Unit 3 Conservation 正反对比类议论文（单元同步写作讲义）英语北师大版2019选择性必修第一册

Unit 3 Conservation 同步写作课讲义-北师大版2019选择性必修第一册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 正反对比类议论文 议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场或态度的一种文体。正反对比类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明对某事的观点。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 正反对比类议论文的结构一般为：引言（提出问题）——正方观点与论据——反方观点与论据——结语（陈述个人观点）。陈述个人观点时可简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面已谈到的理由。此类文章常使用一般现在时。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 　随着科学技术的发展,克隆已经成为现实。但人们对是否应该克隆人类有不同的看法。请你根据下面所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文。主要内容包括: 1.赞同克隆人:可用于医疗领域; 2.反对克隆人:用克隆人进行犯罪活动,无法预知克隆人的未来。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 In the recent decades, many institutes in the world have put forward that they can make cloning humans realistic. People have different ideas about this. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：引入话题 ◆ 步骤二：列举正方和反方观点并说明理由 ◆ 步骤三：表达自己的观点 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1.aware adj.意识到的,明白的   2.for instance 例如  3.sum up 概括;总结  ( 句型积累 ) 1.开头:引入辩论话题 ①Opinions on the topic are various.关于这个话题的意见各不相同。 ②Recently our class have had a discussion whose topic is whether it is necessary for high school students to do voluntary work.最近我们班进行了一次讨论,主题是高中生是否有必要做义务工作。 2.主体:列举正方和反方的观点并说明理由 ①However, every coin has two sides.然而,任何事物都有两面性。 ②However, 27% of the students are against the idea.然而,27%的学生反对这个想法。 ③Some students support the opinion. Other students oppose the opinion.一些学生支持这个看法。其他学生反对这个看法。 ④They argue that for one thing, teenagers are too young to take up some work.他们辩称,一方面,青少年太年轻,以至于不能从事某些工作。 ⑤For another, students' time is limited with so much homework to do.另一方面,学生的时间是有限的,因为有如此多的家庭作业要做。 ⑥73% of the students support the view for the reason that volunteering to help others can make a contribution to building a harmonious society.73%的学生支持这一观点,因为自愿帮助他人可以为构建和谐社会做出贡献。 3.结尾:表明自己的观点 ①As far as I'm concerned/Personally, I'm in favour of the first/second view.就我个人而言,我赞成第一种/第二种观点。 ②From my point of view, it's beneficial for us to do voluntary work, for we can not only gain valuable experience but also have a better understanding of society.在我看来,做义务工作对我们是有益的,因为我们不仅可以获得宝贵的经验,而且可以更好地了解社会。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) In the recent decades, many institutes in the world have put forward that they can make cloning humans realistic. People have different ideas about this.  Many people who are in favour of it believe that it is necessary for scientists to clone humans in the future. We can use it in the field of medicine;we may make some organs to replace the bad ones in patients' bodies. Without these organs, many people would die. But some people who are against it think that people aren't aware of the danger of cloning humans. For instance, the cloned people can be used as a tool to commit crimes. To sum up, people may be at the great risk of cloning humans. In conclusion, despite the usage of cloning in research, cloning humans is bad for the living people. In my opinion, we should try to stop this kind of research. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车。你班同学就此展开讨论,提出两种不同的观点。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信,客观地介绍这两种观点。 学生 观点 赞同者 1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具; 2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强; 3.带动其他行业发展。 反对者 1.废气污染严重; 2.汽车过多影响交通,导致更多事故; 3.停车问题日益突出。 注意: 1.词数80左右。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （2） ［2025八省联考］假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球， 发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括： （1）表示支持; （2）推荐教练。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Beth, Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua （3） （24-25高二下·陕西西安·阶段练习）假如你是李华，上周在英语课上，学生们就“人类是否应该继续进行海洋探索”为话题进行了讨论，请你写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况，并说明你自己的观点。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Last week we had a class discussion about ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （24-25高一下·江西鹰潭·期末）如今，短视频（short videos）在青少年群体中十分流行。有人认为观看短视频能让学生开阔视野、放松身心，也有人担心其影响学习、误导价值观。请结合自身观察与思考，写一篇80字左右的文章，谈谈你对“学生观看短视频利弊”的看法，并提出合理建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （5） （24-25高二上·吉林通化·阶段练习）现在社会，养宠物已经屡见不鲜了。但是，就这一现象人们都有不同的态度，既有赞成意见，也有反对意见。请写一篇短文谈谈养宠物的好处和弊端。并谈谈你的观点。