2025年中考英语总复习 写作专项训练 Topic：Self-improvement课件

中考总复习 写作专项训练 Topic:Self-improvement To Be a Better Self -Self-improvement- Warm-up Wow, I’m so proud of how you all can find out others’ shining points! That’s a huge shining point itself—because noticing others’ shining points means you’re good at learning, reflecting, and improving yourselves." (Pause, show a image on the whiteboard) "Today, we’ll meet some role models who are just like you—people who work on becoming better every day. Take out your reading material, and let’s discover: What shining points do they have? What actions do they take to improve?" I think _ is _. Warm-up helpful kind hard-working brave friendly active ... Shining Points honest Wow, I’m so proud of how you all can find out others’ shining points! That’s a huge shining point itself—because noticing others’ shining points means you’re good at learning, reflecting, and improving yourselves." (Pause, show a image on the whiteboard) "Today, we’ll meet some role models who are just like you—people who work on becoming better every day. Take out your reading material, and let’s discover: What shining points do they have? What actions do they take to improve?" Warm-up Noticing others’shining points is also a huge shining point!Everyone can be a shining example! Wow, I’m so proud of how you all can find out others’ shining points! That’s a huge shining point itself—because noticing others’ shining points means you’re good at learning, reflecting, and improving yourselves." (Pause, show a image on the whiteboard) "Today, we’ll meet some role models who are just like you—people who work on becoming better every day. Take out your reading material, and let’s discover: What shining points do they have? What actions do they take to improve?" a shining example Reading Su Yiming 苏翊鸣 Fast-reading What is Su Yiming like? A. He is creative. B. He is hard-working. C. He is lucky. D. He is shy. Why He is hard-working because _ he practised 4 to 6 hours daily. he woke up early to train without giving up. he kept practising difficult moves. He is still working hard in order to_. Fast-reading Why is he still working hard? be hard-working won gold medals get higher goals achieve higher goals Even if we’re good, we can always find ways to improve. How can we be better? Our school website is collecting plans for self-improvement blogs! The best plans will get ‘Shining Star Prize’. Please write your plans about how to be a better self at school, at home and in society and send them to the website. Reading Task 1.1 How many parts are there in the passage? How can we divide them? Part 1(Para. _) Part 2 (Para. _) Part 3 (Para. _) Three. ① ②③④ ⑤ Reading Task 1.2 Match the main idea with each part. Part 1(Para. ①) Conclusion Part 2 (Para.②③④) Introduction Part 3 (Para.⑤) Suggestions Tip 1: Use clear structure and linking words. Reading Task 2.1 What are the writer’s suggestions? How does he support them? Suggestions(_) Supporting Details(支撑细节) Para.② It’s a good idea to be hard-working. For example, ... Because ... Example Reason Topic Sentences 主题句 Reading Task 2.2 Discuss in groups and find the answers. Suggestions(_) Supporting Details(支撑细节) Para.③ such as... Para.④ You can show more love to family members. You can do something good. In order to ... Purpose(目的) Example ... are wonderful examples. “Rome wasn’t built in a day.” Example Quotation (引用) Topic Sentences Reading Suggestions(_) Supporting details(支撑细节) Para.② It’s a good idea to be hard-working. For example, ... Because ... Para.③ Para.④ You can show more love to family members. You can do something good. such as... In order to ... ... are wonderful examples. “Rome wasn’t built in a day.” Tip 2: Use topic sentences(主题句) to show opinions. Tip 3: Use different supporting details. Topic Sentences Pre-writing Discuss and share Can you give more suggestions? Choose one aspect(方面) and share: At school / At home / In society, topic sentence + supporting details e.g. At home,it’s a good idea for you to manage your time well. For example, read and learn for 2 hours and then do sports for half an hour. You will be healthier if you do so. Writing Our school website is collecting plans for self-improvement blogs! The best plans will get ‘Shining Star Prize’. Please write your plans about how to be a better self at school, at home and in society and send them to the website. e.g. At home,I plan to manage my time well. For example, I will read and learn for 2 hours and then do sports for half an hour. I will be healthier if I do so. Writing Get help from the checklist while writing: Checklist 评价维度 评价标准 学生自评 Content 内容 Cover the three aspects of the plan. Use correct vocabulary(词汇). Use different ways to support the ideas. Use 语用 Use future tense and first person to write the plan. Use correct sentence partterns(句型). Form 形式 Write the plans with clear structure and linking words. 自评:Give three s if you can do this part perfectly and two s if you can do it partly. Discuss in groups and share your plans. Remember to underline at least one good sentence in group members’ plans. Post-writing Homework Must do: Choose to do: 1. Polish your plans and send it to the school website. 2. Stick it on the table to help you improve. Make a video about how you keep the plan and encourage other people to be better. Summary Brighter Shining Stars $$