Unit 1 单元主题写作满分10篇精讲精练（讲义&题型突破）-2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元重难点精讲精练全突破（人教版2024）

Unit 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （讲义&题型突破) 1、 写作主题 写有关假期的故事(Write a holiday story) 2、 主题分析 本单元以“快乐的假期”为话题，主要围绕假期的活动或经历展开，是大家非常熟悉的写作话题。针对这一话题，我们可以围绕度假的时间、地点和人物，做了什么事，感受如何或者收获了什么等展开写作。此类写作文体为记叙文，人称多用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时，通常按照时间顺序进行写作。 三、写作积累 （一）.常用的词汇：early in the morning,later, at lasthike, swim, taste local snacks excited, nervous, unforgettable ，sunny, windy, foggy （二）.常用的句型句式： (1)I went there. with.我和..去那里.. (2)It just took my breath away.它简直让人叹绝。 (3)As we/I..当我们/我…… (4)We were so... that...我们如此.以至于.. (5)I was such a good experience!这是一次很好的经历! (6)What a wonderful experience I had!我有一次多么美妙的经历啊! (7)My best holiday experience was ...我最棒的假期经历是…… (8)It was a good experience, and I will ever forget it!这是一次很棒的经历,我永远都不会忘记！ (三)写作方法： 1.紧扣要素：在创作故事时，一定要牢牢确保故事中全面涵盖时间、地点、人物、事件以及感受这五大关键要素。时间明确故事发生的具体时段，地点界定故事的发生场景，人物是推动故事发展的核心，事件是故事的主体内容，而感受则为故事增添情感色彩与深度，让读者能更深入地融入故事之中。 2.详略得当：对于故事中的内容，要做到详略安排恰到好处。着重对核心事件进行细致入微的描写，例如以“摘苹果”这类关键情节为例，要从各个角度去刻画，让读者仿佛身临其境。而像“乘车过程”这类相对次要的细节，则应简要叙述，避免过多笔墨冲淡核心内容，使故事的节奏和重点更加突出。 3.语言生动：为使故事更具吸引力，在语言运用上要下功夫。多运用具体且形象的动词，像“climbed”（攀爬）、“shook”（摇晃）等，能生动地展现人物的动作；同时搭配丰富的形容词，如“fresh”（新鲜的）、“delicious”（美味的），来描绘事物的特征。此外，巧妙运用修辞手法，特别是拟人手法，赋予无生命的物体以人的情感和动作，让故事画面更加鲜活生动。 4.情感真挚：通过细腻的心理描写，如“nervous”（紧张的）、“happy”（开心的）等词汇，精准传达人物内心的情绪变化，再结合真实自然的对话，让读者更能感同身受，增强故事的感染力，使读者与故事中的人物产生强烈的情感共鸣。 4、 写作步骤 1.开头（1 - 2句） 此部分旨在引入假期相关的基本信息，涵盖时间、地点以及涉及的人物等关键要素，通过简洁而生动的描述，成功营造出一种故事氛围，引领读者迅速进入设定的情境之中。 2.中间（3 - 5句） (1)事件发展：需依照时间的先后顺序，细致地描述假期中的主要活动，或者是意外发生的事件。在描述过程中，要巧妙地加入丰富的细节描写，诸如对所处环境的刻画，人物具体的动作展现，以及生动的对话内容等，以此让整个情节更加鲜活真实。 (2)情感变化：借助细腻的心理描写，充分体现出人物在假期过程中的情绪波动。比如从一开始对假期的满心期待，到遭遇状况时的紧张不安，再到最终收获意外惊喜的转变。像前文示例中，当被困在雨中时，“We huddled under a tree, worried we’d get lost.”就生动地展现出了人物内心的担忧与紧张。 3.结尾（1 - 2句） 这一部分主要是对整个假期的意义进行总结，或者阐述个人在此次假期中的深刻感悟。通过总结，不仅要呼应开头所营造的情境，还要进一步升华文章的主题，使读者在回顾整个假期故事的同时，能够引发更深层次的思考。 五、例题精讲 【参考范文】 A Memorable Trip to the Countryside Last autumn, my classmates and I went to a farm for a two-day trip. On the first day, we helped the farmers pick apples. The orchard was full of red fruits, and the air smelled sweet. I climbed a ladder carefully, but my hands were shaking. “Don’t worry!” the farmer said with a smile. Later, we made apple juice together—it was so fresh and delicious! The next morning, it rained heavily. We couldn’t go hiking, so we played games in the barn. Although the weather was bad, we laughed and danced all morning. Before leaving, the farmer gave each of us a bag of apples. “Remember to share them with your families,” he said. This trip taught me that happiness isn’t about doing big things—it’s about enjoying simple moments with others. 六、写作精练 1. 假如你是李华，你的好友康康想了解武夷山国家公园，请你根据表格提示，向他做一个简单介绍。 Wuyishan National Park one of China’s national reserves (保护区) Location northwest of Fujian Climate cool, cold, rain a lot, wet Plants a lot of tall trees, over 2466 kinds Animals about 475 kinds, snakes, birds... Benefits (好处) give us food, wood and medicine …… 要求：1.包含以上要点； 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名； 3.条理清晰，80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Kangkang, Knowing that you are interested in Wuyishan National Park. Let me tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 6．旅游可以让人放松身心、增长见识。假如你是李华，在刚刚结束的暑假期间，你和家人一起进行了愉快的放松之旅。在新学期的第一堂英语课上，英语老师让同学们谈谈他们的暑期之旅，并邀请作为班长的你上台演讲。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的暑期旅游经历，内容包括： 1.分享你的一次暑期旅游经历（目的地、出行方式、参观的景点等）； 2.谈谈你对这次旅游的感受。 I’m Li Hua. I had a good time with my family last summer holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 9．假如你是李华,你给某英文报社的“旅游打卡胜地”栏目投稿,向读者介绍并推荐你最喜欢的一个旅游地点,写一篇80词左右的稿件参与投稿。 提示:（1）What’s the best place for trip? （2）What can people do there?