要点如下： 养宠物的好处：宠物是很好的伙伴，尤其是对独居的人或者老人；有些宠物能看家护院；还能给全家带来欢乐；照顾宠物能培养孩子的责任感。 养宠物的弊端：很脏，有可能传播疾病；如未对宠物进行训练，有些宠物可能会对孩子造成伤害。 注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头已给出，不计入词数。 Nowadays it is common to see people keep a pet all over the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （6） （23-24高二下·四川绵阳·开学考试）做家务是劳动教育实践的重要组成部分，但孩子做家务该不该给报酬引发了广泛的社会讨论。请你以“Should Kids Be Paid for Doing Housework?”为题写一篇英语短文，阐明你的观点和理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Should Kids Be Paid for Doing Housework? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 读后续写 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Once upon a time, in a coastal village named Seaford lived a courageous young girl named Amelia. Amelia was known throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature. From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves, feeling the sand between her toes and the cool spray of the ocean mist on her face. She was a girl with a strong will and possessed a heart full of kindness and curiosity. Amelia’s love for the ocean was intense, and she spent most of her spare time exploring the beautiful beaches and sparkling waters that surrounded her house. One sunny morning, while Amelia was walking along the shore and enjoying the gentle sea breeze, she noticed a strange phenomenon（现象） that a flock of restless seagulls abnormally circled above the crashing waves. Their unusual calls echoed through the air. Concerned for their safety and well-being, Amelia followed them, her instincts guiding her toward the unusual scene. As she approached a towering cliff（峭壁）, Amelia gasped in horror. On a narrow ledge（岩架）, high above the violent waves, was a young dolphin trapped in a thick fishing net. Its shiny body shone under the golden rays of the sun, but its freedom was cruelly limited by the trap. It was struggling, but with each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body, leaving painful marks on its skin. Its tail flapped helplessly, each movement a request for help, while its desperate cries for assistance echoed through the air. A sense of urgency filled Amelia, pushing her forward with determination. Realizing that time was tight, Amelia knew she had to act instantly to free this innocent creature from its difficult position before it submitted to exhaustion or the force of the tides. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Paragraph 1: Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village.__________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: As the dolphin was released into the water, it hesitated for a moment._____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题导语】 本文以救援海豚为线索展开。Amelia热爱海洋，同时她也十分勇敢和善良。有一天，她在悬崖边上发现有一只小海豚被困在渔网里，她决定把它从困境中解救出来…… 【写作指导】 情节预测 续写第一段 1.What did Amelia do after returning to the village? 2.Did she turn to the villagers for help? 3.What did they do to help the dolphin out? 续写第二段 1.How did the dolphin react after being rescued? 2.How did the villagers feel after rescuing the dolphin? ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) 　　Without hesitation,Amelia rushed back to the village. She gathered the villagers to join her in the rescue. Amelia led the way, carefully moving along the steep cliff edge until she reached the dolphin.【高分句型- As she drew closer, she noticed tears streaming out of the creature's eyes, as if it knew its fate was in their hands. Amelia carefully freed the dolphin from the net.Then Amelia and the villagers guided it down to the waiting boat.Then they made their way back to the shore and treated the injuries of the dolphin. （描写Amelia召集村民，和她一起救援被困海豚的过程) 　　As the dolphin was released into the waters,it hesitated for a moment. Amelia approached the dolphin and gently stroked it. The dolphin touched the girl with the tip of its nose in response and made happy sounds as if to say a final thank you before diving gracefully beneath the surface.The crowd erupted in applause, their hearts filled with joy and gratitude for being witness to such a remarkable rescue. Amelia's courage and compassion were an inspiration to all who heard her story.