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2025-2026学年上学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(人教版2024)
Unit 1 You and Me书面表达
必备知识清单
单元主题写作
本单元的书面表达围绕 “自我认识” 展开,属于 “人与自我” 主题范畴下的 “生活与学习” 子主题。这一写作任务旨在让同学们通过英语介绍自己的个人信息、爱好及活动,既贴合大家刚步入初中结交新朋友的需求,又能有效锻炼语言运用和表达能力。。
一、主题内涵
此主题聚焦于自我剖析与展示。通过写作介绍自己,同学们能梳理自身关键信息,像姓名、年龄、来自哪里等基础信息,以及兴趣爱好,比如喜欢的运动、音乐、书籍等,还有日常参与的活动,如参加社团、做志愿者等。这不仅是简单的信息罗列,更是向他人展现独特自我,寻求共鸣与友谊的过程,在实际生活中,有助于在新环境里快速建立社交联系,开启丰富多彩的初中生活。
二、审题要点
明确人称:写作时通常使用第一人称 “I”,保证表述的一致性和准确性,避免人称混淆。例如:“I am a middle school student.”(我是一名中学生。)
确定时态:主要运用一般现在时,因为介绍的是现阶段稳定存在的个人信息、爱好和经常参与的活动。比如:“I like reading books every day.”(我每天都喜欢读书。)
涵盖要点:题目要求的个人信息、爱好和活动等关键内容必须完整呈现,缺一不可。例如,若题目明确要求介绍年龄和爱好,就不能只写爱好而遗漏年龄。
合理拓展:在满足基本要点的基础上,适当增添细节使文章更丰富。如介绍爱好阅读时,可以补充喜欢的书籍类型及原因,“I like reading science fiction books because they can open my mind to the unknown world.”(我喜欢读科幻小说,因为它们能让我对未知世界打开眼界。)
三、写作框架
(一)开头:简要开篇,引出自我介绍的主题。
Hello, everyone! I am very glad to introduce myself to you.(大家好!我很高兴向你们介绍我自己。)
My name is Tom, and I want to share something about myself with you.(我叫汤姆,我想和你们分享一些关于我的事情。)
(二)中间
1.个人信息:依次介绍姓名、年龄、学校、班级等。
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old. I study in No.1 Middle School, and I am in Class 3, Grade 7.(我叫李华。我 12 岁了。我在第一中学学习,我在七年级三班。)
2.爱好:详细阐述自己的兴趣爱好,可列举多个并适当说明理由。
I like playing basketball very much because it makes me strong and energetic. Besides, I also enjoy drawing pictures. It helps me express my feelings.(我非常喜欢打篮球,因为它让我强壮且精力充沛。此外,我也喜欢画画。它帮助我表达我的情感。)
3.活动:讲述日常或经常参与的活动。
After school, I often join the English club in our school. We practice speaking English and have fun together.(放学后,我经常参加我们学校的英语俱乐部。我们一起练习说英语,玩得很开心。)
(三)结尾:简单总结,表达期望,如希望结交新朋友等。
That's a little about me. I hope we can become good friends.(这就是关于我的一些情况。我希望我们能成为好朋友。)
This is who I am. Looking forward to having more wonderful times with you all.(这就是我。期待和你们所有人度过更多美好的时光。)
四、词汇句式
(一)词汇
1.个人信息类
name(名字):My name is Lucy.(我的名字叫露西。)
first name(名字):Her first name is Lily.(她的名字叫莉莉。)
last name/family name(姓氏):His last name is Green.(他姓格林。)
age(年龄):What's your age?(你多大了?)
year(年纪):I am in Year 7.(我在七年级。)
school(学校):Our school is big and beautiful.(我们的学校又大又漂亮。)
class(班级):I am in Class 5.(我在五班。)
grade(年级):He is in Grade 8.(他在八年级。)
hometown(家乡):My hometown is a small but lovely place.(我的家乡是一个小但可爱的地方。)
country(国家):China is a great country.(中国是一个伟大的国家。)
2.爱好类
like/love(喜欢):I like dancing.(我喜欢跳舞。)
enjoy(享受):She enjoys listening to music.(她喜欢听音乐。)
be fond of(喜爱):We are fond of reading stories.(我们喜欢读故事。)
hobby(爱好):Swimming is my hobby.(游泳是我的爱好。)
interest(兴趣):I have an interest in science.(我对科学有兴趣。)
sport(运动):Basketball is a popular sport.(篮球是一项受欢迎的运动。)
music(音乐):I often listen to pop music.(我经常听流行音乐。)
book(书):This is an interesting book.(这是一本有趣的书。)
movie(电影):What's your favorite movie?(你最喜欢的电影是什么?)
