新闻摘要写作的步骤： 1．阅读文本，摘选关键信息，总结文本各段大意； 2．组织语言，试写摘要； 3．修改内容，完成定稿。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 新闻摘要写作注意的四方面： 1．注意新闻报道的标题、导语和结语，快速把握新闻报道的主要内容，找出新闻的六要素。 2．使用正确的人称和时态。人称和时态一般与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可以转变为第三人称。 3．不得照搬原文，注意包含关键的支撑性信息。写作时句式要多样化，尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性。 4．不要加入自己的观点和评论；不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 ►典例展示 根据本单元教材“Reading and Thinking”语篇内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 【思路点拨】 第一步：确定要点。找段落主题句或整合关键信息，忽略次要信息。 要点1(Para.1)：Strange things were happening in the countryside of northeastern Hebei.(主旨句) 要点2(Para.2)：A strong earthquake hit ________，and many people were _____________．(整合关键信息) 要点3(Para.3)：Everywhere survivors looked，there was nothing but ruins.(主旨句) Tangshan dead or injured UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 要点4(Para.4)：Soon the effective ___________ began after the earthquake.(整合关键信息) 要点5(Para.5)：With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the city's people，a new Tangshan was built upon the earthquake ruins.(主旨句) rescue work UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 第二步：改写关键信息。使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式；使用不同的句子结构表达同样的意思，如改变语态、肯定变否定等；删除主旨句次要信息；整合要点。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 1．单词同义替换：happen→_____；hit→______ 2．用被动语态和分词作状语改写要点2 ____________________________________________________________________________ 3．用destroy的被动语态改写要点3 The whole city ____________________． occur strike Tangshan was struck by a strong earthquake，causing many deaths and injuries. was nearly destroyed UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 4．用并列句整合要点2和要点3 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．删除要点5中次要和重复的信息 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tangshan was struck by a strong earthquake，causing many deaths and injuries and the whole city was nearly destroyed. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people，a new Tangshan was built. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 第三步：添加连接词，使行文连贯。要注意各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词连接全文。常用的关联词有and、then、later、however、besides、therefore、instead 等。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 [参考范文] Strange things occurred in the countryside of northeastern Hebei.Then，Tangshan was struck by a strong earthquake，causing many deaths and injuries and the whole city was nearly destroyed.Soon the effective rescue work began after the earthquake.Later，with strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people，a new Tangshan was built. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 ►实战演练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 GUANGZHOU—At least 25 people have been confirmed dead after Super Typhoon Usagi made landfall in China's Guangdong Province on Sunday evening，according to the provincial flood control headquarters. “Electricity and water supply were cut off in the Huilai County，Jieyang City，and houses were collapsed as wind speeds at the center exceeded 180 km per hour on Sunday afternoon，” said Li Feng，a border police officer of the city. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Intercity trains between Guangzhou，Shenzhen and Zhuhai were suspended(暂停) at 6 p．m. and nearly 50 trains，including those along the high-speed lines to Beijing，Shenzhen and Hong Kong，would be suspended until Tuesday，according to the Guangzhou Railway Corporation. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 At a gas station on National Road 324 near Shanwei City，where at least 13 of the 25 victims were killed，winds were strong enough to blow cars off the road and all traffic was stopped.Resident Li Huolong said he was on his way home in Shanwei when the back window of his car was broken by the wind.Educational authorities in 14 cities ordered schools to suspend classes on Sunday，a school day in China because of the three-day Mid-Autumn Festival which just ended.More than 47，000 fishing boats were in harbor，with nearly 20，000 fishermen kept on shore.All beaches in the province have been closed. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 1．确定要点 Para.1：_______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ Para.2：______________________________________________________ _________________________________________ GUANGZHOU—At least 25 people have been confirmed dead after Super Typhoon Usagi made landfall in China's Guangdong Province on Sunday evening. Electricity and water supply were cut off in the Huilai County，and houses were collapsed. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Para.3：_______________________________________________________ _____________ Para.4：_____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Intercity trains between Guangzhou，Shenzhen and Zhuhai were suspended. Winds were strong enough to blow cars off the road and all traffic was stopped；Educational authorities in 14 cities ordered schools to suspend classes on Sunday；More than 47，000 fishing boats were in harbor，with nearly 20，000 fishermen kept on shore；All beaches in the province have been closed. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 2．要点整合 要点1：_____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ 要点2：_______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Super Typhoon Usagi struck China's Guangdong Province on Sunday evening，causing at least 25 deaths. In addition to having damaged many houses，it also stopped traffic and transports，and even some cars were blown off the road. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 要点3：_____________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ 要点4：_____________________________________________ Electricity and water supply were cut off，and it also kept fishermen on shore and students off school. All beaches in the province have been closed. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 3．连句成篇 [参考范文] Super Typhoon Usagi struck China's Guangdong Province on Sunday evening，causing at least 25 deaths.(要点1)In addition to having damaged many houses，it also stopped traffic and transports，and even some cars were blown off the road.(要点2)What's worse，electricity and water supply were cut off，and it also kept fishermen on shore and students off school.