【高分句型二】（描写海豚对它的恩人Amelia以及村民们表示感激之情) ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （24-25高一下·湖南·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 There was a busy street corner beside a bus station. Pupils changed buses going to or from school there. This small area was anything but appealing: loud cars and buses passed by, and tall gray buildings looked like big stone giants. Peter was one of the kids who had to wait here for nine and a half minutes each day to change buses. The station had a strong gas smell. The land nearby, maybe once a garden, was now full of trash — cans, paper bags, and chicken boxes. Weeds (草) grew wild all around them. There was nowhere nice to walk and nothing to look at. Hanging around like that each day almost drove Peter mad. Most kids wasted their time complaining (抱怨) about all the mess, but Peter felt restless. He knew he couldn’t do anything to change the bus company’s timetable and its bus routes but he could make these waiting minutes more enjoyable for himself and others. He asked his mom for a pair of gloves and some trash bags. That week, he filled his nine minutes each day by picking up the waste. As he piled the waste into bags, “Why trouble yourself? It’ll just get dirty again!” his classmates laughed at him, casually throwing used tissues, candy wrappers and cans around. Silent for a while, Peter continued picking up the waste his classmates dropped, thinking, “It seems like an impossible dream to change this deserted land. Should I give up just as my classmates said?” One afternoon, an elderly man approached Peter. “I used to garden here years ago,” he said, handing Peter some sunflower seeds (种子). “Perhaps you can plant these. You know, sunflowers grow easily in hard environments.” Inspired by the elderly man, Peter saw hope again. The next week, Peter occupied himself weeding the field and soon this piece of land was cleared up. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Next, he took out the sunflower seeds offered by the elderly man. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ More kids began to help take care of the plants. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Conservation 同步写作课讲义-北师大版2019选择性必修第一册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 正反对比类议论文 议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场或态度的一种文体。正反对比类议论文是从正反两方面辩证地说明对某事的观点。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 正反对比类议论文的结构一般为：引言（提出问题）——正方观点与论据——反方观点与论据——结语（陈述个人观点）。陈述个人观点时可简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面已谈到的理由。此类文章常使用一般现在时。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 　随着科学技术的发展,克隆已经成为现实。但人们对是否应该克隆人类有不同的看法。请你根据下面所提供的信息,写一篇英语作文。主要内容包括: 1.赞同克隆人:可用于医疗领域; 2.反对克隆人:用克隆人进行犯罪活动,无法预知克隆人的未来。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 In the recent decades, many institutes in the world have put forward that they can make cloning humans realistic. People have different ideas about this. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：引入话题 ◆ 步骤二：列举正方和反方观点并说明理由 ◆ 步骤三：表达自己的观点 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) 1.aware adj.意识到的,明白的   2.for instance 例如  3.sum up 概括;总结  ( 句型积累 ) 1.开头:引入辩论话题 ①Opinions on the topic are various.关于这个话题的意见各不相同。 ②Recently our class have had a discussion whose topic is whether it is necessary for high school students to do voluntary work.最近我们班进行了一次讨论,主题是高中生是否有必要做义务工作。 2.主体:列举正方和反方的观点并说明理由 ①However, every coin has two sides.然而,任何事物都有两面性。 ②However, 27% of the students are against the idea.然而,27%的学生反对这个想法。 ③Some students support the opinion. Other students oppose the opinion.一些学生支持这个看法。其他学生反对这个看法。 ④They argue that for one thing, teenagers are too young to take up some work.他们辩称,一方面,青少年太年轻,以至于不能从事某些工作。 ⑤For another, students' time is limited with so much homework to do.另一方面,学生的时间是有限的,因为有如此多的家庭作业要做。 ⑥73% of the students support the view for the reason that volunteering to help others can make a contribution to building a harmonious society.73%的学生支持这一观点,因为自愿帮助他人可以为构建和谐社会做出贡献。 3.结尾:表明自己的观点 ①As far as I'm concerned/Personally, I'm in favour of the first/second view.就我个人而言,我赞成第一种/第二种观点。 ②From my point of view, it's beneficial for us to do voluntary work, for we can not only gain valuable experience but also have a better understanding of society.在我看来,做义务工作对我们是有益的,因为我们不仅可以获得宝贵的经验,而且可以更好地了解社会。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) In the recent decades, many institutes in the world have put forward that they can make cloning humans realistic. People have different ideas about this.  