（至少介绍两个活动） （3）Why do you think it is the best? 注意事项: （1）必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头与结尾已给出； （2）意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share a wonderful place for trip with you._______________________________________________     ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope what I have written can help you. Enjoy yourself! 4. 旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的积淀和文化的传承。每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。你校英语报发起了题为“An Enjoyable Vacation”的征文活动。假如你是王平，请你根据以下思维导图中的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你一次愉快的假期，向校报投稿。 要求： 1. 短文应包含思维导图中所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80左右； 3. 不得抄袭试卷原文。 An Enjoyable Vacation ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5. One’s destination(目的地) is never a place, but a new way of seeing things. ——Henry Miller. 请以“Enjoy travel, enjoy life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。 内容要点： 1.旅行地的介绍：你游玩了哪些景点、有没有印象最深的活劫、品尝了当地的什么美食…… 2.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项或意义等； 3.下一站计划去哪里?为什么? 注意： 1.词数90左右，已经给出的部分不计入总词数； 2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实人名。 Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life Last summer, I went to __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 成长的过程中，你一定去过很多地方吧！旅行既放松了心情，又开阔了视野，学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看？你有最难忘的旅行经历吗？请你根据英文提示写一篇短文，要求不少于90词。 提示： (1) What’s your idea about traveling? (2) Tell us one of your traveling experiences. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 假如今年暑假你和家人一起去了桂林旅游，请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息用英语介绍一下这次旅游的情况。 When this summer vacation Where Guilin The weather sunny, hot What you did went to Elephant Trunk Hill (象鼻山), visited Lijiang River (漓江) and Yangsuo, ate Guilin noodles 要求： 1. 内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息； 4. 词数：80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Now let me tell you something about my holiday story. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 来信询问你去过的地方中最难忘的一个。请根据以下提示信息给他回复一封信，并邀请他来中国旅游。 提示信息： 1.已经去过很多地方旅游，其中最难忘的一次是去年暑假和父母的黄山之旅；2. 尽管爬山很累，但是坚持到最后，当到达山顶看到令人惊叹的风景时，一切辛苦都很有意义…… 要求： 1.包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；2. 不要出现真实校名和姓名；3. 不少于 80 词，已经给 出的部分不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m glad to receive your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 国庆假期刚结束，你的假期过得怎么样呢？请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，从四个不同的方面谈谈你是如何度过你的国庆假期的（已给出三个方面，请再补充一个方面）。 My National Day Holiday Health exercise every day... Study read books... Entertainment (娱乐) watch some shows... ... ... 要求： （1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）短文需包含所给内容，可适当发挥； （3）不得在文中出现真实的人名和学校名称。 During my National Day holiday, I had a wonderful time._________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 10．亲爱的同学们，美好的假期悄然结束，这是我们升入初中以来第一个暑假。在这长长的暑假里，我们也一定收获颇丰，请按照以下要点和同学们分享一下自己难忘的暑假生活。      要求：1.假期生活有什么难忘的回忆？(可以是难忘的旅游、有趣的事情、相遇的好友；也可以是一顿饭、一本书、一个拥抱等等)2.你从中学到了什么？感受到了什么？3. 假期感受。不少于80词，已给出的开头不计入词数。 My Summer Vacation My summer vacation was very special._______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 单元主题写作满分精讲精练 （讲义&题型突破) 1、 写作主题 写有关假期的故事(Write a holiday story) 2、 主题分析 本单元以“快乐的假期”为话题，主要围绕假期的活动或经历展开，是大家非常熟悉的写作话题。针对这一话题，我们可以围绕度假的时间、地点和人物，做了什么事，感受如何或者收获了什么等展开写作。此类写作文体为记叙文，人称多用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时，通常按照时间顺序进行写作。 三、写作积累 （一）常用的词汇：early in the morning，later，at last hike，swim，taste local snacks，excited，nervous， unforgettable，sunny，windy，foggy （二）常用的句型句式： (1) I went there. with.我和..去那里.. (2) It just took my breath away.它简直让人叹绝。 (3) As we/I..当我们/我…… (4) We were so... that...我们如此.以至于.. (5) I was such a good experience!