Unit 1作文讲义2024-2025学年人教版英语七年级下册

Unit1Animal Friends --如何写有关动物的文章 写作话题分析 本单元的主题是“动物朋友”,主要围绕动物园里的动物、保护动物以及动物与人类的关系等展开。与此相关的写作主要涉及:①介绍自己的宠物或最喜欢的动物;②保护野生动物。 写这类文章时,通常会涉及介绍动物,一般从名字、外貌特征、习性等方面进行介绍,接着写喜欢它的原因;如果写濒危动物,还需要写它的生存现状及保护措施,最后可进行主题升华,呼吁大家关爱动物、保护动物。 写作训练 假如你是Bob,你校正在进行“动物周”主题活动,请你根据下图提示，以“My favourite animal-pandas”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，向同学们介绍大熊猫,让更多的人了解大熊猫,爱护大熊猫,并保护大熊猫。 习性:爱吃竹子..... 外貌:黑白相间… 现状:数量有所增加... 保护措施:建立自然保护区…… 要求:1.包含所给提示信息,并适当发挥; 2.100 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:自然保护区nature reserve 思路引导Today I want to talk about my favourite animal - pandas. 开头:引出话题 段落布局 ①外貌特征:They are fat and hairy. They are black and white with small ears. ②生活习性:They like eating bamboo and climbing trees. They sleep a lot. ③生存现状:People cut down the forests. They are losing their homes. They have few babies, maybe only one every two years. Thanks to the Chinese government, the number of pandas grows. ④保护措施:Build nature reserves. Stop cutting down trees. Tell children to care for pandas. 中间:详细介绍大熊猫 结尾:呼吁保护大熊猫 Pandas are an important part of nature. We need to save them. 词句积累 大熊猫外貌 short tail 短尾巴 fat and hairy 胖胖的,毛茸茸的 small ears 小耳朵 look like 看起来像 cute 可爱的 black and white黑白相间的 大熊猫习性 friendly 友好的 eat bamboo 吃竹子 lazy 懒惰的 like sleeping 喜欢睡觉 climb trees 爬树 大熊猫处境 the number of …..的数量 cut down 砍伐 lose their homes失去它们的家园 have few babies 幼崽少 grow 增长 保护大熊猫的措施 try our best to do sth.尽我们最大的努力做某事save forests保护森林 stop doing sth.停止做某事 build nature reserves建立自然保护区 care for关爱 tell sb. to do sth.告诉某人做某事 开头句 1.今天我想谈论一下我最喜爱的动物-大熊猫。 Today I want to talk about my favourite animal-pandas. 2.今天我要作一个关于大熊猫的报告,它们是我最喜爱的动物。 Today I will give a report about pandas. They are my favourite animals. 中间句 1.与动物的外貌、习性相关 1.它们胖胖的、毛茸茸的。 They are fat and hairy. 2.它们是黑白相间的。 They are black and white. 3.它们长着小小的耳朵和一条短尾巴。 They have small ears and a short tail. 4.它们看起来像熊。 They look like bears. 5.它们很可爱但是很懒。 They are cute but lazy. 6.它们喜欢爬树和睡觉。 They like climbing trees and sleeping. 7.它们吃竹叶。 They eat bamboo leaves. 2.目前的生存状况 8.它们中的一些生活在动物园里,另一些在野外。 Some of them live in the zoo and others in the wild. 9.一些人砍伐森林,它们失去了家园。 Some people cut down the forests and they are losing their homes. 10.大熊猫的数量很少,它们幼崽少,它们需要帮助。 The number of pandas is small. They have few babies. They need help.v 3.保护大熊猫的措施 11.我们应该尽我们最大的努力保护大熊猫。 We should try our best to save pandas. 12.我们可以建立自然公园/保护区。 We can set up nature parks/reserves. 13.我们应该停止砍伐树木。 We should stop cutting down trees. 14.我们可以告诉人们更多关于大熊猫的事情,并让他们关爱大熊猫。 We can tell people more things about pandas and ask them to care for pandas. 结尾句 1.大熊猫是中国的一个象征,我们需要保护它们。 Pandas are a symbol of China. We need to save them. 2.大熊猫对大自然很重要。为了保护自然,我们需要保护大熊猫。 Pandas are important to nature. To save nature, we need to save pandas. 佳作展示 My favourite animal -pandas Hello, everyone. I'm Bob, a student from Shanghai. Today I want to talk about my favourite animal -pandas. I love pandas because they are very cute. They are black and white with small ears and a short tail. They like eating bamboo and climbing trees. They sleep a lot every day. But some people cut down the forests, so they are losing their homes. Besides, they have few babies, maybe only one every two years.Luckily , the number of them grows thanks to the efforts of the Chinese government. To save them, we need to build nature reserves and stop cutting down trees. What's more, we can tell people more things about pandas and ask them to care for pandas. Pandas are an important part of nature, so let's save them together. Thanks for your listening. 