art(艺术):She is good at art.(她擅长艺术。)
3.活动类
play(玩;参加):We play football after school.(我们放学后踢足球。)
join(参加;加入):I want to join the chess club.(我想加入象棋俱乐部。)
take part in(参与):They take part in the school sports meeting.(他们参加学校运动会。)
activity(活动):There are many activities in our school.(我们学校有很多活动。)
club(俱乐部):The English club is very interesting.(英语俱乐部非常有趣。)
party(聚会):We will have a party this weekend.(我们这个周末将有一个聚会。)
trip(旅行):I went on a trip to the mountains last month.(我上个月去山里旅行了。)
volunteer(志愿者):She often does volunteer work on weekends.(她周末经常做志愿者工作。)
study(学习):We study hard at school.(我们在学校努力学习。)
practice(练习):He practices playing the piano every day.(他每天练习弹钢琴。)
(二)句式
1.介绍个人信息
My name is...(我的名字是……):My name is David.(我的名字是大卫。)
I am... years old.(我…… 岁了。):I am 13 years old.(我 13 岁了。)
I come from...(我来自……):I come from Beijing.(我来自北京。)
I am a student at...(我是…… 的一名学生。):I am a student at Sunshine Middle School.(我是阳光中学的一名学生。)
I am in Class... Grade...(我在…… 年级…… 班。):I am in Class 2, Grade 7.(我在七年级二班。)
My telephone number is...(我的电话号码是……):My telephone number is 138xxxx5678.(我的电话号码是 138xxxx5678。)
My QQ number is...(我的 QQ 号码是……):My QQ number is 123456789.(我的 QQ 号码是 123456789。)
My email address is...(我的电子邮箱地址是……):My email address is tom@163.com.(我的电子邮箱地址是 tom@163.com。)
2.表达爱好
I like/love doing sth.(我喜欢做某事。):I like playing the guitar.(我喜欢弹吉他。)
I enjoy doing sth.(我享受做某事。):I enjoy watching TV.(我喜欢看电视。)
I am fond of doing sth.(我喜爱做某事。):I am fond of collecting stamps.(我喜欢集邮。)
My favorite... is...(我最喜欢的…… 是……):My favorite sport is tennis.(我最喜欢的运动是网球。)
I have a great interest in...(我对…… 有浓厚兴趣。):I have a great interest in history.(我对历史有浓厚兴趣。) -... is my hobby.(…… 是我的爱好。):Reading is my hobby.(阅读是我的爱好。)
... is my hobby.(…… 是我的爱好。):Reading is my hobby.(阅读是我的爱好。)
3.描述活动
I often...(我经常……):I often go shopping with my mom.(我经常和我妈妈去购物。)
After school, I...(放学后,我……):After school, I play basketball with my classmates.(放学后,我和我的同学打篮球。)
On weekends, I...(在周末,我……):On weekends, I usually visit my grandparents.(在周末,我通常去看望我的祖父母。)
I take part in...(我参加……):I take part in the singing competition.(我参加唱歌比赛。)
I join...(我加入……):I join the school band.(我加入学校乐队。)
There is/are... activity/activities...(有…… 活动……):There is an art activity in our school this week.(这周我们学校有一场艺术活动。)
We will...(我们将……):We will have a picnic in the park tomorrow.(我们明天将在公园野餐。)
I am going to...(我打算……):I am going to learn to swim this summer.(我打算今年夏天学游泳。)
五、范文例析
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! My name is Jenny. I am 12 years old and I am a student at Moonlight Middle School. I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
I have many hobbies. I really like reading books. Every day after school, I spend some time reading interesting stories. Science fiction books are my favorite because they always bring me to amazing new worlds. Besides, I enjoy dancing. It makes me feel free and happy. I often take part in the school dancing club activities.
On weekends, I usually go to the zoo with my parents. We love watching cute animals there. I also like to help others. Sometimes, I do volunteer work in the community.
That's a little about me. I hope we can become good friends and share more wonderful things together.【范文分析】
结构清晰:开头简洁明了地介绍自己的基本信息,包括姓名、年龄、学校和班级。中间部分详细阐述爱好,如读书和跳舞,并说明原因,接着描述周末活动,如去动物园和做志愿者,内容丰富。结尾自然表达希望结交朋友的意愿。
词汇运用恰当:使用了 “hobbies”“favorite”“spend...doing”“take part in”“volunteer work” 等与主题相关的词汇,准确传达意思。
句式多样:运用了 “My name is...”“I am...”“I like doing sth.”“I often...” 等多种介绍个人信息、表达爱好和描述活动的句式,使文章生动不单调。
逻辑连贯:通过 “besides”“also” 等连接词,将爱好和活动等不同内容自然衔接,行文流畅。
六、优化策略
丰富细节描述:在介绍爱好和活动时,增加更多具体细节。比如介绍喜欢的书籍,可以描述书中精彩情节;讲述参加的活动,分享活动中难忘瞬间。如:“I like reading the book Harry Potter. The magical world in it is so fascinating. I especially love the part when Harry first enters Hogwarts and sees the magnificent castle for the first time.”(我喜欢读《哈利・波特》这本书。里面的魔法世界太迷人了。我特别喜欢哈利第一次进入霍格沃茨,第一次看到那座宏伟城堡的情节。)
运用高级词汇和句式:在有把握的情况下,尝试使用更高级的词汇和句式提升文章档次。例如,用 “be keen on” 替换 “like”,“look forward to doing sth.” 替换 “hope to do sth.”。如:“I am keen on painting. I am looking forward to showing my works to you someday.”(我热衷于绘画。我期待有一天能给你们展示我的作品。)
增加连接词与过渡语:合理使用 “moreover”“in addition”“however” 等连接词和过渡语,使文章段落之间、句子之间逻辑更紧密。如:“I like playing football. Moreover, I am also interested in table tennis.”(我喜欢踢足球。此外,我也对乒乓球感兴趣。)
检查与修改:完成写作后,仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误和标点使用不当之处,确保文章质量。比如检查名词单复数、动词第三人称单数形式等是否正确。
核心知识回顾
与介绍自己的个人信息、爱好及活动的必备范文
(范文一:绘画爱好者)
Hello, I'm Clara. I'm 12 and in Class 3, Grade 7 at Red Star School. Drawing is my favorite. I draw every day after finishing homework. I like drawing animals most. After school, I go to the art club. We learn to use watercolors. On weekends, I often draw in the park. The flowers and trees there are good models. Nice to meet you!