Many people who are in favour of it believe that it is necessary for scientists to clone humans in the future. We can use it in the field of medicine;we may make some organs to replace the bad ones in patients' bodies. Without these organs, many people would die. But some people who are against it think that people aren't aware of the danger of cloning humans. For instance, the cloned people can be used as a tool to commit crimes. To sum up, people may be at the great risk of cloning humans. In conclusion, despite the usage of cloning in research, cloning humans is bad for the living people. In my opinion, we should try to stop this kind of research. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 随着人们生活水平的提高,越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车。你班同学就此展开讨论,提出两种不同的观点。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信,客观地介绍这两种观点。 学生 观点 赞同者 1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具; 2.反映出国民生活条件提高,国家富强; 3.带动其他行业发展。 反对者 1.废气污染严重; 2.汽车过多影响交通,导致更多事故; 3.停车问题日益突出。 注意: 1.词数80左右。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Dear editor,  I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.With the development of people's living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it's good to own a car. Firstly, cars are a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country is becoming much stronger. It also makes relevant businesses and industries develop faster.  Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, parking is another big problem. In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car. Yours, Li Hua  （2） ［2025八省联考］假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth想学打乒乓球， 发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括： （1）表示支持; （2）推荐教练。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 Dear Beth, Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua Dear Beth, 　　Glad to know that you want to learn to play 　　table tennis. It's a fun and exciting sport!I highlysupport your decision, as it will not only improveyour skills but also help you make new friends.【高分句型一】（表示支持） 　　I recommend you take lessons from Coach Zhang. He is an experienced coach who has trained many players at different levels.【高分句型二】His classes are engaging and tailored toeach student's needs.You can find him at the localsports center.(推荐教练) 　　Let me know if you need more information.Enjoy your training!(表达愿意提供信息) 　　Yours, Li Hua （3） （24-25高二下·陕西西安·阶段练习）假如你是李华，上周在英语课上，学生们就“人类是否应该继续进行海洋探索”为话题进行了讨论，请你写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况，并说明你自己的观点。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Last week we had a class discussion about ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last week we had a class discussion about whether humans should continue ocean exploration. Some students thought we should keep exploring. They said the ocean has rich resources, like energy and minerals, which can solve resource shortages. It also helps us understand climate change better. However, others disagreed. They worried exploration might pollute the ocean and harm marine life. It could also cost too much money. In my opinion, we should explore the ocean but in a responsible way. We need to protect it while making good use of its treasures. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于上周在英语课上，学生们就“人类是否应该继续进行海洋探索”为话题进行了讨论这一情况，写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况，并说明你自己的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 丰富的：rich→ abundant 解决：solve→ settle 观点：opinion→ view 危害：harm→ damage 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：They worried exploration might pollute the ocean and harm marine life. It could also cost too much money. 合并句：They worried exploration might pollute the ocean and harm marine life, which could also cost too much money. 【点睛】【高分句型1】They said the ocean has rich resources, like energy and minerals, which can solve resource shortages.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】We need to protect it while making good use of its treasures.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句以及从句的省略用法。） （4） （24-25高一下·江西鹰潭·期末）如今，短视频（short videos）在青少年群体中十分流行。有人认为观看短视频能让学生开阔视野、放松身心，也有人担心其影响学习、误导价值观。请结合自身观察与思考，写一篇80字左右的文章，谈谈你对“学生观看短视频利弊”的看法，并提出合理建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 Short videos are extremely popular among teenagers. Some think they can broaden students’ horizons and help them relax, while others worry excessive watching may distract them from studies and mislead values. In my opinion, students should prioritize their studies. When watching short videos, they can choose educational and positive ones. Also, parents and teachers should offer proper guidance, and young teenagers will watch wisely and control time.   