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2025年期末|北京海淀初一下期末英语作文真题介绍中国传统节日端午节
写 作 任 务假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter想了解中国传统节日端午节。请用英文给他写一封电子邮件,描述你和家人通常如何度过端午节,并分享你对这个节日的感受。
提示词语:make zongzi, watch dragon boat races, hang mugwort(艾草), relaxed
提示问题:●What do you and your family usually do on the Dragon Boat Festival?
●How do you feel about this festival?
Dear Peter,
I am glad 're interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in China. I'd like to tell you what we usually do on that day.
思 路 点 拨
第一步:审题
关键词:名人名言、"My Understanding of Failure"、情绪控制、积极乐观内容确定:征文、第一人称
第二步:写作提纲1. 开头:直接回应笔友的兴趣,引出要介绍的内容。
2. 中间: 庆祝活动:包粽子,看龙舟赛, 挂艾草,个人感受。
3. 结尾:表达期待对方分享节日情况。
第三步:选词组句可能用到的词语及中文解释:
1.festival:节日2. bamboo leaves:竹叶 3. rower:划船的人
4. keep... away:使……远离
高 分 作 文高分作文一:
Dear Peter,
I am glad 're interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in China. I'd like to tell you what we usually do on that day.
In the morning, my family and I make zongzi together. We prepare different fillings like red beans and meat. Then we wrap them in bamboo leaves carefully. After that, we go to the river to watch dragon boat races. The boats are colorful and the rowers are full of energy. It's really exciting to see them compete. When we get home, we hang mugwort on the doors.
I always feel very relaxed and happy during the Dragon Boat Festival. It's a time for family to get together and have fun. I hope you can tell me about your festivals too. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的彼得:
我很高兴你对中国端午节感兴趣。我想跟你讲讲我们通常在这一天会做些什么。
早上,我和家人一起动手包粽子。我们准备了像红豆、肉这类不同的馅料。接着,我们小心翼翼地把馅料包进竹叶里。包完粽子后,我们就前往河边观看龙舟比赛。那些龙舟色彩鲜艳,划船手们都活力满满。看到他们奋力比赛,真的特别激动人心。回到家后,我们会在门上挂艾草。
在端午节期间,我总是感觉十分放松和开心。这是一个家人相聚、共享欢乐的时刻。我希望你也能给我讲讲你们国家的节日。祝好!
你的,
李华
高分作文二:Dear Peter,
I am glad 're interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in China. I'd like to tell you what we usually do on that day.
On the morning of the festival, we start by making zongzi. My mom teaches me how to put the fillings into the bamboo leaves and tie them up. It's a bit difficult but fun. Then we head to the riverbank to watch the dragon boat races. The sound of the drums and the cheers of the crowd make the atmosphere very lively. After coming back, we hang mugwort on the doors to bring good luck.
I feel so relaxed and joyful during the Dragon Boat Festival. It's not only a traditional festival but also a great chance for family reunion. I'm looking forward to hearing about your festivals.
Yours,
Li Hua
亲爱的彼得:
得知你想了解端午节,我特别开心。让我给你分享一下我和家人在这个特别日子里的过节方式。
节日当天的早上,我们开始包粽子。妈妈耐心地教我怎样把馅料放进竹叶里,再把它们包扎好。这过程有点难,但特别有趣。之后,我们来到河岸边观看龙舟比赛。鼓声阵阵,人群的欢呼声此起彼伏,现场气氛十分热烈。看完比赛回来,我们在门上挂上艾草,希望能带来好运。
在端午节期间,我感到无比放松和愉悦。它不仅仅是一个传统节日,更是家人团聚的绝佳机会。我期待着听你讲讲你们国家的节日。
你的,
李华
好 句 背 诵
以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达:1. I'm glad you're interested in the Dragon Boat Festival in China.• 中文翻译:我很高兴你对中国的端午节感兴趣。
• 理由:开篇直接点明主题,表达出对对方兴趣的积极回应,语气亲切自然,为后文介绍端午节做铺垫,容易拉近与读者的距离。
2. We prepare different fillings like red beans and meat.
• 中文翻译:我们准备了像红豆、肉这类不同的馅料。
• 理由:用“like”举例说明馅料的种类,清晰明了,让读者能快速了解包粽子时所用材料的具体情况,增强了内容的真实感和画面感。
3. The boats are colorful and the rowers are full of energy.
• 中文翻译:那些龙舟色彩鲜艳,划船手们都活力满满。
理由:此句通过简洁的描述,分别从龙舟的外观和划船手的状态两个方面进行刻画,生动地展现出龙舟比赛现场热闹、充满活力的场景,使读者仿佛身临其境。
4. My mom teaches me how to put the fillings into the bamboo leaves and tie them up.• 中文翻译:妈妈耐心地教我怎样把馅料放进竹叶里,再把它们包扎好。
理由:详细描述了包粽子过程中妈妈教导自己的具体动作,使用“teach sb. how to do sth.”的结构,使句子逻辑清晰,突出了家庭活动中的互动和传承,让读者感受到温馨的家庭氛围。
5. The sound of the drums and the cheers of the crowd make the atmosphere very lively.• 中文翻译:鼓声阵阵,人群的欢呼声此起彼伏,现场气氛十分热烈。
• 理由:通过对鼓声和人群欢呼声的描写,以及“make the atmosphere very lively”的表述,从听觉角度营造出龙舟比赛现场热烈的氛围,增强了文章的感染力和画面感。
6. It's not only a traditional festival but also a great chance for family reunion.
• 中文翻译:它不仅仅是一个传统节日,更是家人团聚的绝佳机会。
• 理由:运用“not only...but also...”的并列结构,强调了端午节的双重意义,既体现了其作为传统节日的文化价值,又突出了家庭团聚的情感内涵,升华了文章的主题。
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