(范文二:烹饪小能手)
Hi, I'm Leo. I'm 13, studying in Class 7, Grade 7. I love cooking. I learn to make dishes from my mom. I can make eggs with tomatoes. I cook once a week. After school, I read cookbooks. On weekends, I help mom in the kitchen. It's fun to make food. I want to share my dishes with you someday.
(范文三:科技迷)
Good day! I'm Zoe. I'm 12 and in Class 2, Grade 7. I'm interested in science and technology. I like making small robots. I spend an hour on it daily. I join the science club. We do interesting experiments. On weekends, I visit science museums with my dad. They have many cool things. Let's talk about science!
(范文四:舞蹈爱好者)
Hello everyone! I'm Ryan, 13, in Class 4, Grade 7. Dancing is my hobby. I learn hip-hop. I practice for an hour every evening. After school, I go to the dance club. We prepare for school shows. On weekends, I watch dance videos online. I want to learn more styles. Hope to dance with you sometime!
(范文五:园艺爱好者)
Hi, I'm Mia. I'm 12 and from a village. I'm in Class 1, Grade 7. I like gardening. I grow flowers and vegetables in my yard. I water them every morning. After school, I check my plants. On weekends, I pick vegetables we grow. They taste great! I join the biology club to learn more about plants. Nice to know you!
综合实战演练
1.在英语课上, 老师要求你们以“My Best Friend”为题做一个简单的演讲,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇60字左右的演讲稿。
1. 他的年龄和班级。
2. 他和谁住在一起
3. 他最喜欢的食物。
4. 他最喜欢的运动。
写作要求:文章中不可出现真实姓名和地名。
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2.假设你是鲍勃·史密斯 (Bob Smith),来自英国。经过一个多月的学习生活,相信你已经认识了不少新同学。为了让大家更好地了解你,并结交更多的朋友,请你做一个简单的自我介绍。
写作要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数60左右。
My self-introduction
Good morning, everyone. I want to introduce myself here.
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3.你加拿大的笔友Jane,她想知道你的好朋友Kate的一些情况,请你根据下面提示内容,用英语向她介绍一下Kate。
内容包括:
1. 来自英国,8月1日的生日,七年级10班;
2. 7点30分起床,8点上学,上午4节课,下午5点30分回家;
3. 喜欢弹吉他,参加学校的音乐俱乐部,最喜欢的科目是生物学,因为有趣;
4. 家里6个人,哥哥也是一个学生,爸爸是一个英语老师。
要求:
1. 短文须包括上面提示内容的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数60词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Kate is my good friend. She is from
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4.假设你是李涛,下面是有关你两个好朋友最喜欢的学科情况的介绍。请根据表格提示内容用英语写一篇短文。
Name
Favourite subject
Teacher
Why
In the future
Bill
Science
Mr Baker
Useful and interesting
A scientist
Helen
Music
Miss Green
Exciting
A singer
要求:1. 语句通顺,表述连贯,书写工整;
2. 根据表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:60词左右(短文开头和结尾部分已给出,且不计入总词数)。
Hi, I’m Li Tao. I have two good friends. They’re Bill and Helen. Let me tell you something about them. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about your subjects and teachers? And what do you want to be in the future?
5.假定你是阳光中学的李华,来自英国的交换生Jack今年6月份将在你校学习。请你根据下面表格内容,向他介绍你自己、当地的气候和学校生活情况。词数80左右。
About me
Climate
1. hot
2. …
School life
1. classes
2. subjects
3. activities
4. …
注意:
1. 要包含表格内所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Hello, Jack! I’m Li Hua from Yangguang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about me, the climate and our school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.Teng Fei是振兴中学七年级的一名学生。请你根据下图信息,以“Teng Fei’s School Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述他一天的生活。
Word Bank: after-school service课后服务
注意:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Teng Fei’s School Day
Teng Fei is a student of Grade 7 in Zhenxing Middle School. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.假设你是腾飞,你的美国笔友Sam想了解你的学校生活。请你根据以下思维导图内容用英语写一篇短文,向他介绍你的学校生活以及你的感受。
My school life
What classes do you have every day?
What’s your favorite subject? Why?
What school clubs do you have this term?
要求:
(1)短文应包括导图中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名:
(3)词数60—80,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Teng Fei
8.开学已两月有余,在全新的初中生活中,你一定收获了很多,也成长了很多。德州报社英语编辑部现正面向全市中小学生征集稿件 “A Letter to My Parents”。请你根据提供的思维导图,用英语给父母写一封信,谈谈你的初中生活初体验,投稿至报社。除提示的内容外,请至少再补充一个方面。
要求:
1. 文中勿提及真实姓名和学校,60词左右(短文开头及结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不必逐字翻译),并在此基础上适当发挥;
3. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
How time flies! I’m in Junior High now and I’d like to tell you something about my new school life here.
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Lovingly,
Your Son/Daughter
9.假设你是七年级学生李华,今天是家长开放日,为了促进亲子交流,学校要求每位同学给自己的父母写一封信,分享自己的初中校园生活。请根据下面表格中的内容,写一封信,和你的爸爸妈妈分享你的校园生活。
My school life at junior high
Your feeling (感受)
…
Teachers and classmates
kind...
clubs
interesting...
problems
hard...
plans (计划)
I’m going to...
要求:1. 包含所给要点,并适当发挥;
2. 60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
Dear mum and dad,
I’m happy to tell you something about my school life at junior high.