这是一次很好的经历! (6) What a wonderful experience I had!我有一次多么美妙的经历啊! (7) My best holiday experience was ...我最棒的假期经历是…… (8) It was a good experience, and I will ever forget it!这是一次很棒的经历,我永远都不会忘记！ (三)写作方法： 1.紧扣要素：在创作故事时，一定要牢牢确保故事中全面涵盖时间、地点、人物、事件以及感受这五大关键要素。时间明确故事发生的具体时段，地点界定故事的发生场景，人物是推动故事发展的核心，事件是故事的主体内容，而感受则为故事增添情感色彩与深度，让读者能更深入地融入故事之中。 2.详略得当：对于故事中的内容，要做到详略安排恰到好处。着重对核心事件进行细致入微的描写，例如以“摘苹果”这类关键情节为例，要从各个角度去刻画，让读者仿佛身临其境。而像“乘车过程”这类相对次要的细节，则应简要叙述，避免过多笔墨冲淡核心内容，使故事的节奏和重点更加突出。 3.语言生动：为使故事更具吸引力，在语言运用上要下功夫。多运用具体且形象的动词，像“climbed”（攀爬）、“shook”（摇晃）等，能生动地展现人物的动作；同时搭配丰富的形容词，如“fresh”（新鲜的）、“delicious”（美味的），来描绘事物的特征。此外，巧妙运用修辞手法，特别是拟人手法，赋予无生命的物体以人的情感和动作，让故事画面更加鲜活生动。 4.情感真挚：通过细腻的心理描写，如“nervous”（紧张的）、“happy”（开心的）等词汇，精准传达人物内心的情绪变化，再结合真实自然的对话，让读者更能感同身受，增强故事的感染力，使读者与故事中的人物产生强烈的情感共鸣。 4、 写作步骤 1.开头（1 - 2句） 此部分旨在引入假期相关的基本信息，涵盖时间、地点以及涉及的人物等关键要素，通过简洁而生动的描述，成功营造出一种故事氛围，引领读者迅速进入设定的情境之中。 2.中间（3 - 5句） (1)事件发展：需依照时间的先后顺序，细致地描述假期中的主要活动，或者是意外发生的事件。在描述过程中，要巧妙地加入丰富的细节描写，诸如对所处环境的刻画，人物具体的动作展现，以及生动的对话内容等，以此让整个情节更加鲜活真实。 (2)情感变化：借助细腻的心理描写，充分体现出人物在假期过程中的情绪波动。比如从一开始对假期的满心期待，到遭遇状况时的紧张不安，再到最终收获意外惊喜的转变。像前文示例中，当被困在雨中时，“We huddled under a tree, worried we’d get lost.”就生动地展现出了人物内心的担忧与紧张。 3.结尾（1 - 2句） 这一部分主要是对整个假期的意义进行总结，或者阐述个人在此次假期中的深刻感悟。通过总结，不仅要呼应开头所营造的情境，还要进一步升华文章的主题，使读者在回顾整个假期故事的同时，能够引发更深层次的思考。 五、例题精讲 【参考范文】 A Memorable Trip to the Countryside Last autumn, my classmates and I went to a farm for a two-day trip. On the first day, we helped the farmers pick apples. The orchard was full of red fruits, and the air smelled sweet. I climbed a ladder carefully, but my hands were shaking. “Don’t worry!” the farmer said with a smile. Later, we made apple juice together—it was so fresh and delicious! The next morning, it rained heavily. We couldn’t go hiking, so we played games in the barn. Although the weather was bad, we laughed and danced all morning. Before leaving, the farmer gave each of us a bag of apples. “Remember to share them with your families,” he said. This trip taught me that happiness isn’t about doing big things—it’s about enjoying simple moments with others. 六、写作精练 1. 假如你是李华，你的好友康康想了解武夷山国家公园，请你根据表格提示，向他做一个简单介绍。 Wuyishan National Park one of China’s national reserves (保护区) Location northwest of Fujian Climate cool, cold, rain a lot, wet Plants a lot of tall trees, over 2466 kinds Animals about 475 kinds, snakes, birds... Benefits (好处) give us food, wood and medicine …… 要求：1.包含以上要点； 2.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名； 3.条理清晰，80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Kangkang, Knowing that you are interested in Wuyishan National Park. Let me tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version: Dear Kangkang, Knowing that you are interested in Wuyishan National Park. Let me tell you something about it. Wuyishan National Park is one of China’s national reserves. It is in the northwest of Fujian. It’s cool in summer but cold in winter. It rains a lot, so the ground is always wet. The park is home to many tall trees, with over 2,466 different kinds of plants. There are also about 475 kinds of animals, including snakes and birds and so on. The park gives us food, wood, medicine and many useful things. Wuyishan National Park is a beautiful place. Let’s enjoy the beauty of it. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：根据表格内容，简洁地介绍武夷山的地理位置、气候、植物、动物及其带来的益处。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头简单介绍要谈论的主题——武夷山国家公园。 第二步，按照表格提示，依次描述武夷山的位置、气候、植物和动物。 第三步，简要总结武夷山对人类的益处。 第四步，结尾时表达对武夷山的喜爱，并强调其自然美。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in 对……感兴趣 ②national reserve 国家保护区 ③in winter 在冬季 ④and so on 等等 ⑤rain a lot 下很多雨 [高分句型] ① Let me tell you something about it. (祈使句) ② There are also about 475 kinds of animals, including snakes and birds and so on. (There be句型) 2. 6．旅游可以让人放松身心、增长见识。假如你是李华，在刚刚结束的暑假期间，你和家人一起进行了愉快的放松之旅。