In conclusion, only by using short videos properly can students benefit from them without negative impacts. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生就学生观看短视频的利弊发表看法，并结合自身观察思考提出合理建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 流行的：popular → prevalent 优先处理：prioritize → give priority to 适当的：proper → appropriate 影响：impact → influence 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Also, parents and teachers should offer proper guidance, and young teenagers will watch wisely and control time. 拓展句：Also, parents and teachers should offer proper guidance, which will make young teenagers watch wisely and control time. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When watching short videos, they can choose educational and positive ones. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略) 【高分句型2】In conclusion, only by using short videos properly can students benefit from them without negative impacts. (运用了only+状语位于句首引出的部分倒装句) （5） （24-25高二上·吉林通化·阶段练习）现在社会，养宠物已经屡见不鲜了。但是，就这一现象人们都有不同的态度，既有赞成意见，也有反对意见。请写一篇短文谈谈养宠物的好处和弊端。并谈谈你的观点。要点如下： 养宠物的好处：宠物是很好的伙伴，尤其是对独居的人或者老人；有些宠物能看家护院；还能给全家带来欢乐；照顾宠物能培养孩子的责任感。 养宠物的弊端：很脏，有可能传播疾病；如未对宠物进行训练，有些宠物可能会对孩子造成伤害。 注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头已给出，不计入词数。 Nowadays it is common to see people keep a pet all over the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文 Nowadays it is common to see people keep a pet all over the world. There are many advantages of keeping a pet. For one thing, pets are good companions. This is especially important for people who live alone and for the old who do not go out much. Some pets can also help to protect the house from thieves. For another, dogs and cats like to play and can give hours of amusement to children and adults. Taking care of an animal also helps children to develop a sense of responsibility and to learn about the nature. However, keeping a pet, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. It may also give rise to some problems. For example, some pets are dirty and tend to transmit some sort of disease. Worst of all, some dogs may attack and seriously injure small children for the reason that their owners don’t train them properly or actually encourage them to be aggressive. To sum up, there are more advantages than disadvantages to keep a pet, especially for lonely people and children. Meanwhile, it is, however, quite necessary to bear in mind that pets should be well trained in case they attack people. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一篇短文谈谈养宠物的好处和弊端以及自己的观点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 照顾：take care of→look after 例如：for example→for instance 同时：meanwhile→at the same time 总之：to sum up→in a word 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：However, keeping a pet, just like anything else, has its negative side as well. It may also give rise to some problems. 拓展句：However, keeping a pet, just like anything else, has its negative side as well because it may give rise to some problems. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This is especially important for people who live alone and for the old who do not go out much.（运用了who引导定语从句） 【高分句型2】However, keeping a pet, just like anything else, has its negative side as well.（运用了动名词作主语） （6） （23-24高二下·四川绵阳·开学考试）做家务是劳动教育实践的重要组成部分，但孩子做家务该不该给报酬引发了广泛的社会讨论。请你以“Should Kids Be Paid for Doing Housework?”为题写一篇英语短文，阐明你的观点和理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Should Kids Be Paid for Doing Housework? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文 Should Kids Be Paid for Doing Housework? Some people think kids should be paid for doing housework. They believe it can motivate children and teach them the value of money. However, I firmly believe that kids shouldn’t be paid for doing housework. First of all, doing housework is a part of family responsibility. It helps children learn to care for the family and develop a sense of duty. Secondly, family members should support and help each other out of love and a sense of belonging, not for financial rewards. In conclusion, while there are pros and cons to both viewpoints, I think that instilling the right values and a sense of responsibility within the family context is more important than monetary compensation. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Should Kids Be Paid for Doing Housework?”为题写一篇英语短文，阐明自己对此事的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 应该：should→be supposed to 照顾：care for→take care of 首先：first of all→to start with 重要的：important→significant 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：First of all, doing housework is a part of family responsibility. It helps children learn to care for the family and develop a sense of duty. 拓展句：First of all, doing housework is a part of family responsibility, which helps children learn to care for the family and develop a sense of duty. 【点睛】【高分句型1】They believe it can motivate children and teach them the value of money.（运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】In conclusion, while there are pros and cons to both viewpoints, I think that instilling the right values and a sense of responsibility within the family context is more important than monetary compensation.（运用了while引导的状语从句和that引导的宾语从句） 读后续写 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Once upon a time, in a coastal village named Seaford lived a courageous young girl named Amelia. Amelia was known throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature. From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves, feeling the sand between her toes and the cool spray of the ocean mist on her face. She was a girl with a strong will and possessed a heart full of kindness and curiosity. Amelia’s love for the ocean was intense, and she spent most of her spare time exploring the beautiful beaches and sparkling waters that surrounded her house. One sunny morning, while Amelia was walking along the shore and enjoying the gentle sea breeze, she noticed a strange phenomenon（现象） that a flock of restless seagulls abnormally circled above the crashing waves. Their unusual calls echoed through the air. Concerned for their safety and well-being, Amelia followed them, her instincts guiding her toward the unusual scene. As she approached a towering cliff（峭壁）, Amelia gasped in horror. On a narrow ledge（岩架）, high above the violent waves, was a young dolphin trapped in a thick fishing net. Its shiny body shone under the golden rays of the sun, but its freedom was cruelly limited by the trap. It was struggling, but with each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body, leaving painful marks on its skin. Its tail flapped helplessly, each movement a request for help, while its desperate cries for assistance echoed through the air. A sense of urgency filled Amelia, pushing her forward with determination. Realizing that time was tight, Amelia knew she had to act instantly to free this innocent creature from its difficult position before it submitted to exhaustion or the force of the tides. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Paragraph 1: Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village.__________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: As the dolphin was released into the water, it hesitated for a moment._____________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解题导语】 本文以救援海豚为线索展开。Amelia热爱海洋，同时她也十分勇敢和善良。有一天，她在悬崖边上发现有一只小海豚被困在渔网里，她决定把它从困境中解救出来…… 【写作指导】 情节预测 续写第一段 1.What did Amelia do after returning to the village? 2.Did she turn to the villagers for help? 3.What did they do to help the dolphin out? 续写第二段 1.How did the dolphin react after being rescued? 2.How did the villagers feel after rescuing the dolphin? ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) 　　Without hesitation,Amelia rushed back to the village. She gathered the villagers to join her in the rescue. Amelia led the way, carefully moving along the steep cliff edge until she reached the dolphin.【高分句型- As she drew closer, she noticed tears streaming out of the creature's eyes, as if it knew its fate was in their hands. Amelia carefully freed the dolphin from the net.Then Amelia and the villagers guided it down to the waiting boat.Then they made their way back to the shore and treated the injuries of the dolphin. （描写Amelia召集村民，和她一起救援被困海豚的过程) 　　As the dolphin was released into the waters,it hesitated for a moment. Amelia approached the dolphin and gently stroked it. The dolphin touched the girl with the tip of its nose in response and made happy sounds as if to say a final thank you before diving gracefully beneath the surface.The crowd erupted in applause, their hearts filled with joy and gratitude for being witness to such a remarkable rescue. Amelia's courage and compassion were an inspiration to all who heard her story.