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Unit 6 Fantastic friends
同步写作课讲义-外研版2024七年级上册
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⭐话题解读⭐
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本单元的话题是“人与动物”,与此相关的写作任务是能写出描述人与动物之间关系的短文。写作时,要先确定写什么动物,再简单写它的外形及个性特点,还要点明动物对人类的重要性、保护动物有哪些措施,最后发出倡议,呼吁人们保护动物。写此类作文时,时态通常用一般现在时,人称通常为第一人称和第三人称。
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⭐写作任务⭐
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本单元以“神奇的动物”为话题,主要围绕了解动物、感谢动物、保护动物等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
1.制作动物简介;2.介绍濒危动物;3.保护野生动物。
写作时,介绍动物多用第三人称,呼吁保护动物多用第一人称;时态以一般现在时为主。对动物的介绍可从外貌特征、生活习性、生活地区、濒危原因、如何保护等方面来展开。
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⭐审题指导⭐
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动物是人类的朋友,而许多动物却濒临灭绝。对此我们该做些什么?某英语报组织了一次以“An Animal in Danger”为题的征文活动。请从以下方面,用英语写一篇短文投稿,词数80左右。
提示要求:1.介绍某种濒危动物;2.濒危原因及建议。
参考词汇:public service advertisement 公益广告
写作要求: (1)80词左右; (2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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⭐写作框架⭐
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任务读写
动物是人类的朋友,而许多动物却濒临灭绝。对此我们该做些什么?某英语报组织了一次以“An Animal in Danger”为题的征文活动。请从以下方面,用英语写一篇短文投稿,词数80左右。
提示要求:1.介绍某种濒危动物;2.濒危原因及建议。
参考词汇:public service advertisement 公益广告
I.谋篇布局
第一步:审题
人称:第三人称和第一人称;时态:一般现在
第二步:列提纲
第一段:开篇引出话题,介绍濒危动物。
Some animals are in danger now. The panda is one of them.
第二段:详细叙述,介绍动物特征及濒危原因。
...live(s) in...;They feed on.../Their main food is...;Pandas are one of people’s favorite animals. Sadly/Unluckily, the situation of ...is very difficult. One of the reasons is that...;Pandas don’t have enough food because...
第三段:结尾提出建议。
In order to make a better life for pandas, we can...;It is also a good idea to...
第三步:遣词造句
1.It+be+adj./名词短语+to do sth.表示“做某事是…….的”。
[例句] It’s surprising to learn about some knowledge about beavers.了解到河狸的知识令人感到惊讶。
2. One of the reasons is that… 其中的一个原因是……。
[例句] One of the reasons that people cut down lots of trees. 其中的一个原因是人们砍到了大量的树。
3.in order to表示目的,意为“为了”。
[例句] In order to watch tigers, they put some cameras in the forest.为了观察老虎,他们在森林里放了一些摄像机。
第四步:文段润色
(1) 利用such as, sadly, and, because等连接句子,文章过渡自然;
(2)运用one of the reasons that…和because引导的原因状语从句和动词不定式表示目的及It+be+形容词/名词短语+to do sth.等结构让文章增色。
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⭐素材宝库⭐
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词汇积累
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外貌
fat and hairy胖胖的,毛茸茸的 small ears小耳朵 black and white黑白相间的 short tail短尾巴
特点
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cute可爱的
strong强壮的
lazy懒惰的
eat bamboo吃竹子
climb trees爬树
like sleeping喜欢睡觉
濒危的原因
cut down trees砍伐树木
have few babies幼崽少
destroy their homes破坏它们的家园
in danger处在危险中
措施
try our best to do sth.尽我们最大的努力做某事
stop doing sth.停止做某事
protect forests保护森林
build nature reserves建立自然保护区
care for关爱
tell people to do sth.告诉人们做某事
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句型积累
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开头句
Today I want to talk about pandas.今天我想谈论一下大熊猫。
中间句
1.与外貌、特点相关
They are black and white.它们是黑白相间的。
They are fat and hairy.它们胖胖的,毛茸茸的。
They have small ears and a short tail.它们长着小小的耳朵和短短的尾巴。
They are cute but strong.它们可爱但强壮。
They like climbing trees and sleeping.它们喜欢爬树和睡觉。
They eat bamboo leaves.它们吃竹叶。
2.濒危的原因
Some people cut down forests and pandas lose their homes.一些人砍伐森林,大熊猫失去了它们的家园。
Pandas have few babies.大熊猫产崽少。
3.保护措施
We should try our best to protect pandas.我们应该尽最大的努力保护大熊猫。
To protect pandas, China builds many nature reserves.为了保护大熊猫,中国建立了很多自然保护区。
We can tell people more things about pandas and ask them to care for pandas.我们可以告诉人们更多关于大熊猫的事情,并让他们关爱大熊猫。
4.大熊猫现状
China has built many nature reserves, and the number of pandas grows.中国已经建立了许多自然保护区,大熊猫的数量也在增加。
There are about 1,900 pandas in the wild now.现在野外大熊猫的数量大约是1 900只。
Well, pigeons aren’t boring or scary. They are AMAZING...
