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应用文原创题(附教师和学生的写作)
第一节 (满分15分)
第一节(满分15分)[原创]
假定你是李华,2021年4月11日星期天你校组织了一次高三学生去红星农场劳动一天的活动,请以“劳动最光荣”为主题给21世纪英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 参加不同形式的劳动,按小时支付工资;
2. 用劳动所得购买中饭;
3. 劳动体会。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 适当增删细节。
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教师作文:
Labor is the most glorious
On Sunday, April 11th, 2021, Senior 3 students in our school went to work on Hongxing Farm for a day. Different students have different tasks. Some cut weeds and others planted rice, vegetables and trees. All the students were paid by the hour. After working three hours, students went to the canteen, tired and hungry. Never before had they found the meal so tasty, but some students didn’t earn enough to satisfy their appetite. They felt ashamed to have wasted food at school. 83W
学生考场作文(该生总分135.5,这篇作文阅卷老师给了9分,个人认为11分以上)
Our school organized an activity where we went to the Red Star Farm and worked for a whole day on April, Sunday. It has become a fabulous memory for us.
On the farm, we experienced different kinds of farm work. We sowed seeds, watered plants and fed animals like pigs and sheep. We were paid by hours (by the hour). And themost thrilling moment was the time when we bought our lunch using our own wage.The meal was simple, but we were considerably (more than) happy.
This activity taughtus we should show our respect to (for) those who earned their lives by (on)their own.
二次作文选
1. Senior 3 students inour school went to work on Hongxing Farm for a day on Sunday, 11thApril, 2021.
We participated in different tasks, such aswatering the fruit trees, planting some vegetables, feeding pigs. All the studentswere paid by the hour. During the lunch time, we used the money we gained topay for meals. Some students felt ashamed to have wasted food at school. Eachof us had an unforgettable experience. 75W Wu yu
2. Last Sunday, April 11th, 2021,our school organized senior high 3 students to work on the farm for a day.
The work was tough. We had to take part indifferent forms of work, including watering flowers, planting seedlings and picking up fruits, which were extremely tiring. Fortunately, everyone was paid five yuan per hour. And then, we could buy lunch with the money earned.
Through the activity, not only do weappreciate the farmers’ hardship, but also we are determined to cherish food. Wefeel proud to work on the farm. 92W Chen shuang
3. On Sunday, April 11th,2021, our school organized an activity to have senior 3 students work on Hongxing Farm for a day. The farm provided various jobs for us. Some tidied the barn, some cut wood and others fed cows and pigs. And students were paid by thehour, which boosted the students’ enthusiasm dramatically. At the lunch time,students bought food for themselves, using the money they earned. All of thestudents thought highly of this activity, for it taught them the importance of labor and the pleasure to harvest through their own efforts. 95W XuQiangqiang
高考应用文复习大全(19-23)
十八、留言/请假条
假定你是中学生李华,你校外教Lucy要求你周二下午参加一项有关英国文化的知识竞赛,但你因故无法参加。请你写一张请假条,并推荐你的好友李雷参加。要点如下:1.表示歉意;2.说明理由;3.推荐李雷。注意:1.词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry for not being able to attend the competition about theBritish culture on Tuesday afternoon. Here I’mwriting to ask for leave. My family will go tothe countryside to visit my grandmother this Tuesday, because it will be her 85th birthday that day. A dinner party will be arranged, which is a big event that I don’t want to miss. Would it be possible for me to recommendLi Lei to be there instead of me? He’s best qualifiedto enter the competition. I do hope to have yourpermission.
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua
十九、调查报告
某校针对高一新生进行了“拓展课”(extensive courses)的问卷调查。下面是拓展课选课原因的比例分布图。请简要描述图表,并结合自己选课经历(1-2门拓展课),说明选择的原因。(注意:不要出现学校名字)
Recently,a survey on extensive courses has been made to find thereasons why students choose certain courses. And below are the results.
As the chart shows, about half of the students surveyedchoose a certain course in order to develop their own interest while 40 percent are to enrichtheir knowledge. Less than 10 percent choose a course withthe aim/purpose/intention of consolidating their subject knowledge and preparing for exams. 71W
Personally,I once chose Robot Programming as my extensive course. That is because I have showed interest in computer and robots since (I was)in elementary school. I hold the firm belief thatinterest is the best teacher, and my future career is sure to be combined with programming. Therefore/Hence, Robot Programming became my extensivecourse.
二十、祝贺信
假如你是李华,你的美国好友Mike参加了今年夏天在中国上海举行的国际汉语演讲比赛,并荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容,给他写一封祝贺信。
内容包括:1. 表达你的愉悦心情; 2.向他表示祝贺;3.请他介绍成功的经验。
【优秀范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize inthe International Chinese Speech Contest held inShanghai, China this summer.
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your bestfriend, I am proud of you! The pronunciation and fluencyof your spoken Chinese left a deep impressionon all the judges as well as the audience. Itcame as no surprise to me that youwon the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spokenChinese? Your experience might be of great help to me in learningEnglish.
I would be grateful if you could write me back and give meyour advice. I am looking forward to yourearly reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二十一、慰问信
慰问信是向遇到挫折、失败、生病、愁苦等的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类书信感情要真诚、尽量以乐观的口吻减轻遭受者的烦恼和痛苦,并鼓励对方对日后的生活或学习充满信心。
假定你是李华,你校留学生Jacky在学习中国古诗的过程中有困难,心情很沮丧,发来邮件向你求助。请给他回一封信,内容如下:1.表示安慰;2. 提出建议;
1. Dear Jacky,
I’m sorry to learn you’re having difficulty learningancient Chinese poems. However, there’s no need to feel upset about it. I’d like to offer you somesuggestions.
