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2025秋广西
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Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!
第六课时 单元写作指导
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话题概述
本单元以“节日”为话题,并围绕此话题介绍了一些传统节日,
如:中秋节、端午节及春节等,属于2022新课标中“人与社会”主
题范畴中“历史、社会与文化”这一主题群,涉及子主题“世界主要
国家的文化习俗与文化景观、节假日与庆祝活动”。话题写作的角
度包括:①介绍我国传统节日的基本信息、庆祝方式及其意义;
②介绍自己在某一节日的计划;③邀请别人参加某一节日活动。
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典例探究
中国传统节日是中华民族丰富多彩文化的重要组成部分。假
如你是李平,你校英语社团正在开展以“Traditional Chinese
Festivals”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英
语短文投稿,介绍端午节的习俗和意义,并描述今年的端午节你
是如何度过的。内容包括:
1. 你对于端午节的介绍;
2. 你是如何度过端午节的;
3. 你对于传统节日的看法。
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参考词汇:the 5th day of the fifth lunar (农历) month;
in honor of纪念;wormwood艾草;sachet香囊
I'm Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. There are many
traditional festivals in our country.______________________
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四步法写作
第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:本文主要介绍了端午节的习俗和意义,及自己在端午节
的经历,是一篇________
②人称:对于端午节的介绍、评价以及在端午节的经历,应以第
____人称为主
③时态:对于端午节的介绍和评价,应为____________,在端午
节的经历,应为____________
记叙文
一
一般现在时
一般过去时
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(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题(已给出部分)
Body:①介绍端午节的________、______、______;②介绍端午节的传统食物粽子、以及一些民俗活动,比如________、__________等
Ending:表达自己对传统节日的看法
重要性
时间
起源
挂艾草
佩戴香囊
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第二步:推敲词汇
1._______________________端午节
the Dragon Boat Festival
2._________________传统节日
traditional festival
3.__________吃粽子
eat zongzi
4.________________挂艾草
hang wormwood
5.____________戴香囊
wear sachets
6.____________________龙舟比赛
the dragon boat race
7.____________________文化和习俗
cultures and customs
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第三步:连词成句
1.端午节是中国最重要的传统节日之一。(one of the+形容词最
高级+可数名词复数形式)
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The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.
2.它是为了纪念伟人屈原而庆祝的。(in honor of)
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It is celebrated in honor of the great man Qu Yuan.
3.我们也会在门上悬挂艾草并且佩戴香囊。
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We also hung wormwood around the doors and wore sachets.
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4.我认为我们能从传统节日中学习到更多的文化和习俗。
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I think we can learn more cultures and customs from the traditional festivals.
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第四步:分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
I'm Li Ping from Class
1, Grade 9. There are many
traditional festivals in our
country.
The Dragon Boat
Festival is a traditional
festival in China. It is on I'm Li Ping from Class 1,
Grade 9. There are many
traditional festivals in our country.
①The Dragon Boat Festival
is one of the most important
traditional festivals in China.
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the 5th day of the fifth
lunar month. It is
celebrated for the great man
Qu Yuan.
This year, I played
happily during the Dragon
Boat Festival. I ate zongzi
made by my It falls on the 5th day of the
fifth lunar month. It is celebrated
in honor of the great man Qu
Yuan.
②This year, I had a great
time during the Dragon Boat
Festival. I ate zongzi made by my
mother and it
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mother and it was very
delicious. We also hung
wormwood around the
doors and wore sachets. We
watched the dragon boat
race. It was very exciting. was very delicious. We also hung
wormwood around the doors and
wore sachets. We watched the
dragon boat race. ③How exciting
it was!
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I think we can learn
more cultures and customs
from the traditional
festivals. I think we can learn more
cultures and customs from the
traditional festivals, and ④it's our
duty to try our best to keep
them going on.
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初阶范文 高阶范文
①句使用“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数形式”突出端
午节的地位和重要性;②句使用“had a great time”来代替
“happily”;③句使用how引导的感叹句;④句使用“It is one's
duty to do sth.”句型。
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实战演练
假如你是李华,你的笔友 Mike 对中国传统节日春节很感
兴趣。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,向他介绍春节的习俗。内
容包括:
1.春节的时间(通常在一月或二月);
2.节日期间人们的庆祝活动;
3.春节的意义(家人的团圆……)。
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注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:set off the firecrackers(放鞭炮); family
reunions (家人团聚); decorate(v.装饰)
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Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something
about the Spring Festival.
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It usually falls in January or February. Days before the
festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps
any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuttings.
On the eve of the festival, family members get together and
have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on
TV. At midnight, they set off the firecrackers to welcome the
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old
people. People also visit their relatives and friends. They wish
each a happy year and good luck.
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