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Unit
2
Hobbies
Integration (2)
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Questionnaire
boys
girls
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Welcome come to join us!
Pre-writing
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What can we write about our hobbies?
What?
When?
How often?
Where?
Why?
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Pre-writing
How?
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Read and learn
Learn how to change notes into an article
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Preparation
How to answer each question
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topic sentence 主题句
details and feelings
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How to write about hobbies
Structure
Paragraph 1
Content
Language
My favourite hobby is …
I like/love/enjoy/am interested in …
Every week/After school, I ......
… makes/helps me …
Preparation
always,usually, often, sometimes
once/twice/three times a week
every weekend/Friday night/ Saturday morning
feel relaxed/glad/excited/joyful/...
help me keep fit/learn useful skills/ gain more knowledge/know about new technologies/...
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How to answer each question
2
Preparation
give an example
reasons
What do you think of Xu Beihong’s paintings?
Hobbies
How to write about hobbies
Structure
Paragraph 2
Content
Language
My favourite … is …
… is a master of …
Preparation
Other expressions:
(1) ... is my favourite .../ I like ... best.
(2) He/she is good at/ does well in/ shows excellent ... skillls.
(3) is famous for his/her ...
(4) is popular among ...
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How to answer each question
3
Preparation
from hobby to future career choice
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How to write about hobbies
Structure
Paragraph 3
Content
Language
… can help make my dream come true.
Preparation
Other expressions:
(1) I’d like to become a/an ... when I grow up.
(2) My dream is to become a/an...
(3) To make my dream come true, I will work harder/ practise every day/......
How to make your dream come true?
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Writing time
Write an article about your hobby
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Self-editing
问题 分数 得分 总分
1.你在短文的第一段是否描述了进行这项兴趣爱好的时间和频率,并阐释了选择这项兴趣爱好的原因? 2
2.你在短文的第二段是否介绍了这项兴趣爱好所在领域的榜样人物? 2
3.你在短文的最后一段是否写明了这项兴趣爱好会给你带来的帮助? 2
4.你在每个段落是否提供了细节描写来支持观点? 2
5.你在文中是否使用了本单元新学的单词和短语和一般现在时? 1
6.你的短文在大小写、拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确? 1
Self-assessment
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the student’s example
I like Ping-pong. Ping-pong makes me stronger. My father taught me how to play when I was very young. I keep playing it for many years. Sometimes I play with my classmates after school. We love watching games on TV. We enjoy talking about our favourite players.
My favourite player is Wang Chuqin. He, together with Ma Long and Fan Zhendong, wins the men's table tennis gold at the Paris Olympics. His strong will to win and love to go after his goals help him to grow and become better. His stories also encourage more kids to pick up paddles.
I want to play with him one day , I would like to become an excellent player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
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I like Ping-pong. Ping-pong makes me stronger. I play Ping-pong every weekend. I sometimes play with my classmates after school. My father teaches me how to play. We love watching games on TV. We enjoy talking about our favourite players.
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Polishing
Tip1: We can use conjunctions to connect two simple sentences and make the article more logical.
e.g. I like Ping-pong because it makes me stronger.
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I like Ping-pong. Ping-pong makes me strong. I play Ping-pong every weekend. I sometimes play with my classmates after school. My father teaches me how to play. We love watching games on TV. We enjoy talking about our favourite players.
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Polishing
Tip2:
We can use the sentence pattern “It is great fun to do...” here.
e.g. It is great fun to watch games on TV and talk about our favourite players.
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Polishing
My favourite player is Wang Chuqin. He, together with Ma Long and Fan Zhendong, wins the men's table tennis gold at the Paris Olympics. His strong will to win and love to go after his goals help him to grow and become better. His stories also encourage more kids to pick up paddles.
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Tip3: We need to use correct and proper tense.
e.g. He, together with Ma Long and Fan Zhendong, won the men's table tennis gold at the Paris Olympics.
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Polishing
I want to play with him one day , I would like to become an excellent player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
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Tip4: We need to use correct and proper punctuations. In English, comma can’t connect two sentences.
e.g. I would like to become an excellent player like him and play with him one day.
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Polishing
I want to play with him one day , I would like to become an excellent player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
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e.g. To make my dream come ture, I will work harder.
How?
adverbs of purpose “to-infinitive”
(to do 不定式表示目的状语)
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I like Ping-pong because it makes me stronger. My father taught me how to play when I was very young. I keep playing it for many years. Sometimes I play with my classmates after school. It is great fun to watch games on TV and talk about our favourite players.
My favourite player is Wang Chuqin. He, together with Ma Long and Fan Zhendong, won the men's table tennis gold at the Paris Olympics. His strong will to win and love to go after his goals help him to grow and become better. His stories also encourage more kids to pick up paddles.
I would like to become an excellent player like him and play with him one day. To make my dream come ture, I will work harder.
Polishing
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Peer-editing
问题 得分 评分标准
短文是否包含了个人兴趣爱好介绍及原因? 5=excellent
4=good
3=acceptable
2=needs
短文是否有清晰的开头和结尾?
短文是否分段介绍了爱好的价值引领及对个人理想的积极影响?
短文各段的细节是否足以支撑观点?
短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语?
短文的拼写、语法和标点是否正确?
Peer-assessment
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Homework
Write an email to show your hobby. Use the outline below to help you.
Thanks for
watching and listening !
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