Unit 3 Make it happen!发明创造（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版2024八年级上册

Unit 3 Make it happen! 同步写作课讲义-外教版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元以“发明创造”为话题，主要围绕发明的产生因素、发明家的素质以及解决问题的过程展开。此类话题包括“我的发明”“介绍一项发明”“如何正确利用发明物”等，可以从发明物的名称、历史、外观、构造、材料、用途、优缺点和影响等方面进行介绍。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作话题是发明。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：①介绍某项发明产生的背景，如为什么需要这项发明、它解决了什么问题、发明的灵感源自何处；②介绍发明家身上的品质，如具有强烈的好奇心、坚持不懈的精神、敏锐的观察力和独特的创造力、敢于冒险的精神等；③描述发明的影响力以及它是如何改变人类生活的。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 你们学校开展了一次小发明大赛，假设你发明了一种智能外套Smart coat)。请你根据下面的提示内容，以“My invention”为题写一篇作文，介绍你的发明。要求：80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数),可适当发挥。 提示： ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 词汇 发明物 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 light bulb电灯泡 airplane飞机 computer电脑 the internet互联网 compass指南针 smartphone智能手机 artificial intelligence（AI）人工智能 electric car电动车 3-D printer3D打印机 drone无人机 发明的目的 solve problems解决问题 improve life改善生活 make things easier让事情更容易 protect the environment保护环境 save time节省时间 help others帮助他人 meet needs满足需求 发明家的品质 curiosity好奇心 determination决心 patience耐心 creativity创造力 bravery勇敢 intelligence智慧 observation观察力 passion热情 curious好奇的 发明家的品质 determined有决心的 patient有耐心的 creative有创造力的 brave勇敢的 intelligent聪明的 observant善于观察的 diligent勤奋的 open-minded思想开放的 未来发展 in the future在未来 be/become popular with （变得）受……欢迎 bring convenience to life为生活带来便利 create a better future创造更美好的未来 inspire the next generation激励下一代 build a smarter society构建更智能的社会 help solve global problems帮助解决全球问题 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Every great invention begins with a simple idea.每一项伟大的发明都始于一个简单的想法。 The power of invention lies in solving problems and improving lives.发明的力量在于解决问题和改善生活。 Inventions play an important role in shaping our modern world.发明在塑造我们的现代世界方面发挥着重要作用。 Without inventions, life today would be very different.没有发明，今天的生活将大不相同。 中间句 1.介绍发明背景 This invention solves the problem of ..., which troubled many people.这项发明解决了困扰许多人的……问题。 Many inventions come from observing everyday life and finding better ways to do things.许多发明来自对日常生活的观察，并从中找到更好的做事方法。 2.描述发明家的素质 Great inventors like Thomas Edison were curious and determined.像托马斯·爱迪生这样的伟大发明家充满了好奇心和决心。 Inventors often show persistence and creativity, even when facing failure.发明家往往表现出坚持不懈的精神和创造力，即使在面对失败时也是如此。 3.列举发明的影响 The invention of ...has changed ..., making life more convenient. ……的发明改变了……，使生活更加便利。 Thanks to..., we now have... 多亏了……，我们现在有了…… 结尾句 Every invention starts with curiosity and ends with changing the world.每一项发明都始于好奇心，终于改变世界。 In my opinion, ...will be more and more popular in the future, because... 在我看来，……在未来会越来越受欢迎，因为…… ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) My invention My invention is a smart umbrella. The smart umbrella looks like a common umbrella. But there is a camera inside it. With it, we can use the umbrella to take photos. It can also play music for us. Besides, the umbrella can dry itself really soon, so it won’t make things wet on rainy days. We can just use our voice to control it. If we shout “open”, the umbrella will start to work. What’s more, the umbrella uses solar power instead of batteries. My invention is useful, convenient and green. It will help people live a better life in the future. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 发明改变了世界，长大后你想当一名发明家吗？作为一名中学生，你应该怎 样做？请根据以下提示，以“How to become an inventor”为题写一篇 100 词左右的— 4 — 英语短文。 提示：1. 努力学习是基础； 2. 兴趣是最好的老师； 3. 需要创新； 4. 持之以恒，永不放弃。 注意：1. 词数 80—100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）你发明了一款超级书包，现在要去参加科技节设计大赛，需要向评委做相关介绍。请你写一篇介绍稿，可适当拓展： 外形：方便携带，与一本英语书一样轻 用途：能装书，能查询信息 自述发明超级书包的理由（至少两点） 注意： 1. 词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention—a super schoolbag Hello, everyone. I’d like to introduce my invention. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like my invention. Thank you. （3） （23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科技改变世界，各种发明让我们的生活越来越便捷，假设你是校英语报社的编辑，报社以“你心中最伟大的发明”为主题面向全校学生做了调查，以下是获得票数最多的三项发明，请为校英语报写一篇稿件报道调查结果并发表你的观点。 发明 轮子 纸 电脑 投票比例 26% 20% 18% 简介 已有数千年历史；方便人们出行 中国古代四大发明之一；对人类文化传播有重要作用 …… 你的观点 …… 参考词汇：传播 spread 要求： 1．结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2．表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3．文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息； 4．词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Many inventions have greatly changed our life. Last week, we did a survey on “What’s the greatest invention?” in our school, and here is the result. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机(smart phone)、自动语音识别技术(ASR)等； 服务类产品也蓬勃发展， 如网上购物(online shopping)，移动支付(mobile payment)，共享单车(bike sharing)等。请你介绍一款你认为重要的发明，简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。 要求： 1.要点齐全， 可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺、书写规范； 3.词数： 90 词左右； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 参考词汇： benefit 益处 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假如你发明的一款超级书包在区科技节中获奖被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括以下四项。 注意： 1.  请适当拓展，不要直译内容； 2.  词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.  不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention—a super schoolbag My invention is a super schoolbag. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假设你是Li Hua，你校下周将举行科技节活动。你被推荐作为活动的发言人，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学介绍一项重大发明——电脑。 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 (演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 内容： 1. 电脑是世界上最伟大的发明之一，它们改变了世界，并且在我们的日常生活扮演了重要的角色。 2. 便利：人们可以网上购物；学生把它作为学习的工具来学到更多知识； (补充一点) 3. 不足：长时间使用电脑对眼睛不好； (补充一点) 4. 你的看法。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to introduce an important invention to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） （24-25八年级上·广东深圳·单元测试）世界上有很多发明，它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活方式。英语课上，同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一项对你生活影响最大的发明。 提示： 1. What is the invention that influences your life most? 2. How does it influence your life? 3. What’s your feelings about it? 要求： （1）演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）演讲词中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! （8） （23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中）来自“一带一路”沿线的20国青年评选出了“中国的新四大发明”。假如你是李明，是学校英语报社的一名成员。请根据下面表格中的内容提示并适当发挥，用英语写一篇文章，向大家介绍新四大发明并谈谈你的感受。 写作要求 1.必须包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥； 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.80词左右。 中国的新四大发明(new four inventions of China) 特点 具体优点 高铁(high speed train) 快速，安全 遍及中国，旅客快速到达 共享单车(shared bike) 方便 有益环境和健康 移动支付(mobile payment) 简单 …… 网上购物(shopping online) 便宜 …… 你的感受 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $$ Unit 3 Make it happen! 同步写作课讲义-外教版2024八年级上册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元以“发明创造”为话题，主要围绕发明的产生因素、发明家的素质以及解决问题的过程展开。此类话题包括“我的发明”“介绍一项发明”“如何正确利用发明物”等，可以从发明物的名称、历史、外观、构造、材料、用途、优缺点和影响等方面进行介绍。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 本单元的写作话题是发明。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：①介绍某项发明产生的背景，如为什么需要这项发明、它解决了什么问题、发明的灵感源自何处；②介绍发明家身上的品质，如具有强烈的好奇心、坚持不懈的精神、敏锐的观察力和独特的创造力、敢于冒险的精神等；③描述发明的影响力以及它是如何改变人类生活的。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 你们学校开展了一次小发明大赛，假设你发明了一种智能外套Smart coat)。请你根据下面的提示内容，以“My invention”为题写一篇作文，介绍你的发明。要求：80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数),可适当发挥。 提示： ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) 1.in a short time 2.keep warm or cool 3.is good for 4.keep us off rain 5.In a word ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 词汇 发明物 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 light bulb电灯泡 airplane飞机 computer电脑 the internet互联网 compass指南针 smartphone智能手机 artificial intelligence（AI）人工智能 electric car电动车 3-D printer3D打印机 drone无人机 发明的目的 solve problems解决问题 improve life改善生活 make things easier让事情更容易 protect the environment保护环境 save time节省时间 help others帮助他人 meet needs满足需求 发明家的品质 curiosity好奇心 determination决心 patience耐心 creativity创造力 bravery勇敢 intelligence智慧 observation观察力 passion热情 curious好奇的 发明家的品质 determined有决心的 patient有耐心的 creative有创造力的 brave勇敢的 intelligent聪明的 observant善于观察的 diligent勤奋的 open-minded思想开放的 未来发展 in the future在未来 be/become popular with （变得）受……欢迎 bring convenience to life为生活带来便利 create a better future创造更美好的未来 inspire the next generation激励下一代 build a smarter society构建更智能的社会 help solve global problems帮助解决全球问题 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Every great invention begins with a simple idea.每一项伟大的发明都始于一个简单的想法。 The power of invention lies in solving problems and improving lives.发明的力量在于解决问题和改善生活。 Inventions play an important role in shaping our modern world.发明在塑造我们的现代世界方面发挥着重要作用。 Without inventions, life today would be very different.没有发明，今天的生活将大不相同。 中间句 1.介绍发明背景 This invention solves the problem of ..., which troubled many people.这项发明解决了困扰许多人的……问题。 Many inventions come from observing everyday life and finding better ways to do things.许多发明来自对日常生活的观察，并从中找到更好的做事方法。 2.描述发明家的素质 Great inventors like Thomas Edison were curious and determined.像托马斯·爱迪生这样的伟大发明家充满了好奇心和决心。 