Please try your best to help them.
They cut down the trees and our lovely forest was gone.
What’s more, their pigs, cats and dogs ate our eggs.
结尾句
The panda is a symbol of China. We must protect it.大熊猫是中国的象征,我们必须保护它。
Pandas are important to nature. It is important for us to protect them.大熊猫对大自然很重要。保护它们对我们来说很重要。
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⭐参考范文⭐
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An Animal in Danger
It’s sad to think of animals in danger, such as the panda.
Pandas are white and black. Their main food is bamboo. They are possibly people’s favorite animal. Sadly, the situation of pandas is very difficult. One of the reasons is that pandas don’t produce many babies and baby pandas often die. And pandas don’t have enough food because the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
In order to help pandas live in peace, we can set up more nature parks. It is also a good idea to raise money and make public service advertisements for them.
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⭐写作拓展⭐
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变式提升训练
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(1)
请你根据下表写一篇关于老虎的报告,并呼吁人们采取措施来保护它们。词数不少于100。
Appearance
big and strong,orange fur with dark stripes(条纹)
Food
other animals
Abilities
can run fast,but only for a short while
Behaviour
prefer to live alone
Why in danger
people kill them for their fur, bones or other parts of the body
A report about tigers
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【范文赏读】
A report about tigers
Tigers are very big and strong. They feed on other animals. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They look so beautiful. Tigers can run very fast, but they can only run for a short while. They prefer to live alone when they grow up.
However, tigers are now in danger, because people kill them for their fur, bones or other parts of the body. The population of tigers is becoming smaller and smaller. If we do nothing, soon there may be none left in the world.
In order to keep the balance of nature, we shouldn’t kill tigers for any reasons. Let’s try our best to protect wild animals and our environment.
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动物是人类亲密的朋友,人类是动物信赖的伙伴。你喜欢的动物呢?假设你参加的英语社团举办了以“My Favourite Animal”为题的征文比赛,请你根据以下要点写一篇英文征文稿:
内容包括:
1. 描述一种你喜欢的动物;
2. 列举保护动物的途径(至少两条);
3. 呼吁大家爱护动物,与动物和谐相处。
作文要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。征文稿的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
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My Favourite Animal
Animals are our friends. My favourite animal is the panda. Pandas are black and white. They like eating bamboo and also like sleeping. You may think they are a little lazy. Actually they aren’t boring——they are amazing.
Pandas are one of the symbols of China. So please try our best to protect them. First, people shouldn’t cut down the trees so that there are more forests for them to live in. Besides, people should not hunt pandas. What’s more, we should take good care of them, especially the baby pandas.
Pandas are very important animals. Let’s take action and save pandas together.
(3)
(24-25七年级上·北京门头沟·期末)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter发来邮件,想了解你最喜欢的动物是什么。请你回复邮件,介绍你最喜欢的动物以及它的特别之处,和你了解它的方式。根据提示,完成一篇不少于40词的英语文段写作提示词语:recognize, watch, online search, library, amazing
提示问题:
• What’s your favourite animal?