To begin with/First of all, read an ancientChinese poem over and over again, making it easy for you to understand the poem. Besides, you’dbetter learn some background information about poem, thushelping you discover the hidden meaning the poemconveys.Moreimportantly, it’s beneficial to watch aTV program called Chinese Poetry Conference, wherepoem lovers exchange their experience of learning ancient Chinese poems.
Hopefully,you’ll have fun learning ancient Chinese poems.(表祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你叫李华,你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试(HSK)未能通过。请你写一封信给他,内容包括:1. 表示安慰; 2. 提出建议。
2.Dear David,
I’m sorry tohear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope thatthe unexpected failure won’t let you down, for Ihave still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.
Aswe know, language learning is never an easytask, but needs painstaking(需细心的; 辛苦的; 需专注的) efforts and patience. Personally,I think you’d better pay close attention to theformal use of Chinese words and expressions, whichreally count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese lectures online.More importantly, you should learn from themistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’vealready made great progress/advances in yourlearning of Chinese.
Good lucknext time.
Yous,
Li Hua
二十二、倡议书
倡议书是由个人或组织发出倡导做某事的应用文,常涉及公益功德方面的主题。由称呼和落款。
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华, 你校正在开展“创建美丽校园”的活动。请你用英语写一封倡议书。要点包括:1. 创建美丽校园的重要性;2. 校园内的不文明现象;3. 你的态度。
Dear fellow students,
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an activepart in/participate actively in building a beautiful campus. An attractive campus can make our learning pleasant and thus improve our grades. (倡议背景)However/Nevertheless,some students can be seen running on the lawn,picking flowers or throwing rubbish everywhere,which harms our school environment. Without doubt/Beyond doubt/Undoubtedly, it’s high timethat immediate measures should be taken tochange the present situation. In my view,everyone is responsible for/accounts for thebeauty of our campus. Moreover, if we all avoiddoing anything improper, our campus will becomemuch more beautiful. (倡议内容) Every effort matters. Let’s take action/take steps/take measures now. (发出倡议)
二十三、推荐信
首段交代写信背景,开门见山表明写信目的:
主体部分:紧扣要点,推荐条件写2—3个,适当增加细节:
尾段写作:紧扣要点—表示感谢;增加细节—期待回信。
推荐人物可用词汇
能力:have a gift/talent for=be gifted/talented in; begood/skillful at=be skilled in; be experienced in, be an expert in, a boy withgreat ability/potential; give full play to his talent; have a goodknowledge/command of; be competent/equal/qualified for; creative, efficient,intelligent...
经历:graduate from;be a graduate from, major in; gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, anall-around students with excellent grades in all subjects; be given the titleof ...
性格:outgoing; easyto get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character...
推荐信欣赏
1.(向Mr. Brown推荐同学王明为英语演讲比赛主持人)
DearMr. Brown,
Knowing that you’re searching for a host for the coming English Speech Contest, I stronglyrecommend Wang Ming as a qualified candidate.
Humorous and outgoing, he never fails to make us feel at ease. Besides, he can speak English fluently and accurately. More importantly, he has theexperience of being a host in the New Yearparty, which left us a great impression, so heknows exactly what makes a good host.
Isincerely hope you can consider my recommendation because he is the right person you are looking for.
Yours,
LiHua
2.(Jacky 想到中国的大学学汉语,体验中国文化,推荐大学)
DearJacky,
I’mwriting to extend my earnest welcome to you andprovide my personal suggestions.
In consideration of/Considering/Given your keeninterest in Chinese culture, I strongly recommendyou to apply for Zhejiang University, where you can immerse yourself in our profound history and splendid culture in its Chinese Literature major. Zhejiang University is located in Hangzhou, which will impress you withits breathtaking scenery and harmonious cultural environment.
Wishyou a meaningful and fruitful journey ofcultural experience in China.
Yours,
LiHua
3.(Edward 在学习汉语,推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站)
DearEdward,
Thrilled to learn that you’re leaning Chinese, I stronglyrecommend you www.edchinese.com for the followingreasons.
Intended for non-Chinese speakers, it enjoys a high popularity for its various courses, like dialogue, Chinese idioms and Tang poems,among which you’ll find a suitable one. Furthermore Chinese movies and songs are also what you can’t miss, whichis guaranteed to make you immersed in the charmof language and arouse your desire to explore further.Additionally, if bumps get in the way of yourexploration, the online teachers will offer you timelyassistance free of charge.
Hopeyou find it beneficial and I sincerely wish you a pleasant journey of Chineseleaning.
Yours,
LiHua
4.(介绍有当地文化特色的一个景点)
DearHenry,
Gladthat you want my recommendation about a touristattraction around here. Certainly, it is Beauty Xishi's Hometown that you shouldvisit.
The scenic spot is wellworth a visit/visiting. The impressivestories about Xi Shi, one of the four beautiesin Chinese history, the awesome ancient architecture standingagainst mountains and the unique folk items and snacks you can find there arejust a perfect reflection of local cultures andcustoms.
Bus No. 11 at the school gate will take you right there within 15minutes.Wish you a pleasant trip.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
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