Inventors often show persistence and creativity, even when facing failure.发明家往往表现出坚持不懈的精神和创造力，即使在面对失败时也是如此。 3.列举发明的影响 The invention of ...has changed ..., making life more convenient. ……的发明改变了……，使生活更加便利。 Thanks to..., we now have... 多亏了……，我们现在有了…… 结尾句 Every invention starts with curiosity and ends with changing the world.每一项发明都始于好奇心，终于改变世界。 In my opinion, ...will be more and more popular in the future, because... 在我看来，……在未来会越来越受欢迎，因为…… ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) My invention My invention is a smart umbrella. The smart umbrella looks like a common umbrella. But there is a camera inside it. With it, we can use the umbrella to take photos. It can also play music for us. Besides, the umbrella can dry itself really soon, so it won’t make things wet on rainy days. We can just use our voice to control it. If we shout “open”, the umbrella will start to work. What’s more, the umbrella uses solar power instead of batteries. My invention is useful, convenient and green. It will help people live a better life in the future. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 发明改变了世界，长大后你想当一名发明家吗？作为一名中学生，你应该怎 样做？请根据以下提示，以“How to become an inventor”为题写一篇 100 词左右的— 4 — 英语短文。 提示：1. 努力学习是基础； 2. 兴趣是最好的老师； 3. 需要创新； 4. 持之以恒，永不放弃。 注意：1. 词数 80—100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How to become an inventor As a student who have a strong will to make contributions to our society, I totally want to become an inventor. But, how can I achieve my goal? Here is my answer. First, studying hard is the basic method. Only when we study hard to learn the knowledge about science and technology can we think of great ideas. Second, interest is the best teacher. It’s hard to imagine a child without a passion for exploring making progress in innovation. Third, we need the spirit of creativity which provides us with different thoughts to solve the problem. What’s more, never give up and stick to our faith. That’s the key to success for all inventors, such as Edison and Zhang Heng. These are what I’ll persist in doing in the future with my whole passion. （2） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）你发明了一款超级书包，现在要去参加科技节设计大赛，需要向评委做相关介绍。请你写一篇介绍稿，可适当拓展： 外形：方便携带，与一本英语书一样轻 用途：能装书，能查询信息 自述发明超级书包的理由（至少两点） 注意： 1. 词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention—a super schoolbag Hello, everyone. I’d like to introduce my invention. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like my invention. Thank you. 【答案】例文： My invention—a super schoolbag Hello, everyone. I’d like to introduce my invention. My invention is a super schoolbag. The schoolbag is small, about as light as an English book, but it is convenient. It can not only hold books, but also be very practical. It can also communicate with people. What’s interesting is that it can also sing and dance. What I like most is that we can ask it for information. I invent it just because I need an alarm clock to remind me to get up and go to bed on time every day. What’s more, it can communicate with me like a friend. I hope you will like my invention. Thank you. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据表格中的提示信息介绍发明的超能书包，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，要介绍超能书包； 第二步，根据表格内容具体介绍超能书包的外形、用途以及发明此书包的理由； 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望大家喜欢这个发明”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①as … as和……一样 ②not only … but also不但……而且 ③remind sb. to do sth.提醒某人做某事 [高分句型] ①What I like most is that we can ask it for much information. (what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句) ②I invent it just because I need an alarm clock to remind me to get up and go to bed on time every day.(because引导的原因状语从句) （3） （23-24八年级上·广东深圳·期中）科技改变世界，各种发明让我们的生活越来越便捷，假设你是校英语报社的编辑，报社以“你心中最伟大的发明”为主题面向全校学生做了调查，以下是获得票数最多的三项发明，请为校英语报写一篇稿件报道调查结果并发表你的观点。 发明 轮子 纸 电脑 投票比例 26% 20% 18% 简介 已有数千年历史；方便人们出行 中国古代四大发明之一；对人类文化传播有重要作用 …… 你的观点 …… 参考词汇：传播 spread 要求： 1．结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2．表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰； 3．文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息； 4．词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Many inventions have greatly changed our life. Last week, we did a survey on “What’s the greatest invention?” in our school, and here is the result. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Many inventions have greatly changed our life. Last week, we did a survey on “What’s the greatest invention?” in our school, and here is the result. 