• What’s special about it?
• How did you learn about it?
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? It was great to hear from you. You asked me about my favourite animal. Well, I really like animals.
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What is your favourite animal? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? It was great to hear from you. You asked me about my favourite animal. Well, I really like animals.
My favourite animal is the giant panda. It is special because it has a unique black and white coat and mainly eats bamboo. I think pandas are amazing because they look so cute and calm. I first learned about them by watching a documentary and later did some online research. I also borrowed books from the library to know more about their habitat and life.
What is your favourite animal? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的动物和特殊地方;
第二步,介绍自己是如何知道它的。
[亮点词汇]
① online research 在线研究
② habitat 栖息地
[高分句型]
It is special because it has a unique black and white coat and mainly eats bamboo. (原因状语从句)
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(24-25七年级上·浙江温州·期末)大自然里有各种各样神奇的动物,有些是人类的好朋友,有些是人类的好帮手,有些需要人类的帮助。本周是“我爱动物”英语文化周,请为学校展板推选一种展示的动物,并为其撰写讲解稿。
要求:(1)文中须包含下图要点,可适当拓展;
(2)文中不能出现真实学校、班级、姓名等信息;
(3)词数60词左右,首句已给单词不计入总词数。
Let me introduce the ________ on the display board.
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【答案】例文
Let me introduce the panda on the display board. Pandas are black and white. They are very cute. They live in the forests. They like eating bamboo. Pandas are good at climbing trees. They can also swim. But pandas are in danger, because people cut forests in the past. So they need people’s help. In my opinion, pandas are amazing and they are our friends. Let’s try our best to protect pandas and their forests.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:本文写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,引出自己要介绍的动物——熊猫;
第二步,介绍熊猫的基本信息,如外貌、食物、家园;介绍其特别的技能,以及和人类的关系;
第三步,发表观点,呼吁人们保护大熊猫的它们的家园。
[亮点词汇]
①live in居住在
②be good at擅长
③be in danger处于危险之中
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①But pandas are in danger, because people cut forests in the past.(because引导原因状语从句)
(5)
(24-25七年级上·陕西·期末)假如你是Kevin,是学校动物爱好者俱乐部的一名成员。城市动物园新来了一只名叫卡卡的长颈鹿,请你根据以下表格内容,用英语写一篇短文,向你们俱乐部的其他成员介绍一下这只长颈鹿。
卡卡的信息姓名:Kaka 来自:非洲(Africa)
年龄:6岁 身高:5米
食物:树叶和胡萝卜
生活习惯:一天睡两个小时;喜欢玩水;擅长奔跑
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member in our city zoo.
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member in our city zoo. It is a giraffe. Its name is Kaka. It comes from Africa and it is six years old. It has a long neck and it is five metres tall. Leaves and carrots are its favourite food and they are very healthy. It only sleeps two hours a day and it really likes playing with water. It is also very good at running with its long legs. I’m sure you will like it very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中长颈鹿卡卡的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“城市动物园新来了一只名叫卡卡的长颈鹿”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“身高、食物、生活习惯等”几个方面重点介绍长颈鹿卡卡的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自;
②like doing sth喜欢做某事;
③be good at擅长;
④let sb to do sth让某人做某事。
[高分句型]
①There is a new member in our city zoo. (“there be”句型)
②I’m sure you will like it very much. (省略that的宾语从句)
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(24-25七年级上·陕西渭南·期末)假如你是王梅,是第五中学的学生。今天是星期日,天气晴朗,你和父母去动物园游玩。请你根据以下表格内容,写一篇英语短文,描述一下你在动物园里看到了什么动物以及动物们正在干什么。
climb trees
sing
sleep
drink water
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
I am Wang Mei. I am a student in No. 5 Middle School.