My school life is
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.你正在伦敦的 Woodland School 里游学,请给你的父母写下一封信,简要介绍你最近的情况。
注意: 1.必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥。
2.词数 90 左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.文中不可出现具体真实的个人信息。
学校简介
距离伦敦市中心 10 公里,学校不大但是很漂亮。每天坐公交上学,有时候乘地铁。
课程安排
上午上课,下午进行课外活动或去图书馆看书。最喜欢阅读,你可以多了解这个世界。
同学相处
经常交到新的朋友,在一起非常开心
你的感想
非常喜欢这里的生活,
…(自己补充一点)
Dear parents,
Now I'm studying in Woodland School in London____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With love!
Simon
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2025-2026学年上学期七年级英语知识点梳理与巩固(人教版2024)
Unit 1 You and Me书面表达
必备知识清单
单元主题写作
本单元的书面表达围绕 “自我认识” 展开,属于 “人与自我” 主题范畴下的 “生活与学习” 子主题。这一写作任务旨在让同学们通过英语介绍自己的个人信息、爱好及活动,既贴合大家刚步入初中结交新朋友的需求,又能有效锻炼语言运用和表达能力。。
一、主题内涵
此主题聚焦于自我剖析与展示。通过写作介绍自己,同学们能梳理自身关键信息,像姓名、年龄、来自哪里等基础信息,以及兴趣爱好,比如喜欢的运动、音乐、书籍等,还有日常参与的活动,如参加社团、做志愿者等。这不仅是简单的信息罗列,更是向他人展现独特自我,寻求共鸣与友谊的过程,在实际生活中,有助于在新环境里快速建立社交联系,开启丰富多彩的初中生活。
二、审题要点
明确人称:写作时通常使用第一人称 “I”,保证表述的一致性和准确性,避免人称混淆。例如:“I am a middle school student.”(我是一名中学生。)
确定时态:主要运用一般现在时,因为介绍的是现阶段稳定存在的个人信息、爱好和经常参与的活动。比如:“I like reading books every day.”(我每天都喜欢读书。)
涵盖要点:题目要求的个人信息、爱好和活动等关键内容必须完整呈现,缺一不可。例如,若题目明确要求介绍年龄和爱好,就不能只写爱好而遗漏年龄。
合理拓展:在满足基本要点的基础上,适当增添细节使文章更丰富。如介绍爱好阅读时,可以补充喜欢的书籍类型及原因,“I like reading science fiction books because they can open my mind to the unknown world.”(我喜欢读科幻小说,因为它们能让我对未知世界打开眼界。)
三、写作框架
(一)开头:简要开篇,引出自我介绍的主题。
Hello, everyone! I am very glad to introduce myself to you.(大家好!我很高兴向你们介绍我自己。)
My name is Tom, and I want to share something about myself with you.(我叫汤姆,我想和你们分享一些关于我的事情。)
(二)中间
1.个人信息:依次介绍姓名、年龄、学校、班级等。
My name is Li Hua. I am 12 years old. I study in No.1 Middle School, and I am in Class 3, Grade 7.(我叫李华。我 12 岁了。我在第一中学学习,我在七年级三班。)
2.爱好:详细阐述自己的兴趣爱好,可列举多个并适当说明理由。
I like playing basketball very much because it makes me strong and energetic. Besides, I also enjoy drawing pictures. It helps me express my feelings.(我非常喜欢打篮球,因为它让我强壮且精力充沛。此外,我也喜欢画画。它帮助我表达我的情感。)
3.活动:讲述日常或经常参与的活动。
After school, I often join the English club in our school. We practice speaking English and have fun together.(放学后,我经常参加我们学校的英语俱乐部。我们一起练习说英语,玩得很开心。)
(三)结尾:简单总结,表达期望,如希望结交新朋友等。
That's a little about me. I hope we can become good friends.(这就是关于我的一些情况。我希望我们能成为好朋友。)
This is who I am. Looking forward to having more wonderful times with you all.(这就是我。期待和你们所有人度过更多美好的时光。)
四、词汇句式
(一)词汇
1.个人信息类
name(名字):My name is Lucy.(我的名字叫露西。)
first name(名字):Her first name is Lily.(她的名字叫莉莉。)
last name/family name(姓氏):His last name is Green.(他姓格林。)
age(年龄):What's your age?(你多大了?)
year(年纪):I am in Year 7.(我在七年级。)
school(学校):Our school is big and beautiful.(我们的学校又大又漂亮。)
class(班级):I am in Class 5.(我在五班。)
grade(年级):He is in Grade 8.(他在八年级。)
hometown(家乡):My hometown is a small but lovely place.(我的家乡是一个小但可爱的地方。)
country(国家):China is a great country.(中国是一个伟大的国家。)
2.爱好类
like/love(喜欢):I like dancing.(我喜欢跳舞。)
enjoy(享受):She enjoys listening to music.(她喜欢听音乐。)
be fond of(喜爱):We are fond of reading stories.(我们喜欢读故事。)
hobby(爱好):Swimming is my hobby.(游泳是我的爱好。)
interest(兴趣):I have an interest in science.(我对科学有兴趣。)
sport(运动):Basketball is a popular sport.(篮球是一项受欢迎的运动。)
music(音乐):I often listen to pop music.(我经常听流行音乐。)
book(书):This is an interesting book.(这是一本有趣的书。)
movie(电影):What's your favorite movie?(你最喜欢的电影是什么?)
