内容正文:
Unit 2 Let’s celebrate!
Part 4 Writing
观点阐述信
写作题目
月饼作为中秋节必备品深受中国人民的喜爱,但现在越来越多的制作精美的奢侈月饼开始出现,有时一盒月饼标价几百甚至上千元。现在某杂志社就此问题征求人们的看法,请你以李华的身份写信阐明你的观点及理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:奢侈月饼luxury moon cakes
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.民族
2. adj.花哨的
3. n.装饰物
4. n.象征,标志
5. 抱怨……
6. 把……视作……
7. 庆祝节日
答案 1.nationality 2.fancy 3.decoration 4.token 5.complain about 6.regard...as...
7.celebrate a festival
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明写信目的,阐述现象
(1)The moon cake is loved by (各民族人民) in China.
(2)But nowadays, more and more people (抱怨) luxury moon cakes with (花哨的装饰品).
(3)Im writing this letter (表达我的观点) about it.
第二段:阐述对这一现象的看法和理由
(4) (我认为买……没有必要) luxury moon cakes.
(5)The moon cake is a (家庭团聚的象征).
(6)Some people (把它当成显示……的方式) their wealth and status and this completely (违背) the original meaning of the moon cake.
第三段:观点总结
(7)I think (尊重传统) is important in (庆祝节日).
答案 (1)people of all nationalities (2)complain about;fancy decorations (3)to express my view (4)I dont think it is necessary to buy (5)token of family reunion (6)regard it as a way to show;goes against (7)respecting the tradition;celebrating a festival
2.句式升级
(8)将句(6)改写为含有非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
(9)将句(7)改写为含有what引导的主语从句的主从复合句
答案 (8)Some people regard it as a way to show their wealth and status, which completely goes against the original meaning of the moon cake.
(9)I think what is important in celebrating a festival is respecting the tradition.
连句成篇
Dear Editor,
The moon cake is loved by people of all nationalities in China. But nowadays, more and more people complain about luxury moon cakes with fancy decorations. Im writing this letter to express my view about it.
I dont think it is necessary to buy luxury moon cakes. The moon cake is a token of family reunion. However, some people regard it as a way to show their wealth and status, which completely goes against the original meaning of the moon cake. Besides, the price of some moon cakes goes far beyond their costs.
All in all, I think what is important in celebrating a festival is respecting the tradition instead of buying something that we cant afford.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
一、关于阐述观点的增分佳句
1.开头:阐述存在的现象
①Some students frequently use their mobile phones to search for news, which affects their study.一些学生经常使用手机搜索新闻,这影响了他们的学习。
②They are so addicted to playing computer games that they cant focus on their study.他们如此沉迷于玩电脑游戏,以至于不能集中精力学习。
2.主体:阐述观点和理由
①I think it is important to understand each other.我认为互相理解很重要。
②In my opinion, it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities.在我看来,我们参加体育活动是非常有必要的。
③We need enough sleep and rest, and we shouldnt stay up late because it is bad for our health.我们需要充足的睡眠和休息,不应该熬夜,因为这对我们的健康有害。
二、介绍节日的精彩表达
1.节日的时间:
①The festival usually falls on...
②The Mid-Autumn Festival is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month.
2.节日的目的:
①It is aimed at celebrating the culture and history of.../celebrating the good harvest...
②The festival is in honour of the great ancient person who...
3.节日的意义:
①To people of some cultures, Christmas is a festival of giving and receiving presents.
②In this way we can keep our culture alive, remember our past and look forward with hope to the bright future.
实战演练
燃放烟花爆竹曾是春节庆祝活动中最重要的习俗之一。然而,近年来政府已在许多城市下令禁止燃放烟花爆竹。现在某杂志社就此问题征求人们的看法。请你以李华的身份写信阐明你的观点及理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:燃放烟花爆竹let off fireworks and crackers;二氧化硫sulfur dioxide
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 2 Let’s celebrate!
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Editor,
In recent years, people in many cities have been forbidden from letting off fireworks and crackers during Spring Festival. And Im in favour of the policy.
Firstly, fireworks and crackers will cause air pollution. When fireworks and crackers are set off, they will produce lots of sulfur dioxide which is very harmful to our environment. Secondly, fireworks and crackers are very dangerous. Not only do fireworks and crackers often cause injury to people, but they also cause fire accidents.
All in all, fireworks and crackers can do lots of damage, so we shouldnt let them off. Instead, we can celebrate our holiday in many other ways.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①forbid v.禁止
②in favour of 支持,赞同
③set off 使爆炸
④be harmful to 对……有害
⑤all in all总而言之
2.亮点句型
①When fireworks and crackers are set off, they will produce lots of sulfur dioxide which is very harmful to our environment.(which引导定语从句,修饰sulfur dioxide)当燃放烟花爆竹时,它们会产生大量的二氧化硫,这对我们的环境是非常有害的。
②Not only do fireworks and crackers often cause injury to people, but they also cause fire accidents.(Not only...but also...连接两个并列分句,“Not only...”部分用倒装结构)烟花爆竹不仅经常对人造成伤害,而且还会引起火灾事故。
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