Unit4作文训练2024-2025学年人教版七年级下册英语

Unit 4 Eat Well--如何写与健康饮食相关的文章 写作话题分析 本单元的主题是“健康饮食”,主要介绍了三餐吃的食物以及饮食习惯,与此相关的写作主要涉及以下几个方面:①介绍某人的饮食习惯;②针对某人的饮食习惯做出评价,并就如何健康饮食给出建议;③制订健康饮食菜谱并说明原因。 写作训练 根据下面要点提示中列举的部分中学生的饮食现状,以“How to eat healthily”为题,写一篇不少于100词的短文,要求 条理清晰,语句通顺。 要点提示:1.饮食不均衡; 2.经常吃垃圾食品; 3.经常喝软饮料。 思路导引Many middle school students have some bad eating habits. 开头:指出饮食现状 及问题 段落布局 First, they should have a balanced diet and avoid... Second, they should drink more water. Third, they should have three meals a day and... 中间:提出健康饮食建议 In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let's keep a healthy diet! 结尾:表达希望 词句积累 食物/饮品 sugar 糖 milk 牛奶 fruit and vegetables 水果和蔬菜 egg鸡蛋 cola 可乐 junk food 垃圾食品 soft drink 软饮料 ice cream 冰激凌 hamburger 汉堡包 healthy/unhealthy健康的/不健康的 stay healthy 保持健康 影响 be bad for 对……有害 put on weight增重/发胖 be good for 对……有好处 be important for对……很重要cause tooth problems造成牙齿问题 feel sleepy 感到困倦 建议 keep/have a balanced diet均衡饮食 improve eating habits改善饮食习惯 pay attention to 注意 drink more water多喝水 avoid ( eating) fast food避免吃快餐 drink milk instead of cola喝牛奶代替喝可乐 cook your own meals 自己做饭 开头句 1.许多中学生在饮食方面存在问题。 Many middle school students have problems with their diet. .2.一些学生喜欢吃垃圾食品，另一些学生经常喝饮料，比如可乐、果汁。 Some like eating junk food. Others drink soft drinks like cola and juice too often. 3.有时，不吃早饭去上学 Sometimes they go to school without having breakfast. 4.一些学生不知道均衡饮食的重要性。 Some students don't know the importance of a balanced diet. 中间句 1.为了健康饮食,他们应该均衡饮食，避免吃垃圾食品 To eat healthily, they should have a balanced diet and avoid junk food. 2.吃各种各样的水果和蔬菜对他们的健康有好处。 It's good to eat all kinds of fruit and vegetables. 3.喝太多软饮料会导致牙齿 Drinking too many soft drinks can cause tooth problems. 4.所以，他们应该喝更多的水 It's good to eat all kinds of fruit and vegetables. 5.喝太多的饮料会导致牙齿问题。 Drinking too many soft drinks can cause tooth problems, 6.学生们应该每天按时吃三餐。 students should have three meals a day and eat on time. 5. 如果他们上学前不吃早餐，会发现很容易会感到饥饿、困倦 If they don't eat breakfast before going to school, they will find it easy to feel hungry and sleepy. 结尾句 1.希望所有中学生都能有健康的饮食。 Hope all middle school students can have a healthy diet. 2.对他们来说,是时候改变饮食习惯了。 It's time for them to change their eating habits. 3.健康的饮食对健康和身体和思想很重要。 healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. 4.让我们保持健康饮食! Let's keep a healthy diet! 佳作展示 How to eat healthily Nowadays, many middle school students have some bad eating habits. Some like eating junk food. Others drink soft drinks like cola and juice too often. Sometimes they go to school without having breakfast.That's bad for their health. To eat healthily, first, they should have a balanced diet and avoid junk food. It's good to eat all kinds of fruit and vegetables. Second, drinking too many soft drinks can cause tooth problems, Third, students should have three meals a day and eat on time.If they don't eat breakfast before going to school, they will find it easy to feel hungry and sleepy. In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let's keep a healthy diet! 写作迁移训练 Writing 1 俗话说“民以食为天”，可见饮食对我们的重要性。请你根据以下提示内容，以“Healthy Eating”为题写一篇英语短文。 1．健康饮食的重要性和益处； 2．你身边的同学或朋友存在的不健康的饮食习惯； 3．你的建议。 要求： 1．短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 3．不少于90词。 【写作提示】 1. 主题：健康饮食 2. 人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主 3. 时态：一般现在时 4. 要点：健康饮食的重要性和益处、不健康的饮食习惯、建议 5. 写作思路：开篇引出话题，点明健康饮食的重要性；接着介绍身边的同学或朋友存在的不健康的饮食习惯；最后提出健康饮食的相关建议。 【范文赏读】 Healthy Eating Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help build up our bodies. Some of my friends have some bad eating habits. They like eating junk food and drink too many soft drinks. And they often go to school without breakfast. They’re bad for them. I think everyone should have healthy eating habits. First, it’s important to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us with different nutrients we need. Second, don’t have too much junk food or too many soft drinks. Third, we should eat three meals a day on time. In these ways, we’ll be strong and healthy, and focus on our studies better. Writing 2 新一期的校园杂志正在面向广大学生进行征稿。请你认真阅读征稿启事,以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇英语短文。 CALL FOR ARTICLES Hello, everyone! The new issue of our school magazine will come out soon. We need your articles. Our topic is about health. You can start with the title “How to Keep Healthy". These questions may help you; Do you eat well? Do you usually do exercise? Do you sleep well? /Do you often stay up late? If you are happy to share your article with us, please e-mail us at callforarticles@ gmail. com by this Friday. Look forward to hearing from you. 要求;1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥; 2.词数不少于90。 【写作提示】 主题:保持健康 体裁:说明文 人称:以第二人称为主 时态:一般现在时 要点:饮食、运动、睡眠 How to Keep Healthy It's important for us students to keep healthy. Here are some good ways. First, you should have good eating habits. Breakfast is very important, so make sure that you have breakfast every morning, Don't eat too much fast food and have enough fruit and vegetables. Second, you should get enough sleep every day. Don't stay up late. Third, regular exercise is good for you. Doing exercise makes you strong and healthy. Finally, learn to relax. You can listen to music when you are tired. A healthy body can help us study better and live a happy life. If you want to keep healthy, please follow these ways. 从范文学布局 第一段引出话题; 第二段具体从饮食、睡眠、运动等方面给出保持健康的建议; 第三段总结全文,表达期望。 从范文学好词 keep healthy保持健康 make sure +that 从句确保…… get enough sleep有充足的睡眠 make sb./sth.+adj.使某人/某物… learn to do sth.学会做某事 从范文学佳句 原句:Don't eat too much fast food and have enough fruit and vegetables.(祈使句) 仿写:不要花太多时间在电视机前,让你的眼睛休息一下。 Don't spend too much time in front of the TV and give your eyes a rest. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$