art(艺术):She is good at art.(她擅长艺术。)
3.活动类
play(玩;参加):We play football after school.(我们放学后踢足球。)
join(参加;加入):I want to join the chess club.(我想加入象棋俱乐部。)
take part in(参与):They take part in the school sports meeting.(他们参加学校运动会。)
activity(活动):There are many activities in our school.(我们学校有很多活动。)
club(俱乐部):The English club is very interesting.(英语俱乐部非常有趣。)
party(聚会):We will have a party this weekend.(我们这个周末将有一个聚会。)
trip(旅行):I went on a trip to the mountains last month.(我上个月去山里旅行了。)
volunteer(志愿者):She often does volunteer work on weekends.(她周末经常做志愿者工作。)
study(学习):We study hard at school.(我们在学校努力学习。)
practice(练习):He practices playing the piano every day.(他每天练习弹钢琴。)
(二)句式
1.介绍个人信息
My name is...(我的名字是……):My name is David.(我的名字是大卫。)
I am... years old.(我…… 岁了。):I am 13 years old.(我 13 岁了。)
I come from...(我来自……):I come from Beijing.(我来自北京。)
I am a student at...(我是…… 的一名学生。):I am a student at Sunshine Middle School.(我是阳光中学的一名学生。)
I am in Class... Grade...(我在…… 年级…… 班。):I am in Class 2, Grade 7.(我在七年级二班。)
My telephone number is...(我的电话号码是……):My telephone number is 138xxxx5678.(我的电话号码是 138xxxx5678。)
My QQ number is...(我的 QQ 号码是……):My QQ number is 123456789.(我的 QQ 号码是 123456789。)
My email address is...(我的电子邮箱地址是……):My email address is tom@163.com.(我的电子邮箱地址是 tom@163.com。)
2.表达爱好
I like/love doing sth.(我喜欢做某事。):I like playing the guitar.(我喜欢弹吉他。)
I enjoy doing sth.(我享受做某事。):I enjoy watching TV.(我喜欢看电视。)
I am fond of doing sth.(我喜爱做某事。):I am fond of collecting stamps.(我喜欢集邮。)
My favorite... is...(我最喜欢的…… 是……):My favorite sport is tennis.(我最喜欢的运动是网球。)
I have a great interest in...(我对…… 有浓厚兴趣。):I have a great interest in history.(我对历史有浓厚兴趣。) -... is my hobby.(…… 是我的爱好。):Reading is my hobby.(阅读是我的爱好。)
... is my hobby.(…… 是我的爱好。):Reading is my hobby.(阅读是我的爱好。)
3.描述活动
I often...(我经常……):I often go shopping with my mom.(我经常和我妈妈去购物。)
After school, I...(放学后,我……):After school, I play basketball with my classmates.(放学后,我和我的同学打篮球。)
On weekends, I...(在周末,我……):On weekends, I usually visit my grandparents.(在周末,我通常去看望我的祖父母。)
I take part in...(我参加……):I take part in the singing competition.(我参加唱歌比赛。)
I join...(我加入……):I join the school band.(我加入学校乐队。)
There is/are... activity/activities...(有…… 活动……):There is an art activity in our school this week.(这周我们学校有一场艺术活动。)
We will...(我们将……):We will have a picnic in the park tomorrow.(我们明天将在公园野餐。)
I am going to...(我打算……):I am going to learn to swim this summer.(我打算今年夏天学游泳。)
五、范文例析
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! My name is Jenny. I am 12 years old and I am a student at Moonlight Middle School. I am in Class 4, Grade 7.
I have many hobbies. I really like reading books. Every day after school, I spend some time reading interesting stories. Science fiction books are my favorite because they always bring me to amazing new worlds. Besides, I enjoy dancing. It makes me feel free and happy. I often take part in the school dancing club activities.
On weekends, I usually go to the zoo with my parents. We love watching cute animals there. I also like to help others. Sometimes, I do volunteer work in the community.
That's a little about me. I hope we can become good friends and share more wonderful things together.【范文分析】
结构清晰:开头简洁明了地介绍自己的基本信息,包括姓名、年龄、学校和班级。中间部分详细阐述爱好,如读书和跳舞,并说明原因,接着描述周末活动,如去动物园和做志愿者,内容丰富。结尾自然表达希望结交朋友的意愿。
词汇运用恰当:使用了 “hobbies”“favorite”“spend...doing”“take part in”“volunteer work” 等与主题相关的词汇,准确传达意思。
句式多样:运用了 “My name is...”“I am...”“I like doing sth.”“I often...” 等多种介绍个人信息、表达爱好和描述活动的句式,使文章生动不单调。
逻辑连贯:通过 “besides”“also” 等连接词,将爱好和活动等不同内容自然衔接,行文流畅。
六、优化策略
丰富细节描述:在介绍爱好和活动时,增加更多具体细节。比如介绍喜欢的书籍,可以描述书中精彩情节;讲述参加的活动,分享活动中难忘瞬间。如:“I like reading the book Harry Potter. The magical world in it is so fascinating. I especially love the part when Harry first enters Hogwarts and sees the magnificent castle for the first time.”(我喜欢读《哈利・波特》这本书。里面的魔法世界太迷人了。我特别喜欢哈利第一次进入霍格沃茨,第一次看到那座宏伟城堡的情节。)
运用高级词汇和句式:在有把握的情况下,尝试使用更高级的词汇和句式提升文章档次。例如,用 “be keen on” 替换 “like”,“look forward to doing sth.” 替换 “hope to do sth.”。如:“I am keen on painting. I am looking forward to showing my works to you someday.”(我热衷于绘画。我期待有一天能给你们展示我的作品。)
增加连接词与过渡语:合理使用 “moreover”“in addition”“however” 等连接词和过渡语,使文章段落之间、句子之间逻辑更紧密。如:“I like playing football. Moreover, I am also interested in table tennis.”(我喜欢踢足球。此外,我也对乒乓球感兴趣。)
检查与修改:完成写作后,仔细检查语法错误、拼写错误和标点使用不当之处,确保文章质量。比如检查名词单复数、动词第三人称单数形式等是否正确。
核心知识回顾
与介绍自己的个人信息、爱好及活动的必备范文
(范文一:绘画爱好者)
Hello, I'm Clara. I'm 12 and in Class 3, Grade 7 at Red Star School. Drawing is my favorite. I draw every day after finishing homework. I like drawing animals most. After school, I go to the art club. We learn to use watercolors. On weekends, I often draw in the park. The flowers and trees there are good models. Nice to meet you!