26% of the students chose “Wheel” as the greatest invention. A few thousand years ago, people started to use wheels on carriages. With the help of wheels, travelling became faster and more comfortable. “Paper” was the choice of one fifth of the students. As is known to all, paper-making was one of the four great inventions in ancient China. It plays an important role in spreading human culture. 18% of the students held a view that “computer” was the greatest one. Computers not only help us to calculate at a fast speed, but also do important jobs like operating railways. I think all these inventions are very useful and make our life more convenient. But I think the Internet is the greatest. The world becomes smaller and smaller with the Internet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，介绍最伟大的发明，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出调查结果； 第二步，具体介绍调查结果； 第三步，介绍自己观点。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of在……帮助下 ②As is known to all众所周知 ③play an important role in在……发挥重要的作用 ④not only…but also…不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①I think all these inventions are very useful and make our life more convenient.(宾语从句；并列句) （4） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）当今科技日新月异，各种发明不断涌现。高科技产品在我们的生活中不可或缺，如智能手机(smart phone)、自动语音识别技术(ASR)等； 服务类产品也蓬勃发展， 如网上购物(online shopping)，移动支付(mobile payment)，共享单车(bike sharing)等。请你介绍一款你认为重要的发明，简单描述它并说明你选择它的原因。 要求： 1.要点齐全， 可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺、书写规范； 3.词数： 90 词左右； 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 参考词汇： benefit 益处 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. Among them, I believe the smartphone is one of the most important inventions. The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. It also enables us to communicate with our family and friends through video calls and messages anytime, anywhere. Moreover, smartphones support various applications like online shopping, mobile payment, and bike sharing, making our lives more convenient. The benefits of smartphones are numerous, as they save us time and provide us with endless possibilities. Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. 【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作时必须要描述这项发明，并说明它的益处。 【写作步骤】第一步，点明观点，认为智能手机是重要的发明； 第二步，描述智能手机的功能和带来的便利，如上网、视频通话、信息存储、支持各种应用等； 第三步，总结智能手机的益处，强调其对生活质量的提升。 【亮点词汇】① rapidly快速地 ② invention发明 ③ essential基本的 ④ search for搜索 ⑤ store存储 ⑥ communicate交流 ⑦ convenient方便的 ⑧ benefit益处 【高分句型】①In today’s rapidly advancing world, many inventions have become essential in our daily lives. (现在完成时) ②The smartphone can connect to the Internet, allowing us to search for and store information easily. (非谓语动词) ③Therefore, I think the smartphone is a crucial invention that has significantly improved our quality of life. (宾语从句) （5） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假如你发明的一款超级书包在区科技节中获奖被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展。请用英语介绍你的发明，内容包括以下四项。 注意： 1.  请适当拓展，不要直译内容； 2.  词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.  不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My invention—a super schoolbag My invention is a super schoolbag. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 My invention—a super schoolbag My invention is a super schoolbag. It is different from a traditional one. It is as small as an English textbook and very light. Besides, it is convenient and practical, because it has many functions. Firstly, I can put some books in my super schoolbag, and it can communicate with me. It can also sing songs, dance and search for information I need. Secondly, the schoolbag can remind me to get up and go to bed on time. Thirdly, the super schoolbag only uses solar energy, so it won’t produce any pollution. Do you like my invention? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图片提示”中你的发明的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的发明是什么，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述这项发明的具体特点和功能； 第三步，书写结语。希望大家喜欢自己的发明。 [亮点词汇] ①be different from和……是不同的 ②communicate with与……交流 ③ remind sb to do sth提醒某人去做某事 ④on time准时 [高分句型] ① Besides, it is convenient and practical, because it has many functions. (because引导原因状语从句) ②Thirdly, the super schoolbag only uses solar energy, so it won’t produce any pollution. (so连接并列句) （6） （23-24八年级上·广东广州·期中）假设你是Li Hua，你校下周将举行科技节活动。你被推荐作为活动的发言人，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，向同学介绍一项重大发明——电脑。 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 (演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 内容： 1. 电脑是世界上最伟大的发明之一，它们改变了世界，并且在我们的日常生活扮演了重要的角色。 2. 便利：人们可以网上购物；学生把它作为学习的工具来学到更多知识； (补充一点) 3. 