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【答案】例文
I am Wang Mei. I am a student in No. 5 Middle School. It is Sunday today. The weather is good. I go to the zoo with my parents. There are many animals in the zoo, such as monkeys, birds, pandas and elephants. Look! Some monkeys are climbing trees. They are so cute. The birds are singing in the tree. They look happy. The pandas are sleeping. They are quiet. The elephants are big and tall. They’re drinking water. We are having a good time at the zoo.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的个人信息;
第二步,具体介绍在动物园里看到了什么动物以及动物们正在干什么;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go to the zoo去动物园
②such as例如
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
There are many animals in the zoo, such as monkeys, birds, pandas and elephants. (There be句型)
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(24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试)学校正在开展“动物保护月”系列活动,你校英语俱乐部以“My Favourite Animal”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 它的外貌特点(体形大小、皮毛颜色、眼睛……);
2. 你喜爱它的原因(它可以帮助寻找东西、保护主人、陪伴……);
3. 你对人和动物的关系的看法。
注意:
1. 词数为70左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:pointed(adj. 尖的),care for(照顾),loyal(adj. 忠诚的)
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is dogs. I have a dog named Max. He is strong with brown fur, pointed ears and a small tail.
I love dogs because they are loyal. Max is always there for me. He sleeps in my room, plays with me, and protects me from danger. He can often help us find the things we want. With the help of my dog, everything in my family is fine.
Animals are our friends. We should care for them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你最喜欢的动物的外貌特点;
第二步,表达你喜欢它的原因;
第三步,最后谈谈你对人和动物的关系的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① play with和……玩
② protect sb from保护……免于……
③ with the help of在……帮助下
[高分句型]
I love dogs because they are loyal.(原因状语从句)
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(24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试)保护动物是我们每个人的使命。假如你校即将举办以 “Protect Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.讲述你为保护动物所做过的事情。
2.感悟:动物是人类的朋友,保护动物就是保护我们自己。
3.谈谈你以后的打算 (至少两点)。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am kind and I love animals.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I am kind and I love animals. I raised money for elephants last year. And I kept some homeless animals at home.
Animals are our friends. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
In the future, I will work harder and do more to protect animals. First, I will join the animal protection club and learn more about animals. Second, I will also ask my family and friends to protect animals. I hope everyone can try their best to make the animals live in peace.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲述为保护动物所做过的事情;
第二步,表达感悟;
第三步,谈谈以后的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①raise money筹钱
②ask sb to do sth让某人做某事
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves. (宾语从句,动名词作主语)
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同步写作课讲义-外研版2024七年级上册
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⭐话题解读⭐
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本单元的话题是“人与动物”,与此相关的写作任务是能写出描述人与动物之间关系的短文。写作时,要先确定写什么动物,再简单写它的外形及个性特点,还要点明动物对人类的重要性、保护动物有哪些措施,最后发出倡议,呼吁人们保护动物。写此类作文时,时态通常用一般现在时,人称通常为第一人称和第三人称。
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⭐写作任务⭐
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本单元以“神奇的动物”为话题,主要围绕了解动物、感谢动物、保护动物等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
1.制作动物简介;2.介绍濒危动物;3.保护野生动物。
写作时,介绍动物多用第三人称,呼吁保护动物多用第一人称;时态以一般现在时为主。对动物的介绍可从外貌特征、生活习性、生活地区、濒危原因、如何保护等方面来展开。
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⭐审题指导⭐
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动物是人类的朋友,而许多动物却濒临灭绝。对此我们该做些什么?某英语报组织了一次以“An Animal in Danger”为题的征文活动。请从以下方面,用英语写一篇短文投稿,词数80左右。
提示要求:1.介绍某种濒危动物;2.濒危原因及建议。
参考词汇:public service advertisement 公益广告
写作要求: (1)80词左右; (2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
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⭐写作框架⭐
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任务读写
动物是人类的朋友,而许多动物却濒临灭绝。对此我们该做些什么?某英语报组织了一次以“An Animal in Danger”为题的征文活动。请从以下方面,用英语写一篇短文投稿,词数80左右。
提示要求:1.介绍某种濒危动物;2.濒危原因及建议。
参考词汇:public service advertisement 公益广告
I.谋篇布局
第一步:审题
人称:第三人称和第一人称;时态:一般现在
第二步:列提纲
第一段:开篇引出话题,介绍濒危动物。
Some animals are in danger now. The panda is one of them.