在新学期的第一堂英语课上，英语老师让同学们谈谈他们的暑期之旅，并邀请作为班长的你上台演讲。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的暑期旅游经历，内容包括： 1.分享你的一次暑期旅游经历（目的地、出行方式、参观的景点等）； 2.谈谈你对这次旅游的感受。 I’m Li Hua. I had a good time with my family last summer holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m Li Hua. I had a good time with my family last summer holiday. We went to Shanghai on vacation with my family. We took a plane there. We stayed there for two days. Everything was great. We visited Shanghai Museum. I learned a lot about Chinese history. We went to Shanghai Disneyland Park. We walked on the street of the park. It was so hot that we ate some ice-cream. We took many photos. We also ate lots of delicious food like soup dumplings. My vacation there was really exciting. I hope to go there again. 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。介绍自己的暑期旅行经历以及自己的感受。 2.写作指导：本文在描述自己经历时用一般过去时，描述对旅行的感受可以用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作围绕自己的旅行展开叙述，可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 3. 9．假如你是李华,你给某英文报社的“旅游打卡胜地”栏目投稿,向读者介绍并推荐你最喜欢的一个旅游地点,写一篇80词左右的稿件参与投稿。 提示:（1）What’s the best place for trip? （2）What can people do there?（至少介绍两个活动） （3）Why do you think it is the best? 注意事项: （1）必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头与结尾已给出； （2）意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share a wonderful place for trip with you._______________________________________________     ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I do hope what I have written can help you. Enjoy yourself! Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share a wonderful place for trip with you. My favorite tourist destination is Sanya City, which is located at the southernmost point of Sanya City in Hainan Province. It is known as “Oriental Hawaii” for its blooming flowers in summer. The environment is very unique. The natural beauty of mountain, sea and river forms Sanya City. The unique natural landscape is the best leisure resort. The city has beautiful environment, white sand and blue, beautiful wind and clear water. You can see these here. Welcome to Sanya, the most comfortable place. I do hope what I have written can help you. Enjoy yourself! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章要涵盖给出的提示信息，包括介绍最佳旅游地点、在那里可以做的活动，以及认为这个地方是最佳地点的原因。同时，要保持文章的逻辑连贯性和结构清晰性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍投稿目的，即推荐一个绝佳的旅游地点； 第二步，通过具体描述该地的自然美景和独特的环境，以及游客可以在那里进行的活动，来支持其推荐的理由； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①share... with...与……分享…… ②be located at位于 ③be known as作为……而著名 [高分句型] My favorite tourist destination is Sanya City, which is located at the southernmost point of Sanya City in Hainan Province.(which引导非限制性定语从句) 4. 旅行能让我们感受到自然的魅力、历史的积淀和文化的传承。每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。你校英语报发起了题为“An Enjoyable Vacation”的征文活动。假如你是王平，请你根据以下思维导图中的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你一次愉快的假期，向校报投稿。 要求： 1. 短文应包含思维导图中所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 词数80左右； 3. 不得抄袭试卷原文。 An Enjoyable Vacation ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 An Enjoyable Vacation Last summer, I went to Hangzhou for a vacation. Hangzhou is famous for its beautiful West Lake. I had a wonderful time there. I enjoyed a boat ride on the lake, visited the tea plantations, and tasted the local food, which was delicious. The scenery was beautiful, and the people were very friendly. I even took many photos to remember the beautiful views. This trip was relaxing and enjoyable, and I learned a lot about the local culture. I really loved my visit to Hangzhou. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，使语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍假期去了哪里； 第二步，具体阐述你做的事情； 第三步，最后表达你的看法和感受。 [亮点词汇] ① be famous for 因……而闻名 ② take many photos 拍了很多照片 ③ local culture 当地文化 [高分句型] I enjoyed a boat ride on the lake, visited the tea plantations, and tasted the local food, which was delicious.（which引导定语从句） 5. One’s destination(目的地) is never a place, but a new way of seeing things. ——Henry Miller. 请以“Enjoy travel, enjoy life”为题写篇短文，分享你的某次旅行经历及对旅行的看法。 内容要点： 1.旅行地的介绍：你游玩了哪些景点、有没有印象最深的活劫、品尝了当地的什么美食…… 2.对这次经历的感悟，如旅行的注意事项或意义等； 3.下一站计划去哪里?为什么? 注意： 1.词数90左右，已经给出的部分不计入总词数； 2.短文须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥； 3.文中不得出现真实人名。 Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life Last summer, I went to __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Enjoy Travel, Enjoy Life Last year, I went to Qingdao with my family. We went there to see the sunrise in the early morning. The sky was colorful and the sea was shining brightly. When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. We had seafood which was delicious. All of us had a wonderful time. As we all know, the outside world is wonderful. If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. I want to see the Ocean Park there. I’m eager to know how the dolphins perform. Also, I’d like to visit the Hong Kong Disneyland. I want to see Snow White. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍游玩景点、印象深刻的活动和美食； 第二步，表达自己的旅行感受； 第三步，介绍接下来的游玩计划。 [亮点词汇] ①be eager to do 渴望做某事 ②would like to do 想要做某事 [高分句型] ①When we walked on the beach, we felt the soft wind. (when引导时间状语从句) ②If possible, I want to visit Hong Kong. (if引导条件状语从句) 6. 成长的过程中，你一定去过很多地方吧！旅行既放松了心情，又开阔了视野，学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看？你有最难忘的旅行经历吗？请你根据英文提示写一篇短文，要求不少于90词。 提示： (1) What’s your idea about traveling? (2) Tell us one of your traveling experiences. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Traveling is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I think it helps us discover new places and understand different cultures. My most unforgettable trip was visiting the Great Wall last summer. Early that morning, my family and I took a bus to the famous wall. When I saw its long body winding through mountains, I felt amazed. Climbing the steep steps was tiring, but the view from the top was worth it. We took many photos and listened to stories about ancient Chinese history from our guide. I realized how smart and strong the builders were hundreds of years ago. This trip taught me that traveling is not just about fun and it also helps us connect with history. I will never forget that special day. 7. 假如今年暑假你和家人一起去了桂林旅游，请你根据下面表格中所提供的信息用英语介绍一下这次旅游的情况。 When this summer vacation Where Guilin The weather sunny, hot What you did went to Elephant Trunk Hill (象鼻山), visited Lijiang River (漓江) and Yangsuo, ate Guilin noodles 要求： 1. 内容必须包含所给的信息，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息； 4. 词数：80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Now let me tell you something about my holiday story. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Now let me tell you something about my holiday story. This summer vacation, I went to Guilin with my family. The weather was sunny and hot. First, we went to Elephant Trunk Hill. It was wonderful. After that, we visited Lijiang River. The water was clean and cool. Then we visited Yangsuo, too. It was beautiful. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of fun. We also ate Guilin noodles. It was very delicious. We stayed there for three days. We had a wonderful time. 8. 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 来信询问你去过的地方中最难忘的一个。请根据以下提示信息给他回复一封信，并邀请他来中国旅游。 提示信息： 1.已经去过很多地方旅游，其中最难忘的一次是去年暑假和父母的黄山之旅；2. 尽管爬山很累，但是坚持到最后，当到达山顶看到令人惊叹的风景时，一切辛苦都很有意义…… 要求： 1.包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；2. 不要出现真实校名和姓名；3. 