(范文二:烹饪小能手)
Hi, I'm Leo. I'm 13, studying in Class 7, Grade 7. I love cooking. I learn to make dishes from my mom. I can make eggs with tomatoes. I cook once a week. After school, I read cookbooks. On weekends, I help mom in the kitchen. It's fun to make food. I want to share my dishes with you someday.
(范文三:科技迷)
Good day! I'm Zoe. I'm 12 and in Class 2, Grade 7. I'm interested in science and technology. I like making small robots. I spend an hour on it daily. I join the science club. We do interesting experiments. On weekends, I visit science museums with my dad. They have many cool things. Let's talk about science!
(范文四:舞蹈爱好者)
Hello everyone! I'm Ryan, 13, in Class 4, Grade 7. Dancing is my hobby. I learn hip-hop. I practice for an hour every evening. After school, I go to the dance club. We prepare for school shows. On weekends, I watch dance videos online. I want to learn more styles. Hope to dance with you sometime!
(范文五:园艺爱好者)
Hi, I'm Mia. I'm 12 and from a village. I'm in Class 1, Grade 7. I like gardening. I grow flowers and vegetables in my yard. I water them every morning. After school, I check my plants. On weekends, I pick vegetables we grow. They taste great! I join the biology club to learn more about plants. Nice to know you!
综合实战演练
1.在英语课上, 老师要求你们以“My Best Friend”为题做一个简单的演讲,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇60字左右的演讲稿。
1. 他的年龄和班级。
2. 他和谁住在一起
3. 他最喜欢的食物。
4. 他最喜欢的运动。
写作要求:文章中不可出现真实姓名和地名。
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2.假设你是鲍勃·史密斯 (Bob Smith),来自英国。经过一个多月的学习生活,相信你已经认识了不少新同学。为了让大家更好地了解你,并结交更多的朋友,请你做一个简单的自我介绍。
写作要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数60左右。
My self-introduction
Good morning, everyone. I want to introduce myself here.
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3.你加拿大的笔友Jane,她想知道你的好朋友Kate的一些情况,请你根据下面提示内容,用英语向她介绍一下Kate。
内容包括:
1. 来自英国,8月1日的生日,七年级10班;
2. 7点30分起床,8点上学,上午4节课,下午5点30分回家;
3. 喜欢弹吉他,参加学校的音乐俱乐部,最喜欢的科目是生物学,因为有趣;
4. 家里6个人,哥哥也是一个学生,爸爸是一个英语老师。
要求:
1. 短文须包括上面提示内容的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数60词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Kate is my good friend. She is from
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4.假设你是李涛,下面是有关你两个好朋友最喜欢的学科情况的介绍。请根据表格提示内容用英语写一篇短文。
Name
Favourite subject
Teacher
Why
In the future
Bill
Science
Mr Baker
Useful and interesting
A scientist
Helen
Music
Miss Green
Exciting
A singer
要求:1. 语句通顺,表述连贯,书写工整;
2. 根据表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:60词左右(短文开头和结尾部分已给出,且不计入总词数)。
Hi, I’m Li Tao. I have two good friends. They’re Bill and Helen. Let me tell you something about them. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about your subjects and teachers? And what do you want to be in the future?
5.假定你是阳光中学的李华,来自英国的交换生Jack今年6月份将在你校学习。请你根据下面表格内容,向他介绍你自己、当地的气候和学校生活情况。词数80左右。
About me
Climate
1. hot
2. …
School life
1. classes
2. subjects
3. activities
4. …
注意:
1. 要包含表格内所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Hello, Jack! I’m Li Hua from Yangguang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about me, the climate and our school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.Teng Fei是振兴中学七年级的一名学生。请你根据下图信息,以“Teng Fei’s School Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述他一天的生活。
Word Bank: after-school service课后服务
注意:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数不少于60词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Teng Fei’s School Day
Teng Fei is a student of Grade 7 in Zhenxing Middle School. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.假设你是腾飞,你的美国笔友Sam想了解你的学校生活。请你根据以下思维导图内容用英语写一篇短文,向他介绍你的学校生活以及你的感受。
My school life
What classes do you have every day?
What’s your favorite subject? Why?
What school clubs do you have this term?
要求:
(1)短文应包括导图中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名:
(3)词数60—80,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my school life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Teng Fei
8.开学已两月有余,在全新的初中生活中,你一定收获了很多,也成长了很多。德州报社英语编辑部现正面向全市中小学生征集稿件 “A Letter to My Parents”。请你根据提供的思维导图,用英语给父母写一封信,谈谈你的初中生活初体验,投稿至报社。除提示的内容外,请至少再补充一个方面。
要求:
1. 文中勿提及真实姓名和学校,60词左右(短文开头及结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 短文必须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不必逐字翻译),并在此基础上适当发挥;
3. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范。
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
How time flies! I’m in Junior High now and I’d like to tell you something about my new school life here.
