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课题: Come And Visit My Hometown
课型:写作课
年级:八年级
Teaching Objectives教学目标
The students will be able to
1. observe a well - structured outline for an article.
2. repeat a city’s location, weather, food, and places of interest.
3. describe things in detail by using “be like” and write about things you see, hear, smell, taste and feel.
4. understand and love your hometown; stay curious and live positively.
Xi’an
Kunming
North
South
West
East
North
South
West
East
Xi'an is in the north of China.
Kunming is in the ______of China.
location
south
Look and say
The weather in Xi’an is hot in summer and cold in winter.
The weather in Kunming is __________.
weather
There are many places of interest in Kunming. You can go to ...
places of interest
There are many places of interest in Xi’an. You can go to the Bell Tower and the Terracotta Army.
There are all kinds of delicious food in Xi’an such as roujiamo and liangpi.
There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming such as...
food
Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Read and compare
Write an article about Kunming for me.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
Which one has a clear structure?
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
Which one has more details?
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a beautiful and green city full of flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It’s in the south of China. People call it the “Spring City” because the weather is warm all year round. The first stop you must go is the Xishan Mountain. You’ll see Dianchi Lake at the top of the mountain. Then go to Cuihu Park in the city center. You can feed fish in the lake. Don’t miss Dounan Flower Market! Here, you can find different kinds of flowers. Also, you can taste local food like Qiguoji and Erkuai.
Come and visit Kunming!
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Kunming is a beautiful city. It’s in the south of China. The weather is warm and sunny. There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake and the Stone Forest. There are all kinds of delicious food in Kunming, such as Yunan rice noodles and qiguoji.
How to improve expressions?
There are many places of interest. You can go to the Dianchi Lake, and the Stone Forest.
Tip1: Use some good words.
Tip1: use some good words.
places of interest
Dianchi Lake
Rewrite and polish
What do you think of Dianchi Lake?
It’s ...
and ...
peaceful
amazing
beautiful
wonderful
charming
Dianchi Lake
The lake is like _____________.
The lake is like _________ because__________.
The lake is as___________ as____________.
The lake is so________ that__________________.
I can hear_____________.
I can see________________________.
hear
see
smell
feel
I smell________.
I can feel___________________.
...
I can _____________________________.
birds singing
birds flying over the head
fresh air
relaxed and peaceful
take photos of the beautiful view
Stone Forest
Stone Forest
Stone Forest
Stone Forest
Don’t miss the Stone Forest.
Some are like _______________.
Others are like_______________.
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a /an_________and _______ city full of spring and flowers.
Kunming is the capital city of Yunnan. It is in __________. The weather here is ____________. There are many places of interest in Kunming. The first stop you must go is __________________________
__________________.Don’t miss _____________________________
_________________________.You can try many kinds of local food in kunming such as______________. _________ taste(s)____________.
Come and visit Kunming in May!
Have a try
Welcome to Kunming. It’s a /an ____and _____city full of spring and flowers.
Kunming is capital city of Yunnan. It is in _________. The weather here is ____________. There are many places of interest in Kunming. The firest stop you mus go is ________.______________________________________
Don’t miss_____________._________________________.
You can try many kinds of local food in Kunming such as_______________. _________taste(s)____________.
Come and visit Kunming in May!
Xi’an
Kunming
Come and visit my hometown
Reflecting
Film a video to introduce your hometown.
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