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2025秋广西
英 语
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Unit 1 How can we become good learners?
第六课时 单元写作指导
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话题概述
本单元的核心话题是“英语学习”,属于2022新课标“人与自
我”范畴中的“生活与学习”这一主题群,涉及子主题“积极的学习
体验,恰当的学习方法与策略,勤学善思”。此类书面表达要求
学生能够描述自己在学习生活中常见的一些问题,并针对他人的
学习问题给出建议。话题写作的角度涉及:①如何成为一名好的
英语学习者;②如何学好英语;③向学习有困难的同学、朋友等
提建议。
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典例探究
假如你是李华,最近你的朋友姚璐来信说,她的英语很差,
她感到非常着急,听说你的英语很好,想向你寻求几点学习英语
的建议。请给你的朋友写一封回信。
内容包括:1. 每天早上大声读二十分钟英语;
2. 经常和朋友用英语交谈;
3. 制作单词卡片;
4. ……
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Dear Yao Lu,
I heard you have some problems in learning English. ____
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Yours,
Li Hua
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四步法写作
第一步:思路剖析
(一)仔细审题
①文体:本文为一封回信,是一篇________
②人称:向朋友提出一些学习英语的建议,应以第____人称为主
③时态:介绍学习英语的方法,应以 ____________为主
应用文
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一般现在时
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(二)篇章布局
Beginning:引入主题(已给出部分)
Body:针对英语学习,给出至少____点建议,包括:______________;__________________; ______________等
Ending:表达自己对朋友的期待
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大声朗读英语
和朋友用英语交谈
制作单词卡片
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第二步:推敲词汇
1.__________________大声朗读英语
read English aloud
2._________________________和朋友用英语交谈
talk with friends in English
3.________________制作单词卡片
make word cards
4.__________记笔记
take notes
5.___________________复习语法
review the grammar
6._________________做更多的练习
do more exercises
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第三步:连词成句
1.每天早上大声朗读英语二十分钟是很有用的。(It is+adj.+to
do sth.)
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It is very useful to read English aloud for twenty minutes every morning.
2.你应该尽量和你的朋友用英语交谈。
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You should talk with your friends in English as much as possible.
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3.制作单词卡片可以帮助你更加容易地记住单词。
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Making word cards can help you remember words more easily.
4.我相信你的英语将会变得越来越好。
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I believe your English will get better and better.
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第四步:分阶范文
初阶范文 高阶范文
Dear Yao Lu,
I heard you have some
problems in learning
English. Here's my advice.
First, I think it is good
to study in the morning and Dear Yao Lu,
I heard you have some
problems in learning
English. Don't worry about
them. Here's my advice.
First of all, I think it is
good to study in the morning.
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read English aloud for
twenty minutes every
morning. Second, you should
talk with your friends in
English. In this way, your
pronunciation will improve
quickly. Then, making ①It is very useful to read
English aloud for twenty minutes
every morning. Second, you
should talk with your friends in
English as much as possible. In
this way, your pronunciation will
improve quickly. What's
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word cards can help you
remember words more
easily. You should take
notes carefully in class, too.
This will help you review
the grammar after class.
Lastly, you should also do more, making word cards can
help you remember words more
easily. ②It is also necessary to
take notes carefully in class. This
will help you review the
grammar after class. Last but
not least, you should also do
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more exercises after class.
On weekends, you should
watch English TV programs
often. more exercises after class. ③On
weekends, you'd better watch
English TV programs often.
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I believe your English
will get better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua I believe your English will
get better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
①、②句使用It is+adj.+to do sth. 句型;③句使用You'd better
do sth.句型。
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实战演练
假如你是李华,三年的初中生活即将过去,你的外籍同学
Sam在英语学习上曾帮助过你。在即将毕业之际,请你在Sam的
毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言。内容要点:
1. 你在学习上曾遇到的困难;
2. Sam对你的帮助及建议:
(1)多听多读;
(2)多看英语电影,多唱英文歌曲;
(3)……(自由发挥,不少于一项内容)
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3.你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
注意:
1.词数为80左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It's time for us to say goodbye.
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During the past three years, you have given me so much help in English that I can't thank you too much.
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I still remember three years ago, I had difficulty in
learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many
words and understand what people were saying. My spoken
English and written English were poor, too. However, I'm lucky
that I met you, a kind-hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly,
you taught me to listen and read more. And they really helped
me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English
movies and sing classical English songs. In addition, you told
me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and
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Thank you for all your help and best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made
great progress.
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