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Lovingly,
Your Son/Daughter
9.假设你是七年级学生李华,今天是家长开放日,为了促进亲子交流,学校要求每位同学给自己的父母写一封信,分享自己的初中校园生活。请根据下面表格中的内容,写一封信,和你的爸爸妈妈分享你的校园生活。
My school life at junior high
Your feeling (感受)
…
Teachers and classmates
kind...
clubs
interesting...
problems
hard...
plans (计划)
I’m going to...
要求:1. 包含所给要点,并适当发挥;
2. 60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
Dear mum and dad,
I’m happy to tell you something about my school life at junior high.
My school life is
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.你正在伦敦的 Woodland School 里游学,请给你的父母写下一封信,简要介绍你最近的情况。
注意: 1.必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥。
2.词数 90 左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.文中不可出现具体真实的个人信息。
学校简介
距离伦敦市中心 10 公里,学校不大但是很漂亮。每天坐公交上学,有时候乘地铁。
课程安排
上午上课,下午进行课外活动或去图书馆看书。最喜欢阅读,你可以多了解这个世界。
同学相处
经常交到新的朋友,在一起非常开心
你的感想
非常喜欢这里的生活,
…(自己补充一点)
Dear parents,
Now I'm studying in Woodland School in London____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With love!
Simon
参考答案
1.
My Best Friend
My best friend is Zhang Ting. She’s thirteen years old. Her favorite sport is tennis. It’s relaxing for her. She lives with her parents in Shanghai. Zhang Ting has good eating habits. She likes fruit, carrots and tomatoes very much. She thinks they are healthy food. Her favorite sport is tennis. She often plays it with me after school. We think it is interesting.
Zhang Ting is a nice girl. Do you want to be her friend?
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示信息写作,可适当增加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据提示信息讲述最好朋友的相关信息;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①favorite最喜欢的
②live with和……住在一起
③play … with和……玩耍
④after school放学后
[高分句型]
①She likes fruit, carrots and tomatoes very much. (and并列句)
2.
My self-introduction
Good morning, everyone. I want to introduce myself here.
I am Bob Smith and I am from England. I am 12 years old. I study in No.1 Middle School and I’m in Class 3, Grade 7. I like basketball very much because I think it’s interesting. I like playing basketball after school. My favorite color is blue, so many of my school things are blue, such as my schoolbag, rulers and pens. My best friend is Eric, but he is in England now. I am glad to meet all of you here. If you want to make friends with me, please write down my QQ number—167900246.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题。想向大家介绍自己;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己的姓名、年龄、爱好、喜欢的颜色和最好的朋友等信息;
第三步,书写结语。表达想交友的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②after school放学后
③such as例如
④be glad to do sth.高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①I like basketball very much because I think it’s interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3.
Kate is my good friend. She is from the UK and her birthday is on August 1st. She is in Class 10, Grade 7.
Kate usually gets up at 7:30 and goes to school at 8:00. She has four classes in the morning and goes home at 5:30 p.m.
In her free time, she loves playing the guitar and joins the school music club. Biology is her favorite subject because she thinks it’s very interesting.
There are six people in her family. Her brother is also a student, and her father is an English teacher.
This is Kate. Do you want to make friends with her?
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所列4个方面的要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Kate的基本信息;
第二步,描述Kate的日常作息时间;
第三步,讲述Kate的兴趣爱好和最喜欢的学科;
第四步,介绍Kate的家庭情况;
第五步,总结前文对Kate的介绍,并询问对方是否想和Kate交朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb. 和某人交朋友
②in one’s free time 在某人空闲时间
[高分句型]
①Biology is her favorite subject because she thinks it’s very interesting. (宾语从句、because引导的原因状语从句)
②Her brother is also a student, and her father is an English teacher. (含and的并列复合句)
4.
Hi, I’m Li Tao. I have two good friends. They’re Bill and Helen. Let me tell you something about them.
Bill’s favourite subject is science. He thinks it’s useful and interesting. His biology teacher is Mr Baker. He is excellent. He always makes his class fun. Bill wants to be a scientist in the future.
Helen likes music because she thinks it’s exciting. Her music teacher is Miss Green. She lets students play all kinds of musical instruments in class. Helen wants to be a singer in the future.
How about your subjects and teachers? And what do you want to be in the future?
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,介绍两位好朋友的最喜欢的学科、老师、原因及未来志向;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,描述现在的情况;
③提示:根据表格中的提示内容,包括朋友的名字、最喜欢的学科、老师、喜欢的原因以及未来的志向,进行写作。考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的任何信息,并可以适当发挥,使文章更加丰富和连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,延续开头。在已给出的开头“Hi, I’m Li Tao. I have two good friends. They’re Bill and Helen. Let me tell you something about them.”后,直接进入主题,介绍两位朋友的情况;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。先介绍Bill,包括他最喜欢的学科是科学,老师是Mr Baker,他认为科学既有用又有趣,并且他未来的志向是成为一名科学家;接着介绍Helen,她最喜欢的学科是音乐,老师是Miss Green,她觉得音乐很令人兴奋,她的梦想是成为一名歌手;
第三步,书写结语。询问对方的情况,包括对方最喜欢的学科和老师,以及未来的志向,与文章开头相呼应,形成完整的对话形式。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite subject 最喜欢的科目
②useful and interesting 有用且有趣的
③make his class fun 使他的课堂有趣
④all kinds of 各种各样的
⑤in the future 在未来
[高分句型]
①Bill’s favourite subject is science.(主语+系动词+表语的结构)
②He thinks it’s useful and interesting to study science.(it作形式主语,真正的主语是后面的动词不定式)
③Helen wants to be a singer when she grows up.(when引导的时间状语从句)
5.
