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Period Ⅳ Writing
Unit 3 Fascinating Parks
——写一篇介绍主题公园的说明文
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写作指导•演练提素养
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通技法——学写作规范
介绍某主题公园的文章属于说明文,其内容一般包括主题公园的特点、功能、地理位置、交通方式、收费情况、开放时间、占地面积、历史背景、特色景点或娱乐项目以及吸引游客的原因等。写作中应采用合理的说明顺序,如时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。此类文章既要简明扼要又要突出特色,以达到读完后让人产生游览欲望的目的。
【温馨提示】
1.在介绍主题公园时,多用第三人称和一般现在时,但描述公园的历史时用一般过去时,描述其未来时可用一般将来时。
2.重点突出公园的主题活动、吸引游客的景点或独一无二的娱乐活动等。
积“黄金”词句,写高分文章
一、话题单词
1.attractive adj. 有吸引力的,引人入胜的
2.delighted/pleased adj. 高兴的
3.sight n. 景象;景观
4.adorable adj. 可爱的;讨人喜爱的
5.wander v. 游荡;闲逛
6.amusement n. 娱乐活动
7.thrill n. 激动;狂喜
8.amuse vt. (使)娱乐
9.unique adj. 独一无二的
10.experience n. 经历;经验
11.treat n. 乐事;乐趣
12.superb adj. 极好的
13.appetite n. 食欲;胃口;强烈欲望
14.entertainment n. 娱乐(活动)
二、话题短语
1.theme park 主题公园
2.roller coaster 过山车
3.a pirate ship 海盗船
4.scary freefall drops 可怕的自由落体(设施)
5.entrance/admission ticket 门票
6.cover an area of 占地……
7.various kinds of/a variety of 各种各样的
8.be wellknown for 因……而出名
9.be familiar with 对……熟悉
10.make your dream come true 使你的梦想成真
11.appeal to 有吸引力
12.wander around 闲逛
13.put on performances 演出/表演节目
14.in addition to 除……之外
15.upside down 颠倒;倒转;翻转
三、话题句式
(一)介绍功能或特点
1.Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you!
无论你喜欢哪一个,无论你喜欢什么,总会有一个奇妙无比的主题公园让你流连忘返!
2.In my view, it is a good place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看来,这是一个放松和娱乐的好地方。
3.The main park contains more than 200 theme projects, amusement projects, and landscape projects.
主公园包括了200多个主题项目、娱乐项目和景观项目。
4.Shanghai Disneyland is an ideal place for you. It brings you into a magical world where you can enjoy a wonderful experience.
上海迪士尼乐园是你的理想去处。它带你进入一个奇幻的世界,在那里你可以享有一个美妙的经历。
5.As you wander around the fantasy amusement park, you may see Snow White or Mickey Mouse in a parade or even on the street.
当你在游乐园闲逛时,你可能会在游行队伍中,甚至在大街上看到白雪公主或米老鼠。
6.It is unique because it shows and celebrates the traditional culture of this minority.
它是独特的,因为它展示和庆祝这个少数民族的传统文化。
7.In addition, music groups put on performances all year round, indoors and outdoors.
此外,乐队全年都在室内和室外演出。
(二)介绍地理位置、占地面积、历史背景
1.The theme park is located/situated in the south of our city near the Green Lake.
该主题公园坐落在我市南边的绿湖附近。
2.The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province, which is wellknown for its beautiful lakes.
该主题公园位于四川省北部,以其美丽的湖泊而闻名。
3.It is a worldfamous theme park covering an area of 870,000 square metres.
它是一个世界著名的主题公园,占地87万平方米。
4.Opened in 1956, it has enjoyed/boasts a history of more than 60 years.
它于1956年开放,至今已有60多年的历史。
(三)介绍交通方式、收费情况
1.You can reach the theme park by taking the subway.
你可以乘地铁到主题公园。
2.If you drive, the park is within easy reach of the freeway.
如果你开车的话,公园离高速公路很近。
3.You can buy the tickets at the park’s entrance, and tickets are also available online.
