Unit 2作文讲义2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级下册

Unit 2 No rules, No order. --如何写与规章制度相关的文章 写作话题分析 本单元的主题是“规章制度”,我们常接触到的有家规(family rules)、校规(school rules)、班规( class rules)和交规( traffic rules)等。与此相关的写作通常有:①写有关规章制度的求助信;②介绍家规/校规/班规等;③对别人提出的有关规章制度的问题给出建议。 写有关规章制度的求助信时,要注意以下几点:①注意书信格式和称呼得体;②具体写作时，先点明写信目的,然后详细描述让你感到烦恼的规章制度,最后表明希望得到回复;③注意情态动词can、have to 与 must 的用法。 写作训练 俗话说,“国有国法,家有家规”。为了使我们健康成长,父母总会为我们制订这样或那样的规矩。假如你是李平,因为父母为你制订了太多家规而感到烦恼,所以你打算向百事通博士(Dr Know)写信求助。请结合下面表格的提示,向他写一封求助信。 生活 早上六点必须起床锻炼 学习 放学回家之后必须先完成家庭作业 饮食 不能吃垃圾食品 要求:1.信中包含表格里的全部内容,可适当发挥; 2.90词左右,文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。写信目的:Can you help me? 个人信息:I am Li Ping, an unhappy middle school student 点明主题:There are so many rules in my family. school student. 思路导引 开头:介绍个人信息,点明写信目的及主题 段落布局 生活:must get up at 6 for exercise every morning 学习:have to finish my homework first after school 饮食:can't eat junk food 中间:详细介绍家规 感受:These rules make me very tired and unhappy. 期待:Hope to hear from you soon. 结尾:表达感受并期待回复 词句积累 活动 get up early 早起 do some sports/exercise做一些运动 finish the homework完成家庭作业 play computer games玩电脑游戏 watch TV看电视 listen to music听音乐 eat junk food 吃垃圾食品 eat healthy food 吃健康的食物 要求 have to不得不 must必须 mustn't 不准,禁止 can能,可以 can't 不能,不可以 ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事 allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 before/after dinner晚餐前/后 感受 unhappy 不开心 tired疲倦的 strict严格的 relaxed 放松的 awful 糟糕的 hopeless 无望的 bored 厌烦的 stressed 焦虑的 angry 生气的 开头句 1. 嗨,你好!我需要您的帮助。 Hi there! I need your help. 2.我有一个问题。您能帮帮我吗? I'm having a problem. Can you help me? 3.我写信给您是因为我遇到了麻烦。 I'm writing to you because I'm in trouble. 4.我感到不开心,需要您的建议。 I feel unhappy and I need your advice. 中间句 1.我的父母制订了太多的规矩。 My parents make too many rules. 2.我必须早起锻炼。 I have to get up early and do exercise. 3.我父母认为做运动对我的健康有益。 My parents believe that doing exercise is good for my health. 4.放学后我必须先完成作业。这很无聊。 I must finish my homework first after school. It's so boring. 5.我不能吃垃圾食品。他们认为我应该多吃蔬菜和水果。 I can't eat junk food. They think I should eat more vegetables and fruit. 结尾句 1.这些规矩让我很不开心。我不知道该怎么办。 These rules make me unhappy. I don't know what to do. 2.我觉得我没有自由。我该怎么办? I feel like I have no freedom. What should I do? 3.我期待您的回复。 I'm looking forward to your reply. 4.我希望您能给我一些好主意。 I hope you can give me some good ideas. 佳作展示 Dear Dr Know, Can you help me? I am Li Ping,an unhappy middle school student.There are so many rules in my family and I have to follow them every day. First, I must get up at 6 for exercise every morning because my parents think it's good for my health. Second, I have to finish my homework first after school before I can watch TV. Third, I can't eat junk food.My parents always ask me to eat lots of vegetables and fruit.These rules make me very tired and unhappy. What can I do? Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Ping 写作迁移训练 Writing 1 假如你是百事通博士，请你针对李平的困惑给他写一封回信，从生活、学习和饮食三个方面对家规进行合理分析，并给他提一些建议。 要求：1.语言流畅，逻辑通顺，书写工整； 2.90词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Li Ping, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Dr Know 【写作提示】 1.主题：家规 2.人称：以第二人称为主 3.时态：一般现在时 4.要点：从生活、学习、饮食三个方面分析家规的合理性，给出建议 5.写作思路：开篇表示理解和安慰，接着从生活、学习、饮食三方面分析家规的合理性，最后总结观点并给出建议。 【范文赏读】 Dear Li Ping, There are many rules in our lives. It’s common to have these feelings. But family rules can guide you and help you grow. Getting up early to exercise is a great way to start the day and stay fit. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. It is important to finish your homework first. Then you’ll have more time to relax. Junk food is bad for your health. You’d better not eat it. Remember：No rules ,no order! Try to have an open conversation with your parents and tell them how you feel so that they can understand you better. Best wishes, Dr Know Writing 2 假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike因为家规和父母产生了矛盾,心情很沮丧,给你写了一封求助信。请你根据求助信的内容给他写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My parents set too many rules for me. They always tell me, “Don’t spend so much time playing computer games. You should do something meaningful. Don't stay up late. Do some housework." I'm annoyed(烦恼的).What should I do? Yours, Mike 要求:词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 【写作提示】 主题:针对家规给出建议 体裁:电子邮件 人称:第二、三人称 时态:一般现在时 要点:对家规的看法、和父母沟通的方法等 Dear Mike, Most of the students will have this kind of problem. As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along well with my parents. Here is some advice for you. Your parents set these rules to help you become a better person. Playing less computer games helps you focus on studies and other meaningful things. If you want to keep fit, you shouldn't stay up late. Doing housework can not only help develop your responsibility but also teach you some important life skills. I suggest that you have anopen conversation with your parents.Share your feelings and try to put yourself in their shoes. I hope my suggestions can help you a lot. Yours. Li Hua 从范文学布局 第一段表示安慰,并引出下文; 第二段阐明家规的意义,针对Mike的苦恼一一进行回复并给出沟通建议; 第三段表示祝福。 从范文学好词 the same. .. as...与……一样的…… get along well with...与……和睦相处 focus on 集中注意力于…… keep fit 保持健康 develop one's responsibility 培养某人的责任感 not only. .. but also. ..不仅……而且…… have an open conversation with sb.与某人坦诚地交谈 put oneself in one's shoes设身处地 从范文学佳句 原句:Doing housework can not only help develop your responsibility but also teach you some important life skills. (动词-ing短语作主语;not only...but also. ..连接两个并列成分) 仿写:每天做运动不仅可以帮助我们保持健康,还可以帮助我们放松。 Doing exercise every day can not only help us keep healthy but also help us relax. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$