写作迁移 Writing1 假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom得知你最近养了只兔子当宠物, 想多了解它的相关信息。请根据以下表格，写一篇90词左右的回信。 Name Jimmy Age 2 years old Looks long ears, red eyes, a short tail Food vegetables, fruit Activities run after me, play on the grass 注意事项： 1. 短文须包含表格中所有内容，可以适当发挥。 2. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 Dear Tom, How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please tell me about your pet in the next email. Yours, Li Hua 【写作提示】 1.主题：介绍宠物 2.人称：以第三人称为主 3.时态：一般现在时 4.要点：兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、食物、活动、你对它的感情等 5.写作思路：开篇引出介绍的对象（已给出）；接着详细介绍兔子的名字、年龄、外貌、食物及喜爱的活动等，并表达自己对它的感情；结尾表达期待对方回信（已给出）。 【范文赏读】 Dear Tom, How are you these days? Now let me tell you something about my pet. It’s a rabbit. His name is Jimmy and he is 2 years old. He has long ears, red eyes and a short tail. He looks cute and lovely. He’s very quiet and seldom makes any sound. Jimmy eats fruit and vegetables every day, and his favourite food is carrots. When I come home from school, he always runs after me. I often take him out for a walk in my free time. He enjoys playing on the grass. We have so much fun together. I think he is the best pet in the world. Please tell me about your pet in the next email. Yours, Li Hua Writing 2 上周日,你和Sandy去了野生动物园,了解到很多野生动物的生存现状,你想在School Newsletter上发文呼吁同学们保护野生动物。请你就下面表格中的提示内容写一篇90词左右的英语短文。开头已给出,不计入总词数。 内容提示: 现状 无处栖息,食物缺乏 原因 人类不断砍伐森林和侵占土地,野生动物的生存空间越来越 应对措施 立法并多建自然保护区 建议 作为学生，…… 参考词汇:take up land 侵占土地,make laws制定法律,nature reserves 自然保护区 【写作提示】 1. 主题:保护野生动物 2.体裁:说明文 3.人称:第一、三人称 4.时态:以一般现在时为主要点:野生动物的生存现状及原因、应对措施、建议 【范文赏读】 Last Sunday, Sandy and I went to the wildlife park. We learnt that wild animals have nowhere to live and no food to eat. That's because humans keep cutting down forests and taking up land. As a result, the living space for wild animals gets smaller and smaller. It's time for us to take action to improve the environment and protect wild animals. We can both make laws and set up more nature reserves. As students, we should always ask others not to buy or use products made from wild animals. We should try to keep a balance between humans and animals. 从范文学布局 开篇陈述野生动物的生存现状并分析原因; 然后针对现状提出应对措施; 最后,提出切实可行的建议。 从范文学好词 have nowhere to live 无处栖息 cut down forests砍伐森林 take up占据:占用 as a result 因此 smaller and smaller越来越小 take action 采取行动 ask sb. ( not) to do sth.请求某人(不要)做某事 keep a balance between...and...保持……与……之间的平衡 从范文学佳句 原句1:That's because humans keep cutting down forests and taking up land. (That's because +从句那是因为……) 仿写1:那是因为我们尽最大努力来保护野生动物。 That's because we did our best to protect wild animals. 原句2:We can both make laws and set up more nature reserves. ( both...and...连接两个并列成分) 仿写2:我的弟弟在学校和社区呼吁人们拯救动物。 My little brother asks people to save animals both in schools and in communities. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$