Hello, Jack! I’m Li Hua from Yangguang Middle School. Now let me tell you something about me, the climate and our school life.
I’m a friendly boy and I like to make friends. In China, it’s really hot in summer. In June, it rains a lot. We study many subjects, like Chinese, math, English and PE. Our classes begin at 8:00 a.m. and end at 4:30 p.m. We have six classes a day, four in the morning and two in the afternoon. After school, we do many activities, such as playing football, running and playing games. And there are lots of clubs in our school. We can learn a lot and have great fun there.
Welcome to our school. I think we can be good friends.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作时要根据题目要求结合表格内容介绍自己、当地的气候和学校生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍自己、当地的气候和学校生活情况;
第三步,欢迎对方到来。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②lots of 许多
③have great fun 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I’m a friendly boy and I like to make friends. (and连接并列句)
②And there are lots of clubs in our school. (there be句型)
6.
Teng Fei is a student of Grade 7 in Zhenxing Middle School. He has a good school life.
He usually gets up at 7:00 every morning. Classes begin at 8:00 a.m. and end at 4:00 p.m. He has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class, he often does sports like running and jumping in the playground between 4:00 p.m. and 5:00 p.m. He has a good time there. From 5:00 p.m. to 6:00 p.m., he often eats dinner at school. During the after-school service time, he can finish his homework or join the club. He can also read books. When he gets home, he usually does what he likes to relax. Then he goes to bed at about 10:00 p.m.
His school life is really interesting and colourful.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍Teng Fei的基本信息;
第二步,描述Teng Fei一天的生活;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②go to bed去睡觉
③do sports做运动
[高分句型]
①When he gets home, he usually does what he likes to relax. (When引导的时间状语从句)
7.
Dear Sam,
I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
I am in Grade Seven now. We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have many subjects at school, like Chinese, English, math, science and geography.
I like all subjects, but my favorite subject is English, because our English teacher is really nice and fun. Her English class is always interesting. We all like her and English.
We have some kinds of school clubs this term. I can play the violin very well. So I want to join music club. I think music is important. It can make me relaxed.
I’m very busy from Monday to Friday, but I’m happy. I love my middle school life.
Yours,
Teng Fei
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件形式;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,因为描述的是当前的学校生活;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括每天的课程、最喜欢的科目及其原因、本学期的学校俱乐部等。考生需确保涵盖所有要点,并可适当添加细节以增强文章的生动性和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。在开头部分已给出,即“I’m happy to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my school life.”,直接引出要介绍的主题——我的学校生活。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。描述每天的课程;阐述最喜欢的科目及其原因;介绍本学期的学校俱乐部;
第三步,书写结语。表达对与Sam分享学校生活的积极感受,以及对未来交流的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in Grade Seven在七年级
②in the morning/afternoon在上午/下午
③favorite subject最喜欢的科目
④play the violin拉小提琴
⑤make sb relaxed使某人放松
[高分句型]
①We have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon.(并列句,通过and连接两个简单句)
②Her English class is always interesting.(“主语+系动词+形容词”句型,描述状态)
③I think music is important.(“I think+宾语从句”句型,表达个人观点)
8.
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mom and Dad,
How time flies! I’m in Junior High now and I’d like to tell you something about my new school life here.
My new school is wonderful, with big classrooms and a beautiful campus. The lessons are challenging but exciting. I enjoy science and maths because they open up a new world for me. I also joined the art club and learned to paint landscapes. Making new friends is the best part. We always play and laugh together. Of course, I face some difficulties, like planning my time between studies and hobbies. I also find some math problems so difficult, but I always ask teachers for help. Thank you for always being my biggest supporters. I would love to hear your advice on how to balance studies and hobbies.
Lovingly,
Your Son/Daughter
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的学校和课程如何;
第二步,介绍你在学校学了什么以及是否遇到问题;
第三步,最后表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① open up打开
② ask sb for help向某人求助
[高分句型]
I enjoy science and maths because they open up a new world for me.(原因状语从句)
9.
Dear mum and dad,
I’m happy to tell you something about my school life at junior high.
My school life is busy but colourful. My teachers are kind. They can make lessons very interesting. And my classmates are very friendly. They often help me with my difficulties. There are many interesting clubs to join. I join the Basketball Club and make some good friends there.
But I have 8 subjects to learn at junior high. I find it quite hard to learn English well. I am going to try my best to learn it well. So don’t worry, mum and dad.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的学校生活;
第二步,介绍自己的问题和计划。
[亮点词汇]
①friendly友好的
②help me with在……帮助我
③try my best to尽我最大努力去
[高分句型]
There are many interesting clubs to join.(there be句型)
10.
Dear parents,
Now I'm studying in Woodland School in London. It is 10 kilometres away from the city centre. Our school is not very big but it is very beautiful. I go to school by bus every day, and sometimes I take an underground.
In the morning, we have lessons, but we do after-school activities or do some reading in the library in the afternoon. I like reading best because I can learn a lot about the world from the books. At school, I often make new friends. We have a good time together.
I like the life here very much. I think I can learn more about the knowledge I want to know at the new school.
With love!
Simon
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;第一段叙述学校的概况以及自己上学的方式;第二段叙述自己的学校生活;第三段谈谈自身的感受。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时;叙述学习概况、学校生活和自身感受时,内容要完整,保证条理清晰,不能凌乱。
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