第二段:详细叙述,介绍动物特征及濒危原因。
...live(s) in...;They feed on.../Their main food is...;Pandas are one of people’s favorite animals. Sadly/Unluckily, the situation of ...is very difficult. One of the reasons is that...;Pandas don’t have enough food because...
第三段:结尾提出建议。
In order to make a better life for pandas, we can...;It is also a good idea to...
第三步:遣词造句
1.It+be+adj./名词短语+to do sth.表示“做某事是…….的”。
[例句] It’s surprising to learn about some knowledge about beavers.了解到河狸的知识令人感到惊讶。
2. One of the reasons is that… 其中的一个原因是……。
[例句] One of the reasons that people cut down lots of trees. 其中的一个原因是人们砍到了大量的树。
3.in order to表示目的,意为“为了”。
[例句] In order to watch tigers, they put some cameras in the forest.为了观察老虎,他们在森林里放了一些摄像机。
第四步:文段润色
(1) 利用such as, sadly, and, because等连接句子,文章过渡自然;
(2)运用one of the reasons that…和because引导的原因状语从句和动词不定式表示目的及It+be+形容词/名词短语+to do sth.等结构让文章增色。
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⭐素材宝库⭐
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词汇积累
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外貌
fat and hairy胖胖的,毛茸茸的 small ears小耳朵 black and white黑白相间的 short tail短尾巴
特点
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cute可爱的
strong强壮的
lazy懒惰的
eat bamboo吃竹子
climb trees爬树
like sleeping喜欢睡觉
濒危的原因
cut down trees砍伐树木
have few babies幼崽少
destroy their homes破坏它们的家园
in danger处在危险中
措施
try our best to do sth.尽我们最大的努力做某事
stop doing sth.停止做某事
protect forests保护森林
build nature reserves建立自然保护区
care for关爱
tell people to do sth.告诉人们做某事
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句型积累
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开头句
Today I want to talk about pandas.今天我想谈论一下大熊猫。
中间句
1.与外貌、特点相关
They are black and white.它们是黑白相间的。
They are fat and hairy.它们胖胖的,毛茸茸的。
They have small ears and a short tail.它们长着小小的耳朵和短短的尾巴。
They are cute but strong.它们可爱但强壮。
They like climbing trees and sleeping.它们喜欢爬树和睡觉。
They eat bamboo leaves.它们吃竹叶。
2.濒危的原因
Some people cut down forests and pandas lose their homes.一些人砍伐森林,大熊猫失去了它们的家园。
Pandas have few babies.大熊猫产崽少。
3.保护措施
We should try our best to protect pandas.我们应该尽最大的努力保护大熊猫。
To protect pandas, China builds many nature reserves.为了保护大熊猫,中国建立了很多自然保护区。
We can tell people more things about pandas and ask them to care for pandas.我们可以告诉人们更多关于大熊猫的事情,并让他们关爱大熊猫。
4.大熊猫现状
China has built many nature reserves, and the number of pandas grows.中国已经建立了许多自然保护区,大熊猫的数量也在增加。
There are about 1,900 pandas in the wild now.现在野外大熊猫的数量大约是1 900只。
Well, pigeons aren’t boring or scary. They are AMAZING...
Please try your best to help them.
They cut down the trees and our lovely forest was gone.
What’s more, their pigs, cats and dogs ate our eggs.
结尾句
The panda is a symbol of China. We must protect it.大熊猫是中国的象征,我们必须保护它。
Pandas are important to nature. It is important for us to protect them.大熊猫对大自然很重要。保护它们对我们来说很重要。
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⭐参考范文⭐
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An Animal in Danger
It’s sad to think of animals in danger, such as the panda.