你可以在公园入口处买票,也可以在网上买到票。
4.Classes or other large groups can get the group admission rate.
班级或其他大型团体可获得团体入场价。
5.As for the ticket fare, visitors can enjoy a discount of 30 percent at weekends.
至于票价,游客在周末可以享受七折优惠。
6.They charge no additional fees except the entrance ticket.
除了门票外,他们不收其他费用。
【典题示例】
假如你刚从法国旅游回来,应学校网站之邀,请写一篇英语短文介绍你参观过的法国著名的主题公园——Futuroscope(观测未来),发表在学校网站上。 要点如下:
1.概况
位置:法国普瓦捷(Poitiers)
开放时间:1987年
2.特色
(1)以科技为基础,使用了最先进的技术;
(2)参观者可以接触他们从来没有经历过的世界的角落,比如潜入海底、飞跃丛林或者参观太阳系的边缘地带;
(3)大量动手实践学习的机会。
3.交通与门票
(1)门口买票或网上购票,有团体票;
(2)如果开车,主题公园就在高速口附近。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】
Ⅰ.布局谋篇
体裁 说明文 时态 以一般现在时为主
主题 主题公园介绍 人称 以第三人称为主
结构 首段:主题公园的名称和地理位置
中段:游乐设施、建筑、表演等情况
尾段:鼓励读者前来体验
Ⅱ.遣词造句
(一)词汇翻译
1.位于 __________________________
2.以科技为基础的主题公园 _____________________________________
_________
3.先进的技术 _______________________
4.动手学习的机会 ___________________________________
be located/situated in
a science- and technology-based theme
park
advanced technology
hands-on learning opportunities
5.可以网上购票 ________________________________
6. 靠近,接近 ________________________
7. 积极参与______________________
8. 对……惊奇/惊叹 _____________
tickets are available online
within easy reach of
involve oneself in
marvel at
(二)巧用单元句式、语法
1.完成句子
(1)Futuroscope于1987年开放,是世界上最大的科幻主题公园之一。
__________ in 1987, Futuroscope is one of the largest science fiction theme parks in the world.
(2)这个以科技为基础的主题公园采用了最先进的技术。
This science-and technologybased theme park uses the most _______________________.
Opened
advanced technology
(3)参观者可以接触他们从来没有经历过的世界的角落。
Visitors can ________________ parts of the world they have never experienced.
(4)参观者可以潜入海底、飞跃丛林或者参观太阳系的边缘地带。
Visitors can ________ into the bottom of the ocean, _______ through the jungle or _________ the edges of the solar system.
get close to
dive
fly
visit
(5)它提供了大量的动手学习的机会。
It offers a great many ___________________________________.
(6)该主题公园让世界以一种全新的方式展现在游人面前。
The theme park makes the world ________________ in a completely new way for visitors.
(7) 班级或其他大型团体可以获得团体票。
Classes or other large groups can get the ________________________.
hands-on learning opportunities
come to life
group admission rate
2.句式升级
(1)用非谓语动词合并上题中的句子(3)和句子(4)。
Visitors can get close to parts of the world they have never experienced, __________ into the bottom of the ocean, __________ through the jungle or ____________ the edges of the solar system.
(2)用which引导的定语从句合并上题中的句子(5)和句子(6)。
The theme park, _________ offers a great many handson learning opportunities, _________ the world come to life in a completely new way for visitors.
diving
flying
visiting
which
makes
【连句成篇】
Located in the city of Poitiers in France, and opened in 1987, Futuroscope is one of the largest science fiction theme parks in the world.
This science- and technology-based theme park uses the most advanced technology. Visitors can get close to parts of the world they have never experienced, diving into the bottom of the ocean, flying through the jungle or visiting the edges of the solar system. In addition, the theme park,which offers a great many handson learning opportunities, makes the
world come to life in a completely new way for visitors. Tickets are available both at the park’s entrance or online. Classes or other large groups can get the group admission rate. If you drive, Futuroscope is within easy reach of the freeway.
Come to Futuroscope to involve yourself in thrills, marvel at the breathtaking imagery and experience the incredible adventures!
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