(要点3)All beaches in the province have been closed.(要点4) UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Ⅱ 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I worked as a nurse，I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty.On one shift，I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 a．m.I put down the tray(托盘) on the table and suddenly it fell off the table.At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over，but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 I realized that an earthquake was happening.I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient，who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed.And then，I got under another bed myself.As soon as the earthquake stopped，I decided to try and get the patient safely outside.I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland，where several other people had gathered. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Afraid that my other workmates were in danger，I went back inside the building again.When I met Lucy，our ward sister(护士长)，I found her patient couldn't walk.We made a seat for the patient by linking our hands and arms，and carried her outside together.We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Just then，we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people.So we went together.The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble(碎石)，luckily still alive.Suddenly，the aftershock(余震) struck and the doctor ordered us to leave.The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 1： However，without any hesitation，we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together._____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： Later in the afternoon，I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 [巧读文] 1．读要素 Who：I，a nurse；my workmates；patients；Lucy，our ward sister；a man doctor；one of the nurses (partially covered with rubble) Where：in the hospital When：at 11 a．m. What：A nurse was on duty when the hospital was hit by an earthquake，and she tried to get as many patients out of the ward and hospital building. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 2．读双线(情节线、情感线) 情节线： realized that an earthquake was happening 情感线： calm→afraid→determined UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 [妙构思] 1．读首句，定方向 Paragraph 1： 由续写第一段首句“However，without any hesitation，we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.”可推知，第一段可描写作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。由续写第二段首句“Later in the afternoon，I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.”可知，第一段中救助过程完整，第一段结尾处可描述救助工作结果圆满。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： 由续写第二段首句提到的“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁的建筑”可知，该段首先要描述作者在地震之后看到的情景；结合上文情节提到的齐心协力救助病人逃生以及作者的医护人员的身份可知，文章结局可描述作者的信心和希望。 UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 2．巧设问，定细节 Paragraph 1： (1)What did the doctor do? ____________________________________ (2)What did we do? __________________________ He encouraged the trapped nurse/ ... We removed the bricks/ ... UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 (3)What difficulties were we faced with? ___________________ (4)What was the result of our rescue? ___________________________ Falling rubble/ ... All were in the safe place/ ... UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： (1)What was the hospital like? ________________________________ (2)How did I feel? _______________________________ (3)What did I think of our rescue work? _______________________________ Beyond recognition/in ruins/ ... A weight in my chest/sorry/ ... Teamwork made a difference/ ... UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 (4)What did I think of the future? __________________________________________________________ Come back to life/continue working together to save more patients/ ... UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 [雕句式] 　根据提示升级下列句子 1．The doctor encouraged the nurse who was trapped to stay calm. →_____________________________________________(分词作定语) 2．Suddenly，the gentle wind danced around me，and it made me think of all the people who survived the earthquake with our help. →___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________(非限制性定语从句；分词作定语) The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm. Suddenly，the gentle wind danced around me，which made me think of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 3．Our teamwork made a difference. →______________________________________(强调句型，强调主语) It was our teamwork that made a difference. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 4．I believed some day in the future my workplace would come back to life and take on a new look and that we would continue working together to save more patients here. →________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(同位语从句；非限制性定语从句) I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would come back to life and take on a new look，where we would continue working together to save more patients. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 [成美文] [参考范文] Paragraph 1： However，without any hesitation，we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm，and meanwhile，we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.However，we were faced with falling rubble from time to time，despite which we continued.Gradually and slowly，we lifted UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 the nurse out of the rubble.The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with our help.Finally，all，including patients，nurses and doctors，were in the safe place. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 Paragraph 2： Later in the afternoon，I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition，even some in ruins.At the sight of this，I felt a weight in my chest.Suddenly，the gentle wind danced around me，which made me think of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help.It was our teamwork that made a difference.I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would come back to life and take on a new look，where we would continue working together to save more patients. UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS 高中英语　必修　第一册　R 返回导航 课时梯级训练(二十) 单元综合检测 (五) 谢 谢 $$