【高分句型二】（描写海豚对它的恩人Amelia以及村民们表示感激之情) ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （24-25高一下·湖南·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 There was a busy street corner beside a bus station. Pupils changed buses going to or from school there. This small area was anything but appealing: loud cars and buses passed by, and tall gray buildings looked like big stone giants. Peter was one of the kids who had to wait here for nine and a half minutes each day to change buses. The station had a strong gas smell. The land nearby, maybe once a garden, was now full of trash — cans, paper bags, and chicken boxes. Weeds (草) grew wild all around them. There was nowhere nice to walk and nothing to look at. Hanging around like that each day almost drove Peter mad. Most kids wasted their time complaining (抱怨) about all the mess, but Peter felt restless. He knew he couldn’t do anything to change the bus company’s timetable and its bus routes but he could make these waiting minutes more enjoyable for himself and others. He asked his mom for a pair of gloves and some trash bags. That week, he filled his nine minutes each day by picking up the waste. As he piled the waste into bags, “Why trouble yourself? It’ll just get dirty again!” his classmates laughed at him, casually throwing used tissues, candy wrappers and cans around. Silent for a while, Peter continued picking up the waste his classmates dropped, thinking, “It seems like an impossible dream to change this deserted land. Should I give up just as my classmates said?” One afternoon, an elderly man approached Peter. “I used to garden here years ago,” he said, handing Peter some sunflower seeds (种子). “Perhaps you can plant these. You know, sunflowers grow easily in hard environments.” Inspired by the elderly man, Peter saw hope again. The next week, Peter occupied himself weeding the field and soon this piece of land was cleared up. 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Next, he took out the sunflower seeds offered by the elderly man. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ More kids began to help take care of the plants. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Next, he took out the sunflower seeds offered by the elderly man. Peter knelt on the broken ground, loosened the soil, and carefully planted the seeds. His classmates laughed again, “Flowers can’t grow here.” But Peter watered the seeds every day. Days later, small green plants came up from the dry ground. Everyone was surprised and stopped laughing. When a hot wave hit, Peter skipped his lunch to cover the plants with cardboard. One day, a girl who used to litter brought water for the plants. Soon, other kids helped too, watering the young flowers while they waited for buses. More kids began to help take care of the plants. Their laughter mixed with the sound of water cans. The sunflowers grew taller each day. At the end of summer, they were taller than the kids, with big yellow flowers facing the sun, as if waving at the buses and the kids around them. Butterflies flew among the flowers, and kids’ laughter filled the corner. They called the garden “Peter’s Patch”. The gas smell and traffic noise were still there, but the corner changed — it was now full of life, a place which the kids felt proud of, showing that even small changes can make a big difference. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了彼得在公交站等车时，发现周围环境脏乱差，于是决定利用等车的时间清理垃圾。有一天下午，他得到了老人的鼓励和向日葵种子。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“接下来，他拿出了老人给的向日葵种子。”可知，第一段可描写彼得种下向日葵种子，并悉心照料，尽管同学们嘲笑他，但向日葵最终发芽生长，令大家惊讶。 ②由第二段首句内容“更多的孩子开始帮忙照料植物。”可知，第二段可描写在彼得的带动下，更多的孩子加入到照料向日葵的行列中，花园逐渐变得生机勃勃，成为孩子们的骄傲。 2. 续写线索：种下种子——悉心照料——向日葵发芽生长——更多孩子加入——花园变得生机勃勃——成为孩子们的骄傲 3. 词汇激活 行为类： ①播种：plant/sow ②侵袭：hit/strike ③给……命名：call/name 情绪类： ①惊讶的：surprised/astonished ②因……感到骄傲：feel proud of/take pride in 【点睛】【高分句型1】When a hot wave hit, Peter skipped his lunch to cover the plants with cardboard. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】One day, a girl who used to litter brought water for the plants. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$