Unit7作文训练-2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级下册

Unit 7 A Day to Remember --如何写与学校旅行相关的文章 写作话题分析 本单元的话题是“难忘的一天”,要求学生能用一般过去时介绍在学校旅行期间的所见、所闻、所学并表达自己的感受,同时能对活动进行简单点评。与此相关的写作通常有:①写一篇关于某次学校旅行的日记;②向好友介绍某次学校旅行;③在关于郊游、研学、劳动实践等的征文活动中投稿。 在具体介绍某一次学校旅行时,通常包含以下要点:①学校旅行的时间、目的地;②一天的具体活动;③参加完这些活动的感悟。 写作训练 假如你是李华,在上周五参加了学校组织的郊游活动。请你以“A school trip”为主题,写一则英文日记,内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。 要求: (1)80 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数); (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)日记中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Friday,13 April It was sunny today. We went on a school trip. 思路导引We visited ... and it was great fun. 引出话题 段 落 布 局 1. met at. .. ; went to...by bus 2.arrived there; showed us around. . . ; learnt a lot about. .. ; enjoyed ourselves; took lots of photos 描述具体活动 It was really a day to remember. 表达感受 词句积累 天气 sunny 晴朗的 windy 有风的 cloudy 多云的 rainy 有雨的 活动 have a picnic 去野餐 play games 玩游戏 take photos 拍照 learn about了解 pick apples 摘苹果 explore the farm探索农场 feed animals 喂动物 enjoy the peace of nature享受大自然的宁静 感受 interested 感兴趣的 excited 兴奋的 relaxed 放松的 amazing令人惊叹的 terrible 糟糕的 tiring 令人疲惫的boring无聊的 unforgettable 难忘的 meaningful 有意义的 have a good time/enjoy oneself玩得开心 开头句 1.今天是一个晴朗的日子。 It was a sunny day. 2.我们去……进行了一次学校旅行。 We went on/had a school trip to... 中间句 1.我所有的同学和老师都参加了这次旅行。 All my classmates and teachers took part in this trip. 2.我们早上8点在学校门口集合。 We met at the school gate at 8:00a.m. 3.我们乘公共汽车去了农场。 We went to the farm by bus. 4.农场很漂亮,也非常大。 The farm was very beautiful and really large. 5.在农场,我们喂了鸡、鸭和羊等动物。 On the farm, we fed animals like chickens, ducks and sheep. 6.我们还帮忙给植物浇水和摘苹果。 We also helped water the plants and pick apples. 7.我们分享了食物,玩得很开心。 We shared our food and had a good time. 8.中午,我们在树下进行了野餐。 At noon, we had a picnic under the tree. 9.我们玩了捉迷藏,非常有趣。 We played hide and seek and it was so much fun. 10.之后,我们拍了很多照片。 After that, we took lots of photos. 结尾句 1.我们从这次旅行中学到了很多关于务农的知识。 We learnt a lot about farming from this trip. 2.这对我们来说是一个很好的接近大自然的机会。 It was a great chance for us to get close to nature. 3.今天我参加了一次美好的学校旅行。 I had a wonderful school trip today. 4.多么令人激动的一天啊! What an exciting day it was! 5.我和朋友们玩得非常开心。 I had so much fun playing with my friends. 6.旅行是知识的源泉。 Travel is a great source of knowledge. 谚：读万卷书,不如行万里路。 It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books. 佳作展示 Friday, 13 April It was sunny today. All of our classmates went on a school trip.We visited the Green Farm and it was great fun. We met at the school gate at7:00 a.m., and then we went to the farm by bus. When we arrived there, the farm workers gave us a warm welcome.Then one of the workers showed us around the farm. ④He also taught us how to pick apples. We learned a lot about farming. At noon, we had a picnic. We enjoyed ourselves in the sun, singing, dancing and flying kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We also took lots of photos. All in all, it was really a day to remember. 写作迁移训练 Writing 1 假定你是李华，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动，你的外国笔友Annie对这次活动很感兴趣，请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封回信，分享活动过程和个人感受。 A School Trip Date：Sunday, June 23rd Place：Happy Farm Activities： ·plant seeds（种子） ·make dumplings ·go to the stable（马厩）to feed the horses ·... Feelings：... 注意事项： （1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； （2）100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Annie, I would love to share the interesting experience with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【写作提示】 1.主题：学校社会实践活动 2.人称：以第一人称为主 3.时态：一般过去时 4.要点：实践活动的时间、地点、活动内容及个人感受 5.写作思路：开篇引出话题，主体部分按照时间顺序详细介绍实践活动的内容和感受，结尾总结全文并表达感悟。 【范文赏读】 Dear Annie, I would love to share the interesting experience with you. Our class went on a school trip to Happy Farm on Sunday, June 23rd. In the morning, we learnt how to plant seeds. It was a new experience for me. Then we made dumplings for lunch. They tasted delicious. In the afternoon, not only did we pick some fruits, but also we went to the stable and fed the horses. It was so exciting to be close to these lovely animals. After that, we took a walk around the farm and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. I learnt a lot from this trip. I realized the importance of getting close to nature. It was truly a great day. Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 “近水知鱼性,近山识鸟音。”为了让学生们体验自然的乐趣,你们班组织了一次爬山旅行。请以“An Unforgettable Day”为题,根据以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文介绍这次活动。 提示:1.How did you get there? 2. What did you see during the trip? 3.How did you feel? 要求:1.文章应包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.词数100左右。 【写作提示】 主题:学校旅行 体裁:记叙文 人称:以第一人称为主 时态:一般过去时 要点:交通方式、旅行见闻、感受 【范文赏读】 An Unforgettable Day Last Sunday our class went on a mountain climbing trip. We met at the school gate at seven o'clock in the morning. After about an hour's bus ride, we arrived at the foot of the mountain. Then we began to climb. At first, some students felt it was a little boring. But then we found some strange stones along the way. We had so much fun together. Though it took us a long time to reach the top, none of us felt tired. We were all amazed at the beautiful scenery. In the afternoon, we had a rest and went back to school. Climbing is a great way to get close to nature. I can't wait to do it again. 从范文学布局 第一段点明活动,引出下文; 第二段介绍爬山旅行的具体过程和感受; 第三段总结全文。 从范文学好词 an hour's bus ride一个小时的公交车程begin to dosth.开始做某事 along the way沿途中 be amazed at对……感到惊奇 get close to nature亲近大自然can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待地想做某事 从范文学佳句 原句:Though it took us a long time to reach the top, none of us felt tired. ( though引导让步状语从句;it takes/took sb. some time to do sth.做某事花费某人多长时间) 仿写:尽管完成这个项目花了她两周的时间,但结果真的很不错。 Though it took her two weeks to finish this project, the result was really good. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$