不少于 80 词，已经给 出的部分不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, How’s it going? I’m glad to receive your letter. I have visited many places. But the most unforgettable one was the trip to Mount Huangshan with my parents during the last summer vacation. We climbed the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the way. There were lots of strange rocks and beautiful wild flowers. Although the climb was really tiring, we kept going until the end. When we reached the top of the mountain and saw the amazing view, all the hard work was meaningful. We took a lot of photos. China is a country full of beautiful scenery and rich culture. I’d like to invite you to visit China. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 9. 国庆假期刚结束，你的假期过得怎么样呢？请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，从四个不同的方面谈谈你是如何度过你的国庆假期的（已给出三个方面，请再补充一个方面）。 My National Day Holiday Health exercise every day... Study read books... Entertainment (娱乐) watch some shows... ... ... 要求： （1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）短文需包含所给内容，可适当发挥； （3）不得在文中出现真实的人名和学校名称。 During my National Day holiday, I had a wonderful time._________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 During my National Day holiday, I had a wonderful time. First of all, I spent much time doing exercise every day. I got enough sleep. Besides, I focused on my study and did a lot of reading. I joined a reading club where I learned something new about Chinese history. Of course, I finished all my homework. In addition to exercising and studying, I also watched some shows, like sports shows and game shows. And I visited a farm with my family. We took quite a few photos. During the holiday, I also helped my parents with lots of housework, such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor. All in all, my National Day holiday was both relaxing and meaningful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据表格中的内容介绍自己的国庆假期，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，总述国庆假期的情况； 第二步，具体从“健康、学习、娱乐等”四方面详细介绍是如何度过国庆的； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①spent much time doing exercise花很多时间锻炼； ②learned something new about...学到了有关……的新东西； ③took quite a few photos拍了不少照片； ④In addition to除了……之外 ⑤help sb with sth帮助某人作某事 ⑥all in all总之 [高分句型] ①I joined a reading club where I learned something new about Chinese history. （where引导的定语从句） 10. 10．亲爱的同学们，美好的假期悄然结束，这是我们升入初中以来第一个暑假。在这长长的暑假里，我们也一定收获颇丰，请按照以下要点和同学们分享一下自己难忘的暑假生活。      要求：1.假期生活有什么难忘的回忆？(可以是难忘的旅游、有趣的事情、相遇的好友；也可以是一顿饭、一本书、一个拥抱等等)2.你从中学到了什么？感受到了什么？3. 假期感受。不少于80词，已给出的开头不计入词数。 My Summer Vacation My summer vacation was very special._______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ My Summer Vacation My summer vacation was very special. During the summer vacation, I went to Hainan with my parents. Hainan is very beautiful. I liked the food there. They were very delicious but also very expensive. The evening in Hainan was very comfortable. I walked on the beach with my parents and we enjoyed the wind. In Hainan, there are many beautiful souvenirs. I bought some for my relatives and friends, and they liked these gifts very much. This summer holiday was very relaxing. We all had a good time. We are looking forward to the next trip. 【写作分析】 1.题干解读：该题目要求包含假期生活有什么难忘的回忆，可写的内容非常多。从中学到了什么、感受到了什么、假期感受等一定要包含。注意一个是事件感受，一个是假期感受。还需注意时态，一般过去时。 2.点评：通过对假期旅游的回忆，学到什么、感受等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。 3.高分亮点：词组：the summer vacation；with my parents；many beautiful souvenirs；my relatives and friends；had a good time；the next trip等； 句型：During the summer vacation, I went to Hainan with my parents./They were very delicious but also very expensive./I walked on the beach with my parents and we enjoyed the wind./We all had a good time. /We are looking forward to the next trip.等 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$