不足：长时间使用电脑对眼睛不好； (补充一点) 4. 你的看法。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to introduce an important invention to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to introduce an important invention to you. The computer is one of the greatest inventions in the world. They have changed the world and played an important role in our daily life. People can shop online if they don’t want to go out. What’s more, they can help solve problems and make students learn more. Students can watch English videos and learn spoken English. But there are some disadvantages. On the one hand, using computer for a long time is bad for eyes. On the other hand, bad information on the Internet can affect students’ study easily. In my opinion, it is important for us to use computers properly. Parents can manage students’ online time and content more. That’s all! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍一项重大发明——电脑”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，表明演讲的意图； 第二步，点评电脑是世界上最伟大的发明之一，并介绍其作用，带来的便利等； 第三步，介绍电脑带来的一些不好的方面，号召人们合理使用电脑。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色 ②what’s more更重要的是 [高分句型] ①People can shop online if they don’t want to go out. （条件状语从句） ②In my opinion, it is important for us to use computers properly.（it is adj for sb to do固定句型） （7） （24-25八年级上·广东深圳·单元测试）世界上有很多发明，它们正在渐渐地改变我们的生活方式。英语课上，同学们正在准备以“The invention that influences my life most”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一项对你生活影响最大的发明。 提示： 1. What is the invention that influences your life most? 2. How does it influence your life? 3. What’s your feelings about it? 要求： （1）演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （2）演讲词中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； （3）词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your attention! 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua and I’m very happy to stand here to talk about an invention that influences my life most. Many inventions change our life. As far as I’m concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most. Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy goods from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet，and it opens up my eyes. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax. All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever. Thanks for your attention! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示写篇演讲稿，谈谈最影响我们生活的发明，包括这种发明是什么、它是怎样影响我们生活的，以及自己对它的感受。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇点题（已给出）； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍这种发明是如何影响生活的，以及对它的感受； 第三步，最后表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ① as far as sb is concerned 就某人而言 ② surf the Internet 网上冲浪 ③keep in touch with 和……保持联系 [高分句型] ① More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens up my eyes.（副词比较级的使用） ② It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax.（并列连词not only...but also...的使用） （8） （23-24八年级下·广东深圳·期中）来自“一带一路”沿线的20国青年评选出了“中国的新四大发明”。假如你是李明，是学校英语报社的一名成员。请根据下面表格中的内容提示并适当发挥，用英语写一篇文章，向大家介绍新四大发明并谈谈你的感受。 写作要求 1.必须包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥； 2.条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.80词左右。 中国的新四大发明(new four inventions of China) 特点 具体优点 高铁(high speed train) 快速，安全 遍及中国，旅客快速到达 共享单车(shared bike) 方便 有益环境和健康 移动支付(mobile payment) 简单 …… 网上购物(shopping online) 便宜 …… 你的感受 …… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I feel happy and proud to introduce “China’s new four great inventions” to you. First, high-speed railways. They are safe and convenient. The high-speed trains operate across the country and travellers can arrive at destinations quickly. Second, shared bicycles. They are not only environment friendly, but also very convenient. At the same time, you are doing exereise while riding bicycles. Third, electronic payments. They are convenient and speedy. You can pay by tapping on your mobile phone. In addition, you needn’t take change. Fourth, online shopping. It is convenient and cheap. What’s more, you can be served without going out. In a word, with the rapid development of science and technology in China, people’s life has changed a lot in many ways. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏表格中的要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，开门见山，引出话题； ②第二步，具体介绍新四大发明及特点以及具体优点； ③第三步，书写结语，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①proud自豪的 ②not only...but also...不但……而且…… ③go out出去 ④in many ways在许多方面 [高分句型] The high-speed trains operate across the country and travellers can arrive at destinations quickly.（and并列句） $$