Pandas are white and black. Their main food is bamboo. They are possibly people’s favorite animal. Sadly, the situation of pandas is very difficult. One of the reasons is that pandas don’t produce many babies and baby pandas often die. And pandas don’t have enough food because the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
In order to help pandas live in peace, we can set up more nature parks. It is also a good idea to raise money and make public service advertisements for them.
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⭐写作拓展⭐
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变式提升训练
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(1)
请你根据下表写一篇关于老虎的报告,并呼吁人们采取措施来保护它们。词数不少于100。
Appearance
big and strong,orange fur with dark stripes(条纹)
Food
other animals
Abilities
can run fast,but only for a short while
Behaviour
prefer to live alone
Why in danger
people kill them for their fur, bones or other parts of the body
A report about tigers
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(2)
动物是人类亲密的朋友,人类是动物信赖的伙伴。你喜欢的动物呢?假设你参加的英语社团举办了以“My Favourite Animal”为题的征文比赛,请你根据以下要点写一篇英文征文稿:
内容包括:
1. 描述一种你喜欢的动物;
2. 列举保护动物的途径(至少两条);
3. 呼吁大家爱护动物,与动物和谐相处。
作文要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名;
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。征文稿的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
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(3)
(24-25七年级上·北京门头沟·期末)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter发来邮件,想了解你最喜欢的动物是什么。请你回复邮件,介绍你最喜欢的动物以及它的特别之处,和你了解它的方式。根据提示,完成一篇不少于40词的英语文段写作提示词语:recognize, watch, online search, library, amazing
提示问题:
• What’s your favourite animal?
• What’s special about it?
• How did you learn about it?
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? It was great to hear from you. You asked me about my favourite animal. Well, I really like animals.
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What is your favourite animal? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
(4)
(24-25七年级上·浙江温州·期末)大自然里有各种各样神奇的动物,有些是人类的好朋友,有些是人类的好帮手,有些需要人类的帮助。本周是“我爱动物”英语文化周,请为学校展板推选一种展示的动物,并为其撰写讲解稿。
要求:(1)文中须包含下图要点,可适当拓展;
(2)文中不能出现真实学校、班级、姓名等信息;
(3)词数60词左右,首句已给单词不计入总词数。
Let me introduce the ________ on the display board.
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(24-25七年级上·陕西·期末)假如你是Kevin,是学校动物爱好者俱乐部的一名成员。城市动物园新来了一只名叫卡卡的长颈鹿,请你根据以下表格内容,用英语写一篇短文,向你们俱乐部的其他成员介绍一下这只长颈鹿。
卡卡的信息姓名:Kaka 来自:非洲(Africa)
年龄:6岁 身高:5米
食物:树叶和胡萝卜
生活习惯:一天睡两个小时;喜欢玩水;擅长奔跑
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! My name is Kevin. There is a new member in our city zoo.
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(24-25七年级上·陕西渭南·期末)假如你是王梅,是第五中学的学生。今天是星期日,天气晴朗,你和父母去动物园游玩。请你根据以下表格内容,写一篇英语短文,描述一下你在动物园里看到了什么动物以及动物们正在干什么。
climb trees
sing
sleep
drink water
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
I am Wang Mei. I am a student in No. 5 Middle School.
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(24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试)学校正在开展“动物保护月”系列活动,你校英语俱乐部以“My Favourite Animal”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 它的外貌特点(体形大小、皮毛颜色、眼睛……);
2. 你喜爱它的原因(它可以帮助寻找东西、保护主人、陪伴……);
3. 你对人和动物的关系的看法。
注意:
1. 词数为70左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:pointed(adj. 尖的),care for(照顾),loyal(adj. 忠诚的)
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is
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(24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试)保护动物是我们每个人的使命。假如你校即将举办以 “Protect Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.讲述你为保护动物所做过的事情。
2.感悟:动物是人类的朋友,保护动物就是保护我们自己。
3.谈谈你以后的打算 (至少两点)。
注意:
1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I am kind and I love animals.
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Thanks for listening!
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