Module 5 模块写作指导九年级下册-【众相原创】2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语分层练同步课件(外研版 广西专版)

2025秋广西 英 语 1 九年级下册 Module 5 Look after yourself 模块写作指导 2 话题概述 本模块围绕“如何保持身体健康”这一话题展开。该话题常见 写作角度有：①如何保持健康；②对不健康的生活方式或习惯提 出合理的建议；③为了让学生们保持健康，学校开展的活动。写 作时根据实际情况可使用一般现在时或一般将来时等时态。人称 用第一人称或第二人称。 分层讲练册 典例探究 眼睛是我们很重要的器官，对我们的生活很有用，但是日常 生活中，不少同学忽视保护眼睛，导致近视。你校英文报刊 Health栏目正以“My suggestions on protecting our eyesight”为题 进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.保护视力的重要性； 2.保护视力的方法（定期去医院检查眼睛、有充足的睡 眠……）； 3.你的期望。 分层讲练册 My suggestions on protecting our eyesight As we all know, eyes are very important.________________ 分层讲练册 四步法写作 ◆ 第一步：思路剖析 （一）仔细审题 ①文体：介绍保护眼睛的方法，本文是一篇________。 ②人称：介绍保护眼睛的方法，以__________为主。 ③时态：介绍保护眼睛的方法，以____________为主。 说明文 第一人称 一般现在时 分层讲练册 （二）篇章布局 Beginning：引入主题——说明保护视力的重要性。 Body：具体介绍保护眼睛的方法：第一，每年去医院检查眼睛； 其次，有充足的睡眠；最后，做眼保健操放松眼睛。 Ending：表达自己的看法及期待。 分层讲练册 ◆ 第二步：推敲词汇 1._________________ 关注…… pay attention to… 2._________________ 预防…… prevent… from… 3.____________ 更重要的是 what's more 4.________________ 有充足的睡眠 get enough sleep 5.________________好好休息 have a good rest 6.________________ 做眼保健操 do eye exercises 7.______________ 放松我们的眼睛 relax our eyes 8.___________________________ 遵循上述建议 follow the suggestions above 分层讲练册 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 8 ◆ 第三步：连词成句 1.每年去医院检查眼睛是一个好主意。（It's a good idea to do sth.句型） ________________________________________________________ ___________ It is a good idea to go to the hospital and check our eyes every year. 2.我们应该确保眼睛好好休息。（make sure that…） _________________________________________________ We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. 3.我们必须每天做眼保健操来放松双眼。（to do不定式表目的） __________________________________________________ We must do eye exercises every day to relax our eyes. 分层讲练册 1 2 3 9 ◆ 第四步：连句成篇 初阶范文 高阶范文 My suggestions on protecting our eyesight As we all know, eyes are very important.. .So we should pay attention to our eyesight, and here are some suggestions to protect our My suggestions on protecting our eyesight As we all know, eyes are very important.. .①So it is necessary for us to pay attention to our eyesight, and here are some suggestions to protect our 分层讲练册 10 初阶范文 高阶范文 eyesight. First, go to the hospital and check our eyes every year. It can prevent our eyesight from being worse and we can know our eyes better. What's more, get eyesight. ②First, it is a good idea to go to the hospital and check our eyes every year. ③On the one hand, it can prevent our eyesight from being worse. On the other hand, we can know our eyes better. What's more, get enough 续表 分层讲练册 11 初阶范文 高阶范文 enough sleep. We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. Last but not least, we must do eye exercises every day to relax our eyes. sleep. We should make sure that our eyes have a good rest. Last but not least, we must do eye exercises every day to relax our eyes. 续表 分层讲练册 12 初阶范文 高阶范文 If we follow the suggestions above to protect our eyes, I believe we can have good eyesight. ④If we follow the suggestions above and do what we can to protect our eyes, I believe we can have good eyesight. 续表 分层讲练册 13 初阶范文 高阶范文 句式升格：①句中使用it's +adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型；②句 中使用It's a good idea to do sth.句型；③句中使用on the one hand… , on the other hand…升格句子；④句中用what 引导宾 语从句。 续表 分层讲练册 实战演练 为落实《“健康中国2030”规划纲要》，教育部印发了《生命 安全与健康教育进中小学课程教材指南》的通知。通知中提出了 坚持“生命至上，健康第一”的理念。现在学校英文网站以 “How to keep healthy”为题开展征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1.怎样保持健康（多做运动、健康的饮食习惯、充足的睡 眠……）； 2.你的感受或看法。 分层讲练册 15 注意： 1.词数为80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：optimistic（adj. 乐观的）, positive（adj. 积极的） 分层讲练册 16 How to keep healthy It's important to keep healthy. _________________________ ________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ But what should we do to keep healthy? Here are my suggestions. First, doing exercise is good for both physical and mental health. We can do more exercise, such as running and playing basketball. Second, we should avoid eating junk food. We need eat more fresh vegetables and fruits. Third, we are supposed to have enough sleep and learn to have a rest. Don't stay up because it's bad for our health. Finally, we'd better be optimistic 分层讲练册 17 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ and positive. We should get on well with other people and keep happy. If we try to follow these suggestions, we'll keep ourselves healthy. 分层讲练册 19 $$